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Part I: Orientation..........................................................................
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Introduction.............................................................................
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Welcome!....................................................................................
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What Is the TOEFL?.......................................................................
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What Is The Princeton Review?.....................................................
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What's in This Book.....................................................................
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What's Not in This Book................................................................
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Howto Use This Book...................................................................
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Can I Really Improve My Score?.....................................................
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POOD—Personal Order of Difficulty..............................................
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Study Plans..................................................................................
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Part II: Core Concepts....................................................................
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Core Concept: Reading...........................................................
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Reading on the TOEFL...................................................................
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Steps to Mastering Active Reading...............................................
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Dealing with Difficult Passages.....................................................
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Core Concept: Listening.........................................................
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Listening on the TOEFL.................................................................
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Challenges in the Listening Section...............................................
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Taking Notes................................................................................
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Active Listening............................................................................
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Transcripts....................................................................................
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Core Concept: Speaking.........................................................
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Scoring for the Speaking Section..................................................
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Parti: Stating Your Purpose..........................................................
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Part 2: Organizing Your Ideas.........................................................
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Putting It All Together...................................................................
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Wrapping Things Up: The Conclusion.............................................
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Scoring for the Writing Section.....................................................
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Part 1: Expressing Your Purpose....................................................
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Part 3: Writing the Perfect Body Paragraph....................................
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Part 4: Concluding Your Response.................................................
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Grammar Review..........................................................................
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Vocabulary.............................................................................
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Vocab, Vocab, Vocab....................................................................
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Root Words..................................................................................
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Part III: Cracking Each Section of the TOEFL..................................
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Cracking the Reading Section.................................................
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Cracking the Reading Section: Basic Principles..............................
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Cracking the Reading Section: Basic Approach..............................
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Putting It All Together...................................................................
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Reading Practice Drills...........................................................
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Reading Practice Answers andExplanations..........................
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Note Taking..................................................................................
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Listening Practice Drill #4: A Lecture..............................................
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Listening Practice Answers and Explanations.......................
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Listening Practice Drill #1: A Conversation.....................................
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Listening Practice Drill #5: A Lecture.............................................
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Cracking the Speaking Section...............................................
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Speaking Section Directions.........................................................
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How the Speaking Section Is Scored.............................................
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Cracking the Speaking Section: Basic Principles.............................
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Practice: Using Transitions...................................
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Cracking the Speaking Section: Basic Approach.............................
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Independent Tasks........................................................................
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Integrated Tasks—Reading, Listening, Speaking............................
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Summarize Question (Template #6)................................................
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Speaking Practice Answers and Explanations.......................
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Cracking the Writing Section..................................................
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Writing Section Directions............................................................
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How the Writing Section Is Scored................................................
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Cracking the Writing Section: Basic Principles...............................
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Writing Practice Answers and Explanations..........................
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Evaluating Your Performance.........................................................
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What Now?..................................................................................
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TOEFL iBT Practice Test.........................................................
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The Reading Section....................................................................
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The Listening Section...................................................................
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The Speaking Section...................................................................
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The Writing Section.....................................................................
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Part I Orientation 1
Introduction
Chapter 1 Introduction
WELCOME! Welcome to The Princeton Review’s thorough test preparation guide for the Test of English as a Foreign Language (TOEFL). In this book, you will find everything you need to prepare for the TOEFL—information on the test format, test-taking strategies, practice drills, and, of course, a fulllength practice exam.
Part I of this book gives a brief outline of how the test is organized. Part II helps you familiar ize yourself with the basic concepts tested on the TOEFL. Part III presents you with strategies and tips for the questions and tasks on the test. Part IV provides you with a full-length practice exam with corresponding answers and explanations.
WHAT IS THE TOEFL? The TOEFL is a test that assesses your proficiency in the type of English used in an academic environment. The test is administered on the Internet, which we’ll explain in more detail on page 5. The exam takes about four hours to complete and integrates four essential skills: reading, listen ing, speaking, and writing. This means that any given question or task may require you to use one or more of these skills. For example, before attempting a writing task on the TOEFL, you may have to first read a passage and listen to a lecture on the topic.
Fortunately, the TOEFL is not as daunting as it may seem because it tests each of the four skills in a fairly specific way. By working through this book in its entirety, you’ll become comfortable with the type of reading, listening, speaking, and writing skills that are required to achieve a good score on the exam.
Stop! If it is difficult for you to understand the material on this page, it’s best that you continue your study of basic English before taking the TOEFL. This book is intended to prepare students who already have knowledge of basic English, and our recommendation is that you should feel very comfortable with the language before you attempt to take the TOEFL.
The Structure of the Test The TOEFL is broken down into four distinct sections, one for each of the skills listed. How ever, each section may require you to use more than one of the above four skills. The structure of the test is as follows:
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One Reading section, consisting of three to four passages that are roughly 700 words each. Each passage will be followed by 12 to 14 multiple-choice questions about the content of the passage. Most of these questions will be worth one point each, though a few toward the end of the section may be worth more. You will have either 60 or 80 minutes to complete the entire section. One Listening section, consisting of six to nine audio selections, each of which is three to five minutes long. Each selection will be either an academic lecture or a casual conversation. After each selection, there will be five or six multiple-choice questions about the content of the lecture or conversation. You will have 60 to 90 minutes to complete the entire section. One Speaking section, consisting of six speaking tasks. Most speaking tasks will also require some listening and some reading. Each task will ask you to speak for 45 or 60 seconds, depending on the task, and you will have 20 minutes to complete the entire section. One Writing section, consisting of two writing assignments. The Writing sec tion, like the Speaking section, also requires listening and reading. You will have 50 minutes to complete the entire section.
Which Test Should You Take? As you may know, there are two versions of the TOEFL: the paper-delivered test (PDT) and the Internet-based test (iBT). Most students will take the Internet-based test, which is offered more than 50 times a year at centers that have Internet access. However, some centers do not have Internet access; therefore, a paper version is offered 4 times a year. Because they are administered less frequently, paper-based tests tend to fill up very quickly. Also, the paper-based test is not available at all centers. Internet-based tests have many more spots available and are a more com plete assessment of your level of English. Because the Internet-based test assesses all four areas of communication, it is the preferred test at most universities. There fore, we strongly recommend that you take the Internet-based test. If you are inter ested in finding out more about the paper-delivered test, visit the ETS website at www.ets.org/toefl and click on the TOEFL PDT test link. If you do not have Internet access, you can call ETS at 1-877-863-3546 or 1-609-771-7100. The paperdelivered (or paper-based) test is different from the Internet-based test in both structure and scoring. It is important to remember that this book is designed help you study for the Internet-based TOEFL test. All information on format and scor ing applies to the iBT.
As of October 2017, ETS is administering a new
paper-format test that
is more in line with the TOEFL® iBTtest. The revised TOEFP Paper-
delivered Test measures
3 skills using the same types of questions as
on the TOEFL iBT test: Reading, Listening, and
Writing. More informa tion for students about the test can be found at
https://www.ets.org/
toefl/rpdt/about/.
How Is the Test Scored? After finishing the TOEFL iBT, you will receive a score from 0 to 30 for each of the four sec tions and a total score on a 0 to 120 scale calculated by adding the four section scores. Each score corresponds to a percentile ranking. This number shows how your score compares with 1. Introduction | 5
the scores of other test takers. For example, a total score of 100 would put you in the 89th percentile, meaning that you scored higher than 89 out of 100 test takers, whereas a score of 50 would put you in the 26th percentile. The average TOEFL score is around 81.
Notice that the 0 to 30 scores are scaled scores, meaning that the 0 to 30 number doesn’t repre sent the number of questions you answered correctly or the number of points your essay was awarded. For example, the Reading and Listening sections contain roughly 35-55 questions each. You will get one point for each correct answer (some Reading section For help finding the questions will be worth two points), but there is no penalty for incorrect answers. At right college for you, go the end of the section, your raw score, which represents the number of points you’ve online to Princeton earned, is tallied and converted to a number on the 0 to 30 scale. Review.com!
The Writing and Speaking sections are scored somewhat differently. Each Writing sample receives a score between 0 and 5. These raw scores are then converted to the 0 to 30 scale. Similarly, each Speaking task receives a score from 0 to 4. The scores from all six Speaking tasks are averaged and converted to the 0 to 30 scale.
Understanding Your Scores In order to maximize your performance, it’s important to understand what your scores mean to schools. ETS breaks down your scores so that schools can, at least theoretically, get a better grasp of how well you really know English.
In Reading and Listening, the 0-30 scale is subdivided into three sections:
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Good (26-30) Fair (18-25) Limited (10-17) Weak (0-9)
In Writing, the 0-30 scale is broken down into three sections:
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Why is it important to understand these breakdowns? Well, if you’re right on the border of “Fair” and “Good,” for example, you’re going to really want to make sure that you focus on developing skills that will push your score above the dividing line.
For more information on these subdivisions, please refer to the appropriate Cracking chapter in Part III: Cracking Each Section of the TOEFL. 6 I Cracking the TOEFL iBT
Do You Need Rock Star Status? Well, it would be awesome if you could be a rock star in every section of the test. Most students, though, find that one section is significantly easier than the others or that one is noticeably harder. The good news is that since most schools want a COMBINED score, you just need to get to that total any way you can. So, let’s say that you’re starting out with scores in this range: • •
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And let’s say the school you’re applying to wants to see a combined score of 90 points. Well, you have 82 right now. You could absolutely spend time and energy working to bring up the Speak ing and Writing, since those are your lowest scores. But, since you likely feel that the Reading and Listening are easier, you might find that it’s easier to earn another 6 points between those two sections (maybe 3 in each), and then bring the Speaking and Writing up by one point each—that would give you 90 points.
Now, we’re certainly NOT saying to just brush off the areas that you find challenging! But, we ARE saying that you shouldn’t ignore the areas that you’re already doing well in. A point is a point, no matter its source, so make sure to focus just as much on the areas you’re doing well on as you do on the areas you find difficult.
How Are the Scores Used? Colleges and universities will look at your TOEFL score when considering your application. Of course, your TOEFL score is not the only factor that affects your chance of admission. Col leges and universities also look at your academic performance, letters of recommendation, ap plication essays, and scores on other standardized tests. Although a high TOEFL score will not guarantee admission to a particular program, a low test score could jeopardize your chances.
Some schools and programs may require students with TOEFL scores below a certain cutoff score to take supplemental English classes. Others may accept only applicants who score better than a particular cutoff score. Make sure you check with the programs to which you are apply ing for specific information.
The Computer-Based Format Used for Internet-Based Testing (iBT) The TOEFL iBT is a computer-based test that is delivered to testing centers via the Internet. There fore, the TOEFL can be offered at locations throughout the world. The test is administered by Edu cational Testing Service (ETS), the same testing organization that administers the GRE, SAT, and other standardized tests. According to ETS, Internet-based testing (iBT) is an easier and fairer way to capture speech and score responses. It also makes it possible for them to greatly expand access to test centers.
The iBT format will be new to the untrained eye and may seem intimidating, especially if you have never taken a test on a computer. A brief tutorial is offered at the beginning of the TOEFL to allow you time to familiarize yourself with the format. Still, the iBT presents some challenges. For example, when working on a reading passage, you will see something like the following: 1. Introduction
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There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, 5 crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the 10 phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell).
Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and 15 fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal 20 organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases. 25 Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below 30 the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases their combined strength. 35 The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear. Over 40 time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. As the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new
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sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. Though strong, the chitin and protein exocuticle itself would provide a poor barrier against moisture loss. Therefore, it must be coated with lipids, which are also secreted by the epidermis. These lipids, mostly fatty acids and waxes, form the third, outermost layer of the shell. They spread over the cuticles to form a waterproof seal even in dry weather. This lipid layer gives many arthropods their distinctive luster. Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. The external shell has other advantages. One is that, because it has far more surface area than the internal skeleton found in vertebrates, it provides more points at which muscles can be attached. This increased number of muscles permits many arthropods to be stronger and more agile for their body size than birds or mammals. The coloration and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial as well. Many species of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline. The hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue-green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat.
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Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: the cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses.
Clearly, you cannot approach an Internet-based TOEFL reading passage the same way you would approach a paper-based test. For one thing, you won’t be able to underline, circle, or otherwise make marks on the text (well, you could, but the testing center probably wouldn’t be happy if you ruined its computer screens!). Also, on the Internet-based TOEFL, you’ll have to take each section of the test in its entirety. Therefore, you cannot skip part of the Reading section, go to the Listening section, and return to the Reading section. However, you can skip questions within some parts of the Reading sec tion. You may want to skip questions that you do not understand in order spend more time on other questions. The audio portions of the test are also Internet-based, and the speaking portion will ask you to speak into a recording device.
Even though this book contains paper-based drills and questions, all of the strategies in this book are geared toward preparing you for an Internet-based test. To get a feel for taking the test on a computer, you should practice at the TOEFL website: http://toeflpractice.ets.org. Even if you live in an area where accessing the Internet is difficult, you should try to practice at least once online before your testing day.
Registering for the TOEFL The easiest way to register for the TOEFL is online at www.ets.org/toefl/ibt/register. Because the test is Internet-based, many testing times are available, although this isn’t necessarily true everywhere. Make sure you register early so that you receive a testing time and location with which you are comfortable.
You may take the TOEFL as many times as you like. Many programs will simply take your best score, but don’t forget to check for specific information with admissions counselors from the schools to which you are applying.
Make sure to register early!
WHAT IS THE PRINCETON REVIEW? The Princeton Review is the premier test-preparation company that prepares tens of thousands of students each year for tests such as the TOEFL, SAT, GMAT, GRE, LSAT, and MCAT. At The Princeton Review, we spend countless hours researching tests and figuring out exactly how to crack standardized tests. We offer students proven, high-powered strategies and techniques to help them beat the tests and achieve their best scores.
In addition to our books, we offer both live classroom instruction and online courses. If you would like more information about our programs, visit us at PrincetonReview.com. If you are looking for information on Princeton Review courses offered outside the United States, go to http://www.princetonreview.com/international/locations.
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WHAT'S IN THIS BOOK Cracking the TOEFL iBTcontains four parts.
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Orientation: What you’re reading now. Core Concepts: The basic skills necessary to successfully com plete the exam. By working through the exercises in this section, you will have a greater understanding of how the integrated tasks on the TOEFL fit together. Cracking: The appropriate strategies to crack each question type on the TOEFL. Questions in the Listening, Speaking, and Writ ing sections are accompanied by audio tracks that you can listen to on a CD or online (in your Student Tools). Full-Length Practice Test: After you’ve worked through all the exercises and drills in the previous two sections, you’ll have a chance to practice under real testing conditions. After the prac tice exam, we provide detailed explanations for every question, as well as sample speaking and writing responses. In addition, the CD includes samples of the types of conversations and lectures that you will hear on the test to give you a good idea of what to expect and help you develop your listening skills. Note: The CD that accompanies this book contains audio tracks in MP3 format. This CD will play in a computer that uses a Windows-based or Mac® operating system, or any device that will play MP3 files (some CD players and DVD players will also play MP3 files). If you are having trouble running your CD, you can also register your book online and access the audio files from our website. Please refer to the two-page spread before this chapter for instructions on how to access the online content.
WHAT'S NOT IN THIS BOOK This book is primarily designed to aid you in preparing to take the TOEFL. By working through the book, you’ll be able to pick up new vocabulary and some grammar rules, but if you need more help with the basics, there are a number of other resources available. The Princeton Review’s Grammar Smart, More Word Smart, and TOEFL Power Vocab books provide extensive help with grammar and vocabulary. These books are available wherever you purchased this book, including at online retailers. Television, radio, film, and podcasts are enjoyable ways to learn the language. Almost any show or program will be helpful. Remember, the TOEFL asks you to listen to casual conversations, so be sure to look up words and phrases you don’t understand. Even if you live in a non-English-speaking country, your city may have an Englishlanguage newspaper. Try reading that instead of your native-language paper. 12 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
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Reading magazines such as Time, Vogue, Entertainment Weekly, and Sports Illustrated, and newspapers such as USA Today, The New York Times, and The Wall Street Journal will help your comprehension and vocabulary. A quick search on the Internet will turn up a number of helpful websites devoted to helping people learn English.
This book is more useful if you are comfortable with the English language. If you are still having trouble with English, build up your confidence with the language first, and then work through this book.
HOWTO USE THIS BOOK The material in Cracking the TOEFL iBTis provided to help students of all levels achieve higher scores on the test. Ideally, all students should work through the sections of the book in the order in which they are presented. Even students who are fairly comfortable speaking, reading, and writing in English will benefit from the information in the Core Concepts section (Part II).
Of course, if you feel that you have a strong grasp of the material, you are free to skip ahead to the Cracking section (Part III) to start working on TOEFL questions. If you find you are not progressing as you’d hoped, return to Part II and work through it first. The best way to prepare for the TOEFL is to practice as much as possible, and this book gives you the chance to work through more than 200 sample questions. However, to get maximum value from this book, you must use the strategies and techniques we present. Many of these strategies will feel awkward or inefficient at first, but trust us: they do work.
CAN I REALLY IMPROVE MY SCORE? Yes! Doing well on the TOEFL is a skill, and as with any skill, it can be learned. This book pro vides the tools necessary to do better on the TOEFL, but it is up to you to apply them. Work through the book at a comfortable pace. Take time to understand the strategies and techniques and use them. Look back at the questions you’ve answered: both the ones you answered cor rectly and the ones you answered incorrectly. Figure out what your strengths and weaknesses are on the test. Many test takers find that if they fail to use the strategies we offer, their scores don’t change. However, test takers who do master our techniques and strategies will improve their scores.
Stages of Learning a New Language While you have progressed through at least some of these stages already, it’s important to recog nize where you are in the process of learning a new language in order to maximize your prepa ration for the TOEFL. We map out these stages (named Stages 1 through 5) on the next page. If at all possible, you should not attempt to take the TOEFL until you are at least comfortably into Stage 3, and preferably into Stage 4. Certainly, the more comfortable you are speaking, writing, and thinking in English, the more you can expect to gain from the time you spend preparing for the TOEFL, and therefore the higher score you can expect to earn. 1. Introduction
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Silent/Receptive/Pre-Production • Not necessarily silent, but definitely more about listening and absorbing. • You have a minimal comprehension in second language. Early Production • You begin to develop a vocabulary of about 1,000 words. • You start speaking in short phrases of one or two words, although not necessarily grammatically accurate. • You develop a limited comprehension but may use familiar phrases comfortably. Speech Emergence • Your vocabulary grows to about 3,000 words (or more!). • Your comprehension improves significantly. • You being to develop phrases, sentences, and questions, although they still may not necessarily be grammatically correct. • You might continue to make grammar and pronunciation errors (and that’s okay!). • You should begin reading and writing in your second language. Intermediate Fluency • Your vocabulary is as large as 6,000 words. • You have developed excellent comprehension and make few grammatical errors. • You begin writing in more complex sentences. • You begin thinking in the second language, which impacts proficiency significantly. Continued Language Development/Advanced Fluency • Comprehension and communication are nearly the same as those of a native speaker of the language. • It may take some time when learning a new language to get to this stage, depending on how intensively you have been studying and how frequently you have been communicating and reading in your second language.
Before We Begin Before we discuss the TOEFL, there are a few basic principles to keep in mind for any stan dardized, multiple-choice test.
Wrong Answers One of the advantages of a multiple-choice test is that the answer to every question is right there on the screen! To minimize this advantage, test writers have to make the wrong answers seem correct; often, the wrong answers are particularly appealing, and test takers fall into the trap of picking answers that seem too good to be true.
Learning to recognize and avoid these trap answers is one of the keys to your success on the TOEFL. For each question in this book, be sure to review both the right and wrong answers so you have an idea of what both good and bad answers look like. Also, pay close attention to our discussion of common trap answers in the Reading and Listening sections.
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Increase Your Odds Identifying wrong answers greatly improves your chances of getting a question correct. On the TOEFL, each multiple-choice question has four answer choices, which means you have a 25 percent (1 in 4) chance of guessing correctly. However, by using Process of Elimination (POE) to cross off wrong answers, you greatly increase your odds. (We discuss POE thoroughly in the “Cracking the Reading Section” chapter later in this book.) Finding and eliminating just one wrong answer means you have a 33 percent (1 in 3) chance of guessing correctly, and eliminat ing two answers raises your odds of guessing correctly to 50 percent (1 in 2)! This is an impor tant fact to remember. Although you may not be able to answer every question on the TOEFL correctly, you can increase your score simply by increasing your odds when guessing.
Letter Of The Day (LOTD) Speaking of guessing, let me introduce another Princeton Review strategy, Letter Of The Day (or LOTD, as we call it in “the biz.”) When you encounter a multiple-choice question and you have NO idea what the right answer might be and the test is almost done so you are scrambling to fill in answers, choose any letter (A, B, C, or D) and fill it in because there is no penalty for incorrect answers—so answer every question, no matter what! Use that LOTD when you’re scrambling and wrapping up!
POOD—PERSONAL ORDER OF DIFFICULTY
POOD Across the Test We’ve already talked about not needing Rock Star Status on every section, and now that we’re discussing Personal Order of Difficulty, it’s worth mentioning again. Remember that many schools indicate a combined score they’d like to see, and typically don’t break that total down among the four sections. So, that means that you do NOT have to get the highest score possible on EVERY section in order get the score you need.
Proven Techniques Check out these signa ture Princeton Review
techniques to help you
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Personal Order of Difficulty Within Each Section In Reading and Listening, the passages and lectures/conversations are not presented in any particular order of difficulty. What that means is that YOU have to decide—BEFORE TEST DAY!—which types of questions are easiest for YOU, and which ones are tougher. So it’s important to remember that you need to walk in with a plan, knowing what types of Reading questions, for example, are easier for YOU, and which ones aren’t worth your time.
Check out Part III: Cracking Each Section of the TOEFL to map out your test day strategy.
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GENERAL STRATEGIES TO IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH
AND PREPARE FOR THE TOEFL There are many strategies that you can employ that will not only help you prepare for the TOEFL, but also help you improve your fundamental English skills. Many of these approaches can also impact several sections of the TOEFL, all at once. Here are a few suggestions. Read on for advice on how to space these out, depending upon how much time you have until your test date.
Read Articles Online or in Magazines Go online and read—read anything! But don’t just READ. As you read, ask yourself the fol lowing questions:
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Watch TV or Listen to the Radio (or a Podcast!) Watch one episode of a TV show or listen to a radio show or podcast in English. During and after the show, complete the following activities: •
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Every time there is a scene change, pause the show and summarize what just happened. o What did the characters talk about? o Is one of them having a problem? If so, what is it? o Did one of them offer a solution? If so, what was the solution? o Are the characters happy? Sad? Angry? Why? Discuss the TV/radio show/podcast with a friend, just like you did with the articles mentioned above. As you watch/listen, make notes of what the characters are saying, just like you’ll have to do on the TOEFL. Then write a 3-4 paragraph summary of the show to practice your writing skills.
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Look up words you don’t know when you come across them in your reading. Study Greek and Latin root words—they form the basis for a large number of words in the English language! If you’re not familiar with them, get your hands on a copy of TOEFL Power Vocab, published by The Princeton Review.
Practice Brainstorming for the Speaking Section Using the following prompts, brainstorm your responses for the independent speaking tasks:
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What is your favorite book/movie? Describe it and explain why it is your favorite. Who is your least favorite actor/musician? Describe this person and explain why she/he is your least favorite. What do you like to do in your free time? Describe this activity and explain why you like to do it. Where do you like to go on vacation? Describe this place and explain why you like to go there. What is your favorite academic subject? Describe the subject and explain why you like to study it. Who is an influential person from your country? Describe this person and explain why she/he is influential. Talk about a person in your life who has been inspirational to you. Describe this person and explain how she/he has inspired you. What is your favorite memory from your youth? Describe the memory and explain why it stands out to you. What is the most important holiday in your country? Describe the holiday and explain why it is important. Talk about a situation in which you felt uncomfortable. Describe the situation and explain why you were uncomfortable. What do you like to do to relax? Describe this activity and explain how it helps you relax. What do you find difficult to study? Describe this subject and explain why you struggle with it. Talk about your favorite type of food. Describe this food and explain why it is your favorite. What is the best advice you have ever received? Describe the advice and explain why it meant so much to you. What is the most popular tourist attraction in your country? Describe this attrac tion and explain why it is popular. What do you enjoy doing with your family? Describe this activity and explain why your family enjoys doing it. Where would you like to travel in the future? Describe this place and explain why you would like to go there. What is your favorite athletic activity? Describe this activity and explain why it’s your favorite. 1. Introduction j 17
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Some people prefer to attend a university that has fairly small class sizes, while others prefer to attend large institutions that have more lecture-style classes with hundreds of students. Which do you prefer, and why? Support your answer with specific reasons or examples. Some high schools require students to wear uniforms, while others allow students to choose their own attire. Which do you prefer, and why? Use specific examples to support your opinion. In some cities, public transportation is a reliable way to get around. Do you prefer to use public transit or your own vehicle? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some educators believe that students should participate in physical exercise every single day, while others feel that students should focus all of their attention on academics. Which do you feel is more helpful for students? Use specific examples to support your opinion. Some people like to go out with large groups of friends to have fun. Others prefer to spend time with just a few friends and have a quiet dinner. Which do you pre fer, and why? Use specific reasons to explain your preference. People work in different ways: some prefer to go to a job where they sit at a desk for most of the work day, while others prefer to spend time traveling from job site to job site. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. Some people believe that a student must go to college in order to be successful in life. Others feel that going to a vocational school to learn a trade is a better option. Which do you feel is the better option? Use specific reasons to explain your opinion. Some people prefer to listen to music while exercising, while others prefer to listen to the sounds around them. Which do you prefer to do? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your preference. Some people like to stay up late at night and then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your preference. Some parents are very involved in their students’ academic lives, helping with homework, talking with teachers, and volunteering at school. Other parents choose to take a lesser role in their students’ academic programs. Do you prefer for your parents to be more involved in your schooling or less? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people prefer to talk on the phone, but others prefer to text. Which manner of communication do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion.
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Some people prefer to be surrounded by large groups of friends and family for spe cial events, like weddings or graduations. Others prefer to have smaller gatherings, perhaps without any friends or family at all. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion. Some people really like living in a big city. Others prefer living in a small town. Which do you like better? Use specific reasons to support your opinion. Is it more valuable to be able to work with others or to be able to set your own goals and deadlines as you work independently? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do you prefer to spend money as soon as you earn it, or would you rather save it to buy something at a later time? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to sup port your opinion. Traveling the world can be very insightful and educational. Do you prefer to travel by yourself or with other companions? Why? Use specific examples to support your opinion. Moving from place to place can be stressful, but can also bring new opportunities. Do you prefer to live in one place for a long time or to move someplace new every few years? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion. Which would you prefer: a job that pays a lot of money but that you don’t really enjoy, or a job that you really love that doesn’t pay as well? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion. Many colleges give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in apartments in nearby communities. Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. As we progress into the 21st century, educational opportunities are expanding. Some students have found great success in studying online at their own pace. Other students prefer a more traditional education in a typical school building. Which manner of studying do you think is better? Use specific examples and rea sons to support your opinion.
Practice Brainstorming for the Writing Use any of the “choice” prompts, reprinted below: write a brief outline of your response and then, if you are feeling ambitious and have the time, write a full essay. You can do it!
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Some educators believe that students should participate in physical exercise every single day, while others feel that students should focus all of their attention on academics. Which do you feel is more helpful for students? Use specific examples to support your opinion. Some people like to go out with large groups of friends to have fun. Others prefer to spend time with just a few friends and have a quiet dinner. Which do you pre fer, and why? Use specific reasons to explain your preference. People work in different ways: some prefer to go to a job where they sit at a desk for most of the work day, while others prefer to spend time traveling from job site to job site. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. Some people believe that a student must go to college in order to be successful in life. Others feel that going to a vocational school to learn a trade is a better option. Which do you feel is the better option? Use specific reasons to explain your opinion. Some people prefer to listen to music while exercising, while others prefer to listen to the sounds around them. Which do you prefer to do? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your preference. Some people like to stay up late at night and then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your preference. Some parents are very involved in their students’ academic lives, helping with homework, talking with teachers, and volunteering at school. Other parents choose to take a lesser role in their students’ academic programs. Do you prefer for your parents to be more involved in your schooling or less? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people prefer to talk on the phone, but others prefer to text. Which manner of communication do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion. Some people prefer to be surrounded by large groups of friends and family for spe cial events, like weddings or graduations. Others prefer to have smaller gatherings, perhaps without any friends or family at all. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion. Some people really like living in a big city. Some others prefer living in a small town. Which do you like better? Use specific reasons to support your opinion. Is it more valuable to be able to work with others or to be able to set your own goals and deadlines as you work independently? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do you prefer to spend money as soon as you earn it, or would you rather save it to buy something at a later time? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to sup port your opinion. Traveling the world can be very insightful and educational. Do you prefer to travel by yourself or with other companions? Why? Use specific examples to support your opinion. Moving from place to place can be stressful, but can also bring new opportunities. Do you prefer to live in one place for a long time or to move someplace new every few years? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion. Which would you prefer: a job that pays a lot of money but that you don’t really enjoy, or a job that you really love that doesn’t pay as well? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion.
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Many colleges give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in apartments in nearby communities. Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. As we progress into the 21st century, educational opportunities are expanding. Some students have found great success in studying online at their own pace. Other students prefer a more traditional education in a typical school building. Which manner of studying do you think is better? Use specific examples and rea sons to support your opinion.
Computer Practice The TOEFL iBT is offered only online, so make sure you’re comfortable with basic computer functions. No specialized knowledge is required, but you should know how to use a keyboard and mouse. Some basic typing skills will also be helpful on the Writing section.
STUDY PLANS Regardless of how much time you have until you take the TOEFL, you should start by taking a practice test to identify where you’re already scoring.
Then, you need to find out what scores are required at the schools where you plan to apply. Be sure to identify whether there is a minimum score requirement, or whether they are looking for an average score. This is important to determine which areas you should focus on between now and the test. Also find out whether the school pays more attention to one sub-score over the others. Most schools simply want to see a combined score (all 4 sections added together).
8 Weeks Out With a solid 8 weeks to get ready, you can likely see improvement in all four areas of the test. You should dedicate one hour a day and choose one day of the week on which to invest two hours. This will allow you to invest 2 hours per subject, per week. Proven Techniques
During the first week, start with a practice test to identify your stronger and weaker subject areas. Then, invest equal amounts of time in each section so you’re working to improve all of them. Feel free to start with the section that you feel least comfort able with, but don’t abandon your areas of strength—they all count toward your total score!
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During the fifth and sixth weeks, continue studying all four areas, with more time dedicated to the areas that you find more difficult. At the beginning of the seventh week, take your third practice test. At this point, focus mostly on any area you still find challenging, as this will be the last week you can spend a lot of time on it. At the beginning of the eighth week, take your final practice test. At this point, go back to focusing on all four content areas, with a primary focus on the areas you feel strongest in. Going into the official exam, you want to ensure that you have your stronger areas as sharp as can be so you can get the most points possible out of them!
4 Weeks out With four weeks to prepare for the TOEFL, you’ll need to prioritize your studying a bit.
During the first week, take the first practice test. Then dedicate 6 hours this week to the two areas that you feel least comfortable with. Spend 1 or 2 hours doing a bit of practice on your two stronger areas. At the beginning of the second week, take the second practice test. Then invest 6 hours this week on the two subjects that are lowest on this test. Spend another 2 hours reviewing the areas that you feel better about. At the beginning of the third week, take the third practice test. This week, though, you’re going to shift gears and focus on the areas that are the strongest so you can get as many points out of them as possible. At the beginning of the fourth week, take the last practice test. This week, you won’t focus on any particular area. Instead, you’ll spend 15 to 20 minutes each day on every subject area. This way, you’ll end up spending between an hour and an hour and a half, total, each day.
2 Weeks Out If your test is two weeks away, your best bet is to focus on the areas you’re strongest in—it doesn’t matter where the points come from, and you’re more likely to see significant improve ment over a short timeframe in the areas you feel most confident about already.
At the beginning of the first week, take the first practice test. Once you identify the two areas with the highest scores, invest an hour each day in each subject. That means you’ll be studying at least 2 hours each day. If you have the time, also spend some time on the areas you feel less comfortable with.
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The Week Before the Test You should allow yourself about four to six weeks of preparation before you take the TOEFL. You cannot cram for the TOEFL, but there are some things you can do in the final week before the test.
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Review strategies: Look back over the strategies in this book. Make sure you are comfortable with them. Review tasks: Before the test, review the four different tasks on the TOEFL (Reading, Listening, Speaking, and Writing). Familiarize yourself with the format and the question types you’ll see on test day. Know the directions: Don’t waste time on test day reading the directions for each task. Learn the directions ahead of time. They won’t change. Warm-up questions: Look back at the questions you’ve completed. Review how you approached each one. Note any trap answers and question types that were particularly difficult for you. Have a plan: Make sure you know the format for your speaking and writ ing tasks. Review the structure of your responses. Also make sure you’ve reviewed your Personal Order of Difficulty for Reading and Listening so you have a plan for which questions to tackle and which ones will get Letter of the Day. (Don’t worry, we’ll get to all of this later.)
Beyond the Test Many students focus so much on the academic prep for their upcoming tests that they totally forget other areas that are just as important.
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Sleep! Your brain won’t function very well if you’re not well rested. Make sure you get a good night’s sleep every night for at least 3-4 nights before the test. The more the better! Exercise! Especially if you think you may be nervous going into the test, make sure to stick to a healthy exercise schedule. Exercise is a fantastic stress reliever! Of course, make sure you ask your doctor for insight before you begin any exercise program. Eat! Just as your brain won’t work very well without sleep, it certainly won’t function without nourishment. Make sure to eat a healthy breakfast before you start the test, and take plenty of water and snacks with you for the break after the Listening section. Prepare Mentally! Many of the world’s most successful athletes spend time visualizing themselves executing their sport perfectly. You can do the same thing! Picture yourself sitting at the desk, reading a passage com fortably and using Process of Elimination easily on the answers. Envision yourself listening comfortably to the recordings and making brief notes about the important parts of the lectures and conversations. Imagine yourself speaking calmly and smoothly during the Speaking section. See yourself using your templates in the Writing section.
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Test Day On the night before the test, put your practice materials aside and give yourself a break. Make sure you know where your test center is, and plan to arrive at least 30 minutes before your scheduled test time. Be sure to dress comfortably and take a valid photo ID (such as a passport) to the test center. You should also take two pencils to take notes, although many centers will provide pencils. You may not take anything else into the testing center, so do not take food, backpacks, suitcases, cell phones, or laptops.
Option to Cancel Your Scores When you’ve completed the TOEFL iBT, you will have the option to cancel your scores. There are a few really important points to consider before deciding to cancel: • • •
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You should also conduct your research in advance to inquire about how schools view multiple tests.
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Chapter 2 Core Concept: Reading The TOEFL is an integrated exam, which means that each task may measure more than one skill. But the TOEFL is also a standardized test, which means that it consists of definite patterns. Your goal when taking the TOEFL is to make sure your responses conform to the patterns present on the test. The reading selec tions in this chapter will form the foundation for your listening and writing goals. Likewise, the skills needed to perform well in listening, speaking, and writing are closely intertwined. You’ll find that mastering the core concepts of one section will also help you on other sec tions of the test.
READING ON THE TOEFL There are three to four reading passages on the TOEFL, each around 700 words. Although the TOEFL test writers attempt to simulate the type of reading you will do in a university or graduate school program, the reading skills required on the test are very different from the skills used in an academic environment. Let’s take a look at a passage.
Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. Can a computer program be considered alive? The members of the Digital Evolution Laboratory say yes. Computer scientists at the laboratory have created a program called Avida that has intrigued not only scientists and 5 engineers but biologists and philosophers as well. The Avida project began in the late 1990s, when Chris Adami, a physicist, sought to create computer programs that could evolve to do simple addition problems and reproduce inside a digital environment. Adami called these 10 programs “digital organisms.” Whenever a digital organism replicates, it has a chance to alter the program of the newly created offspring. In this way, the programs mutate and evolve. The goal of the Avida program is to create a model that could simulate the evolutionary process.
15 Initially, the digital creations were unable to process numbers in any way. But Adami designed Avida to reward digital organisms that were able to work with the numbers in some way. The digital organisms that could process numbers were allowed to reproduce in higher numbers. In only six short months, the primitive program had evolved a number of mechanisms to perform addition. 20 And, most surprisingly, not all of the digital creatures performed addition in the same way.
The Avida program now resides at Michigan State University, where it has been growing and changing for years. The digital creatures number in 25 the billions and have colonized more than two hundred computers. The organisms compete with one another for resources, and the most successful ones are able to make more copies of themselves. Just like living creatures, the digital entities also undergo mutations. Mutations that are beneficial ensure greater reproduction; harmful mutations have the opposite effect. 30 As a model for studying evolution, the Avida project has been a great success. Adami’s digital organisms have suggested solutions to some of evolution’s biggest mysteries. For example, Avida has helped disprove the theory of “irreducible complexity.” Opponents of evolutionary theory have 35 suggested that some structures, such as the eye, are too complex to have been created in piecemeal stages. The evolution of Avida’s digital organisms proves that even extremely complex structures can be developed in stages over time. 40 The Avida program’s success has also raised some unintentional philosophical dilemmas. Does Avida just simulate evolution, or are digital organisms a new form of life? According to the director of the Avida project, the processes undergone by the digital creatures are the same as those experienced by biological organisms. The only difference is that biological 45 entities are based on strings of DNA, whereas the digital creations from 28 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
Avida are based on strings of ones and zeros. In a living creature, different sequences of DNA instruct cells to create certain proteins. In one of the Avida creations, different sequences of computer code instruct the program to perform certain functions. In both cases, the reproduction of the organisms 50 is subject to forces such as competition and mutation. Now, some biologists are maintaining that the programs in the Avida project are alive. The programs live, die, reproduce, compete, cooperate, and evolve—activities that many biologists consider the hallmarks of life. One 55 prominent biologist says, “They don’t have a metabolism—at least not yet. But otherwise, they’re alive.”
Of course, not everyone agrees that the program’s creations are alive. One difficulty is that biologists do not even agree on the definition of life. The 60 diversity of life on Earth constantly surprises scientists, and there are simply too many characteristics and qualities to provide one simple definition of life. Despite these misgivings, the directors of the Avida program remain optimistic that their program, even if not considered alive, is leading to a 65 greater understanding of life in all its forms. It may even facilitate future searches for life on other planets. According to one member of the Avida team, “The problem that we have now is that we are focused on looking for DNA-based life. But there may be other kinds of life out there that we have never dreamed of.” The Avida program may provide biologists with another 70 avenue to explore. This passage is typical of the passages on the TOEFL. It’s about 700 words long, and it discusses an academic topic. It contains some challenging vocabulary words and requires you to read about a topic in which you may have no interest or knowledge. Although you may end up read ing passages such as this at a university or graduate program, your approach for the TOEFL should be very different. For example, in a college course, you would need to read this passage very carefully, paying close attention to the details and facts presented in it. That type of close reading, however, is neither possible nor necessary on the TOEFL. You should employ a tactic called “active reading” rather than close reading.
Working on Active Reading In this chapter, we focus a lot on active reading. You might ask yourself how that differs from how you ordinarily read. Active reading requires you to read with purpose; analyzing the mate rial and looking for specific things within that material is something you will be asked to do on this section of the TOEFL. We want to make sure you get into the habit now so on test day you’ll be prepared. The reading skills necessary for the TOEFL really are different from the skills you need for other types of reading that you do. Therefore, to do well on the TOEFL, you have to work on active reading. You will have to face many challenges in the Reading sec tion. You’ve already seen an example of the level of content and vocabulary you may encounter. Perhaps the greatest challenge, however, is to attempt to both read the passages and answer the questions in the limited time provided. If you tackle every question, you have only about a minute and a half per question, and that’s without allowing any time for actually reading the passage! 2. Core Concept: Reading | 29
Therefore, instead of attempting to retain all of the information in the passage, you should fo cus on the big picture. Active reading involves completing three major tasks.
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Stating the main idea: Figuring out what the passage is about Understanding the structure: Figuring out key information by mapping the passage Finding the purpose: Figuring out why the author wrote the piece
By mastering the skill of active reading, you’ll be able to not only find the most important information in a passage but also effectively and accurately answer the questions that follow the passage. After all, you gain no points on the TOEFL for simply reading the passages; you get points only for answering the questions correctly.
STEPS TO MASTERING ACTIVE READING
Step 1: State the Main Idea All passages on the TOEFL have a main idea. The main idea is the central message or point of the passage. Finding the main idea answers this question: What is the author writing about?
Let’s take a look at a passage and work on learning how to find the main idea.
Sometimes it appears that the human mark on this planet is indelible. In only a blink of geological time, 200 years or so, human construction and expansion has resulted in the destruction of more than one-fifth of the world’s forests, the recession of the polar icecaps, and the creation of a huge hole 5 in the ozone layer. Additionally, industrial activity has damaged rivers and oceans, as well as groundwater supplies. Environmental scientists and activists warn that if Earth’s future is not taken into account, humankind could very well destroy the planet.
10 However, Earth is an amazingly resilient place. In its 4.5-billion-year lifespan, Earth has endured bombardment by cosmic rays and meteors, violent earthquakes, volcanism, and frigid ice ages. In light of all these catastrophic events, many geologists and ecologists say that Earth could recover from any damage caused by human actions. 15 The author Alan Weisman has gone so far as to predict exactly what would happen on Earth if all humans were to disappear. Without upkeep, the concrete jungles of the world’s largest cities would be slowly reclaimed by the wilderness around them. Harsh temperatures would cause pavement to crack. 20 Plants would return to areas covered by streets and sidewalks.
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25 foundations supporting larger buildings and bridges would corrode and buckle, especially with the rise in groundwater that would accompany the clogging of sewer systems. Without human interference, many of the threatened or endangered fauna 30 would reclaim their ecological niches. Unfortunately, household pets would suffer. In addition, the rat, one of the greatest pests in large cities, would not have the waste of humankind to feed off of and would be hunted mercilessly by growing populations of hawks and falcons. And the cockroach, which to many a city dweller seems to symbolize invincibility, would disappear from all 35 but the warmest climes without artificial heat to sustain it.
Within 500 years, again barely a heartbeat in geological time, most of humankind’s monuments would be gone, covered over by plants and trees. It’s happened before; the Mayan civilization in Northern Guatemala survived 40 for 2,000 years but was swallowed up by the jungle at its end. And after a few thousand years, if earthquakes and volcanic eruptions have not obliterated everything made by humans, the glaciers would come, sweeping down from the mountains, slowly and inexorably destroying everything in their path. Several times in its history, Earth has been swept clean by these giant sheets 45 of ice. The legacy of humankind would be wiped from Earth.
Of course, not every man-made artifact would be reclaimed by nature. Plastic is a synthetic material that does not occur in nature. The strong bonds that hold plastic together are virtually impervious to natural erosion. Long after 50 concrete and glass have turned back into sand and all processed metals have rusted away, plastics will still be cycling through the Earth’s ecosystem, resilient to even the most destructive of natural forces. Some scientists believe that plastic molecules may eventually break down entirely, but there is no reliable data on just how long complete re-assimilation into the 55 environment might take. Furthermore, it is impossible to predict just what sort of resources Mother Nature might develop in the distant future. There is always the possibility that, given enough time, some microbe or bacteria may evolve the capability to digest plastic. If nature somehow evolved a way to process plastics, then even humanity’s most enduring artifacts might vanish 60 in the space of a few hundred years. The question of plastics aside, there is some evidence that Weisman’s view may be true. Since 1953, a 150-mile-long tract of land separating North and South Korea has been declared a no-man’s-land. After only a little more than 65 50 years, there is almost no trace of the rice paddies that farmers had created and used for almost 5,000 years. Even more spectacular are the flocks of redcrowned cranes that now inhabit the zone. These birds are the second rarest of all birds, but they have flourished in this area, free from human interference of all kinds.
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To find the main idea, read the first sentence or two of the introduction, the first sentence of each body paragraph, and then the first and last sentence of the conclusion. After reading each sentence again ask yourself, “What is the author writing about?” Let's gather up the first sentences of each paragraph and the last sentence of the conclusion to see what we have.
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Sometimes it appears that the human mark on this planet is indelible. However, Earth is an amazingly resilient place. The author Alan Weisman has gone so far as to predict exactly what would happen on Earth if all humans were to disappear. Different fates would await humankind’s other creations. Without human interference, many of the threatened or endangered fauna would reclaim their ecological niches. Within 500 years, again barely a heartbeat in geological time, most of humankind’s monuments would be gone, covered over by plants and trees. Of course, not every man-made artifact would be reclaimed by nature. The question of plastics aside, there is some evidence that Weisman’s view may be true. These birds are the second rarest of all birds, but they have flourished in this area, free from human interference of all kinds.
When stating the main idea, we must try to tie together all of these topics. Take a look at the sentences above and write down what you think the main idea is.
A good answer to this question might be as follows:
If humans were to disappear, plants and animals would soon take over Earth again. Notice how this sentence brings together all of the elements. The sentences from paragraphs 1, 3, and 4 all mention people; the sentence from paragraph 2 talks about Earth; and the sen tences from paragraphs 5, 6, 7, and 8 mention both.
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Let’s try it one more time. Try to find the main idea of the following passage, which we saw at the beginning of this lesson. Write your answer in the space provided after the passage.
Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. Can a computer program be considered alive? The members of the Digital Evolution Laboratory say yes. Computer scientists at the laboratory have created a program called Avida that has intrigued not only scientists and 5 engineers but biologists and philosophers as well. The Avida project began in the late 1990s, when Chris Adami, a physicist, sought to create computer programs that could evolve to do simple addition problems and reproduce inside a digital environment. Adami called these 10 programs “digital organisms.” Whenever a digital organism replicates, it has a chance to alter the program of the newly created offspring. In this way, the programs mutate and evolve. The goal of the Avida program is to create a model that could simulate the evolutionary process.
15 Initially, the digital creations were unable to process numbers in any way. But Adami designed Avida to reward digital organisms that were able to work with the numbers in some way. The digital organisms that could process numbers were allowed to reproduce in higher numbers. In only six short months, the primitive program had evolved a number of mechanisms to perform addition. 20 And, most surprisingly, not all of the digital creatures performed addition in the same way. The Avida program now resides at Michigan State University, where it has been growing and changing for years. The digital creatures number in 25 the billions and have colonized more than two hundred computers. The organisms compete with one another for resources, and the most successful ones are able to make more copies of themselves. Just like living creatures, the digital entities also undergo mutations. Mutations that are beneficial ensure greater reproduction; harmful mutations have the opposite effect. 30 As a model for studying evolution, the Avida project has been a great success. Adami’s digital organisms have suggested solutions to some of evolution’s biggest mysteries. For example, Avida has helped disprove the theory of “irreducible complexity.” Opponents of evolutionary theory have 35 suggested that some structures, such as the eye, are too complex to have been created in piecemeal stages. The evolution of Avida’s digital organisms proves that even extremely complex structures can be developed in stages over time. 40 The Avida program’s success has also raised some unintentional philosophical dilemmas. Does Avida just simulate evolution, or are digital organisms a new form of life? According to the director of the Avida project, the processes undergone by the digital creatures are the same as those experienced by biological organisms. The only difference is that biological 45 entities are based on strings of DNA, whereas the digital creations from Avida are based on strings of ones and zeros. In a living creature, different sequences of DNA instruct cells to create certain proteins. In one of the Avida creations, different sequences of computer code instruct the program to 2. Core Concept: Reading | 33
perform certain functions. In both cases, the reproduction of the organisms 50 is subject to forces such as competition and mutation. Now, some biologists are maintaining that the programs in the Avida project are alive. The programs live, die, reproduce, compete, cooperate, and evolve—activities that many biologists consider the hallmarks of life. One 55 prominent biologist says, “They don’t have a metabolism—at least not yet. But otherwise, they’re alive.”
Of course, not everyone agrees that the program’s creations are alive. One difficulty is that biologists do not even agree on the definition of life. The 60 diversity of life on Earth constantly surprises scientists, and there are simply too many characteristics and qualities to provide one simple definition of life. Despite these misgivings, the directors of the Avida program remain optimistic that their program, even if not considered alive, is leading to a greater 65 understanding of life in all its forms. It may even facilitate future searches for life on other planets. According to one member of the Avida team, “The problem that we have now is that we are focused on looking for DNA-based life. But there may be other kinds of life out there that we have never dreamed of.” The Avida program may provide biologists with another avenue to explore. Write down what you think the main idea is:
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Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. The Avida project began in the late 1990s, when Chris Adami, a physicist, sought to create a computer program that could evolve to do simple addi tion problems and reproduce inside a digital environment. Initially, the digital creations were unable to process numbers in any way. The Avida program now resides at Michigan State University, where it has been growing and changing for years. As a model for studying evolution, the Avida project has been a great success. The Avida program’s success has raised some unintentional philosophical dilemmas. Now, some biologists are maintaining that the programs in the Avida project are alive. Of course, not everyone agrees that the program’s creations are alive. Despite these misgivings, the directors of the Avida program remain optimistic that their program, even if not considered alive, is leading to a greater understanding of life in all its forms. The Avida program may provide biologists with another avenue to explore.
We could state our main idea as follows:
The features of the Avida computer program have led some biologists to consider the program alive. Because the Avida program is mentioned in sentences from paragraphs 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, and 9, we definitely need it in our main idea. The sentences from paragraphs 2 and 4 talk about the program “evolving,” “changing,” and “growing.” Later, the program is described as “alive” and likened to a “biological organism.” So we also need to put this concept into our main idea.
Main Idea: Paying Attention to Direction Markers When finding the main idea, pay close attention to direction markers. Some passages introduce an idea or a topic, but they go on to discuss the opposite of it. Here’s an example.
Art has always occupied a special place in society. Many people consider artists to be the ultimate authorities on aesthetics, the nature and expression of beauty. For much of history, the practice of art was inscrutable, and artists were viewed as being somewhat strange and often mad. Even the word 5 most commonly associated with artists—inspiration—has its own magical overtones. Literally, “inspiration” is the breathing in of a spirit. Artists were thought of as people who were divinely inspired to create.
Of course, artists contributed to this mythology. Many artists ascribed 10 their talents to the presence of some supernatural agent or “muse.” Whole movements of art have centered on the supposedly otherworldly nature of art. For example, the Romantic poets believed that art was the search for the sublime, a term for them that meant an ultimate expression of beauty and truth. The search for this ideal led them to explore both natural and 15 supernatural themes in their works. Another persistent view of art regarded its divorce from rationality. Reason and logic were the province of scientists and philosophers, whereas creativity and intuition were the domain of the artists. The two separate spheres of the 20 mind were supposed to remain distinct. But in 1704, a major transgression occurred. Sir Isaac Newton, mathematician and physicist extraordinaire, published his study of light, Opticks. One of Newton’s major discoveries was on the nature of color. Using 25 a prism, Newton found that white light is actually composed of all the colors of the rainbow. He even provided a scientific explanation for the presence of rainbows. The artistic community was shocked. A scientist had taken a beautiful and magical experience and reduced it to the simple refraction of beams of light through the prism of a raindrop. A scientist had intruded into 30 their sacred territory.
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More than a hundred years later, John Keats, one of the most famous Romantic poets, accused Newton of diminishing beauty by “unweaving the rainbow.” His colleague, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, famously remarked that the 35 souls of five hundred Newtons would be needed to make one Shakespeare. And yet, from another perspective, Newton did not diminish the beauty of the rainbow; he enhanced it. In his quest to uncover the secrets of the rainbow, Newton demonstrated the wonder, creativity, and inspiration of an artist. He also gave the world another opportunity to experience the sublime. Newton’s 40 discovery paved the way for the development of the science of spectroscopy, a way of analyzing the chemical makeup of light. Now scientists can look at the stars and discern their composition. The sense of wonder this ability creates is not much different from the wonder the poet or artist feels when gazing at those same stars. Take a look at the topic sentences from the first three paragraphs. (Note: The first sentence of a paragraph is often known as the topic sentence.)
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Art has always occupied a special place in society. Of course, artists contributed to this mythology. Another persistent view of art regarded its divorce from rationality.
At this point, you may predict that the main idea of the passage will be about views of art and artists. But look at the remaining topic sentences.
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But in 1704, a major transgression occurred. More than a hundred years later, John Keats, one of the most famous Romantic poets, accused Newton of diminishing beauty by “unweaving the rainbow.” The sense of wonder this ability creates is not much different from the wonder the poet or artist feels when gazing at those same stars.
The sentence from paragraph 4 is an important one because it contains the direction marker “but.” The author is introducing an important new idea contrary to the prior topics. We should figure out this new idea. In paragraph 4, the author discusses science s relationship to art. We need to make sure this idea is part of our main idea. Look through the passage again. Do you see any other direction markers that may clue us in to the main idea? You may have noticed the following sentence in the last paragraph:
And yet, from another perspective, Newton did not diminish the beauty of the rainbow; he enhanced it.
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See if you can come up with a main idea that incorporates these elements. Write down what you think the main idea is.
Your answer should look something like the following:
Science does not diminish art but instead provides another source of wonder. Thus, it is important to incorporate all parts of the passage. The first part of this passage establishes the view of art, whereas the second discusses the intersection of art and science.
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Drill #1: State the Main Idea For each of the following passages, try to find the main idea. Read the topic sentences of each paragraph and paraphrase them. Then, try to state the main idea. Be on the lookout for direction markers!
Passage A Plants reproduce by seeding. The seed of the plant contains all the necessary genetic information to create a new plant, and more important, it is designed to start growing only when the surrounding conditions are perfect. For example, the seed of a plant growing in a temperate area will “wait” until the cold winter passes before growing. When spring arrives, the seed responds to environmental 5 triggers such as water intake, rising air temperature, humidity levels, and amount of sunlight. Some seeds are programmed in such a way that they will not grow until they’ve passed through a period of cold weather. A germinating seed will first display tiny leaves, called cotyledons. Plants are either monocotyledons, 10 producing just a single leaf, or dicotyledons, producing two leaves. These tiny leaves quickly grow into a mature leaf system, which then begins gathering energy for the young plant. Plants gather the light of the Sun and transform it into energy in a process called photosynthesis. This process allows the plant to produce glucose, which the plant then uses to both further its growth and to produce cellulose and starch, two compounds essential to a plant. Cellulose is a strong, fibrous material that 15 gives shape and structure to the cell walls. Starch is stored in the cells and used for energy.
Beneath the surface, the plant’s root system grows and provides not only an anchor for the plant but a constant supply of food as well. Some plants possess what is called a taproot system, in which there is one main root. Others have a more dispersed root system, which lacks a main root. 20 In either case, the roots of the plant are covered with microscopic hairs, which spread into the surrounding soil. These hairs greatly increase the surface area of the root system and allow the plant to absorb water and essential nutrients from the soil. Water drawn in through the roots undergoes a process called transpiration. During this process, 25 minerals are carried up to the leaves of the plant, while oxygen and water vapor escape through tiny pores, called stomata, on the surface of the leaves. Interestingly, the movement of water through the plant is also responsible for keeping the plant upright; a plant that lacks water will wilt and may die. Too much water may also harm the plant by saturating the soil and preventing the roots from absorbing oxygen. 30 Once a plant reaches full maturity, its energy is devoted to reproduction. The plant forms flowers and fruits, the structures essential to reproduction. The flowers of a plant are typically hermaphrodites, meaning that they contain both male and female reproductive organs. Thus, many plants are able to fertilize themselves. The flowers of some plants are unisexual, being all male 35 or all female. These plants require another plant for fertilization. Some plants are polygamous, meaning they have both hermaphrodite and unisexual flowers. Fruits are created from the ovaries of flowering plants. The main purpose of the fruit is to protect the seed, but many fruits aid in the seed’s dispersal as well. For example, a soft, fleshy fruit attracts animals, which eat the fruit and thus spread the seeds. Or a pod or capsule will split open and scatter its seeds. Some of the seeds 40 distributed in this manner will take hold in favorable soil, and the entire process begins anew.
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Passage B The business practices of the Intel Corporation, a technology company best known for the production of microprocessors for computers, illustrate the importance of brand marketing. Intel was able to achieve a more than 1,500 percent increase in sales, moving from $1.2 billion in sales to more than $33 billion, in a little more than 10 years. Although the explosion of the home-computer 5 market certainly accounted for some of this dramatic increase, the brilliance of its branding strategy also played a significant role.
Intel became a major producer of microprocessor chips in 1978, when its 8086 chip was selected by IBM for use in its line of home computers. The 8086 chip and its successors soon became the 10 industry standard, even as Intel’s competitors sought to break into this potentially lucrative market. Intel’s main problem in facing its competitors was its lack of trademark protection for its series of microchips. Competitors were able to exploit this lack by introducing clone products with similar sounding names, severely inhibiting Intel’s ability to create a brand identity.
15 In an effort to save its market share, Intel embarked on an ambitious branding program in 1991. The corporation’s decision to invest more than $100 million in this program was greeted with skepticism and controversy. Many within the company argued that the money could be better spent researching and developing new products, while others argued that a company that operated within such a narrow consumer niche had little need for such an aggressive branding campaign. Despite 20 these misgivings, Intel went ahead with its strategy, which in a short time became a resounding success. One of the keys to the success of Intel’s new branding initiative was its close partnership with computer manufacturers. Intel involved the manufacturers in its plan by first offering them a rebate 25 on the purchase of an Intel microprocessor. The money saved on the purchase of microprocessors was redirected into advertising, with Intel offering to pay fully half of manufacturers’ advertising costs, provided their computers prominently featured the Intel brand logo. In an even more effective 2. Core Concept: Reading
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strategy, Intel also required computer manufacturers to produce products using competitors’ chips. These products noticeably lacked the prominent Intel logo, which had a negative effect on 30 consumers, who had come to expect to see Intel’s brand on the computer.
Intel’s successful branding campaign led to two important developments. The first was Intel’s positioning of itself as the leader in microprocessors, recognized for creating products that were both reliable and ubiquitous, appearing in many different computer brands. This occurred despite 35 the public’s general lack of understanding of exactly what a microprocessor was or how Intel’s processor was better than its competitors’ chips. Second, Intel’s campaign led to a boom in computer advertising. Prior to Intel’s branding initiative, many advertisers avoided the computer industry, which generally spent far more of its money on research and development. But the success of Intel’s branding program led to a new and eminently profitable relationship between 40 computer manufacturers and advertisers. Ironically, the success of Intel’s branding strategy led to a marketing dilemma for the company. In 1992, Intel was prepared to unveil its new line of microprocessors. However, the company faced a difficult decision: release the new product under the current brand logo and risk consumer apathy 45 or give the product a new name and brand and risk undoing all the work put into the branding strategy. In the end, Intel decided to move forward with a new brand identity. It was a testament to the strength of Intel’s earlier branding efforts that the new product line was seamlessly integrated into the public consciousness.
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Passage C On December 18,1912, an amateur geologist named Charles Dawson and paleontologist Arthur Smith Woodward presented a stunning finding to the Geological Society of London. One year earlier, Dawson had found a piece of a human cranium in a gravel pit near Piltdown Common, Sussex. Further searching by Dawson uncovered remnants of what appeared to be flint tools and the 5 remains of prehistoric animals. Excited by his discovery, Dawson took the fossils to Woodward at the British Museum, and the two men returned to the gravel pit for a systematic excavation.
In the summer of 1912, Dawson and Woodward made the discoveries that would later shock the assembled scientists at the Geological Society. Among the animal bones and primitive tools, the 10 two men found another skull and an almost entirely intact jawbone. The geologic and biologic evidence dated the site to the Pleistocene era, and the bones were clearly of a creature that resembled no other known at that time. Although the skull resembled those of other finds, including the famous ape-men of Java, the jaw appeared to come from some type of heretofore unknown species of ape. Startlingly, however, the teeth were worn down in a human fashion. 15 Dawson and Woodward’s announcement of the so-called Missing Link between man and apes, which they called Piltdown Man, set off an immediate firestorm. Across the Atlantic, The New York Times reported the story with the dramatic headline “Paleolithic Skull Is a Missing Link.” The ensuing controversy over human origins eventually led the Times to publish an editorial that cautioned 20 readers from seeing Piltdown Man as the missing link; instead, the editors advised readers to see Piltdown Man as a link to man’s prehistoric past, but not necessarily proof of evolution. Similar editorials sprang up across the United States, and the American public was divided over the issue of human origins. Although no fossil could conclusively prove evolution, scientists had 25 amassed a huge collection of fossils in the early twentieth century. These fossils seemed to indicate a pattern of evolution and demanded attention. In the United States during the 1920s, a movement sprang up to counter the theory of evolution. This movement culminated in one of the most famous trials in history, the Scopes “Monkey” Trial. 30 John T. Scopes was a biology teacher in a Tennessee school. The textbook he used in his class contained a chapter on evolution and natural selection, a violation of Tennessee law. Scopes was brought to trial for the offense, and the ensuing confrontation riveted the American public. Scopes was defended by Clarence Darrow, a noted lawyer, and William Jennings Bryan, a former secretary of state, worked for the prosecution. After a confrontational trial, which even included Darrow calling 35 Bryan as a witness, Scopes was ultimately found guilty.
Although Scopes’s conviction was later overturned, the precedent set by the case endured. It wasn’t until 1967 that Tennessee repealed its law forbidding the teaching of evolution. And even today, the reverberations of the trial are still visible. One school district in Georgia recently began 40 placing stickers on its biology textbooks disavowing the validity of evolution. The Supreme Court eventually decided that the stickers were unconstitutional, but a cultural battle over the validity of evolution still rages in the United States.
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Passage D One of the most commonplace instructional strategies in elementary and middle schools is that of oral reading. Virtually all teachers, at some point in the school day, engage in this activity, whether by reading aloud to the class or by having the students read to one another. Although some recent educational theorists have challenged the efficacy of oral reading, its popularity in schools and 5 classrooms is unchallenged.
The history of oral reading in the classroom is inextricably linked with the history of the culture that engendered it. Prior to the development of computers, television, and radio, reading was the predominant form of family entertainment. However, printed books were often scarce, and 10 literacy rates were often low. Thus, families would gather around and listen to a book being read to them. Early classrooms were modeled after this phenomenon, and oral reading was such a part of academic life that schools were sometimes called blab schools. In these schools, students often read their lessons aloud simultaneously, even when the students had different lessons. At other times, all students read the same text aloud. 15 With the increasing availability of books, schools began using textbooks to teach reading in the classroom. By the nineteenth century, the focus had moved to teaching students “eloquent reading.” Students were expected to recite stories, poems, and prayers for the class, and the teacher graded them on their articulation and pronunciation, as well as their abilities to recall what they had just 20 read. This method persisted into the twentieth century and became known as the story method of instruction. Oral reading was such a focal point of instruction that philosopher William James stated “...the teacher’s success or failure in teaching reading is based...upon the oral reading method.”
However, as the twentieth century progressed, the effectiveness of oral reading was called into 25 question. Educational scholars in both Europe and the United States wondered exactly what oral reading was teaching students. With oral reading focusing excessively on pronunciation and dynamics, educators doubted that students were even able to comprehend what they were saying. One scholar quoted a study that claimed that eleven-twelfths of students did not understand what they were reciting when they read orally. Friedrich Froebel, a German education specialist, argued
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30 that oral reading inappropriately placed emphasis on expression, when the emphasis should be placed on process.
Also at this time, science was gaining increasing prominence, and across all fields researchers were placing a premium on empirical studies. Many long-standing beliefs and views were challenged, 35 and educational theories were no exception. Behavioral scientists studied reading practices and determined that oral reading was no longer in fashion. In fact, they concluded that the only time students read orally was in school. Most individuals read silently, and this finding led many schools to change their methods to reflect this change.
40 The new preponderance of written texts also played a role in the history of oral reading. With the amount of printed material rapidly expanding, silent reading, which was more efficient, became the reading model of choice. For a number of years, oral reading was absent from many a classroom. But in time, new research and studies brought oral reading back to the forefront of education. Pressley’s and Afflerbach’s influential book Verbal Protocols of Reading emphasizes the importance 45 of oral reading, tracing its history back to the methods of Aristotle and Plato. In many ways, however, the new research reiterates what most teachers already know. For them, the necessity and effectiveness of oral reading was never in doubt. Paragraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3: Paragraph 4: Paragraph 5: Paragraph 6:
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Answers to Drill #1 Passage A Paragraph 1: “Plants reproduce by seeding.” For short sentences like this one, don’t worry about paraphrasing. Keep things simple. Paragraph 2: “Seed first has tiny leaves.” When finding the main idea, don’t worry about strange or difficult vocabulary words (cotyledons). They are not important to the main idea.
Paragraph 3: “Plants have a root system that helps growth.” When paraphrasing, you don’t nec essarily have to note the exact functions of the root system. Details are not important. All we need to know is that the root system is helpful to the plant. Paragraph 4: “Water comes through the roots.” Again, ignore the fancy term transpiration. Paragraph 5: “After maturity, plants focus on reproduction.”
Last sentence: “Process starts all over again.”
Pay attention to the last sentence. Look for the author’s final word. Is there a definite conclu sion? The author wraps up things nicely, but some passages may end with a question or a call for more information or research on the topic.
Direction Markers (We use boldface for same-direction markers and underline opposite-direction markers.) For example, the seed of a plant growing in a temperate area will “wait” until the cold winter passes before growing.
During this process, minerals are carried up to the leaves of the plant, while oxy gen and water vapor escape through tiny pores, called stomata, on the surface of the leaves. The main purpose of the fruit is to protect the seed, but many fruits aid in the seed’s dispersal as well. For example, a soft, fleshy fruit attracts animals, which eat the fruit and thus spread the seeds.
You may have spotted some others, but the key thing about this passage is that the information is all going in the same direction. The purpose of this passage is to inform the reader, and all the details provide an explanation of a process.
Main idea: “A plant reproduces with a seed, which grows from a tiny leaf into a mature plant capable of making its own seeds.”
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Each of our topic sentences discusses reproduction and the steps. Notice we did not mention the root system. That’s because the root system is mentioned as a part of the growth process. We don’t need to explicitly discuss each detail when stating the main idea, especially if the author is not introducing any contrasting ideas.
Passage B Paragraph 1: “Intel is an example of good brand marketing.” By reading the first sentence, we may be able to predict what’s coming in the passage. It looks as if we’re going to read a descrip tion of this company’s business practices. Paragraph 2: “Intel became a major producer in 1978.” In addition to direction markers, time markers are also helpful. We know that we’re going to read some of the background story.
Paragraph 3: “To save its market share, Intel started a new program.” This sentence supports the introduction paragraph. Paragraph 4: “One key to Intel’s success.” When the author presents an example, don’t worry too much about what the example is. We don’t need to know exactly what the details are for the main idea; it’s enough to know that this paragraph will describe it. Paragraph 5: “Two important developments from the program.” Again, don’t worry too much about what the developments are. The important thing is that the author is giving the results of the program. Paragraph 6: “Success led to a problem.” The author introduces a problem, but we should note that it is the last paragraph. Therefore, we may think the problem isn’t a main focus of the pas sage. Last sentence: “New product introduced with no problems.” This last sentence indicates that everything ended well. The earlier problem was mentioned only to show how good the com pany’s strategy was. Even the problem fits into the overall direction of the passage.
Direction Markers (Again, we use boldface for same-direction markers and underline opposite-direction markers.) Although the explosion of the home-computer market certainly accounted for some of this dramatic increase, the brilliance of its branding strategy also played a significant role. Despite these misgivings, Intel went ahead with its strategy, which in a short time became a resounding success.
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However, the company faced a difficult decision: release the new product under the current brand logo and risk consumer apathy or give the product a new name and brand and risk undoing all the work put into the branding strategy. This passage contains quite a few opposite-direction markers. Notice how each one serves to indicate how successful Intel’s branding campaign was.
Main idea: “Intel’s branding strategy was important to its success and also led to some important developments in the market.” As we predicted from the first sentence, we were going to read about a successful business strategy. We also brought in the developments mentioned later in the passage. The problem mentioned in the final paragraph doesn’t need special mention because it again illustrates how successful Intel’s campaign was.
Passage C Paragraph 1: “Two scientists made a stunning finding.” This is a good “teaser” introduction: the author doesn’t tell us right away what the topic is. In this case, you may want to read another sentence or two to figure out what the finding is. Paragraph 2: “The discoveries were made in 1912.” This is another reference to the shocking discovery.
Paragraph 3: “The announcement set off controversy.” If you are not sure what the word fire storm means, keep reading! You’ll find hints in the next two sentences. Paragraph 4: “The public was divided over human origins.” Now the author is adding another dimension to the discussion. Often, a passage will introduce a controversy or problem, as is the case here. Paragraph 5: “Scopes was a teacher.” This sentence appears to be off the topic. We should read another sentence to discover why the author brings up Scopes.
Paragraph 6: “Lasting effects from the case.” Don’t be thrown off by the vocabulary! If you are not sure of some of the words in the sentence, read another line or two. The passage makes it clear that the situation lasted for many years. Last sentence: “A battle still rages over the subject.” The passage ends without a nice resolution; the author indicates that the situation is ongoing.
Direction Markers (Again, we use boldface for same-direction markers and underline opposite-direction markers.)
Although the skull resembled those of other finds, including the famous ape-men of Java, the jaw appeared to come from some type of heretofore unknown species
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The ensuing controversy over human origins eventually led the Times to publish an editorial that cautioned readers from seeing Piltdown Man as the missing link; instead, the editors advised readers to see Piltdown Man as a link to man’s prehis toric past, but not necessarily proof of evolution. Although no fossil could conclusively prove evolution, scientists had amassed a huge collection of fossils in the early twentieth century.
And even today, the reverberations of the trial are still visible.
This passage presents a rather controversial topic. There are two sides to the discus sion, and the author indicates them by using the direction markers highlighted above. Main idea: “The discovery of fossils that supported evolution led to a battle over the theory of evolution, which continues to this day.”
This passage is neatly divided into three large areas. The first two paragraphs talk about the discovery, the next two talk about the controversy, and the final two talk about the court case and its effects. Our main idea should touch on each of these topics.
Passage D Paragraph 1: “Oral reading is used a lot in schools.” This sentence prepares us to read about an educational topic. We’ll learn shortly to think about the author’s purpose—why the author is writing. The author may want to support oral reading, attack it, or just give a history of it. Did you spot any clues that indicate what this passage will do? Paragraph 2: “The history of oral reading is linked to culture.” This paragraph discusses the history of oral reading.
Paragraph 3: “Schools started to use textbooks to teach reading.” This continues the history and indicates a change in the way reading was taught. Paragraph 4: “The usefulness of oral reading is questioned.” The author introduces a problem.
Paragraph 5: “Changes in research and science.” If you’re not sure how this sentence fits into the rest of the passage, read another sentence or two. It appears that new research was against oral reading. Paragraph 6: “Written books played a role in oral reading.” Check the following sentence to see how this fits into the discussion. The author states that silent reading was taking over.
Last sentence: “Good things about oral reading were never in doubt.” This final sentence seems to go against what we’ve been reading. The last three paragraphs all discussed negative aspects of oral reading. But the author ends on a positive note. To understand this ending, let’s check our direction markers.
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Direction Markers (Again, we use boldface for same-direction markers and underline opposite-direction markers.) Although some recent educational theorists have challenged the efficacy of oral reading, its popularity in schools and classrooms is unchallenged.
However, printed books were often scarce, and literacy rates were often low. Thus, families would gather around and listen to a book being read to them. In fact, they concluded that the only time students read orally was in school.
For a number of years, oral reading was absent from many a classroom. But in time, new research and studies brought oral reading back to the forefront of education.
By looking at these direction markers, you can see that the main idea (and the author’s purpose) becomes much clearer. The author wishes to show how oral read ing has persisted despite challenges. This explains why three paragraphs discuss negative aspects, but the final sentence is positive. Main idea: “Despite challenges to its usefulness, oral reading remains an impor tant educational technique.” If your main idea isn’t similar to the one above, you may have missed some of the direction markers. This passage isn’t presenting oral reading in a negative manner, but rather supporting it. The last sentence of the first paragraph is a very important one.
Summary: Stating the Main Idea 1. 2.
3. 4.
Read the first sentence of each paragraph. State what topic the author is writing about. Skim the rest of the paragraph for direction markers. Pay particular attention to opposite-direction markers. Remember to read both the first sentence of each paragraph in the passage and last sentence of the conclusion. The last sentence will contain the author’s final point. The main idea should connect all the ideas found in the first sentences of the para graphs and the last sentence of the conclusion. (If you’re having trouble connecting all of the topics, ask yourself what the purpose of the passage is to help you put all the pieces together.)
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What Is the Structure of a TOEFL Passage? On the TOEFL, all passages will follow a very similar structure, which will look like the fol lowing:
1. 2. 3.
An introduction paragraph that contains the basic topic of the passage Four or five body paragraphs that provide more information about the topic A conclusion that brings the passage to a close with a final statement
Let’s look at the structure of each of these paragraphs in detail.
What Is the Structure of the Introduction? Here’s the introduction of a passage you’ve already read.
(1) Sometimes it appears that the human mark on this planet is indelible. (2) In only a blink of geological time, 200 years or so, human construction and expansion has resulted in the destruction of more than one-fifth of the world’s forests, the recession of the polar icecaps, and the creation of a huge hole in the ozone layer. (3) Additionally, industrial activity has damaged rivers and oceans, as well as groundwater supplies. (4) Environmental scientists and activists warn that if Earth’s future is not taken into account, humankind could very well destroy the planet. Now let’s look at this very same paragraph in terms of its structure, or what each sentence con tributes to the passage. (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence introduces the topic about which the author is writing. This sentence provides information to support the first sentence. This sentence also provides information to support the first sentence. This sentence uses the information in sentences 1,2, and 3 to make a point.
As you can see, stripping down the paragraph in terms of its structure makes it easier to com prehend. Many of the passages on the TOEFL will conform to this basic structure. That means for our purposes, when reading the introduction, you should proceed as follows: 1. 2.
Read the first sentence—and the last sentence— of each paragraph very carefully. They will most likely contain key information about the passage. Skim through the sentences in the middle. They typically contain background information that merely supports the author’s first or last sentence.
Reading the introduction is helpful for answering questions about the main idea or the primary purpose of the passage. The introduction may also contain background information about the topic, ask a question, or answer a question posed by important details which you’ll find in the body paragraphs.
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Drill #2: Analyze the Structure For each of the following introduction paragraphs, write down what role each sentence plays in the paragraph. Check your answers at the end.
Introduction A (1) Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. (2) Can a computer program be considered alive? (3) The members of the Digital Evolution Laboratory say yes. (4) Computer scientists at the laboratory have created a program called Avida that has intrigued not only scientists and engineers but biologists and philosophers as well. (1)
(2) (3)
(4)
Introduction B (1) After a seven-year journey, the Cassini spacecraft approached the planet Saturn in June 2004. (2) The spacecraft’s successful entry into orbit around the world represented the culmination of a vision that took more than 20 years to realize. (3) Launched amid controversy in October 1997, the Cassini spacecraft traveled more than one billion miles in its journey. (4) Despite all the public and technological challenges, the Cassini mission has been more successful than even its planners imagined. (1) (2)
(3) (4)
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Introduction C (1) What causes hallucinations, vivid perceptions of sights or sounds that appear quite real to the person experiencing them? (2) These mystical experiences have long fascinated psychologists, neuroscientists, and anthropologists alike. (3) In many cultures, shamans, prophets, and seers are marked by their susceptibility to hallucinations. (4) Are hallucinations caused by ghosts or spirits? (5) Are they messages from another world? (6) Although researchers don’t have all the answers, there is some intriguing information on the topic. (1)
(2) (3) (4) (5)
(6)
Introduction D (1) In the Arctic tundra, temperatures are below freezing for nine months out of the year. (2) Soil in the Arctic, called permafrost, remains permanently frozen, making agriculture impossible. (3) Travel over the land, whether covered in snow and ice in the winter or in boggy marshes during the summer, is extremely difficult. (4) And perhaps most distressing of all, the Sun shines for only six months out of the year. (5) Yet this foreboding landscape has been inhabited for more than 12,000 years, longer than any other part of North America. (1)
(2) (3)
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Introduction E (1) Alexis de Tocqueville’s Democracy in America studies the interplay between political power and society. (2) The treatise was the first of its kind and was revolutionary for its use of empirical methods, which were more common in the “hard” sciences—chemistry, biology, and physics—than in the social sciences. (3) Tocqueville distinguished himself from his colleagues by viewing democracy not as a system based on freedom but as one based on power. (4) In fact, Tocqueville argues that democracy is a form of government with more power than any other governmental system. (1) (2) (3)
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Answers to Drill #2 As is always the case with our sample written answers, your answers do not have to look exactly like ours. Just be sure the main ideas are similar.
Introduction A (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence introduces the main question of the passage. This sentence states what the question is. This sentence gives an answer to the question. This sentence makes a more specific statement about the topic.
Introduction B (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence introduces the topic of the passage. This sentence provides background about the topic. This sentence provides more background about the topic. This sentence makes a statement about the topic.
Introduction C (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6)
This sentence asks a question about the topic. This sentence states who is interested in the topic. This sentence provides more information about the topic. This sentence asks another question about the topic. This sentence asks another question about the topic. This sentence states that some answers will be provided about the topic.
Introduction D (1) (2) (3) (4) (5)
This sentence introduces the topic. This sentence gives more support for sentence 1. This sentence gives more support for sentence 1. This sentence gives more support for sentence 1. This sentence indicates a contrast to the previous sentences.
Introduction E (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence introduces the topic. This sentence explains why the topic is important. This sentence indicates why the topic is different. This sentence states a viewpoint.
You should notice that all of these paragraphs have similar structures. The important stuff is at the beginning and the end, which is typical: the TOEFL is a standardized test and therefore uses the same types of passages and questions repeatedly. So, you should expect to see a similar structure on your test.
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What Is the Structure of a Body Paragraph? Body paragraphs, just like introduction paragraphs, also share a similar structure. Here’s an example of a typical body paragraph.
(1) The harsh terrain demanded much of its inhabitants. (2) Many residents of the tundra were nomadic, moving about in small bands, following the migrations of caribou, seals, and whales. (3) Cooperation among groups was essential for survival in this land, and the cultures developed elaborate rituals of reciprocity. (4) Groups of hunters often waited patiently at the various breathing holes used by seals. (5) If one hunter caught a seal, all would eat of it. (6) Bravery was also rewarded, as evidenced by the Inupiaq people, who risked death by wandering far across sea ice to hunt seals. Now we’ll look at this paragraph in terms of its structure.
(1)
(2) (3) (4) (5) (6)
This sentence states the specific topic discussed (that much is demanded of people). This sentence gives an example of something demanded. This sentence gives an example of how the people adapted. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 3. This sentence provides an additional detail related to sentence 3. This sentence gives an example of something else demanded.
Looking at the paragraph this way, you can clearly see that these body paragraphs are all about details. Of course, these details are all closely related to the topic sentence. This means that when dealing with body paragraphs on the TOEFL, you should proceed as follows:
1. 2.
Read the topic sentence carefully. Make sure you are looking in the right para graph for the information you need. Sort through the specific details until you find what you need. It is easy to get distracted by all the information in a body paragraph. Stay focused on the infor mation you need. Reading the body paragraphs will help you answer detail and inference questions.
When answering main idea or primary purpose questions, do not read more than the first sentence of the body paragraphs. The information found in the body paragraphs is too narrow. We’ll cover these question types more thoroughly in Chapter 7.
Types of Body Paragraphs The body paragraph we just read supports the author’s views. Most body paragraphs on the TOEFL will be of this type. However, some passages have body paragraphs that present an op posing point of view. Usually, these show up in passages that try to resolve a dilemma or con vince the reader of something. By stating contradictory opinions, an author provides a more complete understanding of a topic and makes the main point stronger.
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You can usually tell when you are reading a body paragraph that contradicts the author by reading the first sentence. The first sentence may have a transition word that indicates the author is now discussing an opposing point of view. Here’s an example of such a paragraph.
(1) Of course, not everyone agrees that the program’s creations are alive. (2) One difficulty is that biologists do not even agree on the definition of life. (3) The diversity of life on Earth constantly surprises scientists, and there are simply too many characteristics and qualities to provide one simple definition of life. Again, here’s the structure of the paragraph.
(1) (2) (3)
This sentence presents an opposite point of view. This sentence explains why some biologists disagree with the author’s position. This sentence supports sentence 2.
The first sentence states, “Of course, not everyone agrees....” This sentence indicates that this paragraph will contradict the author. It is important to recognize these types of paragraphs, especially when answering main idea or primary purpose questions on the TOEFL.
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Drill #3: Analyzing Body Paragraphs State the role of each sentence in the following paragraphs. Also note whether the paragraph appears to support or contradict the passage.
Body Paragraph A (1) The harsh terrain demanded much of its inhabitants. (2) Many residents of the tundra were nomadic, moving about in small bands, following the migrations of caribou, seals, and whales. (3) Cooperation among groups was essential for survival in this land, and the cultures developed elaborate rituals of reciprocity. (4) Groups of hunters often waited patiently at the various breathing holes used by seals. (5) If one hunter caught a seal, all would eat of it. (6) Bravery was also rewarded, as evidenced by the Inupiaq people, who risked death by wandering far across sea ice to hunt seals. (1) (2)
(3) (4) (5)
(6) Supports or contradicts?
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Body Paragraph B (1) Without human interference, many of the threatened or endangered fauna would reclaim their ecological niches. (2) Unfortunately, household pets would suffer. (3) In addition, the rat, one of the greatest pests in large cities, would not have the waste of humankind to feed off of and would be hunted mercilessly by growing populations of hawks and falcons. (4) And the cockroach, which to many a city dweller seems to symbolize invincibility, would disappear from all but the warmest climes without artificial heat to sustain it. (1) (2) (3) (4)
Supports or contradicts?
Body Paragraph C (1) According to surveys, anywhere from 10 to 25 percent of the population has experienced at least one hallucination. (2) Most often, the hallucination comes in the form of some visual experience, but some people report hearing a sound or even voices. (3) Even rarer, but not unheard of, is a hallucination of a particular smell or aroma. (4) It is not known exactly what causes hallucinations, although one commonly accepted theory is that hallucinations occur when the external stimulus received by the senses no longer matches the level of activity occurring in the brain. (5) Sensory deprivation is one of the surest ways to elicit hallucinations. (1) (2)
(3) (4) (5) Supports or contradicts?
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Body Paragraph D (1) Another connection between the lower classes and the centralization of power is literacy, or more accurately, illiteracy. (2) In aristocratic societies, widespread illiteracy did not result in the consolidation of power because the social structure was so segmented. (3) But in an egalitarian society, the intermediate agencies vanish. (4) Without these agencies acting on behalf of the less-informed citizenry, the responsibility falls to the government. (5) Centralization is therefore necessary to aid and provide for citizens who may otherwise have nowhere else to turn to for assistance. (1) (2) (3) (4)
(5) Supports or contradicts?
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Answers to Drill #3 Body Paragraph A (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6)
This sentence states that much is demanded of people. This sentence gives an example of something demanded. This sentence gives an example of how the people adapted. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 3. This sentence provides an additional detail related to sentence 3. This sentence gives an example of something else demanded.
This paragraph supports the passage.
Body Paragraph B (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence gives This sentence gives This sentence gives This sentence gives
a consequence of a situation. a contrast to sentence 1. another contrast to sentence 1. another contrast to sentence 1.
This paragraph contradicts the passage.
Body Paragraph C (1) (2) (3) (4) (5)
This sentence gives a fact about the topic. This sentence provides more information related to sentence 1. This sentence provides more information related to sentence 1. This sentence provides another fact about the topic. This sentence provides more information related to sentence 4.
This paragraph supports the passage.
Body Paragraph D (1) (2) (3) (4) (5)
This sentence introduces another connection. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 1. This sentence explains sentences 1 and 2 more fully. This sentence also explains sentences 1 and 2 more fully. This sentence summarizes the other sentences.
This paragraph supports the passage. As you can see, body paragraphs start with a narrow topic followed by details that are closely related to that narrow topic. Sometimes, as in paragraph C, there are two topics (the percent age of the population experience hallucinations, potential causes of hallucinations), but most body paragraphs deal with only one topic. Most times, the body paragraphs support the author, but occasionally they are used to present contradictory information.
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What Is the Structure of a Conclusion Paragraph? Many of the passages on the TOEFL are edited versions of longer passages. Thus, the last para graph will usually provide some additional details and a final wrap-up of the topic. Let’s revisit a conclusion paragraph.
(1) Of course, other factors increase the centralization of a democracy. (2) Tocqueville points out that war is an important agent of centralization. (3) To succeed in war, contends Tocqueville, a nation must be able to focus its resources around a single point. (4) Countries with a centralization of power are far more able to accomplish this task than are countries with fragmented power structures. (5) But it is interesting how Tocqueville sees democracy as a vehicle not for freedom but for power, driven by the very people the democracy is designed to empower. Again, here’s the structure of the conclusion.
(1) (2) (3) (4) (5)
This sentence provides a detail that contrasts with the main point of the passage. This sentence provides more information on sentence 1. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 1. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 1. This sentence states the author’s final point.
As you can see, the conclusion paragraph offers some specific details similar to a body para graph. However, it also contains an important final statement that should apply to the passage as a whole. Therefore, when reading a conclusion paragraph, you should proceed as follows: 1. 2.
Read the first sentence. If the topic sentence introduces more details, skim through them. Read the very last sentence. Try to figure out what the author’s final message or point is.
Conclusion paragraphs can be very useful for primary purpose questions. In addition to con taining extra details, conclusions can also provide contradictory points and ask final questions about the topic.
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Drill #4: Analyzing Conclusions For each of the following conclusion paragraphs, specify the role each sentence plays. Also, write down the au thor’s final point or message.
Conclusion Paragraph A (1) Despite these misgivings, the directors of the Avida program remain optimistic that their program, even if not considered alive, is leading to a greater understanding of life in all its forms. (2) It may even facilitate future searches for life on other planets. (3) According to one member of the Avida team, “The problem that we have now is that we are focused on looking for DNA-based life. (4) But there may be other kinds of life out there that we have never dreamed of.” (5) The Avida program may provide biologists with another avenue to explore. (1) (2) (3) (4)
Final point:
Conclusion Paragraph B (1) Newcomers to the Arctic region required the use of advanced technology to make a living in the region. (2) But the native inhabitants of the tundra existed there for generations without the need for guns, steel knives, vehicles, or modern clothing. (3) Rather than struggling against the harsh environment around them, the original inhabitants found ways to live in harmony with it. (4) The Arctic offers an abundance of riches, and these people, through their resourcefulness, were able to harvest them. (1)___________________________________________________________________________________________ (2)
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(3) Final point: ____________________________________________________________________________________
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Conclusion Paragraph C (1) The question of plastics aside, there is some evidence that Weisman’s view may be true. (2) Since 1953, a 150-mile-long tract of land separating North and South Korea has been declared a no-man’s-land. (3) After only a little more than 50 years, there is almost no trace of the rice paddies that farmers had created and used for almost 5,000 years. (4) Even more spectacular are the flocks of red-crowned cranes that now inhabit the zone. (5) These birds are the second rarest of all birds, but they have flourished in this area, free from human interference of all kinds. (1)
(2) (3)
(4)
Final point:
Conclusion Paragraph D (1) Regardless of the causes of hallucinations, the effects they have on their subjects are very real. (2) Hallucinations can cause the aforementioned change in heart rate and body temperature, and they can also lead a person to act on the hallucination. (3) Psychologists have found that the memories created by a hallucination are processed by the same part of the brain that handles normal memories. (4) Thus, for the subject of a hallucination, the experience is as real as any other. (1) (2)
(3) Final point:
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Answers to Drill #4 Conclusion Paragraph A (1) (2) (3) (4)
This This This This
sentence provides information on the future of the topic. sentence provides more information related to sentence 1. sentence presents a quote to support sentence 2. sentence supports sentence 2.
Final point: The Avida program is providing biologists with new things to explore.
Conclusion Paragraph B (1) (2) (3)
This sentence introduces new information about the topic. This sentence contrasts the two subjects. This sentence contrasts the two subjects.
Final point: The inhabitants of the Arctic are able to use its many resources.
Conclusion Paragraph C (1) (2) (3) (4)
This sentence introduces evidence to support a view. This sentence provides details about the evidence. This sentence provides more details about the evidence. This sentence presents a new piece of evidence.
Final point: Without human interference, the land and animals can flourish.
Conclusion Paragraph D (1) (2) (3)
This sentence introduces another point about the main topic. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 1. This sentence provides a detail related to sentence 1.
Final point: Hallucinations are experienced as real.
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Following the Direction of the Passage We’ve been practicing all these steps to mastering active reading. Based on our analysis of pas sages so far, you should begin to see that each passage on the TOEFL is broken down into pieces, each with a main topic and supporting details. The key to active reading is to focus only on the larger topics and not be distracted by details that you can come back for if a question requires more detail. Our next step when analyzing structure is to pay attention to the direction of the passage. We’ve already seen paragraphs that either support or contradict an author’s position. We say a passage is going in the same direction if the information or paragraph supports the author. If a paragraph contradicts the author, we say that it is going in the opposite direction. Read the passage below, and circle the changes in direction.
Art has always occupied a special place in society. Many people consider artists to be the ultimate authorities on aesthetics, the nature and expression of beauty. For much of history, the practice of art was inscrutable, and artists were viewed as being somewhat strange and often mad. Even the word 5 most commonly associated with artists—inspiration —has its own magical overtones. Literally, “inspiration” is the breathing in of a spirit. Artists were thought of as people who were divinely inspired to create.
Of course, artists contributed to this mythology. Many artists ascribed 10 their talents to the presence of some supernatural agent or “muse.” Whole movements of art have centered on the supposedly otherworldly nature of art. For example, the Romantic poets believed that art was the search for the sublime, a term for them that meant an ultimate expression of beauty and truth. The search for this ideal led them to explore both natural and 15 supernatural themes in their works. Another persistent view of art regarded its divorce from rationality. Reason and logic were the province of scientists and philosophers, whereas creativity and intuition were the domain of the artists. The two separate spheres of the 20 mind were supposed to remain distinct. But in 1704, a major transgression occurred. Sir Isaac Newton, mathematician and physicist extraordinaire, published his study of light, Opticks. One of Newton’s major discoveries was on the nature of color. Using 25 a prism, Newton found that white light is actually composed of all the colors of the rainbow. He even provided a scientific explanation for the presence of rainbows. The artistic community was shocked. A scientist had taken a beautiful and magical experience and reduced it to the simple refraction of beams of light through the prism of a raindrop. A scientist had intruded into 30 their sacred territory.
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Newton demonstrated the wonder, creativity, and inspiration of an artist. He also gave the world another opportunity to experience the sublime. Newton’s 40 discovery paved the way for the development of the science of spectroscopy, a way of analyzing the chemical makeup of light. Now scientists can look at the stars and discern their composition. The sense of wonder this ability creates is not much different from the wonder the poet or artist feels when gazing at those same stars. Here’s the passage again, with the direction changes indicated. To make it easier to tell them apart, in this passage the same direction words are bolded, whereas the opposite direction words are underlined.
Art has always occupied a special place in society. Many people consider artists to be the ultimate authorities on aesthetics, the nature and expression of beauty. For much of history, the practice of art was inscrutable, and artists were viewed as being somewhat strange and often mad. Even 5 the word most commonly associated with artists—inspiration—has its own magical overtones. Literally, “inspiration” is the breathing in of a spirit. Artists were thought of as people who were divinely inspired to create. Of course, artists contributed to this mythology. Many artists ascribed 10 their talents to the presence of some supernatural agent or “muse.” Whole movements of art have centered on the supposedly otherworldly nature of art. For example, the Romantic poets believed that art was the search for the sublime, a term for them that meant an ultimate expression of beauty and truth. The search for this ideal led them to explore both natural and 15 supernatural themes in their works. Another persistent view of art regarded its divorce from rationality. Reason
and logic were the province of scientists and philosophers, whereas creativity and intuition were the domain of the artists. The two separate spheres of the 20 mind were supposed to remain distinct. But in 1704, a major transgression occurred. Sir Isaac Newton, mathematician and physicist extraordinaire, published his study of light, Opticks. One of Newton’s major discoveries was on the nature of color. Using 25 a prism, Newton found that white light is actually composed of all the colors of the rainbow. He even provided a scientific explanation for the presence of rainbows. The artistic community was shocked. A scientist had taken a beautiful and magical experience and reduced it to the simple refraction of beams of light through the prism of a raindrop. A scientist had intruded into 30 their sacred territory.
More than a hundred years later, John Keats, one of the most famous Romantic poets, accused Newton of diminishing beauty by “unweaving the rainbow.” His colleague, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, famously remarked that the 35 souls of five hundred Newtons would be needed to make one Shakespeare. And yet, from another perspective, Newton did not diminish the beauty of the rainbow; he enhanced it. In his quest to uncover the secrets of the rainbow, Newton demonstrated the wonder, creativity, and inspiration of an artist. He 2. Core Concept: Reading
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also gave the world another opportunity to experience the sublime. Newton’s
40 discovery paved the way for the development of the science of spectroscopy, a way of analyzing the chemical makeup of light. Now scientists can look at the stars and discern their composition. The sense of wonder this ability creates is not much different from the wonder the poet or artist feels when gazing at those same stars. When reading actively, use direction words to help you understand the organization of the information in the passage. Same direction markers mean that the information you are about to read supports the topic. Once you notice this, you can often skim through this informa tion. However, pay particular attention to changes of direction in a passage. These indicate an important shift.
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Direction Paragraph A Hallucinations can also be elicited in a number of other ways. Some of the most common experiences of hallu cinations happen when a person is in the throes of an epileptic fit or suffering from a high fever. Other methods of bringing about a hallucination include fasting or sleeplessness. Admiral Richard Byrd reported having hallu cinations after spending several months alone in the Antarctic. Hallucinations can be so powerful that members of many cultures seek them out, undertaking “vision quests” in the hopes of having a hallucinatory experience. Usually, the participants who go on these quests journey out into the elements without food or shelter.
Direction Paragraph B Another connection between the lower classes and the centralization of power is literacy, or more accurately, illiteracy. In aristocratic societies, widespread illiteracy did not result in the consolidation of power because the social structure was so segmented. But in an egalitarian society, the intermediate agencies vanish. Without these agencies acting on behalf of the less-informed citizenry, the responsibility falls to the government. Centraliza tion is therefore necessary to aid and provide for citizens who may otherwise have nowhere else to turn to for assistance.
Direction Paragraph C It is also suspected that the brain has its own chemicals designed to produce hallucinations. For example, some patients suffer from delirium tremens, a violent period of hallucinations accompanied by sweating, an increase in heart rate, and a rise in body temperature. Through experience treating episodes such as this, it is also known that certain chemicals can stop hallucinations. The drug Thorazine is often used to treat patients suffering from psychotic disorders that involve hallucinations.
Direction Paragraph D The career of Phillip Johnson, one of America’s foremost architects, was a study in contrasts. Initially, Johnson was a staunch proponent of the Modernist school of architecture, and he achieved his early fame by working in this style. After a time, however, Johnson apparently became bored with Modernism, even though he claimed that he loved the experience of the new above all things. Johnson decided to move from Modernism to Classi cism, a style that he explored thoroughly. He soon tired of the Classical school as well and moved back toward Modernism, although his later works still incorporate Classical elements.
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Answers to Drill #5 Direction Paragraph A Hallucinations can also same direction be elicited in a number of other ways. Some of the most common experiences of hallucinations happen when a person is in the throes of an epilep tic fit or suffering from a high fever. Other same direction methods of bringing about a hallu cination include fasting or sleeplessness. Admiral Richard Byrd reported having hallucinations after spending several months alone in the Antarctic. Hallucinations can be so powerful that members of many cultures seek them out, undertaking “vision quests” in the hopes of having a hallucinatory experience. Usually, the participants who go on these quests journey out into the elements without food or shelter.
Direction Paragraph B Another same direction connection between the lower classes and the centralization of power is literacy, or more accurately, illiteracy. In aristocratic societies, widespread illiteracy did not result in the consolidation of power because same direction the social structure was so seg mented. But opposite direction in an egalitarian society, the intermediate agencies vanish.
Without these agencies acting on behalf of the less-informed citizenry, the responsibility falls to the government. Centralization is therefore same direction) necessary to aid and provide for citizens who may otherwise have nowhere else to turn to for assistance.
Direction Paragraph C It is also same direction suspected that the brain has its own chemicals designed to produce hallucinations. For example same direction, some patients suffer from delirium tremens, a violent period of hallucinations accompanied by sweating, an increase in heart rate, and a rise in body temperature. Through experience treating episodes such as this, it is also same direc tion) known that certain chemicals can stop hallucinations. The drug Thorazine is often used to treat patients suffering from psychotic disorders that involve hallucinations.
Direction Paragraph D The career of Phillip Johnson, one of America’s foremost architects, was a study in contrasts. Initially same direction), Johnson was a staunch proponent of the Modernist school of archi tecture, and he achieved his early fame by working in this style. After a time however opposite direction, Johnson apparently became bored with Modernism, even though (opposite direc tion) he claimed that he loved the experience of the new above all things. Johnson decided to move from Modernism to Classicism, a style that he explored thoroughly. He soon tired of the Classical school as well and moved back toward Modernism although opposite direction his later works still incorporate Classical elements.
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Identify the structure of the passage because this knowledge will help you to find information quickly. Remember, TOEFL passages are made up of the following paragraph types: intro duction, body, and conclusion. Know what type of information is usually found in each type of paragraph. Use the first sentence of the paragraph as a guide to the information contained in the rest of the paragraph. Keep in mind that the remaining sentences provide details about the topic. Pay attention to direction markers. Same-direction markers indicate the author is continuing the discussion. Opposite-direction markers highlight contrasting ideas.
Step 3: Find the Purpose People write for many reasons. Some write to entertain, whereas others write to in form. If you know the purpose of a passage, then you know what the writer is trying to accomplish, and you can determine what is important and unimportant about the piece. The majority of passages on the TOEFL will do one of the following:
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Explain: The purpose of these passages is to present you with information on specific topics, and they contain mostly facts. Resolve: The purpose of these passages is to find solutions for some sort of dilemma. There is usually a debate or question that needs an answer. Convince: The purpose of these passages is to try to argue the validity of a certain viewpoint or idea. They give opinions and support them with evidence.
A written passage can be broken down into three basic parts: the introduction, the body, and the conclusion. The introduction seeks to give the reader background about the topic. The body of a passage provides details and explanations of what was covered in the introduction. The conclusion summarizes everything in the passage and usually leaves the reader with a few new thoughts on the topic. In the next section, we will practice active reading by looking at each part of a passage. To find the purpose of the passage, we’ll start with the introduction (the first paragraph).
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The Introduction Paragraph Let’s return to the sample passage at the beginning of this chapter. Here’s the first paragraph again.
Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. Can a computer program be considered alive? The members of the Digital Evolution Laboratory say yes. Computer scientists at the laboratory have created a program called Avida that has intrigued not only scientists and engineers but biologists and philosophers as well. The introduction paragraph is one of the most important paragraphs in the passage—it should give you a pretty good idea of what the author wants to accomplish. Look at it sentence by sen tence and identify clues that will help you find the purpose.
First, examine the opening sentence.
Scientists at Michigan State University are asking a most challenging question. Now, focus on the important stuff. You do this by asking yourself what and why. The first question to ask yourself is this: What are you reading about? This is the subject of the sentence. Write down the subject.
Now ask yourself this question: Why is the author writing about this? Write down what you think the author wants you to know about.
So far, you are reading about the scientists. And why are you reading about them? Because they are asking a question. If you are still unsure about this information after reading the first sen tence, then continue to the second sentence.
Can a computer program be considered alive? This clarifies the first sentence. Now you know that the passage is about scientists and a com puter program that may be considered alive. Do you think the author wrote this passage to inform, to resolve, or to argue? Write it down.
Now move on to the body paragraphs.
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The Body Paragraphs When looking for the purpose, don’t get bogged down in the details. For most passages, you can get everything you need by reading just the first sentence or two of each paragraph. Try that on the passage below. Here are the first four body paragraphs.
The Avida project began in the late 1990s, when Chris Adami, a physicist, sought to create computer programs that could evolve to do simple addition problems and reproduce inside a digital environment. Adami called these programs “digital organisms.” Whenever a digital organism replicates, it has 5 a chance to alter the program of the newly created offspring. In this way, the programs mutate and evolve. The goal of the Avida program is to create a model that could simulate the evolutionary process.
Initially, the digital creations were unable to process numbers in any way. But 10 Adami designed Avida to reward digital organisms that were able to work with the numbers in some way. The digital organisms that could process numbers were allowed to reproduce in higher numbers. In only six short months, the primitive program had evolved a number of mechanisms to perform addition. And, most surprisingly, not all of the digital creatures performed addition in 15 the same way.
The Avida program now resides at Michigan State University, where it has been growing and changing for years. The digital creatures number in the billions and have colonized more than two hundred computers. The 20 organisms compete with one another for resources, and the most successful ones are able to make more copies of themselves. Just like living creatures, the digital entities also undergo mutations. Mutations that are beneficial ensure greater reproduction; harmful mutations have the opposite effect. 25 As a model for studying evolution, the Avida project has been a great success. Adami’s digital organisms have suggested solutions to some of evolution’s biggest mysteries. For example, Avida has helped disprove the theory of “irreducible complexity.” Opponents of evolutionary theory have suggested that some structures, such as the eye, are too complex to have 30 been created in piecemeal stages. The evolution of Avida’s digital organisms proves that even extremely complex structures can be developed in stages over time. Now, read only the first sentence of each paragraph and ask what and why. Look only at the first sentence of the first body paragraph. Write down what the author’s subject is and what you think the author is telling you about it.
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What? Avida project What about it? To tell us how it began What? Digital creatures What about it? They are able to work with numbers. What? Avida program What about it? It’s been changing. What? Studying evolution What about it? Digital creatures can help scientists learn more about evolution.
Check back on the prediction you made earlier. Does this new information change it? Let’s look at the remaining body paragraphs.
The Avida program’s success has also raised some unintentional philosophical dilemmas. Does Avida just simulate evolution, or are digital organisms a new form of life? According to the director of the Avida project, the processes undergone by the digital creatures are the same as those 5 experienced by biological organisms. The only difference is that biological entities are based on strings of DNA, whereas the digital creations from Avida are based on strings of ones and zeros: In a living creature, different sequences of DNA instruct cells to create certain proteins. In one of the Avida creations, different sequences of computer code instruct the program to 10 perform certain functions. In both cases, the reproduction of the organisms is subject to forces such as competition and mutation.
Now, some biologists are maintaining that the programs in the Avida project are alive. The programs live, die, reproduce, compete, cooperate, and 15 evolve—activities that many biologists consider the hallmarks of life. One prominent biologist says, “They don’t have a metabolism—at least not yet. But otherwise, they’re alive.” 72 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
Of course, not everyone agrees that the program’s creations are alive. One 20 difficulty is that biologists do not even agree on the definition of life. The diversity of life on Earth constantly surprises scientists, and there are simply too many characteristics and qualities to provide one simple definition of life. Again, read only the first sentence of each paragraph and answer the questions.
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What? Are digital organisms a form of life? What about it? The digital creatures meet many of the criteria for life. What? Biologists What about it? They think the program is alive. What? Other people What about it? They don’t agree with the biologists. By now, we should have a pretty good idea of why the author has written this passage. Write down your reason here.
You’ll check your final prediction in a moment, but before you do so, you have one more para graph to review.
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The Conclusion Here’s the final paragraph, but for this paragraph, read both the first and the last sentence.
Despite these misgivings, the directors of the Avida program remain optimistic that their program, even if not considered alive, is leading to a greater understanding of life in all its forms. It may even facilitate future searches for life on other planets. According to one member of the Avida 5 team, “The problem that we have now is that we are focused on looking for DNA-based life. But there may be other kinds of life out there that we have never dreamed of.” The Avida program may provide biologists with another avenue to explore. Now answer the questions regarding the first and last sentences in this conclusion.
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Here are our answers. What? Directors of the program What about it? The program is helping people understand life. What? The Avida program What about it? The program gives biologists something to explore.
Putting It All Together Look back at what you’ve written. Based on only the six or seven sentences you’ve read, does it seem as if the author is trying to argue a point, resolve a dilemma, or simply provide you with information? The purpose of this passage is to provide us with infor mation—to explain something. It introduces the scientists and their Avida program. Next, it describes the beginning of the project and the current state of the Avida pro gram. After that, the author talks about how the director of the project and other peo ple view the project. Finally, the author indicates that scientists hope Avida will lead to new avenues of exploration. Thus, we could write down the following for the purpose: Purpose: To give us a brief overview of the Avida computer program and its implications
Remember, you won’t have time to read and comprehend every single word and sentence on the TOEFL. Therefore, with active reading, you’ll read fewer sentences, but your comprehen sion will increase because you’ll read only the important parts.
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Drill #6: Find the Purpose Apply the techniques you’ve just learned to each of the passages that follow. Check your answers at the end of the drill.
Passage A Alexis de Tocqueville’s Democracy in America studies the interplay between political power and society. The treatise was the first of its kind and was revolutionary for its use of empirical methods, which were more common in the “hard” sciences—chemistry, biology, and physics—than in the social sciences. Tocqueville distinguished himself from his colleagues 5 by viewing democracy not as a system based on freedom but as one based on power. In fact, Tocqueville argues that democracy is a form of government with more power than any other governmental system. Born in France in 1805, Tocqueville had a conflicted relationship with his reformist ideals. 10 His grandfather, a liberal aristocrat, lawyer, and politician, was a powerful force for social reforms prior to and during the French Revolution. Despite this, he was condemned as a counterrevolutionary and executed along with several members of his family. Tocqueville adopted his grandfather’s liberal ideals, but never lost a profound distrust for the potentially violent extremes to which the drive for democracy can push a nation. Tocqueville’s famous 15 study of the United States was the product of a nine-month trip to the young republic, beginning in 1831. Tocqueville had traveled to the United States to produce a study of America’s prisons. That initial study was published in 1833, a year after he returned to France. He then labored another nine years over Democracy in America. The book itself was written in two distinct volumes. The first volume focused specifically on Tocqueville’s 20 observations of American culture. He stressed the growth of social equality promoted by a stable social order, an issue that was close to his heart given France’s repeated violent efforts to establish a lasting democracy. The second volume, written four years after the first had been completed, was more abstract. Tocqueville turned his attention to the conflict of individuality and centrality in democratic cultures. 25 Tocqueville ascribes the power of a democracy to its tendency to centralize power. In a democracy, there are no guilds, estates, or sharply defined social classes. These institutions, in earlier times, represented a check on the powers of kings and tyrants. But in their absence, the government holds the ultimate authority. According to Tocqueville, it is the 30 lower classes that primarily drive the centralization of power in a democracy.
One reason the lower classes prefer a centralization of power relates to the historical role of the aristocratic class. In many class-based societies, the lower classes were subject to the rule of classes above them. Local affairs were overseen by aristocrats, who often acted like 35 petty tyrants. Only by surrendering authority to a central government could the lower classes achieve equality. Another connection between the lower classes and the centralization of power is literacy, or more accurately, illiteracy. In aristocratic societies, widespread illiteracy did not result in the 40 consolidation of power because the social structure was so segmented. But in an egalitarian society, the intermediate agencies vanish. Without these agencies acting on behalf of the less-informed citizenry, the responsibility falls to the government. Centralization is therefore 2. Core Concept: Reading | 75
necessary to aid and provide for citizens who may otherwise have nowhere else to turn to for assistance.
45 But perhaps the most profound effect the lower classes can have on the centralization of power in a democracy concerns the nature of the democratic leader. In an aristocracy or a monarchy, the ruler was always viewed as a person apart from the lower classes, a person whose birth made him (or her) superior to his subjects. In a democracy, the lower classes 50 can identify more closely with a leader whom they can view as one of them and thus are willing to rally around him (or her) more readily.
Of course, other factors increase the centralization of a democracy. Tocqueville points out that war is an important agent of centralization. To succeed in war, contends Tocqueville, 55 a nation must be able to focus its resources around a single point. Countries with a centralization of power are far more able to accomplish this task than are countries with fragmented power structures. But it is interesting how Tocqueville sees democracy as a vehicle not for freedom but for power, driven by the very people the democracy is designed to empower. Paragraph 1 What?
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Passage B Sometimes it appears that the human mark on this planet is indelible. In only a blink of geological time, 200 years or so, human construction and expansion has resulted in the destruction of more than one-fifth of the world’s forests, the recession of the polar icecaps, and the creation of a huge hole in the ozone layer. Additionally, industrial activity has 5 damaged rivers and oceans, as well as groundwater supplies. Environmental scientists and activists warn that if Earth’s future is not taken into account, humankind could very well destroy the planet. However, Earth is an amazingly resilient place. In its 4.5-billion-year lifespan, Earth has 10 endured bombardment by cosmic rays and meteors, violent earthquakes, volcanism, and frigid ice ages. In light of all these catastrophic events, many geologists and ecologists say that Earth could recover from any damage caused by human actions.
The author Alan Weisman has gone so far as to predict exactly what would happen on Earth 15 if all humans were to disappear. Without upkeep, the concrete jungles of the world’s greatest cities would be slowly reclaimed by the wilderness around them. Harsh temperatures would cause pavement to crack. Plants would return to areas covered by streets and sidewalks. Different fates would await humankind’s other creations. Litter and leaf matter would 20 accumulate, and it would take only one chance lightning strike to start a raging fire. Many structures would burn to the ground. The steel foundations supporting larger buildings and bridges would corrode and buckle, especially with the rise in groundwater that would accompany the clogging of sewer systems. 25 Without human interference, many of the threatened or endangered fauna would reclaim their ecological niches. Unfortunately, household pets would suffer. In addition, the rat, one of the greatest pests in large cities, would not have the waste of humankind to feed off of and would be hunted mercilessly by growing populations of hawks and falcons. And the cockroach, which to many a city dweller seems to symbolize invincibility, would disappear 30 from all but the warmest climes without artificial heat to sustain it.
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Mayan civilization in Northern Guatemala survived for 2,000 years but was swallowed up by 35 the jungle at its end. And after a few thousand years, if earthquakes and volcanic eruptions have not obliterated everything made by humans, the glaciers would come, sweeping down from the mountains, slowly and inexorably destroying everything in their path. Several times in its history, Earth has been swept clean by these giant sheets of ice. The legacy of humankind would be wiped from Earth. 40 Of course, not every man-made artifact would be reclaimed by nature. Plastic is a synthetic material that does not occur in nature. The strong bonds that hold plastic together are virtually impervious to natural erosion. Long after concrete and glass have turned back into sand and all processed metals have rusted away, plastics will still be cycling through the 45 Earth’s ecosystem, resilient to even the most destructive of natural forces. Some scientists believe that plastic molecules may eventually break down entirely, but there is no reliable data on just how long complete re-assimilation into the environment might take. Furthermore, it is impossible to predict just what sort of resources Mother Nature might develop in the distant future. There is always the possibility that, given enough time, some microbe or 50 bacteria may evolve the capability to digest plastic. If nature somehow evolved a way to process plastics, then even humanity’s most enduring artifacts might vanish in the space of a few hundred years. The question of plastics aside, there is some evidence that Weisman’s view may be true. 55 Since 1953, a 150-mile-long tract of land separating North and South Korea has been declared a no-man’s-land. After only a little more than 50 years, there is almost no trace of the rice paddies that farmers had created and used for almost 5,000 years. Even more spectacular are the flocks of red-crowned cranes that now inhabit the zone. These birds are the second rarest of all birds, but they have flourished in this area, free from human 60 interference of all kinds. Paragraph 1 What? What about it? Paragraph 2
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Passage C What causes hallucinations, vivid perceptions of unreal sights or sounds that appear quite real to the person experiencing them? These mystical experiences have long fascinated psychologists, neuroscientists, and anthropologists alike. In many cultures, shamans, prophets, and seers are marked by their susceptibility to hallucinations. Are hallucinations 5 caused by ghosts or spirits? Are they messages from another world? Although researchers don’t have all the answers, there is some intriguing information on the topic.
According to surveys, anywhere from 10 to 25 percent of the population has experienced at least one hallucination. Most often, the hallucination comes in the form of some visual 10 experience, but some people report hearing a sound or even voices. Even rarer, but not unheard of, is a hallucination of a particular smell or aroma. It is not known exactly what causes hallucinations, although one commonly accepted theory is that hallucinations occur 2. Core Concept: Reading | 79
when the external stimulus received by the senses no longer matches the level of activity occurring in the brain. Sensory deprivation is one of the surest ways to elicit hallucinations. 15
Hallucinations can also be elicited in a number of other ways. Some of the most common experiences of hallucinations happen when a person is in the throes of an epileptic fit or suffering from a high fever.
20 Other methods of bringing about a hallucination include fasting or sleeplessness. Admiral Richard Byrd reported having hallucinations after spending several months alone in the Antarctic. Hallucinations can be so powerful that members of many cultures seek them out, undertaking “vision quests” in the hopes of having a hallucinatory experience. Usually the participants who go on these quests journey out into the elements without food or shelter. 25 Not all hallucinations are the product of extreme physical conditions. Some very complex hallucinations can be triggered by nothing more unusual than everyday memories. People who have lost limbs often report that they continue to feel physical sensations as if the limb were still there. These “phantom limbs” are most likely the result of the brain interpreting 30 signals it receives from severed nerve endings in the context of its memories of the missing limb. An even stranger phenomenon involves hallucinations produced by the memories of recently departed loved ones. Called grief hallucinations, these vivid visions can be simple visual hallucinations or more complex fantasy interactions. In one reported case, a woman reported receiving multiple visits from her departed children. The woman claimed that she 35 and her “ghosts” regularly held long and involved conversations. Neuroscientists theorize that grief hallucinations may be the product of vivid memories that last in the mind long after a loved one has passed away. As bizarre as grief hallucinations may sound, the experience is quite common. Some researchers estimate that up to 80 percent of people will experience some form of grief hallucination in their lifetime. 40 Although neuroscientists may not be sure of the exact mechanism in the brain that causes hallucinations, they have isolated activity in the left temporal lobe of the brain that appears to play a part in the phenomenon. Certain drugs that affect this region of the brain are known for their ability to cause hallucinations. Drugs such as LSD, psilocybin, and mescaline gained 45 popularity with the 1960s Western youth culture for their ability to provide vivid hallucinatory experiences.
It is also suspected that the brain has its own chemicals designed to produce hallucinations. For example, some patients suffer from delirium tremens, a violent period of hallucinations 50 accompanied by sweating, an increase in heart rate, and a rise in body temperature. Through experience treating episodes such as this, it is also known that certain chemicals can stop hallucinations. The drug Thorazine is often used to treat patients suffering from psychotic disorders that involve hallucinations. 55 Regardless of the causes of hallucinations, the effects they have on their subjects are very real. Hallucinations can cause the aforementioned change in heart rate and body temperature, and they can also lead a person to act on the hallucination. Psychologists have found that the memories created by a hallucination are processed by the same part of the brain that handles normal memories. Thus, for the subject of a hallucination, the experience 60 is as real as any other.
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Passage D In the Arctic tundra, temperatures are below freezing for nine months out of the year. Soil in the Arctic, called permafrost, remains permanently frozen, making agriculture impossible. Travel over the land, whether covered in snow and ice in the winter or in boggy marshes during the summer, is extremely difficult. And perhaps most distressing of all, the Sun shines 5 for only six months out of the year. Yet this foreboding landscape has been inhabited for more than 12,000 years, longer than any other part of North America. Natives of this frozen land benefited from the ample food provided by the marine animals of the region. Indeed, one reason people settled in the Arctic was the almost continuous 10 availability of seals. And although the Arctic is above the tree line, meaning that no trees can grow there, the summer months brought a rich growth of lichen (a form of plant composed of fungi and algae) and other plants. Herds of caribou would migrate north to feed on these plants, providing more food to the Arctic peoples. 15 Inhabitants of the Arctic and sub-Arctic regions cleverly used the environment to their advantage. The constant wind drove the snow into compact masses that in some ways resembled stone. Since they had no wood or rock from which to build structures, inhabitants built their homes from the snow itself. Using knives and tools made from the antlers of caribou, a native of the Arctic could build a home that was both elegant and warm. 20 The harsh terrain demanded much of its inhabitants. Many residents of the tundra were nomadic, moving about in small bands, following the migrations of caribou, seals, and whales. Cooperation among groups was essential for survival in this land, and the cultures developed elaborate rituals of reciprocity. Groups of hunters often waited patiently at the 25 various breathing holes used by seals. If one hunter caught a seal, all would eat of it. Bravery was also rewarded, as evidenced by the Inupiaq people, who risked death by wandering far across sea ice to hunt seals.
To survive the brutal cold, Arctic dwellers devised special clothing. Most people wore parkas 30 made of double layers of caribou hide, with boots and pants also made of the same material. The natives fashioned the coats so that caribou hair on the inner layer faced outward, while that on the outer layer faced inward. This provided a high degree of insulation and allowed a hunter to remain outside all day. 35 Among the many other innovations of the people living in the Arctic were the seal-oil lamps, to compensate for the lack of natural sunlight, and snow goggles, to prevent snow blindness. These remarkable people also developed snowshoes, kayaks, and harpoons with detachable heads. Such resourcefulness was necessary to thrive in the unforgiving conditions of the tundra. 40 The Arctic inhabitants also developed a body of knowledge adapted to their unique living conditions. When American and European explorers first began long-term expeditions in the Arctic, they ignored the knowledge and survival skills of the Arctic’s native inhabitants at their own peril. For example, some animals suited to frozen climates process nutrients 45 from their food differently than animals in more hospitable environments. One of the notable differences is the concentration of vitamin A in the livers of Arctic mammals. In small doses, vitamin A is an essential nutrient. In large doses, it can be toxic. Vitamin A poisoning causes hair loss, brittle bones, skin lesions, nausea, and the build-up of potentially fatal pressure on the brain. Arctic hunters had long ago learned to avoid eating the liver of certain animals. 50 The newly arrived explorers rarely trusted native folklore and did not benefit from their 82 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
wisdom. Famed explorers Douglas Mawson and Xavier Mertz both suffered from vitamin A poisoning. Only Mawson survived the experience. Later arrivals to the Arctic region required the use of advanced technology to make a living in 55 the region. But the native inhabitants of the tundra existed there for generations without the need for guns, steel knives, vehicles, or modern clothing. Rather than struggling against the harsh environment around them, the original inhabitants found ways to live in harmony with it. The Arctic offers an abundance of riches, and these people, through their resourcefulness, were able to harvest them.
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Answers to Drill #6 Passage A The purpose of this passage is to describe one person’s view of a government system. Right away, we know we are reading about someone’s book. That’s the “what.” The “why” requires a little more reading, but once again, the body paragraphs help us figure out why the author wrote the passage. Each one mentions something about the centralization of power in a democracy. The passage ends by again mentioning centralization of power and that Tocqueville’s view of democracy is “interesting.”
Notice how in each case, we were able to take a 700-word passage and condense it into a brief description. The key point is to ignore the details! All we need to worry about is the big picture.
Passage B The purpose of passage B is to convince the reader of the outcome of a situation. The first paragraph states that humans have made a mark on the planet. But notice how the second paragraph starts.
However, Earth is an amazingly resilient place. The use of the word however indicates that the author is now going to discuss the opposite of the idea that humans have left their mark on the planet. Each of the next paragraphs then mentions what the theorist thinks will happen if people were to disappear. The final paragraph states there may be evidence for the view, and it ends by repeating the idea of a world free from human interference.
Passage C The purpose of this passage is to answer questions about the nature of hallucinations. The in troduction begins with a brief description of hallucinations. We also learn that hallucinations are related to supernatural experiences. The topic sentences of the next two body paragraphs tell us that many people experience hallucinations and mention how they are caused. Next, the passage mentions the causes of hallucinations and the area of the brain where hallucinations occur. The passage ends by stating that the subjects of hallucinations perceive them as real.
Passage D The purpose of this passage is to explain how people survived in the Arctic. The introduction only provides us with information on the Arctic. So if you weren’t sure exactly why the author is writing about this topic, that’s okay. Once we get to the next paragraph, we have a clearer idea of the author’s direction. The first body paragraph talks about the available food, and the next one mentions clever use of the environment. After that, there is another mention of the harsh terrain and a paragraph about the clothes that natives wore. The final body paragraph talks of the people’s other inventions, and the conclusion contrasts the resourcefulness of the native inhabitants of the land with modern inhabitants.
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Read the first two sentences of the first paragraph. Note what the topic is and what the author is writing about it. Read the first sentence of each body paragraph. Again, note what the topic is and why the author introduces it. Read the first and last sentence of the final paragraph. Pay particular attention to how the author ends the passage. Look back at your notes. What’s the common idea? Is the author presenting facts? Examining different views? Answering questions?
DEALING WITH DIFFICULT PASSAGES One of the greatest challenges of the TOEFL is dealing with passages that are written for native speakers. Because the TOEFL is designed to measure your ability to perform at an aca demic institution, you can expect to see passages that contain some difficult vocabulary and complicated structures. Don’t be intimidated by them! Keep in mind that even native English speakers often have difficulties with the types of passages found on standardized tests such as the TOEFL. If you find yourself struggling with a passage on the TOEFL, use the following helpful strategies.
Tip #1: Skim, Don't Read! Now that you’ve practiced finding the main idea and purpose of a passage, you have seen how little of the passage you actually have to read to understand what an author is writing about. If you find yourself getting lost as you are reading, move on to another part of the passage. Often, you can still figure out the main idea even if you’re not sure what one or two paragraphs are about. Focus on the big picture!
Tip #2: Trim the Fat! “Trim the fat” is an English idiom meaning “to get rid of extra parts you don’t want.” Think about a piece of meat you’re preparing to eat. You have to cut off most of the fat before you can get to the delicious part, right? It’s the same with understanding a sentence. A sentence is a simple thing. All it requires is a subject, usually a noun (for example, a person, place, or thing) and a verb (an action). Writers like to make sentences more complicated by adding all sorts of words to this basic formula. Though it does make sentences more beautiful, it may also make them much more difficult to understand. By cutting out all the extra parts—“trimming the fat”—you will be left with the “meat” of a sentence, making it much easier to understand.
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Let’s look at two sample sentences.
Joe ran.
Joe, a competitive runner for nearly 20 years, ran perhaps the best race of his entire life last week when he narrowly defeated his arch rival in a stunning showdown. These two sentences have the same subject (Joe) and the same verb (ran). The second sentence has a lot more information in it, but they are basically telling us the same thing. One way to increase your comprehension is to ignore all the extra words in a sentence—trim the fat. When faced with a difficult sentence, look for the following three basic parts: • • •
Subject. Find out who or what is performing the action. Verb. This is the action being performed. Object. This receives the action of the verb.
Here’s another example.
Scientists using NASA’s Spitzer Space Telescope have found a new class of stellar object, miniature stars too small to initiate fusion but large enough to have their own planets orbiting them. That’s quite a mouthful, but if we trim the fat, the sentence basically says:
Scientists...have found a new...object. That’s it! All of the other words provide some useful details, but the most important ones are the subject, verb, and object. Let’s try this a few more times.
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Drill #7: Trim the Fat For each of the following sentences, find the subject, verb, and object. Write down a simpler version of each sen tence. Check your answers at the end of the drill.
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Wild horses, which once roamed freely over the grasslands of Europe, Asia, and Africa, are found only in isolated patches of Southeastern Africa and Eastern Asia now.
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In a digital camera, light entering the camera is focused on a charged coupled device, or CCD, which converts light energy into a charged electron.
Simple version: 3.
A major stumbling block in the development of a viable hydrogen-fueled car is the expectation of many drivers that the vehicle will travel at least 300 miles before needing to refuel. Simple version:
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Prior to the development of germ theory, John Snow, a London physician, was able to halt an outbreak of cholera by restricting access to a water pump that he suspected was contributing to the spread of the disease.
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Cores of ice, drilled from glaciers in Greenland and the Antarctic, provide climatologists with valu able data on Earth’s prehistoric climate, including changes in the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Simple version:
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In 1899, Nikola Tesla, famed inventor of the alternating current electrical system, shocked an as sembled audience at a conference by operating a six-foot radio-controlled electric boat. Simple version:
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Fainting, which can be a sign of a serious ailment such as heart failure or a result of something as harmless as standing up too quickly, results from an insufficient supply of oxygen to the brain. Simple version:
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One of the main provisions of the Taft-Hartley Labor Act was the government’s ability to prevent a strike by any workers it considered essential to the nation’s health or safety.
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After spending nearly 26 years in jail, South African statesman Nelson Mandela was elected presi dent of South Africa in that country’s first multiracial election in 1994. Simple version:
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On Shrove Tuesday in 217 B.C.E., soldiers in Derby, England celebrated a victory over Roman soldiers by playing the first recorded soccer match, starting an annual event that lasted for almost 1,000 years.
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Answers to Drill #7 If your answers include a bit more information, that’s fine. The important thing with trimming the fat is to cut out as much as you can while still keeping the parts that are important to the meaning of the sentence. If you’re not sure if a phrase is important, leave it. 1.
Wild horses, which once roamed freely over the grasslands of Europe, Asia, and Africa, are found only in isolated patches of Southeastern Africa and Eastern Asia now. Simple version: Wild horses are found in patches of Africa and Asia.
Watch out for phrases that begin with the word which. These phrases are not essential to the sentence and can be ignored. 2.
In a digital camera, light entering the camera is focused on a charged coupled device, or CCD, which converts light energy into a charged electron. Simple version: Light is focused onto a device.
Fancy technical terms are always good candidates for trimming. Ignore them whenever possible. 3.
A major stumbling block in the development of a viable hydrogen-fueled car is the expectation of many drivers that the vehicle will travel at least 300 miles before needing to refuel.
Simple version: A block is the expectation that the vehicle will travel 300 miles.
This sentence contains numerous prepositional phrases. These are phrases that start with words like in, of, and at. When you see short phrases that start with these words, you can usually cut their phrases out of the sentence. 4.
Prior to the development of germ theory, John Snow, a London physician, was able to halt an outbreak of cholera by restricting access to a water pump that he suspected was contributing to the spread of the disease.
Simple version: John Snow was able to halt an outbreak. Often, a phrase in the beginning of a sentence that is set off with a comma (“Prior to the development of germ theory,”) can be trimmed away.
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Cores of ice, drilled from glaciers in Greenland and the Antarctic, provide clima tologists with valuable data on Earth’s prehistoric climate, including changes in the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere.
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In 1899, Nikola Tesla, famed inventor of the alternating current electrical system, shocked an assembled audience at a conference by operating a six-foot radiocontrolled electric boat. Simple version: Nikola Tesla shocked an audience by operating a boat.
When trimming the fat, a good strategy is to locate the subject first. Then find the verb. Once you do that, you can almost always cut out everything in between them. 7.
Fainting, which can be a sign of a serious ailment such as heart failure or a result of something as harmless as standing up too quickly, results from an insufficient supply of oxygen to the brain.
Simple version: Fainting results from an insufficient supply of oxygen. Once again, we have another phrase using the word which. Get rid of it!
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One of the main provisions of the Taft-Hartley Labor Act was the government’s ability to prevent a strike by any workers it considered essential to the nation’s health or safety.
Simple version: One provision was the government’s ability to prevent a strike. This sentence has a bunch of prepositional phrases: “of the main...,” “of the TaftHartley Labor Act...,” “by any workers...,” and “to the nation’s health or safety.” These can all be trimmed away.
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After spending nearly 26 years in jail, South African statesman Nelson Mandela was elected president of South Africa in that country’s first multiracial election in 1994.
Simple version: Nelson Mandela was elected president.
You can also eliminate any words that provide descriptions, such as “South Afri can statesman” and “first multiracial.” Although these words provide more details, they are not essential to the sentence. 10.
On Shrove Tuesday in 217 B.C.E., soldiers in Derby, England celebrated a victory over Roman soldiers by playing the first recorded soccer match, starting an annual event that lasted for almost 1,000 years.
Simple version: Soldiers celebrated by playing soccer.
There are many phrases that can be trimmed here. As you can see, most of the words in this sentence are only there to provide more details. Ignore them and focus on the important stuff.
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Tip #3: Dealing with Difficult Vocabulary Passages on the TOEFL may contain a number of difficult or unfamiliar words. It's easy to become frustrated with these words and lose track of what you’ve read. Fortunately, you often do not need to understand these words to determine the passage’s main idea. As we just saw, trimming the fat eliminates many of the words in a sentence because they are not crucial to understanding it. Let’s look at some examples of sentences with difficult vocabulary words.
Despite the preponderance of evidence debunking this outdated notion, many people continue to vigorously defend it. First, let’s trim the fat. Remember, we said that phrases at the beginning of a sentence that are set off with commas can be cut. That eliminates two of the difficult words, leaving us with the following sentence:
Many people continue to vigorously defend it. Now the sentence isn’t so complicated. Let’s just focus on the subject, verb, and object. Our sentence now reads as follows:
People continue to defend it. The other words are just adjectives—modifiers. They add detail, but they’re not essential to understanding the basic idea. In some cases, the difficult vocabulary word is the subject or the verb. In these cases, trimming the fat won’t be too helpful. Here’s an example.
The gentry of Victorian England viewed work as the domain of men and often limited women’s access to various jobs and professions. Let’s trim away some of the unnecessary phrases. Start by eliminating some of the prepositional phrases (those phrases beginning with words such as on, of, in, and so forth) and modifiers. That leaves us with the following sentence:
The gentry viewed work as the domain of men and often limited women’s access to jobs and professions. Our first verb is “viewed,” and our subject is a difficult vocabulary word. However, to under stand this sentence, we don’t need to know exactly what gentry means. You can tell by the meaning of the word “view”—to see or to look at—that “gentry” probably means some kind of people. So, let’s just replace “gentry” as shown below:
Some people viewed work as the domain of men. This is good enough for understanding the author’s general idea. This even works when the dif ficult vocabulary takes the form of a verb. Here’s an example.
In time, the Scythians were able to subjugate the Slavs, a people who throughout their history suffered under the dominion of many foreign rulers.
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Using the same “trimming” process, we can reduce this sentence to the following:
The Scythians were able to subjugate the Slavs. Then we can replace our difficult word with a simple phrase.
The Scythians were able to do something to the Slavs. Most likely, you’ll find some information in another part of the passage that will help you fig ure out what the difficult word means. But when you are looking for the main idea or purpose, don’t focus on what you don’t know—work with what you do know.
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Drill #8: Difficult Vocabulary The following sentences contain one or more difficult vocabulary words. Paraphrase each sentence, cutting out extra phrases. Then simplify the sentence, taking difficult words and replacing them with more familiar ones whenever possible.
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The authorship of The Art of War, an influential treatise on war, tactics, and espionage, is often attributed to Sun Tzu, but the tome was more likely penned by a number of writers.
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One of the more controversial incidents of government intervention into the private sector occurred when, during the early 1970s, the government imposed a cap on wages to combat inflation.
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Saccharin, a white crystalline compound that tastes more than 100 times sweeter than sugar, was discovered by accident in 1879.
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The writ of habeas corpus functions not to ascertain a detainee’s guilt or innocence, but to deter mine if the prisoner has been accorded due process. Simplify:
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Theodor Adorno, Walter Benjamin, and Herbert Marcuse, distinguished philosophers of the Frank furt School, were instrumental in formulating seminal critical theories on capitalism. Simplify:
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Based on his observations of the Andromeda galaxy and others like it, Walter Baade inferred the existence of ancient stars in the Milky Way that were formed from primordial hydrogen and helium.
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Most critics consider Dracula the archetypal horror novel, the one from which all other macabre stories originate. Simplify:
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Archaeologists usually employ two types of dating methods: one that attempts to determine the temporal order of a sequence of events and one that strives to date an object or event in terms of absolute calendar years. Simplify:
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A modem operates by converting discrete digital data into an analog signal that varies continuously in reference to a standard reference point. Simplify:
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Abstract expressionism emerged from the turbulent 1940s New York City art scene and quickly captivated critics with its stylistic diversity and nonrepresentational framework.
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Answers to Drill #8 Many of these examples are similar to the exercises in Drill #7.
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The authorship of The Art of War, an influential treatise on war, tactics, and espionage, is often attributed to Sun Tzu, but the tome was more likely penned by a number of writers.
Words such as “treatise,” “espionage,” and “tome” are not important to the general idea of this sentence. So you could simplify it, such as below. Simplify: The writing is often said to be that of Sun Tzu, but many writers prob ably wrote it.
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One of the more controversial incidents of government intervention into the pri vate sector occurred when, during the early 1970s, the government imposed a cap on wages to combat inflation.
In this sentence, it is necessary to realize that a controversial incident occurred. Thus, it is not important what words such as “intervention” and “sector” mean. If you are unsure of what “imposed” means, you can still get the basic idea. You can make this sentence very simple, which may help you to understand the overall meaning of its passage on the test. Simplify: Something happened when the government did something.
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Saccharin, a white crystalline compound that tastes more than 100 times sweeter than sugar, was discovered by accident in 1879.
In this example, one of our difficult words—saccharin—is the subject. But don’t dwell on it. The sentence’s message is that it was discovered by accident. Even if you have no idea what saccharin is, you can get the meaning of the whole sentence by substituting the word “something” for saccharin and then following the clues in the phrase—that it’s something like sugar. Simplify: Something like sugar was discovered by accident. 4.
The writ of habeas corpus functions not to ascertain a detainee’s guilt or inno cence, but to determine if the prisoner has been accorded due process.
Some passages may contain jargon, specialized terminology relating to a particular field of study. Ignore it. In this sentence, we can cut out “writ of habeas corpus” and “due process” and read the sentence as follows: Simplify: This thing functions to determine one thing.
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Theodor Adorno, Walter Benjamin, and Herbert Marcuse, distinguished philoso phers of the Frankfurt School, were instrumental in formulating seminal critical theories on capitalism.
This sentence has a lot of information packed into it. But we can avoid a lot of trouble by simply paraphrasing it as, “Some guys were doing something with theories.”
That will be enough to help you find the main idea of a passage. Simplify: Some guys were doing something with theories.
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Based on his observations of the Andromeda galaxy and others like it, Walter Baade inferred the existence of ancient stars in the Milky Way that were formed from primordial hydrogen and helium. “Inferred” and “primordial” do not affect the meaning of this sentence in a major way. Simplify: Walter Baade did something with the existence of stars.
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Most critics consider Dracula the archetypal horror novel, the one from which all other macabre stories originate. Many times, an author will provide clues as to the meaning of a word in the rest of the sentence. In this case, “archetypal” is defined as something from which other things originate. Even so, the meaning of the word is not important to the sen tence. “Macabre” is also not necessary.
Simplify: Critics consider Dracula the horror story from which all others originate.
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Archaeologists usually employ two types of dating methods: one that attempts to determine the temporal order of a sequence of events and one that strives to date an object or event in terms of absolute calendar years. Once again, the important stuff is surrounded by lots of extra information. Don’t worry about words such as “temporal” or “strive.”
Simplify: Archeologists use two types of methods.
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A modem operates by converting discrete digital data into an analog signal that varies continuously in reference to a standard reference point.
There are a few parts of this sentence that may be difficult to understand. Let’s simplify it. Simplify: A thing operates by changing one type of thing into another.
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Abstract expressionism emerged from the turbulent 1940s New York City art scene and quickly captivated critics with its stylistic diversity and nonrepresentartional framework.
Sometimes the entire sentence is filled with difficult vocabulary or jargon. If you encounter this type of sentence on the test, move on. No single sentence will be absolutely essential to understanding an author’s main idea, so look for your infor mation elsewhere. For this sentence, we need to know the following: Simplify: Something came from art and did something to critics.
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Final Exam Now it’s time to try out all the strategies you’ve learned. For the following passage, identify the main idea, struc ture, and author’s primary purpose in writing it. Briefly paraphrase each paragraph after you read it. Check your answers at the end of the exercise.
Since 1979, there has been a consensus that a doubling of carbon dioxide would raise global temperatures 1.5 to 4.5 degrees Celsius. Emissions of methane, nitrous gases, and other gases that absorb infrared radiation could speed this process further. Although attention has been given to strategies intended to limit global warming, most climatologists 5 feel an average temperature increase of one to two degrees Celsius is inevitable. A potentially hazardous consequence of even a slight increase in worldwide temperature was identified in the early 1970s. Scientists predicted a nearly 20-foot rise in global sea levels as a result of the Antarctic ice sheet melting. Although this prediction has since been 10 discredited by new research that shows such an occurrence would take place over a span of roughly 500 years, more recent studies have identified several sites, including smaller glaciers and large parts of the ice sheet in Greenland, that are more susceptible to rapid thawing. Based on data compiled from researchers, a seven-foot rise in sea level is possible by the year 2100. 15 Even a small rise in sea level, an average of two feet worldwide, would result in inundation, erosion, flooding, and saltwater intrusion. Coastal areas of the United States would lose a significant amount of land: Scientists predict a 50- to 100-foot loss in New Jersey, and up to 1,000 feet of shore areas flooded in Florida. According to some studies, the rise in water 20 levels could contribute to a loss of 50 to 90 percent of U.S. Wetlands.
Currently, two major policy approaches are being considered by coastal communities. The first, known as the no-protection approach, is based on a philosophy of nonintervention. Communities in coastal regions simply zone areas they anticipate losing land to erosion 25 within the next 30 to 60 years. No new buildings are permitted to be built in zones likely to be lost to flooding or erosion, and the current structures are left to their fates. Communities that take a no-protection approach acknowledge the coming danger, but they are often unwilling or unable to incur the financial losses associated with condemning and removing beachfront property. However, it should be noted that communities that elect a no protection 30 approach place the financial burden on the federal government, which compensates homeowners for homes lost to floods or storms. The second option, and certainly the more appealing one, involves raising the land level along the shore. This approach, although a far costlier one, offers several advantages. 35 First, it does not require the removal or demolition of buildings. Instead, the entire land mass is raised to protect it from the ocean. Second, the federal government does not have to intervene in the form of land buys or flood insurance. Despite these benefits, many communities choose not to raise the land due to the great cost and large amount of labor involved. To raise the land, sand must be pumped onto the beach (including the underwater 40 part of the beach) until the land level gradually rises. In addition, roads, houses, and other structures must be gradually raised again. The size of this undertaking prevents many communities from considering it.
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One of the major hurdles facing policy makers is the lack of urgency surrounding the onset 45 of global warming and rising sea levels. Many communities do not see the need to take action in response to effects that will not materialize for 100 years. However, considering the possible consequences of inaction, community leaders would be wise to begin serious discussions about their preferred strategy. Main idea:
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Answers to Final Exam Main idea: There are two main approaches to dealing with rising sea levels caused by global warming, and communities should give thought to which strategy they will use.
Paragraph 1: This paragraph indicates that a doubling of carbon dioxide leads to an increase in temperature. The “although” near the end of the passage should be noted. The sentence states that the warming seems inevitable.
Paragraph 2: The author gives information on the consequence: a rise in sea levels. Remember, you don’t need to pay too much attention to the details. Paragraph 3: This paragraph continues the discussion of results of the rise in sea level. Note the word “even.” This is a direction word. Paragraph 4: Now the author introduces two major approaches to solving the prob lem. The first possible solution is the no-protection approach. Did you find the direction word (“however”) at the end of the paragraph? Note that this approach places a financial burden on the government.
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Paragraph 5: This is the second option, and it is important to note that the author favors it (“more appealing”). The second option involves raising the land level. There are quite a few direction markers in this paragraph. Paragraph 6: The author ends with a “hurdle,” or obstacle, to solving the problem. The author thinks people should decide on the best solution soon and act on it. Purpose: The purpose of this passage is to provide a possible solution to a problem. The first paragraph introduces a situation that would cause Earth’s temperature to rise. The next two paragraphs reveal consequences of the warming. After that, the author discusses two possible solutions. Finally, the author states that leaders need to act soon.
The Last Word on Reading We’ve spent a lot of time working with passages, but the time has been well spent. The elements of reading we’ve reviewed in this chapter form the core of the skills required to do well on the TOEFL. Reading skills will also prove invaluable on two other sections of the TOEFL— speaking and writing. But first, let’s look at the core concepts you’ll need to master the next section—listening.
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Chapter 3 Core Concept: Listening
The Listening section can seem like one of the most intimidating sections on the TOEFL. The tasks in the Listening section require you to sort through lectures and conversations that are filled with distracting pauses and brief digressions—a very frustrating experience, but a very realistic scenario. Don’t be discouraged! The Listening section does follow some common pat terns. The key to getting a good score is to find these patterns; this chapter is going to teach you how to do exactly that.
LISTENING ON THE TOEFL In this section, you’ll be asked to listen to lectures and conversations. These listening tasks will have a definite structure, which is similar to the reading passages we just studied. There will be an introduction, supporting details or examples, and a conclusion. Let’s take a closer look at the structure of these lectures and conversations.
In a lecture, you can expect to hear the following: 1. 2.
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Opening: The teacher or professor will greet the class and announce the topic of the lecture. Purpose of the lecture: After stating the topic, the speaker will usually mention the focus of this particular lecture. Details and/or examples: The lecture will usually include several supporting details and/or examples. Conclusion: Conclusions in the lectures will not always be obvious. Some lectures or talks will end rather abruptly.
Additionally, an academic lecture or talk on the TOEFL is also likely to contain:
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Questions and/or comments: During the lecture, a student will often ask a ques tion or make a comment. The answers to these questions typically reinforce the speaker’s purpose.
In a conversation, you can expect to hear the following:
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Greeting: The two people talking will first exchange greetings. Statement of problem/issue: Conversations on the TOEFL typically revolve around a problem or an issue faced by one of the speakers. Response: After the problem or issue is raised, one of the speakers will respond, usually by making a suggestion to the other. Resolution: The conversation will end with some sort of closing or resolution to the problem.
Your challenge in the Listening section is similar to your challenge in the Reading section of the TOEFL. When listening to a conversation or lecture, you need to do the following: 1. 2. 3.
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Identify what the topic is. Figure out why the topic is being addressed. Note the supporting examples.
You’ve practiced identifying these parts in the previous chapters. Now the challenge is to apply what you’ve learned to the Listening section. There are some things, however, that make the listening tasks especially difficult.
CHALLENGES IN THE LISTENING SECTION In the Speaking and Writing sections (which you’ll learn about in the other Core Concepts chapters in this book), you will be required to listen to lectures and respond, just like you will in the Listening section. However, there is a difference between the tasks in other sections and those in the Listening section. The difference is that the tasks in the Listening section have intentional distractions. These dis tractions are pauses, interruptions, and interjections that disrupt the flow of the speaker’s talk. Interestingly, if you were to respond on the Speaking section in the same way the speakers talk on the Listening section, you would receive a fairly low score. For example, you may hear something like the three brief statements that follow, which include common distractions (try reading them aloud, or ask a friend to read them to you).
“Okay, so, uh...today we’re going to discuss the hunting practices of the umm...Trobriand Islanders. As you remember, we uh...last week, last week we talked about their social structure, now we’re moving into their day-to-day activities.”
“So let’s take our example of...what did we say? Right, our example is the proposed flat tax rate. Now this example isn’t a perfect one because, well... it’s only a hypothetical example, but it’ll do for this discussion.”
“Therefore—and this is an important point—the New Historicism Movement— didn’t urn, didn’t come out of nowhere. It was a product of its time. Okay?” Another characteristic that makes the Listening section different from the others is that you will have to follow conversations between multiple speakers. It can be difficult to identify the purpose or the supporting details of a conversation when the speaker changes.
TAKING NOTES You are allowed to take notes on the TOEFL. Of course, you must balance your note taking with your ability to comprehend the speech or lecture. A common mistake is to try to write too much; this often causes you to miss hearing some important information. Therefore, keep your note taking to a minimum and focus only on major points.
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Here’s a suggestion on how to organize your notes.
I. II. III.
IV.
What? Why? Reasons/examples 1. 2. 3. Conclusion
Whether or not you take notes, you will need to listen actively to do well on this part of the TOEFL.
ACTIVE LISTENING Active listening strategies are similar to the active reading strategies that you learned in Chapter 2. Of course, active listening is more difficult than active reading. However, by familiarizing yourself with the overall structure of the lectures and conversations, you’ll have an easier time understanding the main points.
When listening actively, pay attention to the following: 1.
2.
Purpose: The speaker will usually state the purpose of the lecture or conversation within the first few lines of the talk. Reasons/examples: The rest of the conversation or lecture will contain reasons or examples related to the purpose.
The next sections provide you with some practice in listening actively to lectures and conversa tions. Let’s start with lectures.
Listening to Lectures Track 1 on the CD that accompanies this book (and is also available in your Student Tools on line) is a lecture in a sociology class. As you listen to the lecture, try to identify the purpose and the reasons or examples. How is this lecture similar to the reading passages we’ve looked at? How is it different?
Play Track 1 on the accompanying CD (and in your Student Tools). A transcript of the lecture can be found on page 112.
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Purpose:
Examples:
Lecture Analysis Lectures typically follow the format of reading passages. The speaker will provide an introduc tion, supporting reasons and examples, and some sort of conclusion. Of course, as you’re lis tening to the lecture, you won’t be aware of when a paragraph ends, but you should still know what to expect based on the part of the lecture to which you’re listening.
Here’s the introduction of the lecture, broken down piece by piece.
(1) Okay, class, let’s get started. (2) Today, um, today we’re going to talk about the ah...structural functionalist theory in sociology. (3) You guys remember last week we discussed the interactionist perspective, right? (4) Now that theory, the interactionist theory, focused on how people get along with one another and, uh, the way that interactions um...create behaviors. Now, let’s analyze what’s going on in this first part of the introduction.
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Introduction. On the TOEFL, the lectures and conversations usually start with a greeting of some sort. This greeting is not important to the lecture. Topic. At some point early in the lecture, the professor will probably state what the class is going to talk about “today” or “in this class.” This is very important. Note the topic on your scrap paper. Background. Usually, the professor will refer to a prior lecture or topic. The professor will state that the class talked about this topic “last time,” “last class,” or something along those lines. This information may be important to the lecture or it may be a distraction; it depends on what the purpose of the lecture is. More background. This line provides more background information.
Here’s the second part of the introduction.
(1) This theory...the structural functionalist theory...I’m just going to call it the functionalist theory...is very different. (2) Now, we’ll talk about the historical context of this theory a little bit later, (3) but first I would like to just...um, go over the main tenets of the theory. Let’s analyze what’s going on in this second part of the introduction. (1)
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Transition: Speeches and lectures tend to have transitions. These transitions don’t add any new information. Digression: You will also notice a digression (an off-topic comment) or two during the lectures. Usually, the professor will refer to something that will be “discussed later” or “at another time.” Sometimes the professor will say, “I’m not going to get into this now.” This information is unimportant. 3. Core Concept: Listening | 107
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Purpose: Listen for the statement of purpose early in the lecture. If you figure out the purpose, write it down on your scrap paper.
This is the next part of the lecture.
(1) The basic view of functionalism is that our behaviors and actions can be best explained with...explained by the role...or function, if you will...that they perform for the society as a whole. (2) Now, that may be a little vague. (3) What do I mean by that? (4) Well, let’s look at some different behaviors and, uh, see how a functionalist would explain them. Let’s analyze what’s happening in this part of the lecture. Definition/explanation: The purpose of many of the lectures is to define or explain a term. (2, 3) Digression: Neither sentence 2 nor sentence 3 adds anything to the lecture. As you’re listening, try to focus on the topic and the examples given to support/explain it. (4) Transition: Here’s another transition. Note how the speaker is about to discuss ex amples. Typically, the lecturer will say something such as, “Now, let’s look at...” or “Now, I want to talk about....” These words let you know that examples are coming.
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Here’s the next section.
(1) A good example would be the, uh, drug use. (2) A functionalist wouldn’t really urn...judge a drug user as a deviant, a bad person. Instead, the functionalist would try to ah...figure out what role the drug user, the person, fills in society. (3) This seems a little strange at first but bear with me. (4) Think about what role a drug user fills in society. (5) You may automatically think that the role, urn, the role is always negative—crime, the cost of treatment, maybe more jails—but the functionalist tries to see the positives as well. And here’s the analysis of this section.
Example: Once the lecturer begins discussing examples, the structure is very simi lar to a reading passage. There will be an example followed by specific details. (2) Detail: Many of the questions will ask about details, so try to note some of them. (3, 4) Digression: These two sentences address the class. They emphasize the lecturer’s example, but they are relatively unimportant. (5) Detail: This is similar to sentence 2. Don’t try to write down or memorize every thing the lecturer says. You won’t have time. (1)
Here is the next part of the lecture.
(1) I bet you’re thinking that drug use doesn’t have too many positives, right? (2) Well, here’s what a functionalist would say. (3) While a drug user may be harming himself or herself, to be fair, he is also benefiting society. Having drug users means we need to have more police, which means obviously, more jobs.
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And also...if you think about it...more doctors, nurses, and social workers. Even drug counselors. All these people would be out of work, probably, if we didn’t have a drug problem. Let’s keep going...without drug users, we wouldn’t need the entire Drug Enforcement Agency, that bureau employs thousands of people, you know, and there’s also the border patrol, customs agents, and so on, and so on. And here’s what’s happening in this section.
(1)
(2) (3)
Transition: This sentence acts as a bridge from one paragraph (which describes negative factors) to the next sentences (which describe positive factors). Detail: This sentence brings the discussion back to the topic. Detail: The rest of the sentences give details about the topic. Again, you can’t pos sibly note every single part, so just try to note down one or two important points.
Finally, here is the last part of the lecture.
(1) So I think our example has given you a pretty good idea of how a functionalist views behaviors. (2) Again, the important thing is that they don’t really judge behaviors as good or bad...they only view them based on their role or function in society. And I think we can probably guess then, that to a functionalist, all behaviors... no matter how good or bad you may think they are...are necessary to society. (3) It’s really a, uh, pretty interesting viewpoint, if you think about it. Here’s what’s going on in this last part. (1) (2) (3)
Conclusion: Listen for the conclusion of the lecture. The speaker may say some thing such as, “So...” or “Thus...” or “And so....” Summary: Some lectures will end with a brief summary of the important points. Digression: This sentence contains no new or important information.
As this exercise shows, many of the parts of the lecture are similar to the reading passages. While you listen to the sample lectures, think about their purpose and structure, just as you would with a reading passage.
Summary: Lectures Try to identify the main parts of the lecture. Listen for the following: 1. 2.
3. 4.
Topic: This should appear early in the lecture, after the greeting. Purpose: Shortly after the topic is introduced, the purpose of the lecture will be stated. Examples: The majority of the lecture will be examples and details. Don’t try to write down or memorize every single one. Conclusion: Note any final points or summaries.
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Listening to Conversations Now let’s listen to a conversation similar to what you’ll hear on the TOEFL and see how this form works. Play Track 2 on the accompanying CD (or listen to it in your Student Tools online). A transcript can be found on page 113.
Conversation Analysis Conversations have the basic elements of reading passages. There should be some basic purpose to the conversation and reasons or examples related to that purpose. Here is a breakdown of the conversation you just heard.
Computer Lab Monitor: Hi. Do you need help with something? Student: Yes. I’m supposed to use this program for my statistics class, but I’m not sure how. Conversations also start with a greeting. Usually, the purpose will appear right at the begin ning. Note this purpose on your scrap paper. Let’s see what’s next.
CLM: Okay. Do you have the program with you? S: Sure, here it is.
CLM: Okay, let’s bring this over to a computer and see how it works. S: I think there’s something wrong with the program. When I tried to run it on my computer, nothing happened. These lines provide a detail about the problem the student is having. The questions will often ask about this type of detail, so be sure to note it.
CLM: Hmm. That’s interesting. Well, let’s see what happens here. It looks like it’s running fine on this computer.
S: Weird. My computer freezes every time I try to open the program. CLM: You mean the entire computer locks up? Have you had this type of problem before? S: Yeah, I guess. Sometimes when I try to use certain programs, they just don’t seem to work correctly. I don’t know why though.
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More specific details are provided about the problem. Note that in a conversation, you’ll have to pay attention to the roles of the speakers. In this case, one speaker is describing a problem, and the other is trying to help find a solution.
CLM: You can always use the computers here in the lab, you know. That way you won’t have to worry about it. S: I know. But I’d rather figure out what the problem is with my computer. The computer lab can be busy, and I need to work on this project often. It’s going to be onethird of our grade.
CLM: What class is this for? S: It’s for Statistics 101, with Professor Lee.
CLM: And this program is required for the course? S: Yep. Professor Lee even got the campus bookstore to stock a bunch of copies. That’s where I bought it.
CLM: Do you use your computer for a lot of things? Maybe you should clear up some memory before you run the program. S: Yeah, I’ve tried that actually. I do have a lot of programs on my computer, but I should have enough memory to run this program. Here, the lab monitor proposes a solution. This is an important part of the conversation, so make sure to note it. Also note the student’s response to the solution. Many of the other details, such as the course or the professor’s name, are not important. Focus only on details that relate back to the purpose. Let’s see how the conversation wraps up.
CLM: Well, I’m not quite sure what the problem could be. But you’re welcome to use the program here. S: Okay.
CLM: And you should definitely come back later and talk to my supervisor. She’s a computer whiz. I bet she can solve your problem. Conversations should have a fairly definite conclusion. You want to pay attention to how the conversation ends. Has the purpose been achieved? Note this on your scrap paper.
Summary: Conversations Conversations have a definite structure. When listening to a conversation, pay attention to the following:
1. 2.
3.
Purpose: What do the people in the conversation hope to achieve? Why are these people having this conversation? Details: What specific details or examples are offered? How do these examples relate back to the purpose? Conclusion: Is there any resolution? Do the people achieve their purpose?
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TRANSCRIPTS Track 1
Professor: Okay, class, let’s get started. Today, um, today we’re going to talk about the ah... structural functionalist theory in sociology. You guys remember last week we discussed the interactionist perspective, right? Now that theory, the interactionist theory, focused on how people get along with one another and, uh, the way that interactions um...create behaviors.
This theory...the structural functionalist theory...I’m just going to call it the functionalist theory...is very different. Now, we’ll talk about the historical context of this theory a little bit later, but first I would like to just...um, go over the main tenets of the theory. The basic view of functionalism is that our behaviors and actions can be best explained with...explained by the role...or function, if you will...that they perform for the society as a whole. Now, that may be a little vague. What do I mean by that? Well, let’s look at some different behaviors and uh, see how a functionalist would explain them. A good example would be the, uh, drug use. A functionalist wouldn’t really um... judge a drug user as a deviant, a bad person. Instead, the functionalist would try to uh...figure out what role the drug user, the person, fills in society. This seems a little strange at first but bear with me. Think about what role a drug user fills in society. You may automatically think that the role, um the role is always negative crime, the cost of treatment, maybe more jails—but the functionalist tries to see the positives as well.
I bet you’re thinking that drug use doesn’t have too many positives, right? Well, here’s what a functionalist would say. While a drug user may be harming himself... or herself, to be fair...he is also benefiting society. Having drug users means we need to have more police, which means obviously, more jobs.
And also...if you think about it...more doctors, nurses, and social workers. Even drug counselors. All these people would be out of work, probably, if we didn’t have a drug problem. Let’s keep going...without drug users, we wouldn’t need the entire Drug Enforcement Agency...that bureau employs thousands of people, you know...and there’s also the border patrol, customs agents, and so on, and so on. So I think our example has given you a pretty good idea of how a functionalist views behaviors. Again, the important thing is that they don’t really judge behaviors as good or bad...they only view them based on their role or function in society. And I think we can probably guess then, that to a functionalist, all behaviors...no matter how good or bad you may think they are...are necessary to society. It’s really a, uh, pretty interesting viewpoint, if you think about it.
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Track 2
Computer Lab Monitor: Hi. Do you need help with something?
Student: Yes. I’m supposed to use this program for my statistics class, but I’m not sure how. CLM: Okay. Do you have the program with you? S: Sure, here it is.
CLM: Okay, let’s bring this over to a computer and see how it works. S: I think there’s something wrong with the program. When I tried to run it on my computer, nothing happened. CLM: Hmm. That’s interesting. Well, let’s see what happens here. It looks like its running fine on this computer.
S: Weird. My computer freezes every time I try to open the program. CLM: You mean the entire computer locks up? Have you had this type of problem before?
S: Yeah, I guess. Sometimes when I try to use certain programs, they just don’t seem to work correctly. I don’t know why though. CLM: You can always use the computers here in the lab, you know. That way you won’t have to worry about it. S: I know. But I’d rather figure out what the problem is with my computer. The computer lab can be busy, and I need to work on this project often. It’s going to be one-third of our grade.
CLM: What class is this for? S: It’s for Statistics 101, with Professor Lee.
CLM: And this program is required for the course?
S: Yep. Professor Lee even got the campus bookstore to stock a bunch of copies. That’s where I bought it. CLM: Do you use your computer for a lot of things? Maybe you should clear up some memory before you run the program.
S: Yeah, I’ve tried that actually. I do have a lot of programs on my computer, but I should have enough memory to run this program.
CLM: Well, I’m not quite sure what the problem could be, but you’re welcome to use the program here. S: Okay.
CLM: And you should definitely come back later and talk to my supervisor. She’s a computer whiz. I bet she can solve your problem.
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Chapter 4 Core Concept: Speaking
As mentioned earlier, the TOEFL is an integrated exam, which means that each individual sec tion will measure several abilities. You’ll be learning Speaking skills that you will use in concert with the Reading, Listening, and Writing skills.
SCORING FOR THE SPEAKING SECTION Although the Speaking section is different from the Writing section in some ways, many of the guidelines for scoring it are similar. The Speaking section is graded on a scale of 0 to 4, while the scale for the Writing section is 0 to 5. In both Speaking and Writing, a score of 0 is reserved for a response that simply repeats the prompt, is in a foreign language, or is left blank, whereas a score of 4 on the Speaking section is judged to have accomplished the following:
• • •
The response fulfills the demands of the task. The response presents a clear progression of ideas. The response includes appropriate details.
These standards conform to our three basic Core Concept Reading skills: purpose, main idea, and structure. The main difference on the Speaking section is that the graders will also consider the quality of your speech. While they don’t expect perfect English, they expect a top response to
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use speech that is clear, fluid, and sustained, although it may contain minor lapses in pronunciation or intonation. Pace may vary at times, but overall intelligibility remains high. demonstrate good control of basic and complex grammatical structures and con tain generally effective word choice. Minor errors or imprecise use may be notice able, but they neither require listener effort nor do they obscure meaning.
The best way to make sure you meet these guidelines is to practice. We’ll give you suggestions and tips on how to achieve these goals, but there’s no substitute for continued repetition.
PART 1: STATING YOUR PURPOSE You remember that you needed to find a purpose in Reading passages and listen for a purpose in lectures on the Listening section. Well, the best way to succeed on the Speaking section of the TOEFL is to use those skills you’ve learned in the reading and listening exercises.
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Purpose and the Speaking Section The speaking tasks on the TOEFL usually require you to do one of the following:
Present your opinion on an issue. Explain facts presented in a lecture or reading. Summarize someone else’s position. Describe something of importance to you.
Your speech on the TOEFL will need an introduction, just as you’ve observed in reading passages. Let’s look at some ways to come up with an effective introduction.
Clearly Expressing Purpose on the Speaking Section Let’s look at a sample speaking task.
Describe a job that you’ve held, and explain why it was important. Now, here are the steps to follow.
Step 1: Decide What Your Purpose Is Make sure you take a moment to decide what your purpose is; otherwise, you will not be able to communicate it effectively. As you have seen in the previous bullet points, there are four different types of tasks that you may encounter on the Speak ing section of the TOEFL.
Step 2: State the Topic For speaking tasks that ask you to present your opinion or to describe something personal to you, use the following introductory phrases:
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I believe
I think
My view is
My opinion is
Ifeel
My preference is
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After each of these statements, you’ll need to mention the topic and whatever example you’re going to use. For the sample task about a job you’ve held, your first sentence could be as follows: I think that the most important job I’ve had was working at a library.
(introductory statement)
(topic)
(specific example)
State your topic in a clear, direct way. Also, note that on opinion questions, there is no right or wrong answer. Your purpose is to convince the listener that your position is correct, whatever your position may be. For speaking tasks that require you to summarize someone else’s opinion or to explain facts, the following introductions are appropriate:
This person believes that
This person holds that
This persons view is that
This persons point is that The lecture stated
The reading stated
The reading presented
This person argues that
The lecture offered ______________________)
After each statement, fill in what the topic or position is. For example, a TOEFL task may ask you to summarize facts from a reading. Your introduction may sound like the example below. The reading presented facts on...(topic)
Step 3: State
or Why
For speaking tasks that ask your opinion, you will have to state why you believe something. For speaking tasks that require you to summarize facts or someone else’s position, you’ll have to say what his or her reasons are. Use the following words to indicate what and why.
Because
The reason
Due to
For
Once you put it all together, your speech may look like the following: I think that the most important job I’ve had was working at a library. I believe this be cause I met many interesting people at this job.
Spoken responses on the TOEFL are only 45 or 60 seconds, so most of your time will be used presenting details or examples. Therefore, your introduction should be brief and to the point.
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Drill # 1: Practice Speaking an Introduction to a Speech Practice speaking introductions for each of the following tasks. If possible, record yourself so that you can review and evaluate your responses later.
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If you could have any job in the world, which job would you choose?
2.
Describe a person you admire, and explain why you admire him or her.
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A university has recently received a large sum of money. The university desperately needs to improve housing on campus, but students have also complained that the library needs to be fixed. Do you think that the money should be spent on housing or the library? Provide examples and reasons for your choice.
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Read the following short passage:
The cane toad, a poisonous species of toad, is causing problems in Australia. The cane toad was brought to Australia in 1935 to help control the population of greyback beetles. Unfortunately, the toads did nothing to reduce the beetle population. Now, however, cane toads number in the millions and are threatening native animal populations. The cane toad has two poisonous sacs located near its head and is so toxic that dingoes, snakes, and even crocodiles die within fifteen minutes of eating a cane toad. Now, conservationists are forced to transport some endangered species of animals to islands free from cane toads so that the endangered species can breed in safety. The passage above describes a problem. Explain what the problem is and what steps are being taken to fix it. 5.
Read the following conversation between two coworkers:
Employee A: I’m really swamped at work. I don’t know if I’m going to be able to finish all of my projects by the deadline. Employee B: I know. We really need to hire some more people around here. What are you going to do?
Employee A: I don’t know. My boss said I have to finish the budget analysis by Friday, but he just gave me a new project that he needs completed right away. Employee B: Well, if I were you, I’d tell your boss that there’s no way you can finish both in time. I’d ask for more time. Employee A: Yeah, I guess I could do that.
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Sample Responses to Drill #1 Read the following responses and practice speaking them aloud: 1.
If I could have any job, I think that I would like to be an ambassador. I think this be cause I enjoy visiting other countries and meeting and interacting with other people.
2. One person whom I admire very much is Mohandas Gandhi. I admire him for many reasons, especially his strong sense of justice and rightness.
3. In my opinion, the university should spend its money on the library. I think this be cause a university should be an institution of learning and a good library is essential to that.
4. The passage states that the problem is the poisonous cane toad. The toad is threatening many of the species in Australia. 5. The problem the employee has is that he or she cannot finish his or her work on time. In my opinion, the better solution is to ask the boss to assign the project to someone else. I think this because it is better to get the work done on time than to extend the deadline.
Summary: Stating Your Purpose Your introduction is the first chance you have to make a good impression on your lis tener—so make it solid. Since you won’t have much time to give your spoken response, make your introduction quick and concise.
The three points you need to convey in your introduction are as follows: 1. 2.
3.
Purpose: Your task. Thesis: Your topic. The thesis is basically a statement of your position or belief on a topic or your main idea. It will be slightly different based on what you are trying to accomplish in your spoken response. Why: After introducing the topic, state why you are discussing it. The answer to this why question should relate back to the purpose.
In your introduction, don’t go into specific details about your examples. You’ll get to those later in the body of your speech. Also, avoid repeating the prompt word-for-word.
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PART 2: ORGANIZING YOUR IDEAS Before you begin speaking, take a few seconds to think about how you will organize your response. Make sure to follow the same guidelines that you saw in the Reading passages. You should include the following in every spoken response:
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Introduction: State your purpose, which is what we practiced earlier. Body: Take the majority of your time to give examples and details which refer back to your purpose. (We will focus next on the body of your response.) Conclusion: Finally, summarize your thoughts. We will take a look at conclusions toward the end of this chapter.
______ ______
Developing Body Paragraphs When Speaking Everything you learned about body paragraphs in the Reading section applies to speaking. Body paragraphs are the place where the author, or speaker, develops his or her ideas. While the introduction states the purpose, the body paragraphs provide specific details to support that purpose.
Note that your responses on the Speaking section will be only 45 or 60 seconds, which means you will have a limited amount of time to develop your body paragraphs.
Articulating Your Body Paragraph As we’ve seen from the reading exercises, the body paragraphs are where an author attempts to accomplish his or her purpose by presenting facts, arguments, and evidence.
A good body paragraph contains the following elements: 1. 2.
A topic sentence that introduces the main point of the paragraph Examples, facts, and evidence that help the author achieve his or her purpose
Step 1: Provide a Topic Sentence A good topic sentence does two things: it provides a transition between ideas and clearly states the main idea of the paragraph.
Let’s look back at the introduction we established before. “I think the most important job I’ve had was working at a library. I believe this because I met many interesting people at this job.”
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Now, each spoken body paragraph should begin with a topic sentence that supports your intro duction.
Therefore, a good topic sentence for the first body paragraph might be this one: “Working at the library was my most important job because I met Professor Martin, who has become my advisor this semester.”
The topic sentence is introducing your idea (the job was important because you met Professor Martin), and then the rest of your body paragraph will give details that support your example. Perhaps Professor Martin convinced you to change your major, suggested you submit an article to the schools literary magazine, or hinted at a promotion on the library staff. These are all details that support your topic sentence. Another good topic sentence is one that indicates a progression of ideas by using the phrase “One reason...”
In this instance, a good topic sentence might be as follows: “One reason that my job at the library was important is that I met Professor Martin, who has become my advisor this semester.”
Other phrases that accomplish this progression are as follows:
Another reason
Additionally
First
Second
Third
Furthermore
Moreover
These are transition statements that help you move from one idea to the next. Each succeeding topic sentence should have a transition statement that connects back to the thesis. The topic sentence for our next body paragraph might use the following transition: “Another reason that my job at the library was important is that I met Dr. Lucas, who asked me to edit the book he was writing.”
And then the rest of your body paragraph will provide details that support this example. By writing topic sentences that connect ideas in this way, your response will sound well struc tured and will be easy to follow.
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Step 2: Make Your Case with Examples To support your thesis statement, you should provide details or information, usually in the form of facts or reasons.
Your examples should be • •
Specific: They should not be vague or too general. Explained: Make sure you give details to support your examples.
Use the following template to articulate your examples:
Statement 1: State your example and tie it back to your thesis. Statement 2: Give one reason why your example is relevant to your thesis. Statement 3: Add detail to reason #1. Statement 4: Give another reason why your example is relevant to your thesis. Statement 5: Add detail to reason #2. Statement 6 (optional): Provide a summary of your reasons and relate them to your thesis.
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Drill #2: Practice Speaking with Examples For each task, speak aloud using two examples to support your point. Use the template above as a guide while you articu late your thoughts.
Record your answers so you can review and evaluate your responses based on our sample answers. 1.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for students to gain real-world experience than to spend their time in a classroom. 2. 3. 4.
Describe an influential person, and explain why you feel this person is a positive role model. Some schools require first-year students to take the same courses, whereas other schools allow students to select the classes they want. Which policy do you think is better for first-year students and why? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important education occurs not during adulthood but during childhood. 5.
Read the following passage about insect behavior:
Many insects are social creatures, living in large groups containing literally millions of individuals. Social insects, which include ants, termites, bees, and wasps, are the prime example of unselfish behavior in animals. In any insect social system, each insect performs a specialized duty that is necessary for the survival of the hive as a whole. For example, among ants, there are certain types of ants that are soldiers—large, fearsome creatures with terrible jaws. Other ants, called drones, do not reproduce, instead devoting their time to taking care of the hive and the young of the queen. Each ant selflessly performs its role, not for its own benefit, but for the benefit of all the other ants.
Now entomologists have found an interesting case of this sort of cooperation in a nonsocial insect, the cricket. Crickets are a prime example of a “selfish” insect, leading a very isolated existence. They typically interact with other crickets only when mating or fighting over territory. But scientists have observed a species of cricket that undergoes periodic mass migrations. Every so often, the crickets set off to find more favorable living areas. When these migrations occur, the crickets band together into a huge caravan. Surely at a time like this, the crickets realize there is safety in numbers and put aside their selfish instinct for the good of all members. Now read the following lecture on the same subject:
Professor: One of the biggest misconceptions in biology is the belief that organisms act out of concern for the “greater good” of the species. It is somewhat amazing how people assume that an ant or a mouse has enough sense to figure out how its actions impact all the members of its species! Still, it is understandable why many people might believe this erroneous view. Many actions can be misinterpreted as being for the “good of the species.” A classic example found in many early biology textbooks discussed the behavior of the stag. During mating season, a stag typically battles with other males, and the winner of these contests gains
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access to the females, while the loser walks away. Some people believed that the loser realizes that his offspring will be weaker, so the defeated stag “allows” the winner to mate to ensure the survival of the stag species.
This couldn’t be further from the truth. The defeated stag wants to mate just as much as the winner does; the only problem is that he doesn’t want to risk his life for the chance to mate. The stag is better off looking for other females to mate with. Thus, both stags—the winner and the loser—are acting not for the good of the species, but for their own selfish reasons. Another good example of this is a recent study on the behavior of crickets. Scientists noted that crickets occasionally band together, traveling in huge swarms from location to location. The easy assumption was that the crickets believed in strength in numbers. But a researcher showed this is not the case. He attached tags to a sampling of crickets. Some of the tagged crickets were allowed to travel with the group. But some of them were separated from the rest. All the crickets that were separated were eaten by birds or rodents, whereas the tagged crickets in the group survived. Apparently, there is safety in numbers, but the crickets aren’t looking to help their fellow travelers. They want to avoid being eaten, and what better way is there than to disappear into a group of thousands of other tasty morsels? Summarize the points in the professor’s lecture, and explain how the points cast doubt on the reading.
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Sample Responses to Drill #2 See how your responses compared to the suggested answers below. When you review the an swers, read them aloud for more practice speaking. 1.
Real-world experience is usually better than time spent in a classroom. I believe this because experience is the best teacher.
One example of a way in which real-world experience is valuable is that students studying auto mechanics cannot just read about an engine. Instead, they have to practice taking that engine apart piece by piece and then put it back together. Only then will students understand the concept.
A second example of a way in which real-world experience is valuable can be applied to learning a foreign language. If students in a classroom never have a chance to practice the language, they may forget the skills they were taught. In this instance, it would also be helpful to practice their skills in a real-world environment.
2. I believe that Mikhail Gorbachev is both an influential person and a positive role model. One reason Mikhail Gorbachev is a role model is because he is willing to work for change. Many people are content to have things stay the same, but he worked hard to change the Communist system. Even though his reforms were not as helpful as he would have liked, his willingness for change makes him a good role model. Another reason that Mikhail Gorbachev is a positive role model is because of his devotion to ideals that are larger than himself. For instance, he reached out to Ronald Reagan when he wanted to end the Cold War, instead of just following in the footsteps of Soviet leaders who came before him. Ensuring the future success of the Soviet Union was more important than simply concentrating on his peroonai power.
3. I would support mandatory classes for freshman instead of allowing the students to pick whatever classes they want. First, this will ensure a certain quality of education. With standardized classes, universities can make sure that all of their students are familiar with important intellectual works. That way, all students will have a basic educational level.
Moreover, required classes will serve to increase the camaraderie of students. Uni versities are good places for students to meet each other and make connections that will help them later in life. Freshmen can sometimes have difficulty fitting in, so required classes will help them make friends.
4. I agree that the most important education happens when one is a child. One reason why I agree with this statement is that younger children are very open to ideas and perceptions. A young child is very impressionable, so the lessons learned at this age can have a great impact. Furthermore, childhood is a time when education focuses on the essentials of our society. Although children may not be learning advanced skills, they are learning basic life lessons. At this age, children learn important lessons, such as the differ ence between right and wrong and how to treat other people.
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5. The pointe made in the professors lecture cast doubt on the reading. The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the behavior of stags. For example, some people interpret the stag’s action as being for the “good of the species,” but the professor shows that the stag is actually acting in self-interest. Likewise, the professor talks about how crickets act only in self-interest, which does not support the example in the reading.
The second point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the intelligence of animals and insects. He states that it would require a lot of intelligence for an animal or insect to evaluate how its behavior will affect an entire species. Therefore, his argument is that the cricket is acting only out of self-preservation, which again casts doubt on the reading.
Summary: Choosing Examples and Developing Body Paragraphs When Speaking Good examples are important for your responses. Make sure your examples and your structure are organized. Remember to do the following: • • • •
State the example. Explain how the example supports your position. Transitions: Provide a topic sentence or transition statement to move from one example to the next. Details: Support each example with details.
Focus on stating just a few examples and explaining their significance. Always provide specific details for each example, and articulate the ways in which your examples relate to your purpose.
PUTTING IT ALL TOGETHER Now take what you learned about organizing your ideas, stating your purpose, providing topic sentences, and making your case with examples to articulate both an introduction and a full body paragraph for each of the following tasks.
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Drill #3: Practice Speaking an Introduction and Body Paragraph Speak a body paragraph for each of the following tasks. It may help to repeat your introduction statement first. If pos sible, record your responses and evaluate them when you are finished.
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If you could have any job in the world, which job would you choose? Describe a person you admire, and explain why you admire him or her. A university has recently received a large sum of money. The university desperately needs to improve housing on campus, but students have complained that the library needs to be fixed. Do you think that the money should be spent on housing or the library? Provide reasons and examples for your choice. Read the following short passage:
The cane toad, a poisonous species of toad, is causing problems in Australia. The cane toad was brought to Australia in 1935 to help control the population of greyback beetles. Unfortunately, the toads did nothing to reduce the beetle population. Now, however, cane toads number in the millions and are threatening native animal populations.
The cane toad has two poisonous sacs located near its head and is so toxic that dingoes, snakes, and even crocodiles die within fifteen minutes of eating a cane toad. Now, conservationists are forced to transport some endangered species of animals to islands free from cane toads so that the endangered species can breed in safety. The passage above describes a problem. Explain what the problem is and what steps are being taken to fix it.
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Read the following conversation between two coworkers:
Employee A: I’m really swamped at work. I don’t know if I’m going to be able to finish all of my projects by the deadline. Employee B: I know. We really need to hire some more people around here. What are you going to do? Employee A: I don’t know. My boss said I have to finish the budget analysis by Friday, but he just gave me a new project that he needs completed right away. Employee B: Well, if I were you, I’d tell your boss that there’s no way you can finish both in time. I’d ask for more time. Employee A: Yeah, I guess I could do that. Employee B: Or maybe you can ask your boss to assign the project to someone else. That way you can focus on the budget analysis. Employee B offers two possible solutions to Employee A’s problems. Describe the problem, and state which of the two solutions you prefer. Explain why.
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Sample Responses to Drill #3 Read the following responses aloud, and practice speaking them until you’re comfortable. Pay attention to the use of transitions and direction markers. 1.
(Introduction) If I could have any job, I think that I would like to be an ambassador. I think this because I enjoy visiting other countries and meeting and interacting with other people. (Body) The primary role of an ambassador is to represent your nation’s country in one other country. I would enjoy doing this very much because I love learning about new cultures. I have traveled to many countries already, and I would like the oppor tunity to visit more.
(Body) Another reason that I would like to be an ambassador is to have the oppor tunity to meet and interact with new people. An ambassador’s job is to represent his or her country to other people, and I think this would be an exciting role. 2. (Introduction) One person whom I admire very much is Mohandas Gandhi. I admire him for many reasons, especially his strong sense of justice and rightness.
(Body) The main reason I admire Gandhi is his commitment to his ideas. Gandhi was convinced that his country should be free and devoted his life to that goal. He went on a hunger strike and led many protests. (Body) A second reason I admire Gandhi is for his use of nonviolent protest. Even though Gandhi was devoted to his ideas, he realized that there was a right way of achieving them. He rejected violence as a method, and I admire this very much.
3. (Introduction) In my opinion, the university should spend its money on the library. I think this because a university should be an institution of learning, and a good library is important for that. (Body) The first reason I would spend money on the library is to benefit the students. It would be a disservice to students if they couldn’t perform the type of research required for their classes. To do well in school, students need a good library. (Body) Furthermore, I think it is a good idea to spend money on a library to help the reputation of the school. If a university has a top library, it can attract more students. This will bring more money to the university.
4. (Introduction) The passage states that the problem is the poisonous cane toad. The toad is threatening many of the species in Australia. (Body) According to the passage, the problem is that the cane toad is very poison ous. The cane toad can kill animals that eat it. This is making it very dangerous for many species in Australia. (Body) To fix the problem, conservationists have decided to move some animals to other islands. They think this will allow the animals to breed in safety.
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5. (Introduction) The problem the employee has is that he or she cannot finish his or her work on time. In my opinion, the better solution is to ask the boss to assign the project to someone else. I think this because it is better to get the work done on time than to extend the deadline. (Body) I believe the employee should ask the boss to assign the project to someone else for two reasons. First, it is more important that the job get done on time and correctly. If the employee doesn’t have enough time, the job may be finished late or the work may not be of good quality. (Body) Second, I believe that an employee who can admit when he or she has too much work to do is a very responsible employee. It is better to be honest with your boss about whatyou can do instead of making him or her think you can do everything.
WRAPPING THINGS UP: THE CONCLUSION The conclusion is essential to a well-organized speech or essay. Without a conclusion, it will seem to end abruptly, or worse yet, trail off and your score will be lower. Fortunately, the con clusion is probably the easiest part to create. A conclusion has to do one thing and one thing only. •
Restate your thesis.
The conclusion is your last chance to make your point to the reader. You want to remind the reader that you accomplished your purpose. As with body paragraphs, conclusions still need to have good transitions. Here are some good words and phrases to use for your final paragraph.
And so
In conclusion
Finally
Thus
Ultimately
As I've stated
Clearly
To sum up
As this essay has demonstrated
Here’s a sample conclusion from our practice prompt.
In conclusion, if I could have any job, I would choose to be an ambassador. As I mentioned before, I feel this would be a perfect fit for my skill set because I love traveling to other countries and meeting new people.
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Drill #4: Develop Conclusions for Speaking Practice conclusions for your speeches, on the same topics we’ve practiced before. 1. 2. 3.
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If you could have any job in the world, which job would you choose? Describe a person you admire, and explain why you admire him or her. A university has recently received a large sum of money. The university desperately needs to improve housing on campus, but students have complained that the library needs to be fixed as well. Do you think that the money should be spent on housing or the library? Provide reasons and examples for your choice. Read the following short passage:
The cane toad, a poisonous species of toad, is causing problems in Australia. The cane toad was brought to Australia in 1935 to help control the population of greyback beetles. Unfortunately, the toads did nothing to reduce the beetle population. Now, however, cane toads number in the millions and are threatening native animal populations.
The cane toad has two poisonous sacs located near its head and is so toxic that dingoes, snakes, and even crocodiles die within fifteen minutes of eating a cane toad. Now, conservationists are forced to transport some endangered species of animals to islands free from cane toads so that the endangered species can breed in safety. The passage above describes a problem. Explain what the problem is and what steps are being taken to fix it.
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Read the following conversation between two coworkers:
Employee A: I’m really swamped at work. I don’t know if I’m going to be able to finish all of my projects by the deadline. Employee B: I know. We really need to hire some more people around here. What are you going to do? Employee A: I don’t know. My boss said I have to finish the budget analysis by Friday, but he just gave me a new project that he needs completed right away. Employee B: Well, if I were you, I’d tell your boss that there’s no way you can finish both in time. I’d ask for more time. Employee A: Yeah, I guess I could do that. Employee B: Or maybe you can ask your boss to assign the project to someone else. That way you can focus on the budget analysis. Employee B offers two possible solutions to Employee A’s problems. Describe the problem, and state which of the two solutions you prefer. Explain why.
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Sample Responses to Drill #4 Read the following responses aloud, and practice speaking them until you’re comfortable. 1.
For all the reasons I have stated, I feel that being an ambassador would be my dream job. I think that it is the perfect match for my interests and skills.
2. As I have stated, there are many reasons that I admire Gandhi. His values and ideas are things that I find very important in a person.
3. So, to conclude, it is my opinion that the money would be best spent on a library. Spending money on a library is the right thing to do for an academic institution.
4. In conclusion, the conservationists think the best solution to the problem of the cane toad is to move the animals to a different place. 5. Ultimately, I believe the best solution is to ask the boss to reassign the project. This is best for the company and is what a responsible employee would do.
Summary: Concluding Your Response Because you have only 45 or 60 seconds for a spoken response, you won’t have a lot of time to wrap up your thoughts. But you always need a concluding sentence so make it short and simply restate your thesis. One important point to remember is this: don’t introduce any new ideas or examples in the conclusion. It will leave your listener or reader feeling as though you should have explained those new examples in more detail.
Now you have all the tools you need to give great spoken responses on the TOEFL!
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Chapter 5 Core Concept: Writing
In the “real” world, speaking and writing are two very different skills. But on the TOEFL, these basic skills are graded on very similar rubrics. Many of the constructions that you used in your speaking can easily be transferred to your writing. Similarly, many of the forms you use when writing can also be used when speaking.
SCORING FOR THE WRITING SECTION By examining the scoring guidelines for the Writing section, we can gain a better understand ing of what our goals should be for this section. The writing responses will be graded on a scale of 0 to 5. On the TOEFL, according to ETS, an essay receiving a score of 5 has the following characteristics:
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It effectively addresses the topic and the task. It is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details. It displays unity, progression, and coherence. It displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic vari ety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, although it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors. (In essence, it shows that you understand how to use the language, how to use a variety of sentence structures, how to use idioms or com mon phrases within the language, but it may have minor errors).
At the other end of the scoring scale, an essay receiving a score of I suffers from the following difficulties: • • •
serious disorganization or underdevelopment; little or no detail, irrelevant specifics, or questionable responsiveness to the task; serious or frequent errors in sentence structure or usage.
An essay receiving a score of 0 is blank, written in a foreign language, identical to the prompt, or consists of random keystrokes.
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What the Writing Scoring Guidelines Mean Each of the first three scoring guidelines relates to one of the skills we’ve already studied in the Reading section. Here’s how.
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The essay effectively addresses the topic and the task. This guideline cor responds to the work we’ve done on finding the purpose. An effective written response accomplishes a specific purpose. On the TOEFL, this means re sponding to one of the prompts. A weak essay has no clear purpose or doesn’t achieve its purpose. The essay is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details. This guideline matches with the exercises we completed on understanding the structure. Good essays demonstrate strong structure, whereas weak essays frequently lack well-developed examples. The essay displays unity, progression, and coherence. This guideline corre sponds to the work we’ve done on finding the main idea of a reading passage. Each paragraph should be connected to the main theme of the passage and contribute to the development of the passage’s ideas or argument. An essay receiving a score of 5 stays on topic, whereas an essay receiving a lower score goes off the topic.
The fourth and final guideline will be addressed later in this chapter. However, it is worth not ing that on the TOEFL, you don’t have to write in perfect English to get a 5. It’s acceptable to have some spelling and grammar mistakes in your essay.
Similarities in the Writing and Reading Guidelines The skills you learned in the Reading section can also help you write a well-structured, orga nized essay. In fact, the reading passages in this text are great examples for the TOEFL essay! The following techniques from the Reading section are particularly useful:
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Understand the structure of the passage. Remember, TOEFL passages are always made up of an introduction, several body paragraphs, and a conclu sion. Make sure your essays also contain these three key elements and separate them into distinct paragraphs. Use the first sentence of each paragraph to present the main idea. Remember, the first sentence (also known as the topic sentence) should clearly present the main idea of each paragraph. Use the remaining sentences to provide details and examples. Be sure to sup port each of your points with a reason and a specific idea or an example. Use direction markers to unify your ideas. Use transitions as markers to clearly identify continuations of same-direction ideas or highlight contrasting ideas.
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PART 1: EXPRESSING YOUR PURPOSE Our first goal is to make sure your essays have a clear purpose. To do that, we need to look at the types of tasks the TOEFL will feature.
Purpose and the Writing Section You need to clearly express your purpose in your introductory paragraph. If you recall our earlier discussion of introduction paragraphs (in the Reading and Speaking chapters), you may already have a good idea of how to express your purpose. In general, your introduction needs to accomplish the following tasks: 1. 2.
Introduce the topic of your discussion Present your thesis statement
Writing an Effective Introduction Paragraph Here’s an example of a writing task similar to one you may encounter on the TOEFL. You would be asked to write an essay explaining whether you agree or disagree with the following topic:
Parents should select their children’s friends carefully to make sure those friends reflect proper values. Although there are many ways of writing an introduction paragraph, the following strategy will help you write an effective introduction regardless of the topic. Following this strategy will help you write quickly.
Step 1: Pick a Side If the goal of your writing is to have a clear purpose, you must know what that purpose is before you start writing. Otherwise, your essay will lack focus and coherence. On opinion questions, there is no right or wrong answer, as you saw in Core Concept: Speaking. You will be evaluated only on how well you defend your position. Remember that for an opin ion essay, your purpose as an author is to convince the reader that your position is correct.
Step 2: State Your Position Once you’ve chosen your position, your first job is to state it. Here’s an example of a typi cal first sentence for this type of response. I do not believe that parents should select their children’s friends.
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As you saw in Chapter 4 (Core Concept: Speaking), it’s best to make a clear, direct statement of your position. Try using some of the following phrases:
I believe
Ifeel that
In my opinion
In my view
I think that
I do not believe
I do notfeel that
My position is
It is my beliefthat
Step 3: State the Reason for Your Opinion Once you’ve stated your position, you’ve established for the reader what you believe. Now, you must explain why you believe your position is correct. Here’s an example. I do not believe that parents should select their children’s friends. It would be harmful to children if they were not allowed to choose their own friends. Parents should be interested in their children’s friends, but they should let their children pick their own friends.
When stating why you believe your position, it may be helpful to use some of the following phrases:
I believe this because
Ifeel this way because
This is because
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Drill #1: Write an Introduction Paragraph Write an introduction paragraph explaining whether you agree or disagree with each of the following prompts. Remem ber to follow the three steps described on the previous pages.
1.It is the teacher’s responsibility to make a student learn the material.
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Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public.
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Colleges and universities should offer more distance learning courses to accommodate the needs of students.
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When choosing a career, financial gain should be the most important consideration.
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Schools should have mandatory testing each year to prove they are meeting minimum educational standards.
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Sample Responses to Drill #1 The following are sample introduction paragraphs for the prompts. Compare your paragraphs with the ones below and see how well they match up. As always, they do not have to match exactly. As long as your format is similar, you have the right idea. 1.
I believe that it is a teacher’s responsibility to make a student learn the material. Many students are of a young age and do not realize the value of education. Therefore, it is up to the teacher to help them learn the lessons and realize the value of the material.
2. In my opinion, material on the Internet should not be censored. The Internet is a free zone and it would be wrong for this area to be controlled. Plus, what government or agency would be responsible for censoring the Internet, which is available worldwide? 3. In my view, colleges and universities should offer more distance learning courses. I believe this because in today’s world, many people have a lot of demands on their time. Some students are parents or hold part-time jobs. This means that they don’t have as much time for school. Distance learning courses would be a good solution to this problem.
4. I do not feel that financial considerations should be the most important ones when choosing a career. If a person is not happy in his or her job, then the money will not be important. A person’s happiness should be the number one consideration when choosing a career. 5. I feel that it would be wrong for schools to have mandatory testing each year. I think that each school should be allowed to decide how best to educate its students. Some schools do not focus as much on testing as other schools and use other ways of grading their students, such as projects and final papers. These schools should not be forced to have tests.
These examples are not perfect, and that’s acceptable on the TOEFL. But each one is simple, direct, and clearly states the purpose. That’s all that is required of an introductory paragraph.
Summary: Expressing Your Purpose The introduction is your first impression, so make it a good one! To craft an effective introduc tion, follow these steps. 1.
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Decide what your purpose is: Know what your task is. Are you trying to convince or inform? Are you picking one option over another? State the thesis: Always include a simple and direct statement of the topic. State why: This is your connection between the task and topic.
For an effective introduction, remember these “don’ts.”
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Don’t go into detail about your examples in your introduction. Don’t repeat the task or assignment word for word.
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PART 2: ORGANIZING YOUR IDEAS Now that we’ve taken care of the purpose, we need to focus on organization. Organization is one of the most important factors in your writing score. Disjointed or unfocused writing is easy for the graders to spot and will lead to a lower score.
On the TOEFL, each writing task should be organized as follows:
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Introduction: We’ve worked on this already. This is the part in which you state the topic and your purpose. Body: As with speaking, this is the part in which you should provide the details and examples important to your purpose. We’ll examine body para graphs next. Conclusion: This is the part in which you summarize your essay. We’ll look at written conclusions later in this chapter.
Building the Body One of the things TOEFL graders look for is your ability to thoroughly provide support for your purpose. The best way to do that is by writing an effective body paragraph.
Writing an Effective Body Paragraph Good body paragraphs make your writing more effective and more organized, which are both good things on the TOEFL. The first step in creating a good body paragraph is to write a topic sentence.
Step 1: The Topic Sentence A good topic sentence does two things: it provides a transition between ideas and clearly states the main idea of the paragraph. To refresh your memory on how to compose a topic sentence, flip back to Core Concept: Speaking. For writing, we are going to use the same method. A topic sentence should introduce the main point of the paragraph.
Let’s continue to work with our previous topic.
Parents should carefully select their children’s friends to make sure those friends reflect proper values. In our introduction, we stated what our position was and why we believe our opinion was cor rect. Now, in the body paragraphs, we have to support our position. Here’s our introduction. I do not believe that parents should select their children's friends. It would be harmful to children if they were not allowed to choose their own friends. Parents should be interested in their children’s friends, but they should let their children pick their own friends.
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To make a clear transition statement, use the topic or thesis of the previous paragraph as a start ing point. Look at the following transition: One reason I believe that parents should let children pick their friends is that children need to develop independence.
Notice how the bold portion repeats an idea found in the last sentence of the introduction. Using this technique makes your writing flow better and appear more organized. Our next paragraph may say Another reason I think parents should let children pick their friends is that children may resent a parent who picks their friends.
And our final body paragraph may say In addition to the feelings of resentment a child may have, a final reason parents shouldn’t pick their children’s friends is that the children may not get along very well.
This paragraph also uses a link to the main idea of the preceding paragraph. As with the Speak ing section, topic sentences and transitions will help your essay appear organized.
Step 2: The Examples For many of the assignments on the TOEFL, your main goal in the body paragraphs will be to support your opinions. On others, your task will be to report facts stated in either a reading passage or a lecture. In either case, your model is still the same.
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State the example or reason (what the example is). Explain its significance (why the example is important).
Remember that you’ve learned how to incorporate examples into your spoken and written re sponses. The key to making good use of examples is to make sure each example is • •
specific, not overly general or hypothetical (made up) explained in sufficient detail
Now let’s look at three types of examples that will help make your essay more convincing: ex amples that support your main idea, examples that summarize your main idea, and examples that evaluate your main idea.
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Supporting Examples Supporting examples are the most familiar type of examples and perhaps the easiest to use. They are used to show the reader why you have a particular viewpoint or position. On the TOEFL, you may see similar tasks that ask the following:
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for students to gain real-world experience than to spend their time in a classroom. Describe a book you have read and why that book was important to you. Some teachers prefer to lecture to students, whereas others prefer to engage stu dents in a dialogue. Which teaching style do you think is better and why?
For each of these tasks, your mission is to convince your readers that your view is correct by presenting them with facts and evidence.
Summarizing Examples Some tasks require you to explain or summarize someone else’s opinion. For these tasks, you are not trying to convince the reader of anything; instead, your purpose is to report what you’ve read or heard. On the TOEFL, summarizing tasks look like the following:
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The professor describes the controversy surrounding a new technique. Explain the technique and what the controversy is. In the conversation above, the man presented his opinion on the new budget pro posal. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. Using details and examples from the piece you just heard, explain how musicians have been influenced by cultural and intellectual movements.
Evaluating Examples One of the more difficult tasks you may encounter on the TOEFL asks you to evaluate some one else’s viewpoint. These tasks require you to judge how valid a position is. The purpose of your examples is to weaken the position. The following is an example of an evaluation task:
Explain how the points in the lecture you’ve just heard cast doubt on it. Regardless of the type of example, the way you present your examples remains the same.
Effective Examples As stated at the beginning of this chapter, you must provide details for each example and an explanation of the meaning or significance of each. The following is a sample response contain ing poorly used examples: One reason I believe lecturing is a better teaching method is that teachers can control the content. Also, the teachers are able to organize things better. Finally, lectures let the stu dents focus on only the important parts of the lesson.
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This response contains several good ideas, but the problem is that the author failed to provide specific details for each example. You cannot assume that your reader understands exactly what point you are making and why; instead, you must explain each of your examples fully.
For each example you intend to use, ask yourself why the example is appropriate. What makes the example a convincing one? Let’s return to our previous examples and see how they can be made better. Here is the first example from the response above. 1.Lectures allow teachers to control the content.
Now, we need to ask why this example should convince a reader that lecturing is a better teach ing method. Here are some reasons. Example: Lectures allow teachers to control the content.
Why? 1. 2.
The teacher is the only one speaking, so there are no digressions. The teacher can plan the lecture beforehand, ensuring all the important infor mation is addressed.
Example: Lectures allow teachers to organize better.
Why? 1. 2.
Speaking without planned notes can be difficult. The teacher can practice the lecture numerous times, ensuring it is well organized.
Example: Lectures help students focus on important information.
Why? 1. 2.
The teacher can emphasize important information more effectively in a lecture. Students can pay attention to the teacher, not other students.
Now, let’s rewrite our earlier paragraph, using the examples more effectively. One reason I believe lecturing is a better teaching method is that teachers can control the content. When a teacher lectures, all the information presented is supplied by the teacher. There are no digressions because the students are not interrupting the lesson or distracting the teacher. Also, a teacher has the opportunity to plan the lecture before hand, meaning that the teacher can ensure all the important information is discussed. In a conversation or dialogue, a teacher may never get to some important points because the students may ask too many questions about a certain topic. Another reason I prefer lecturing to a conversation or a dialogue is that a lecture is much more organized. It can be very difficult to speak without notes or a plan. During a
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dialogue, the subjects can change very rapidly and can be hard to follow. But a lecture is planned beforehand, so the topics are easier to follow. Also, the teacher can practice the lecture repeatedly and fix any problems in organiza tion. For more reading and writing practice, be sure to check out
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The final advantage of a lecture is that it helps the students focus on only the most important information. Because the teacher has planned the talk in advance, he or she can let the students know when an important point is being made. This will help the students focus. Additionally, when the students are engaged in a dialogue, a student may pay too much attention to another stu dent’s remarks or become distracted by a question or response. In a lecture, this problem is avoided because the student has to pay attention only to the teacher.
Note that when we use examples effectively, we end up having to use more paragraphs. This is necessary to keep our responses organized.
The Example Template When you use an example in an essay, try to follow this template.
Sentence 1: Introduce the example and tie it back to your thesis. Sentence 2: State one reason why your example is important or relevant to your thesis. Sentence 3: Add detail to reason #1. Sentence 4: State another reason why your example is important or relevant to your thesis. Sentence 5: Add detail to reason #2. Sentence 6 (optional): Provide a summary of your reasons, and relate them back to your thesis. Here’s an example of the template in action.
Task: Describe a book you have read and why that book was important to you. (1) One book that is extremely important to me is The Suffrage of Elvira by V. S. Naipaul. (2) One reason I enjoy this book so much is that I like its subject matter. (3) The book pro vides a humorous look at local politics, and I find politics a fascinating subject. (4) Naipaul is skilled at critically examining his topics, and I think his depiction of politics is very in teresting. (5) In this book, he presents a satire of the political process that is both witty and insightful. (6) Because of my interest in politics, The Suffrage of Elvira is an important book.
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Drill #2: Write Body Paragraphs that Use Examples Please use the blank spaces below to answer each of the questions presented. Then read the sample responses at the end of the drill to see how your writing compares.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for students to gain real-world experience than to spend their time in a classroom. Example #1:__________________________________________________________________________________
Why example #1 is important: ___________________________________________________________________
Example #2:__________________________________________________________________________________
Why example #2 is important:___________________________________________________________________
Body paragraph #1:____________________________________________________________________________
Body paragraph #2: ___________________________________________________________________________
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Describe an influential person, and explain why you feel this person is a positive role model.
Example #1: _________________________________________________________________________________
Why example #1 is important: ___________________________________________________________________
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Example #2: _______________________________________________________________________ __________ Why example #2 is important:____________________________________________________________ ______
Body paragraph #1:____________________________________________________________________________
Body paragraph #2: ______________________________ _____________________________________________
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Some colleges require first-year students to take the same courses, whereas other colleges allow students to select the classes they want. Which policy do you think is better for first-year students and why? Example #1: _________________________________________________________________________________
Why example #1 is important: ___________________________________________________________________
Example #2: _________________________________________________________________________________
Why example #2 is important:___________________________________________________________________
Body paragraph #1:____________________________________________________________________________
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Body paragraph #2:
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Read the following announcement and the conversation that follows it.
Announcement: Due to recent budget cuts, the university will be forced to reduce the library hours. Effective immediately, the library will close at 8:00 p.m. on weekdays and 5:00 p.m. on weekends. Student A: I can’t believe this! Did you hear the announcement about the library?
Student B: Yes. This is terrible. These new hours are going to be a real problem for me.
Student A: What’s the problem? Student B: Well, I work on weekends from noon to 6:00 p.m. at the bookstore. That means I won’t be able to get to the library to work on my research project. Student A: What are you going to do? Student B: I guess I’m going to have to wake up early and go to the library in the morning, but it’s going to be tough. My schedule is so busy. Between the five classes I’m taking and my hours at the bookstore, I don’t have much time. These new library hours are really going to hurt me. Student B expresses her opinion about the announcement. State what her opinion is, and explain the reasons she gives for holding it.
Reason #1:____________________________________________________________________________________ Why reason #1 is important: ____________________________________________________________________
Reason #2:____________________________________________________________________________________ Why reason #2 is important: ____________________________________________________________________
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Body paragraph #1: _________________________________________________________ __________________
Body paragraph #2:___________________________________________________________ ______ __________
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important education occurs not during adulthood but during childhood. Example #1: ______________________________________________________________________ ____ ______ Why example #1 is important: ________________________________________________ __________________
Example #2: _________________________________________________________________ __ ______________
Why example #2 is important: _________________________________________________ __________________
Body paragraph #1: _________________________________________________________ __________________
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Read the following passage about insect behavior:
Many insects are social creatures, living in large groups containing literally millions of individuals. Social insects, which include ants, termites, bees, and wasps, are the prime example of unselfish behavior in animals.
In any insect social system, each insect performs a specialized duty that is necessary for the survival of the hive as a whole. For example, among ants, there are certain types of ants that are soldiers—large, fearsome creatures with terrible jaws. Other ants, called drones, do not reproduce, instead devoting their time to taking care of the hive and the young of the queen. Each ant selflessly performs its role, not for its own benefit, but for the benefit of all the other ants. Now entomologists have found an interesting case of this sort of cooperation in a nonsocial insect, the cricket. Crickets are a prime example of a “selfish” insect, leading a very isolated existence. They typically interact with other crickets only when mating or fighting over territory. But scientists have observed a species of cricket that undergoes periodic mass migrations. Every so often, the crickets set off to find more favorable living areas. When these migrations occur, the crickets band together into a huge caravan. Surely at a time like this, the crickets realize there is safety in numbers and put aside their selfish instinct for the good of all members. Now read the following lecture on the same subject:
Professor: One of the biggest misconceptions in biology is the belief that organisms act out of concern for the “greater good” of the species. It is somewhat amazing how people assume that an ant or a mouse has enough sense to figure out how its actions impact all the members of its species! Still, it is understandable why many people might believe this erroneous view. Many actions can be misinterpreted as being for the “good of the species.” A classic example found in many early biology textbooks discussed the behavior of the stag. During mating season, a stag typically battles with other males, and the winner of these contests gains access to the females, while the loser walks away. Some people believed that the loser realizes that his offspring will be weaker, so the defeated stag “allows” the winner to mate to ensure the survival of the stag species. This couldn’t be further from the truth. The defeated stag wants to mate just as much as the winner does; the only problem is that he doesn’t want to risk his life for the chance to mate. The stag is better off looking for other females to mate with. Thus, both stags—the winner and the loser—are acting not for the good of the species, but for their own selfish reasons. Another good example of this is a recent study on the behavior of crickets. Scientists noted that crickets occasionally band together, traveling in huge swarms from location to location. The easy assumption was that the crickets believed in strength in numbers. 5. Core Concept: Writing
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But a researcher showed this is not the case. He attached tags to a sampling of crickets. Some of the tagged crickets were allowed to travel with the group. But some of them were separated from the rest. All the crickets that were separated were eaten by birds or rodents, whereas the tagged crickets in the group survived. Apparently, there is safety in numbers, but the crickets aren’t looking to help their fellow travelers. They want to avoid being eaten, and what better way is there than to disappear into a group of thousands of other tasty morsels? Summarize the points in the professor’s lecture, and explain how the points cast doubt on the reading.
Point #1: Why point #1 casts doubt on the reading:
Point #2: Why point #2 casts doubt on the reading:
Body paragraph #1:
Body paragraph #2:
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Sample Responses to Drill #2 Use the following sample responses as a guide to judge your work. Did your response contain strong topic sentences? Did you relate your examples back to your thesis? Did you explain why your examples are relevant?
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for students to gain real-world experience than to spend their time in a classroom. Real-world experience is usually preferable to time spent in a ciassroom. I believe this because experience is the best teacher. Students will not be able to grasp difficult top ics unless they are able to discover them on their own. For example, students who are studying auto mechanics cannot just read about an engine. Instead, for a student to really understand an engine, the student must take it apart piece by piece and put it back together again. Only then will a student truly understand the concept.
In addition, real-world experience gives a student a chance to apply knowledge. Many times, things learned in a classroom are quickly forgotten if a student does not have a chance to apply them. In some schools, students are required to learn a foreign language. But these classes rarely involve opportunities to apply the new language. If a student never uses the skills learned in class, the skills will quickly become useless. Thus, some real-world experience is necessary.
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Describe an influential person, and explain why you feel this person is a positive role model.
One reason I consider Mikhail Gorbachev a positive role model is his willingness to work for change. Many people are content with the status quo and are reluctant to change things. But Gorbachev saw that the Communist system was no longer viable. He worked hard to change the system, instituting new policies to increase the openness of the Soviet system. Even though his reforms were not as helpful as he wished them to be, his willingness to work for change makes him a good role model. In addition to his willingness to work for change, I believe Gorbachev is a positive role model because of his devotion to ideals that are larger than himself. Gorbachev came to power at a very tense time in history, the Cold War. Whereas before him, Soviet and Ameri can leaders had perpetuated the Cold War, Gorbachev knew that peace was a greater ideal. He reached out to President Ronald Reagan and signed treaties to limit nuclear arms. His devotion to this ideal was so great that he dissolved the Communist Party, of which he was the head. The future success of the Soviet Union was more important than his personal power.
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Some colleges require first-year students to take the same courses, whereas other colleges allow students to select the classes they want. Which policy do you think is better for first-year students and why?
The first reason I would support mandatory classes for freshmen is to ensure a certain quality of education. Although standardized education is not desirable, a college degree should hold a certain value. It should be the duty of universities to make sure their stu dents are familiar with important intellectual works. That way, all students will have a basic educational level.
Another reason I believe universities should have required classes for freshmen is that required classes will serve to increase the camaraderie of the students. In addition to being institutions of learning, universities also give students an opportunity to meet other people and make connections that may help them later in life. Required classes would make it easy for students to meet one another and interact. Freshmen can sometimes have a hard time fitting in at a school, and required classes would make it easier for them to adapt.
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Student B expresses her opinion about the announcement. State what her opinion is, and explain the reasons she gives for holding it.
One reason Student B is upset about the new library hours is that she is concerned she won't be able to work on her research paper. Student B works at a bookstore, and her hours on the weekends are from noon to 6:00 p.m; however, the library closes at 5:00 p.m. This means that she will no longer be able to go to the library after work. Another reason Student B is upset is because her personal schedule makes it difficult for her to use the library. To go to the library on weekends, she will have to go early in the morning, but she finds that problematic. Student B is taking five classes and has a Job, so she is very busy. The new library hours will make things harder for her.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important education occurs not during adulthood but during childhood. There are many reasons why I agree with the statement that the most important education occurs during childhood. One of the most important reasons is that younger children are very open to ideas and perceptions. At a young age, a child has not fully de veloped his or her personality, so education can have a very powerful effect. A child is very impressionable, and the lessons learned at this age can have a great impact.
Another reason why I believe that the most important education is during childhood is because childhood is a time when education focuses on the very essentials of our society. Although children may not be learning advanced skills or disciplines, they are learning valu able life skills. A child who learns the difference between right and wrong and how to treat other people has learned some of life’s most important lessons.
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Summarize the points in the professor’s lecture, and explain how the points cast doubt on the reading.
The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the behavior of stags. The professor shows how the actions of an animal can be inter preted in different ways. For example, some people interpret the stag’s actions as being for the “good of the species,” but the professor shows that the stag is actually acting in self-interest. This casts doubt on the reading because it appears that the crickets’ be havior can be interpreted as helping only individual crickets and not the group as a whole. The professor then talks about the results of the experiment, which seem to indicate the crickets are acting only in self-interest. Another point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the intelligence of animals and insects. As he states, it would seem to require a lot of intel ligence to evaluate how a behavior will affect an entire species. This makes the explanation in the reading seem less likely; a cricket is probably unable to think of the consequences of its actions. It is more likely that the cricket is acting only out of self-preservation, as the professor indicates.
Summary: Using Examples Effectively Proper use of examples is important to your TOEFL score. When using examples, always re member to do the following: 1. 2.
State the example. Explain how the example supports your position or achieves your purpose.
Avoid these common mistakes when using examples.
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Don’t introduce an example without explaining how it relates to your purpose. Don’t forget to provide specific details for each of your examples. Don’t use more than one example per paragraph.
PART 3: WRITING THE PERFECT BODY PARAGRAPH Now that you understand the proper structure and ways to use examples in your writing, let’s work on writing a perfectly structured paragraph. Here’s a body paragraph for our sample topic (Parents should carefully select their children’s friends to make sure those friends reflect proper values.). As always, your essay does not need to match our example exactly. Just be sure you’re using a structure similar to that of our example. One reason I believe that parents should let children pick their friends is that children need to develop independence (topic sentence). It is very important for a child to become independent, and the early part of a child’s life can affect the level of independence a child has (statement of example). For example, children who are not allowed to pick their friends may believe that their parents will always make important decisions for them (explanation of significance). This belief could make children dependent on their parents, which would have a negative effect on their development (explanation of significance).
That’s all there is to it! Now, try to write some body paragraphs for the topics that follow.
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Drill #3: Write Body Paragraphs For each of the following tasks, write a body paragraph (or two). You’ve already written introductions for these, so it may help to read over what you’ve written. Before you write, think of one or two examples that support your view.
1. It is the teacher’s responsibility to make a student learn the material.
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Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public.
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Colleges and universities should offer more distance learning courses to accommodate the needs of students.
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When choosing a career, financial gain should be the most important consideration.
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Schools should have mandatory testing each year to prove they are meeting minimum educational standards.
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Sample Responses to Drill #3 The following are sample responses. Check your paragraphs against these models. Make sure your body paragraph includes both a topic sentence and an example or reason. 1.
One reason I believe it is a teachers responsibility to help students learn is that many students are of a young age (topic sentence). A first- or secondgrade teacher works with children who are only six or seven years old (state ment of example). At this age, a student is too young to recognize the value of education (explanation of example). Therefore, it should be the teacher’s job to make sure the children learn.
This body paragraph ends by restating the author’s main point, which also helps the reader stay focused on the thesis. 2.
First of all, material on the Internet should not be censored because the Internet is a free zone (topic sentence). The Internet is not owned by any one government or company (statement of example). This means that no one should have the right to say what can or cannot be posted on it (explanation of example). Companies or governments can control what material shows up on their websites, but they cannot control what private citizens do (explanation of example). Second, technology makes it too difficult to censor material on the Internet (topic sentence). Every day, new computer programs are developed that make other programs obsolete (statement of example). As soon as someone figures out how to censor material on the Internet, someone else can figure out how to break the code (explanation of example). This means that a tremendous amount of money would have to be spent on developing new technology, and this expense would not be worth it (explanation of example).
This response includes two body paragraphs. Notice how the second paragraph logically con nects to the first through the use of the transition word second. Try to make sure your body paragraphs are nicely connected both to the thesis and to each other. 3.
One important reason that colleges should offer more distance learning courses is that people are busier than they used to be (topic sentence). In addition to work and hobbies, there are more parents going to college these days (statement of example). All these things make it difficult to attend college (explanation of example). However, education is a valuable thing, and everyone should have access to it (explanation of example). If universities offered more distance learning courses, more people could find time for an education (explanation of example).
Try to use some of the direction marker words and transitions you learned in the reading ex ercises in Core Concept: Reading and Core Concept: Speaking. For example, this paragraph uses “however” to emphasize the importance of education and how distance learning courses will allow more people to get their education.
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The most important thing in choosing a career should be the happiness it brings, not the money (topic sentence). There is an old saying, “You can’t buy happiness,” and this statement is very true (statement of example). Many people who have lots of money also have strained relationships with their spouses and children (explanation of example). Often, they feel they can’t trust whether people like them or their money (explanation of example). These strains can make a person very unhappy, no matter how much money they have (expla nation of example).
You should also try to use some emphasis markers in your writing. Stating that something is the “most” important reason or something is “very true” gives your words more of an impact. However, don’t overuse these words. Too many of them can distract the reader. 5.
Schools should not have mandatory testing each year because tests are not always the best way of measuring education (topic sentence). Tests, especially standardized tests, can cover only a limited amount of skills (statement of example). There are some things in education that are not easy to test, such as writing and creative thinking (explanation of example). For this rea son, schools should not be forced to have mandatory testing (explanation of example). In addition, not all students do well on tests (topic sentence with state ment of example). Some students are better at writing essays or giving a speech (explanation of example). Not all students perform best on standard ized tests (explanation of example). Therefore, it is unfair for those students to have to take these tests, and schools may not get an accurate view of how successful they are (explanation of example).
In the second paragraph, the topic sentence is combined with the statement of the example, which is acceptable.
Summary: Building the Body The body provides the reader with the key points of your thesis. Build strong body paragraphs by doing the following: 1.
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Begin with a topic sentence: A good topic sentence references the subject you will discuss and also provides a transition to link your ideas together. Provide details: The rest of the body should contain important details that help you achieve your purpose.
Build strong body paragraphs by avoiding the following:
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Don’t try to discuss more than one example per paragraph. Don’t present an example without providing specific details.
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PART 4: CONCLUDING YOUR RESPONSE As you’ve seen in Core Concepts: Reading, a conclusion is essential to summarizing any argu ment. In this section, you are going to follow the same approach and simply restate your pur pose.
Here’s a sample conclusion from our practice prompt. In conclusion, there are many reasons why parents should not pick friends for their children. Children who are allowed to pick their own friends will be more independent and will get along better with friends they’ve selected.
That’s all there is to it. A conclusion has to be only two or three sentences long. After you restate your thesis, repeat your reasons or make a final statement about the correctness of your views.
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Drill #4: Write a Conclusion For each of the following topics, write a conclusion. Check the sample responses afterward for more ideas on ending your essay.
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It is the teacher’s responsibility to make a student learn the material.
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Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public.
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Colleges and universities should offer more distance learning courses to accommodate the needs of students.
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When choosing a career, financial gain should be the most important consideration.
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Schools should have mandatory testing each year to prove they are meeting minimum educational standards.
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Sample Responses to Drill #4 1.
Ultimately, it is the teacher’s responsibility to make students learn the material. Education is too valuable to be left in the hands of students. A good teacher not only teaches the material but also gives students a love of learning.
This conclusion ends by making a general statement about the purpose. This is a good strategy if you don’t want to repeat your examples or reasons again. 2.
As this essay has demonstrated, material on the Internet should not be cen sored. The Internet is too big to be controlled, and the technology involved in censoring it would be too expensive.
This conclusion restates both the purpose and the examples. 3.
In conclusion, it makes sense for colleges and universities to offer more dis tance learning courses. It is always better to make education more available, not less.
Here, we end with a strong statement about what we believe. The conclusion is a good time to emphasize a key point or idea, as the following examples show. 4.
Clearly, there are many more important considerations than money when choosing a career. Happiness and family are much more important than money.
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Thus, schools should not be required to have mandatory testing. Testing does not provide students with a fair assessment of their skills, and it makes schools focus more on the tests than on teaching important things.
Summary: Wrapping Things Up The conclusion is essential to your responses on the TOEFL. It’s easy to conclude an essay or speech. All you have to do is
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Restate: Tell the reader once more what your purpose is and why you believe it.
Make sure to avoid the following:
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Don’t introduce new examples or ideas. Don’t leave out the thesis.
GRAMMAR REVIEW This is a brief summary of the basics of English grammar. Become familiar with these terms so you can avoid common grammatical errors in your written and spoken responses. _________ Parts of speech • Noun: person, place, or thing Example: I just remembered that I need to call my mother.
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Pronoun: stands in the place of a noun Example: She asked for a call last night.
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Verb: action word Example: I dial her home phone number.
The Princeton Review's Grammar Smart can be found in most book
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Adverb: modifies a verb Example: Eagerly, I wait for her to answer.
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Adjective: modifies a noun Example: When she picks up, I can tell that she is happy to hear my voice.
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Preposition: links nouns or pronouns to other words Example: I excitedly share the details of my new job.
Foran intensive vocabu lary review, check out our TOEFL Power Vocab.
Conjunction: connects words, clauses, or sentences Example: She is happy and invites me over for dinner.
Interjection: abrupt remark Example: “Oh dear!” she exclaimed when I said yes. “I guess I’ll have to go to the store.”
Tenses • Present: an action that is currently happening Example: I walk to work every day. •
Past: an action that already happened Example: I decided that walking is better than driving.
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Future: an action that has not happened yet Example: I will change my mind later.
Agreement • Subject/Verb Agreement: A singular subject needs a singular verb. A plural sub ject needs a plural verb. Example: The window is open. Example: The windows are closed. •
Noun/Pronoun Agreement: A singular noun takes a singular pronoun. A plural noun takes a plural pronoun. Example: The student wore his/her backpack. Example: The students wore their backpacks.
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Spelling • This is not really a point of grammar, but it is a common source of error on the TOEFL. Though it is not necessary for you to have perfect spelling to get a high score, it is important to know how to correctly spell as many words as possible. Many times, words with very simple meanings can be quite difficult to spell. You probably know the meaning of all the words in the following list, but we’ve included them as examples because they are commonly misspelled by native and non-native English speakers alike.
Commonly misspelled words:
hygiene
mathematics quiet
acknowledge embarrass
illegal
natural
average
existence
independent neighbor
bachelor
experience intelligence
barbecue
February
bureau
accidentally
easily
usage
receipt
usually
reference
vacuum
nowadays
relevant
valuable
khaki
office
rhythm
vicious
finally
knowledge
often
scissors
weather
celebrity
foreign
knee
original
separate
weird
children
generally
language
parallel
sincerely
whether
calendar
grammar
leisure
prejudice
technique
yacht
definitely
guarantee
luxurious
psychology
tongue
your
disease
happiness
magic
quantity
tragedy
you’re
discipline
humorous
maintenance quite
unfortunately
zoology
Parallelism • All items in a list must have the same form. Example: The professor likes to read books, grade papers, and play guitar. Complete sentences versus fragments • A sentence must express a complete thought. It will always have a subject and a verb within it, in order to be a complete sentence. An incomplete sentence is known as a fragment and should not be used under any circumstances. Example of a complete sentence: Wearing a cap and gown, the student attended graduation. Example of a fragment: Wearing a cap and gown, the student at graduation.
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Correct punctuation versus run-on sentences • A run-on sentence is two or more sentences written together without proper punc tuation separating them. Example of a correct sentence: The girls played volleyball all afternoon; it was not until later that they noticed someone had stolen their car. Example of a run-on sentence: The girls played volleyball all afternoon, it was not until later that they noticed someone had stolen their car.
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Summary of All Core Concepts: Reading, Listening, Speaking, and Writing o
The TOEFL is a standardized test format that evaluates reading, listening, speaking, and writing. All the tasks on the TOEFL require you to work with and identify some basic features common to all of them. The more comfortable you are with these core concepts, the more comfortable you will be taking the TOEFL.
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For each passage that you read, write on, speak about, or listen to on the TOEFL, you should focus on the purpose, examples, and conclusion. Practice identifying these parts in the sample drills in this book as well as other types of writing you encounter.
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Chapter 6 Vocabulary
VOCAB, VOCAB, VOCAB As you know, the TOEFL is an exam that measures four essential skills: reading, listening, speaking, and writing. Vocabulary is found in all of these areas, and having a strong vocabu lary will benefit you throughout the TOEFL. In this chapter, we have assembled some crucial TOEFL vocabulary words along with pronunciation, definition, part of speech, an example sentence, and synonyms. It’s a jackpot of useful words!
The TOEFL doesn’t have a vocabulary specific section, but the simple fact remains that many of the questions, answer choices, and reading passages contain some difficult vocabulary. You can’t improve your score substantially without increasing your vocabulary. You might think that studying vocabulary is the most boring part of preparing for the TOEFL, but it’s one of the most important, and it’s also one part of TOEFL preparation that’s useful to you beyond the confines of the test itself. And the more words that you recognize (and know the meaning of) on the test, the easier it will be. So there’s no avoiding the importance of vocabulary to your success on the TOEFL. Fortunately, one thing you have working in your favor is the fact that the same words tend to appear on the TOEFL year after year. The words we’ve collected for you in this chapter are the words that appear frequently on the TOEFL. So let’s get started learning some new words!
Learn to Love the Dictionary Get used to looking up words. If you see a word you don’t know while studying for the TOEFL or elsewhere, it’s probably a good TOEFL word. Look it up and make a flash card. Dictionaries will give you the pronunciation, while digital apps can provide quick, handy look-ups for new words. Looking up words is a habit. You may have to force yourself to do it in the beginning, but it becomes more natural over time. Many of the techniques in this book will help you on the TOEFL but don’t have much relevance in day-to-day life, but a great vocabulary and good vocabulary habits will add a tremendous amount of value to your career and beyond.
Learning New Words How will you remember all the new words you should learn for the test? By developing a rou tine for learning new words. Here are some tips:
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To learn words that you find on your own, get into the habit of reading good books, magazines, and newspapers. Start paying attention to words you come across for which you don’t know the definition. You might be tempted to just skip these, as usual, but train yourself to write them down and look them up. When you look up the word, say it out loud, being careful to pronounce it cor rectly. This will help you remember it. When you look up a word in the dictionary, don’t assume that the first definition is the only one you need to know. The first definition may be an archaic one, or one that applies only in a particular context, so scan through all the definitions. Now that you’ve learned the dictionary’s definition of a new word, restate it in your own words. You’ll find it much easier to remember a word’s meaning if you make it your own.
Mnemonics—Use your imagination to create a mental image to fix the new word in your mind. For example, if you’re trying to remember the word voracious, which means having an insatiable appetite for an activity or pursuit, picture an incredibly hungry boar eating huge piles of food. The voracious boar will help you to recall the meaning of the word. The crazier the image, the better. Keep a vocabulary notebook, or make a file with a list of new vocabulary words and put it on your desktop. Simply having a notebook with you will remind you to be on the lookout for new words, and using it will help you to remember the ones you encounter. Writing something down also makes it easier to memorize. Jot down the word when you find it, note its pronunciation and definition (in your own words) when you look it up, and jot down your mnemonic or mental im age. You might also copy the sentence in which you originally found the word, to remind yourself of how the word looks in context. Do the same thing with flash cards. Write the word on one side and the pronun ciation, the meaning, and perhaps a mental image on the other. Stick five or six of your flash cards in your pocket every morning and use them whenever you can. Stuck on a delayed subway train? Look at your flash cards. Standing in a long line at the bank? Look at your flash cards. Sick of engaging in small talk with boring acquaintances? Look at your flash cards. (Only kidding about that last one.) Use your new word every chance you get. Make it part of your life. Insert it into your speech at every opportunity. Developing a powerful vocabulary requires lots of exercise. Learn word roots. Many words share similar origins. By learning these common roots, you’ll be better able to work with words you’ve never seen before. A good dictionary should list the origin and roots of the words in it.
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
absorb
ab SAWRB
abundant
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
verb
to take in or draw up
We are using a sponge to absorb most of the liquid that was spilled.
consume; soak up
uh BUHN duhnt
adjective
possess ing a lot of something, often more than what is needed
The food was abundant at Thanksgiving dinner; we spent the next two weeks eating leftovers.
plentiful; full
accept
ak SEPT
verb
to receive with The athlete was proud to accept his Olympic pleasure; to agree Gold Medal.
accumulate
uh KYOO myuh leyt
verb
to gather or collect
The geologist was hop acquire; gain; ing to accumulate more stockpile rock specimens on his trip out West.
adequate
AD i kwit
adjective
enough for a required purpose
She makes an adequate amount of money, but she still can’t afford to go on fancy vacations.
unexceptional; acceptable
adjacent
uh JEY suhnt
adjective
located next to something; beside
Our house is adjacent to the corner grocery store.
neighboring; bordering
affect
uh FEKT
verb
to produce a change in; to move the emotions of someone
I hope your illness does not affect your ability to work.
change; move
analyzing
AN i lahz ing
verb
examining critically
studying; The scientist spent hours analyzing the re investigating; sults of the experiment, evaluating and still he could not come up with an answer.
ancient
EYN shuhnt
adjective
very old; from The ancient temple of Angkor Wat is almost the distant past 900 hundred years old.
appeal
uh PEEL
verb
to be attractive or pleasing
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Eating snails is some thing that does not appeal to me.
receive; approve
antique; dated
attract; charm; interest
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
appropriate
uh PROH pree it
artistic
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
adjective
suitable or fitting to the situation at hand
A business suit is appropriate attire for a job interview.
correct; proper
ahr TIS tik
adjective
exhibiting visual taste or skill
She was so artistic that even her fruit bowl was arranged in a beautiful manner.
aesthetic; creative
assumptions
uh SUHMP shuhnz
noun
opinions which are taken for granted or presumed to be true
I made some assumptions about Dana’s character without really knowing her.
beliefs; judgments
available
uh VEY luh buhl
adjective
able to be used, obtained, or accessed
The shoes I wanted to order from the store are, unfortunately, no longer available.
accessible; free
aware
uh WAIR
adjective
possessing knowledge
Soldiers need to be aware of potential danger at all times, even when they least expect it.
conscious; informed
beliefs
bih LEEFS
noun
things which are believed; convictions
Many beliefs, such as the idea that the world is flat, turn out to be wrong.
opinions; ideas
benefit
BEN uh fit
noun
a positive result or outcome
One benefit of exercise is that you will have more energy through out the day.
advantage; gain
capable
KAYpuh buhl
adjective
able to do Having studied something; . cooking in France for good at a task 10 years, she is a very capable chef.
skilled; accomplished
cast
kast
verb
threw
The fisherman cast his hook into the water, hoping for a bite.
flung; tossed
ceased
seest
verb
ended, stopped, or discontinued
When I lost my job, my expensive nights on the town ceased.
concluded; finished
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
certain
SUR tuhn
circumstances
Synonyms
Definition
Sentence
adjective
without doubt or reservation; particular
confident; Since Rhonda definite answered only three of the ten questions, she was certain she had failed the exam.
SUR kuhm stans iz
noun
the state of affairs
Given my financial circumstances, I am not sure I should be going on vacation right now.
classified
KLAS uh fahyd
verb
arranged or organized according to type
categorized; The ornithologist labeled classified his birds according to color, size, and beak type.
compare
kuhm PAIR
verb
If you compare Paris to examine the differences and New York, Paris is much cheaper. and similari ties between two things
components
kuhm POH nuhnts
noun
parts of something
Her argument had several components I did not agree with.
elements; factors
compromise
KOM pruh mahyz
verb
to settle a disagreement by offering a concession
Since I am an early riser and my wife likes to sleep late, we decided to compromise and wake up at 10:00 a.m.
agree; meet halfway; negotiate
concerned
kuhn SURND
adjective
worried or upset
I was concerned when you did not show up for work at the usual time.
anxious; troubled; bothered
concrete
KON kreet
adjective
Detectives look for referring to concrete evidence, such an actual, material thing as hairs and finger prints, when solving a crime.
conform
kuhn FAWRM
verb
to act according to set standards
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Teenagers often feel the pressure to conform in order to be popular.
situations; conditions
contrast; evaluate
real; physical; solid
adapt; follow; comply
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
connection
kuh NEK shuhn
considered
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
noun
a joining of two things; a closeness or association with someone or something
There is a strong connection between wealth and education level.
relation; link; affiliation
kuhn SID erd
adjective
thought of or viewed as
Bach is considered one believed of the greatest compos ers to have lived.
consistent
kuhn SIS tuhnt
adjective
sticking to the Swimming has always same behavior been a consistent part or principles of my life—I swim three days a week or more.
constant; regular
constant
KON stuhnt
adjective
not changing
Traffic jams are a constant source of irritation in modern life.
regular; reliable
constrained
kuhn STREYND
verb
forced or confined
Being a raw-food vegetarian, she has a very constrained diet.
limited; restrained
convenient
kuhn VEEN yuhnt
adjective
easy to use or access
We live in a convenient handy; location, right next to advantageous a 24-hour supermarket.
critical
KRIT i kuhl
adjective
tending to find flaws in something; judging harshly
He is a critical person with little patience for mistakes.
crude
krood
adjective
rough or lack He was a crude person ing refinement who would frequently belch and tell dirty jokes.
unpolished; raw
decision
di SIZH uhn
noun
a choice made The quarterback made after consider a quick decision to go ing something for a touchdown.
resolution; judgment
deepening
DEE puhn ing
adjective
becoming more intense or profound
disapproving; demanding
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
define
di FAHYN
dense
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
verb
to describe precisely
Please define your duties as supervisor, so I have a better idea of what your job is.
specify; set
dens
adjective
closely packed The crowds at the game were so dense we could barely move.
depict
di PIKT
verb
to represent, either in words or visually
In many of his novels, show; illustrate Charles Dickens would depict the struggles of poor children living in Victorian England.
develop
dih VEL uhp
verb
to bring into being; to become affected by
After standing outside in the rain for three hours, it is likely that you will develop a cold.
grow; acquire
developing
dih VEL uh ping
adjective
in the process of growth or change, often used with reference to countries
Sudan is still a developing country, with few roads and little industry.
nonindustrial; primitive
directly
di REKT lee
adverb
in an honest, straightfor ward manner
The interrogator asked the witness to answer all questions as directly as possible.
candidly; openly
discover
dih SKUHV er
verb
to find out or acquire knowledge of
After Jim left, I was surprised to discover that he had left his cell phone at my house.
notice; realize
discuss
dih SKUHSS
verb
to talk over or Janet liked to discuss politics with her write about friends, even though they often ended up in heated debates.
dominant
DOM uh nuhnt
adjective
being the most impor tant force or component; commanding or controlling
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For hundreds of years, the Romans were the dominant force in the Mediterranean.
thick; heavy
debate; consider
chief; main; principal
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
eager
EE ger
eccentric
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
adjective
excited to do something
We were surprised to find out that she was actually quite eager to mow the lawn.
excited; ready
ik SEN trik
adjective
unusual; different from the normal standard
My aunt is quite an eccentric lady, with her bright hats adorned with birds and eggs.
bizarre; strange; weird
effect
iFEKT
noun
the result or end product of an action
Staying out in the sun for too long can have a damaging effect on the skin.
result; consequence
emerge
iMURJ
verb
to come into view, often from a hidden place
It is always exciting to watch a plane emerge from the clouds and head toward the land ing strip.
appear; turn up; arise
engage
in GEYJ
verb
to attract the attention of
The rattle toy was able to engage the baby for hours.
interest; captivate
ensure
en SHOOR
verb
to guaran tee or make certain
To ensure that I would not be late, I set my alarm clock an hour earlier than usual.
assure; secure
environment
enVAHYruhn muhnt
noun
ones physical or psychological surroundings
Ferns grow best in an environment that is moist and full of light.
atmosphere; conditions
essential
uh SEN shuhl
adjective
absolutely necessary or required for something
Yeast is an essential ingredient in bread; without it, your dough will never rise.
basic; fundamental
establish
ih STAB lish
verb
to set up permanently; to show to be true
The wealthy industrial ist wanted to establish a library that would be accessible to all.
create; found
evident
EV i dent
adjective
obvious or clear
It was evident that she had gone swimming, in spite of my orders against it.
apparent; plain
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
evolve
ee VOLV
exist
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
verb
to develop or change gradually
We are hoping this poor neighborhood will evolve into a place that is safer.
advance; grow; mature
ig ZIST
verb
to be alive or in existence; to be
Most Giant Pandas exist in the mountain regions of China.
live; survive
exposed
ik SPOHZD
adjective
without shelter In the desert, one is or protection; exposed to the Sun and laid open to heat all day long. view
unprotected; open
familiar
fuh MIL yer
adjective
commonly known or experienced; acquainted with
I am not familiar with the book you are read ing—is it good?
experienced; known
famous
FEY muhs
adjective
being very well known in the world
Michael Phelps is cur rently the most famous swimmer in the world.
renowned; influential
function
FUHNGKshuhn
noun
task; role the purpose or The function of the use for some heart is to pump blood thing throughout the body.
fundamental
fuhn duh MEN tuhl
adjective
forming an es Dribbling is a sential part of fundamental skill in something basketball—every player must know how to do this.
basic; important
gradual
GRAJ oo uhl
adjective
taking place over a long range of time; little by little
Over the last cen tury, there has been a gradual increase in the Earth’s temperature.
steady; progressive
habitat
HAB i tat
noun
the natural surroundings of an organism
Snakes prefer a sunny and dry habitat.
environment; residence
illustrate
IL uh streyt
verb
to serve as an These diagrams example of; to illustrate the bad make clear effects of smoking on one’s health.
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prove; demonstrate
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
immediately
i MEE dee it lee
indicator
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
adverb
occurring right away, without any delay
When I found out Maria was in the hospital, I called her immediately.
instantly; promptly
IN di kay ter
noun
something that acts as a sign
A high body tempera ture can be an indica tor of illness.
sign; warning; clue
influence
IN floo uhns
verb
to contribute to, change, or modify; to exert power over
My father is a huge influence in my life—I have always admired him and sought his advice.
affect; sway
innovations
in uh VEY shunz
noun
new tech niques or new things
Several innovations in changes; Internet technology inventions have made web surfing faster than ever.
lack
LAK
verb
to not have; to I am so busy with my be without new job that I lack the time to devote to my book club.
miss; need; want
limited
LIM i tid
adjective
restricted in number or amount; con fined within physical boundaries
fixed; definite
major
MEYjer
adjective
large or great Fish is a major in importance component in the or amount Japanese diet.
big; main
materials
muh TEER ee uhlz
noun
substances which com pose an object, or are used to build some thing
To build a tree house, you need the following materials: wood, nails, and glue.
supplies; components
mention
MEN shuhn
verb
to refer to briefly; to speak of
At lunch, Margot failed to mention that she had seen Tom the other day.
refer; bring up
These days, you can take only a limited amount of baggage on airplanes.
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
necessary
NESS uh ser ee
adjective
being essential Its necessary to get a to or required job if you want to be of something able to buy a house.
essential; needed
negative
NEG uh tiv
adjective
lacking posi She had a negative tive character reaction when I sug istics; indicat gested that we move ing opposition out of the country. to something
bad; against; unfavorable
nowadays
NOW uh deyz
adverb
of or related to the present time
Nowadays, it is rare for a family to live with out a television.
today; presently
objective
uhb J EK tiv
noun
the goal of a course of action
The objective of the United Nations is to maintain world peace.
aim; purpose
obvious
OB vee uhs
adjective
very clear
As she limped across the field, it was obvi ous that she had been injured.
apparent; evident
occasionally
uh KAY zhuh nuhl ee
adverb
now and then; Though I am a vegetar sometimes; not often ian, I occasionally eat rarely fish.
official
uh FISH uhl
adjective
of an office or position of authority
The official position of the apartment build ing is that no pets are allowed.
opinion
uh PIN yuhn
noun
a personal belief or judgment
After he was late view; several times, I did not estimation have a good opinion of him.
option
OP shuhn
noun
the right to choose something
Prospective buyers choice; have the option to buy privilege the car with or without GPS.
partial
PAHR shuhl
adjective
not complete
We have only a partial understanding of our galaxy.
halfway; unfinished
particular
per TIK yuh ler
adjective
related to or associated with a spe cific group or category
The child was very particular about the kinds of foods she ate.
exact; specific
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Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
authorized; established
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
pattern
PAT ern
noun
the design, The pattern of the often repeated, wallpaper consists of of something; flowers and trees. a regular and consistent combination of qualities
arrangement; motif
periodic
peer ee OD ik
adjective
occurring at regular time intervals
At periodic times through the day, you need to take this medication.
alternate; intermittent
phenomenon
fi NOM uh non
noun
something unusual, significant, or impressive
A solar eclipse is a natural phenomenon that some people will never witness in their lifetimes.
wonder; marvel; miracle
physical
FIZ i kuhl
adjective
related to the body or mate rial things
Of all sports, wrestling real; earthly is the one that involves the most physical contact.
portray
pawr TREY
verb
to depict visually or describe in words
The painter always liked to portray his subjects next to a window.
possible
POSS uh buhl
adjective
able to exist or Many years ago, occur people thought it wasn’t possible for hu mans to travel to the Moon.
likely; achievable
potential
puh TEN shuhl
noun
possibility; an ability or skill that may be developed in the future
Long legs indicate great potential as a runner.
promise; aptitude
prefer
pri FUR
verb
to like some thing more than another thing
I prefer coffee to tea.
choose; favor
primary
PRAHY mer ee
adjective
the most im The primary source of portant; the crime in major cities is first in a series drug use.
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
represent; draw
main; principal
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
principal
PRIN suh puhl
profound
Definition
Sentence
adjective
first or most important
My principal reason for chief; primary; leaving this job is the main low pay.
pruh FOUND
adjective
going beyond Aristotle gave us a what is on the profound understand surface; deep ing of human life.
promote
pruh MOHT
verb
to help or encourage
The treaty was de boost; nurture; signed to promote trade aid relations between the two nations.
prove
proov
verb
to establish the truth or validity of
There is little evidence to prove your claim that you were in the shower during the crime.
published
PUHB lisht
verb
prepared and distributed a piece of writing for public sale
The writer finally issued; released published his first novel after years of rejection.
qualities
KWOL i teez
noun
the traits or The house has many characteristics desirable qualities, of someone or including a large lawn something and pool.
features; properties
rapid
RAP id
adjective
very fast; occuring with great speed
He is a rapid painter who can paint an entire house at record setting speed.
speedy; quick
rate
reyt
verb
to rank or assess the value of
The study attempted to rate cars on the basis of affordability and reliability.
measure; judge
realistic
ree uh LIS tik
adjective
seeming close It is not realistic to to reality; assume that next year resembling I will earn a million what is true or dollars. practical
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Synonyms
thoughtful; weighty
verify; confirm
reasonable; sensible
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
recent
REE suhnt
recommend
Synonyms
Definition
Sentence
adjective
not long past; having oc curred in the near past
current; Recent events in the Middle East have dem modern onstrated that peace is unlikely.
rek uh MEND
verb
to suggest as I asked my friend to useful or good recommend a hair dresser to me.
reflects
ri FLEETS
verb
shows an image of; demonstrates
attests; Giving money to that homeless person reflects manifests how kind you are.
relation
ri LEY shuhn
noun
a connection between two things, some times familial
Bob’s facial features are just like mine, but he is no relation to me.
association; kinship
reliable
ri LAHY uh buhl
adjective
trustworthy and dependable
The Toyota is one of the most reliable cars on the market—it rarely breaks down.
constant; unfailing; predictable
rely
ri LAHY
verb
to depend on You can rely on me to or put trust in pay you back in two weeks’ time.
remain
ri MEYN
verb
to stay in the same position or state
If I remain at this job for another year, I will be eligible for a signifi cant pay raise.
continue; last
require
ri KWAHY uhr
verb
have need for; demand or insist upon
A medical degree will require many courses of study in the sciences.
necessitate; ask
resistant
ri ZIS tuhnt
adjective
being opposed The child was resistant to naptime. to or against something
result
ri ZUHLT
noun
the outcome of an action or course of events
One result of the stock market crash is lower consumer spending.
advise; advocate
depend; trust
contrary; rebellious
consequence; outcome
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
ritual
RICH oo uhl
routes
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
noun
a ceremony or procedure used in a tradition, often religious
One of the rituals of Passover is to abstain from eating bread for the week.
tradition; habit
rootz
noun
roads or ways to travel
The map shows several routes that will take us from Chicago to Detroit.
paths; passages
sake
SEYK
noun
the purpose or reason for something
For the sake of your health, you must quit smoking.
benefit; motive
sense
sens
noun
a mode of perceiving the world; an intuition
Dogs have a very strong sense of smell.
feel; impression
significance
sig NIF i kuhns
noun
the meaning The significance of the or importance computer is apparent of something in every aspect of our lives.
importance; meaning
solution
suh LOO shuhn
noun
the answer to a question or problem
If the physics problem is too hard, you can find the solution at the back of the book.
resolution; explanation
sophisticated
suh FIS ti kay tid
adjective
in possession of worldly knowledge; complex or advanced
It was such sophisticated math that only a skilled mathematician could understand it.
worldly; intricate
specific
spi SIF ik
adjective
clearly defined The doctor gave the or exact patient specific instruc tions to take the medi cation only at night.
definite; particular
speculate
SPEK yuh leyt
verb
to think about or reflect on without neces sary evidence
guess; conjecture
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Since she refuses to answer my questions, we can only speculate as to what her true motives were.
Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
stages
STEYjiz
standards
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
noun
steps in a process
There are many stages involved in becom ing a cop, including basic training and field experience.
degrees; levels
STAN derdz
noun
a level of qual ity by which others are ranked
The school has such low standards that it is virtually impossible to fail.
guidelines; ideals; requirements
subsequent
SUHB si kwuhnt
adjective
occurring after some thing else
following; The defeat of Greece succeeding and its subsequent de cline led to the birth of the Roman Empire.
succeeding
suhk SEE ding
adjective
coming after or following
People today may resent these tax hikes, but succeeding genera tions will thank us for the debt relief.
subsequent; next
sufficient
suh FISH uhnt
adjective
enough for what is needed, but not going beyond that
Fortunately, we found sufficient food for the last remaining days of our camping trip.
adequate; decent
suggest
suhg JEST
verb
to mention, hint, or propose
She was hoping the waiter would suggest a good dish off the menu.
imply; advise
support
suh POHRT
verb
Having known you for to encourage many years, I support or to uphold; to bear weight your decision to run for president. or financial responsibility
promote; help; back up
survive
ser VAHYV
verb
to stay alive
The stranded hikers were able to survive by eating berries and grass for several days.
live; remain; endure
technique
tek NEEK
noun
method of performance; technical skill
The famed chef had a secret technique for making great bread.
approach; procedure
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Word
Pronunciation
Part of Speech
technological
tek nuh LOJ i kuhl
tend
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
adjective
related to science and industry
Technological inno vations such as the vacuum and washing machine have made housework much easier.
industrial; mechanical
tend
verb
to take care of I am happy to tend to or look after your plants while you are away on vacation.
oversee; guard; watch over
topic
TOP ik
noun
a subject of study or dis cussion
The historian’s favorite topic of conversation was the Trojan War.
matter; issue
tradition
truh DISH uhn
noun
a custom or belief that has been handed down throughout history
The Christmas tradi tion involves decorat ing a tree and leaving out cookies for Santa Claus.
convention; practice
traditional
truh DISH uh nuhl
adjective
based on an established custom or convention
In a traditional Italian meal, pasta is always served.
conventional; established
typically
TIP i kuh lee
adverb
conforming to regular behavior
In Seattle, it typically rains every day.
normally; usually
underneath
uhn der NEETH
preposi tion
below
I keep my slippers underneath my bed.
beneath; under
unifying
YOO nuh fahy ing
adjective
tending to Attending sports bring together events can have a or unite unifying effect on a community.
joining; solidifying
unique
yoo NEEK
adjective
one of a kind; having no equal
New York City is a unique place—there is no place like it in the entire world.
unusual; not typical
unpredictable
uhn pri DIK tuh buhl
adjective
unable to be predicted or foreseen
Life as a musician is uncertain; unpredictable—you unreliable never know when you’ll get your next gig.
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Pronunciation
Part of Speech
unusual
uhn YOO zhoo uhl
value
Definition
Sentence
Synonyms
adjective
not ordinary or common
Marge’s blue hair gave her an unusual appearance.
strange; remarkable
VAL yoo
verb
to place importance in; to calculate the monetary worth
Of all the traits that a friend could possess, honesty is the one I value most.
appreciate; prize
varied
VAIR eed
adjective
characterized by many different qualities
People in my school come from varied backgrounds—one student grew up in Kansas, another in Saudi Arabia.
assorted; diverse
vertical
VUR ti kuhl
adjective
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upright; perpendicular
visual
VIZH oo uhl
adjective
pertaining to seeing
The film had great visual effects, such as fireballs and flying people.
observable; viewable
waste
WEYST
verb
to fail to use, or to use for no good reason
We waste electricity every time we leave a lamp on in an unoccupied room.
expend; squander
While the TOEFL does not explicitly test vocabulary, building your vocabulary of English words will help you in many ways. First, it will lessen the chance of seeing or hearing words you don’t know in the Reading or Lis tening sections. Second, it will give you a broader choice of words to use in your Speaking and Writing responses. And third, possibly the most valuable way that learning more vocabulary will help you is to help you to increase your comfort level when communicating with others in English overall.
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ROOT WORDS One of the easiest—and quickest!—ways to build your vocabulary is to learn common roots that are used to form words in the English language. As you may have already guessed, English has “borrowed” from Latin and Greek very heavily over the years. We can see these influences still showing up in our language today. For example, the root “mal,” from Latin, means “bad.” So, if you see the word “malaria,” you may not know that it describes a disease that is transmitted by mosquitos. But you might be able to take a reasonable guess that it has a negative meaning because it has “mal” in the word.
Now, just because you see “mal” in a word doesn’t mean it must mean something bad. For example, “male” certainly doesn’t have a negative meaning. But, when you’re trying to learn a large amount of vocabulary in a reasonably short time (like when you’re preparing for the TOEFL!), learning root words can be a great way to accomplish your goal.
Below you’ll find a list of a large number of Latin and Greek roots. One of the best ways to study them is to create “Root Cards.” (You’ll need a couple packs of 3" x 5" cards for this exer cise, using one card per root word.)
On the front of the card, write the root and its meaning:
‘mal’’means ‘bad
And on the back of the card, write as many words as you can think of that use that root.
malaria malicious malice malignant When you learn a new word, look at the etymology in the dictionary and see if the word uses one of these roots. If it does, add it to your card!
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Then, review your cards every few days (or more frequently) so you can commit the roots and their meanings to memory. Here is a list of many roots that show up in words in English. We’ve also added a few words for each one to get you started.
Master Root List Root
Meaning
Example(s)
ab
away from/negative prefix
abnormal, abnegate
ac/acr
sharp
acute, acrid, acrimonious
ad/at
to, toward
adduct, adhere
amb
go/walk
amble, ambulate
ambi
both/mixed
ambidextrous, ambivalent
ami/amo
love
amicable, amorous
an/anti
against
antifreeze, antibiotic
andr/anthr
human
anthropology, android
anim
life, spirit
animated, animal
ante
before
anteroom, anterior
apt/ept
skill, ability
aptitude, adept
arbo
tree
arbor, arboretum
arch
rule, over
archdiocese, archbishop
aud
sound
audible, audio
auto
self
automatic, autonomous
bell/belli
war
belligerent, bellicose
ben/bono
good
benefit, bonus
bi
two
biannual, bipartisan
bio/bios
life
biology, biography
bra
arm
embrace, bracelet
earn
meat, flesh
carnivore, incarnate
cent
hundred
century, centigrade
chron
time
chronology, chronograph
circ/circu
around
circle, circuit, circumference
cis/cise
cut
incisor, scissor, excise
cli
lean
incline, recliner
clu/clo/cla
close, shut
clasp, closure
co/com/con
with, together
community, cooperate
contr-
against
contradict, contrast
cred
believe
incredible, credibility, credo
culp
blame
culprit, exculpate
cur/cour
run (a course)
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Root
Meaning
Example(s)
de
away from/opposite, of
decline, deny
dec/deci
ten
decade, decimal
dent
teeth
dental, denture
derm
skin
dermatologist, dermatitis
desc
down
descent, descendant
dext
ability
ambidextrous, dexterity
di
two, apart, split
diode, dilute
dic/dict
say, tell
edict, dictionary
dign/dain
worth
dignity, disdain
dis
apart from, not
distant, dissipate
domi
rule over
dominant, domicile
dorm
sleep
dormitory, dormant
duc/dul
lead
duct, conductor
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dys
faulty, bad
dysfunction, dyslexia
e/ex/ej
out, outward
exit, eject, emote
en/em
into
enter, embolden
epi
upon
epicenter, epilogue
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equ/equi
equal
equidistant, equal
esce
becoming
coalesce, evanesce
eu
good, pleasant
euphoria, euphemism
extr
outside, beyond, additional
extraterrestrial, extraneous, extra
fac/fic/fig
do, make
factual, fictional, figurative
fid
faithful
confide, confidential
fort
strong
fortify
fract
break, split
fraction, fracture
frat
brother
fraternal, fraternity
fren
highly energetic
frenzy, frenetic
gen
birth, creation, kind, type
gender, general
geo
earth
geography, geocentric
gno/kno
know
agnostic, knowledge
grand
grandeur, grandiose
graph
big write
grat
grateful
gratitude, ingrate
gress
step
progress, egress
gyn her/hes
female
gynecology, androgynous
stick (on)
cohesive, adhere
herb
plant
herbal, herbicide
hetero
different, mixed
heterogeneous, heterodox
hex/sex
six
hexagon, sextuplet
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graphic, dysgraphia
Root
Meaning
Example(s)
homo
same
homogenous, homophone
hyd/hydr
water
hydrate, hydrant
hyper
over, beyond
hyperactive, hyperventilate
hypo
under, insufficient
hypodermic, hypothermia
il
not
illicit, illegal
im
not, into
impotent (not), imported (into)
in
not, into
incapable (not), internal (into)
inter
between
interstate, interlock
intra
within
intramural
itis
inflammation, infection
arthritis, bronchitis
ium
place, building of
stadium, terrarium
jeu/ju
play, youthful
juvenile, junior
lab/labo
work
labor, laboratory
laud
praise
applaud, laudable
lav
wash
lave, lavish
lev
rise
levitate, elevate
loc/log/loqui
to speak
loquacious
lu/luc/lum
light
luminous, lucid
mag/magna
great
magnificent, magnanimous
mal
bad
malicious, malignant
man/manu
hand
manual, maneuver
mar/mer
sea
marine, mermaid
matr
mother
matron, matriarch
met/meter
measure
metric, thermometer
meta
more, beyond
metaphysics, metaphor
mic/micro
tiny
microscope, microchip
mill
thousand
millimeter, millennium
mis
wrong, bad
mistake, misfortune
mit
send
transmit, emit
mob/mobi
moving
mobilize
mor/mort
death
immortal, mortify
morph
change (shape)
amorphous, morphology
mut
change, alter
mutate, transmute
nat/natu
natural, birth
natural, natal
neg
negative
negate, negligent
neo/nov
new
novel, neonatal
noct
night
nocturnal
nom/nym
name
pseudonym, nominal
non/not
negative prefix
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Root
Meaning
Example(s)
nounce
call
announce, pronounce
nox/nec
harmful
noxious, necrosis
ob
against
obstruct, obnoxious
ology
study of
biology, theology
omni
all, every
omniscient, omnipresent
ory
place of
observatory, directory
pac/pax/plac
peace, pleasing
pacific, placid
pan
all, everywhere
pandemic
par
equal
parity, partner
para
beyond, beside
paranormal, paralegal
path
feeling, emotion
empathy, apathetic
patr
father
patron, paternal
pen/pend
weight
pendulum, penury
pent
five
pentagon
peri
around
periscope, peripheral
pet/pec
small
petite, peckish
phil
love, high regard
philanthropy, oenophile
phob
fear
agoraphobic
phon
sound
phonetic, euphonium
pod/ped
foot
pedal, podiatry
pon/pos
place, put
position, ponder
port
carry
transport, portable
post
after
posterity, posterior
poten
power, influence
potent, potential
pre
before
pre-existing, preclude
pro
for
promote, proponent
prox
near
proximity, approximate
pseudo
false
pseudonym
quad
four
quadriceps, quadrant
qui
quiet
acquiesce, quietude
quint
five
quintuple
re
again
restart, regain
sci/scien
knowledge
science, prescient
scop
see
microscope, telescopic
scrib/scrip
write
script, scribe
sec/sequ
follow, come after
sequence, second
sed/sid
sit, be still
sedate, sidle
solo
alone
solitary, soliloquy
son/soni
sound
sonorous, sonic
Root
Meaning
Example(s)
spec/spic
see, look
spectacle, inspect
sta/sti
still, unmoving
stationary, still
sua
smooth
suave, assuage
sub
under
submarine, suboptimal
super
beyond, greater than
supersonic, superficial
syn/sym
bring together
synonym, symbiotic
tact
touch
tactile, intact
tech/techn
tools
technical, technology
tele
at a distance
telephone, teleport
temp
time
temporary, tempo
ten/tend
hold
tender, attend
ter
earth, ground
terrain, territory
tox
harmful, poisonous
toxic, toxemia
tract
pull
traction, tractor
trans
across
transit, transmit
trep
fear, anxiety
intrepid, trepidation
tri
three
triad, trimester
un
not
uncooperative, uncommon
uni
one
unicorn, united
us/ut
use
utility, useful
val/vale
value, feel
valor, validate
vend
sell
vendor
ver/vera/veri
true
aver, veritable, veracity
verd
green
verdant, verdure
verge
boundary, together
converge
verse
turn
reverse, converse
vi/vit/viv
alive
vital, vivacious
vid/vis
see
visual, video
voc
call, talk
vocation, vocalize
vor
eat, consume
voracious, herbivore
If you find that root words are helping you get a better grasp of English vocabulary, here’s an other exercise that can be incredibly valuable: Word Webs!
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Use the collections of words that we’ve included over the next few pages, like this one:
Synchronize
Chronicle
Anachronism
Amoral
Apathy
Apartheid
Amorphous
Metamorphosis
Sympathy
Empathy
Pathos
Antipathy
Parity
Disparate
Dissociate
Disparity
Disperse
Dissuade
Dissipate
Dignify
Deign
Disdain
Metacognitive
Dismiss
Start with any word right in the middle of your paper. Circle the roots you see in that word:
(TI|)^ar)ate Then, look for another word in the group that uses one of the same roots as the one you started with. Write the new word on your paper, circle its roots, and connect the same roots together with a line:
Continue this process until you have used all of the words in the set! As you go along, make sure to look up the words you don’t recognize so you can connect the root words’ meanings to the meanings of the actual words.
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Word Web #1 Miscreant
Misanthrope
Mistake
Anthropology
Philanthropy
Androgynous
Misogyny
Philosophy
Technophile
Technophobe
Technology
Technique
Substantiate
Subterranean
Subordinate
Terrestrial
Terrarium
Subvert
Advertise
Extrovert
Traverse
Extraterrestrial
Extrapolate
Supervise
Superimpose
Supersede
Sediment
Sedate
Subside
Subservient
Introvert
Voracious
Devour
Carnivorous
Carnage
Incarceration
Infiltrate
Input
Inject
Ingratiate
Incarnate
Intractable
Protract
Tractor
Antecedent
Antebellum
Rebel
Belligerent
Bellicose
Enamored
Amorous
Amity
Amicable
Innate
Nascent
Naive
Natal
Native
Renaissance
Omnivorous
Omniscient
Omnipotent
Potential
Potent
Potentate
Prescience
Preface
Prefix
Predestine
Word Web #2
Word Web #3
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Part III Cracking Each Section of the TOEFL 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18
Cracking the Reading Section Reading Practice Drills Reading Practice Answers and Explanations Cracking the Listening Section Listening Practice Drills Listening Practice Answers and Explanations Cracking the Speaking Section Speaking Practice Drills Speaking Practice Answers and Explanations Cracking the Writing Section Writing Practice Drills Writing Practice Answers and Explanations
Chapter 7 Cracking the Reading Section
The TOEFL Reading section consists of these elements: Three to four passages, each approximately 700 words long
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Each passage is followed by about 12 to 14 questions. You will have 60 to 80 minutes to complete the entire section.
As mentioned in the introduction, many of the questions are multiple choice and worth one point each, but some questions are worth two or more points. Typically, questions that are worth more appear at the end of the section. Some of the words and phrases in the reading passages are underlined in blue on the screen; if you click on these phrases, a definition is provided. You can see what the screen will look like in the picture on the opposite page. In this case, if you click on the words uranium isotope or moniker, you will see a definition of the word in question. You’ll also notice that some of the words appear in gray boxes. These words have a special type of question associated with them, which we’ll look at soon. During the actual test, some very difficult
words will appear
underlined in the reading passages. The TOEFL will give you
a definition of these
words, so don't worry when you see them!
Remember, if you prefer, you are free to skip questions within this section; simply click on the “Next” button on the top right-hand side of the screen. You can return to questions you’ve skipped when you are ready. You can also click the “Review’ button to see a display of all the questions you’ve answered and all those you’ve left blank. From this screen, you can return to any question. As we mentioned in the early part of this book, the Reading scores are subdivided into three sections:
High (22-30). Students who score in the “High” range are usually comfortable reading con tent that covers a wide range of difficulty. These students usually have a strong command of vocabulary and grammar, and can make inferences easily from the text.
Medium (15-21). Students who score in the “Medium” range are comfortable reading English texts, but sometimes have difficulty with higher-level vocabulary or more complex sentence structures. Generally, their ability to understand is sufficient in most texts, but these students may find harder texts challenging. Low (0-14). Scores in the “Low” range indicate a limited ability to understand academic texts. Students in this range have a basic command of vocabulary, and have diffi culty understanding concepts like main idea and author’s purpose in more complex texts. Use your active reading skills and tackle the passage below.
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Although Otto Hahn and Fritz Strassmann discovered the process of nuclear fission in 1938, it took another year for scientists to truly 5 understand the process. During this process, a uranium isotope is split by firing neutrons at it. When the neutron strikes the isotope, it ejects neutrons of its own, which in turn strike other 10 uranium atoms. This sets off a chain reaction, with each split atom causing another atom to break up as well. When controlled, this type of chain reaction can be harnessed to produce useful 15 nuclear energy. But if the reaction is not controlled, the result is far more devastating: a nuclear explosion. Shortly after the discovery of the 20 potential destructiveness of nuclear power, President Franklin Roosevelt set up a committee to investigate the feasibility of a nuclear weapon. Although initial progress was slow, the 25 program was reorganized in 1942 under the moniker the Manhattan Engineer District, or simply the Manhattan Project. The project was headed by Robert Oppenheimer and was 30 authorized to call on the full resources of the government and military to achieve its goal.
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CRACKING THE READING SECTION: BASIC PRINCIPLES Basic Principle #1: It's in There! The first and most important principle of the Reading section is a simple one.
The answer to every single question is found in the passage!
That’s right. The answer to each question is right there in front of you. This principle is simple enough, but it is one that is often either forgotten or misunderstood by test takers. On the TOEFL Reading section, you are not expected to give your interpretation of what you’ve read. You are not required to analyze what you’ve read. All you’re asked to do is simply find the best answer to the question in the passage or, in some cases, infer what must be true based on information provided in the passage.
Of course, this is very different from what you are used to doing in a more academic setting. The Reading section can be difficult for test takers who think too much beyond what is written in the passage. When completing the reading exercises in this book, pay careful attention to the approach used and the explanation for why the correct answer is correct.
Basic Principle #2: The Two-Pass System Time is one of the largest barriers to your success on the TOEFL Reading section. You have 60-80 minutes to read 3-4 passages and complete 36-56 questions. And although the majority of the questions are worth one point each, the questions are not equally difficult. Some question types require little time to answer and are inherently easier, whereas others will take more time or are more difficult. This is where the two-pass system comes in. In the first pass, knock out the questions that come easily to you—the ones for which you know that you know the correct answer. Then, in the second pass, tackle the more challenging questions. This way you tally up points easily to start, then spend time on more challenging questions. Because your only goal is to get as many points as possible, it makes no sense to spend time on difficult questions when an easier question may be a click away. When we discuss the question types later in this chapter, we’ll let you know which types tend to be easier. In addition, as you practice, you’ll get a feel for the types of questions you can do most quickly. Make sure to seek these questions out. Do them first and save the killer questions for later.
Basic Principle #3: Process of Elimination POE: Part I Even though the right answer is found somewhere in the text, the TOEFL Reading section is still very difficult. Why? Because the other answer choices are often very tempting. Many ques tions include trap answers—answer choices that look correct but are actually incorrect.
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To do well on the Reading section, you must use Process of Elimination, or POE. Simply put, POE involves comparing answer choices and finding reasons to eliminate one or more. POE requires you to be aggressive and get rid of many of the answer choices! Because the majority of the questions have only four choices, eliminating even one answer greatly increases your odds of getting a question correct if you are forced to guess. When using POE, make sure you ex amine each answer choice carefully. Never blindly pick the first answer that stands out or seems good, because it may be a trap!
Let’s look at a sample question and see an example of how to use POE. On the test, you won’t see the answer choices as letters, but we’ll use them in this book to make the explanations clearer.
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The word feasibility as used in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
appropriateness reasonableness possibility viability
This question is based on an earlier reading passage, but that is actually not important right now. We are concerned only with the answer choices. When using POE, use your scratch paper to write “a,” “b,” “c,” “d,” and then make a mark next to each answer, based on your impression of it. Some possibilities are listed below.
Symbol
Meaning
Good or okay answer /V
Weak answer
?
Unknown answer
zz
Best answer
X
Bad answer
Don’t waste time writing down the whole question and complete answer choices. We have copied the whole question here for purposes of illustrating our point. On the actual test, you should try to write down a paraphrased version of the question and answer choices. For the example above, we may mark our scrap paper in the following way:
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1. The word feasibility as used in the passage is closest in meaning to X ~ V ?
a. b. c. d.
appropriateness reasonableness possibility viability
So in this case, even if we can’t decide which answer is the “best” one, we can see that one of the choices is definitely out. And because we like the third answer, we may as well eliminate the “weak” answer too. That leaves us with the third and fourth answer choices. In this case, the third choice looks okay, whereas the fourth choice is a bit of a mystery.
On the TOEFL, there will be times when you’re unsure of a choice. The answer may contain difficult vocabulary words or be hard to follow. Never eliminate an answer just because you don’t understand it. Instead, mark it as “unknown,” and check the other choices. If the re maining choices are no good, then the “unknown” choice must be correct. If one of the other choices seems more likely, then go with that one.
We’ll talk more about what to do when you are stuck or down to two choices when we look at the different question types.
POE: Part II The second part of POE is the ability to recognize the types of wrong answers found on the TOEFL. The wrong answers have to be tempting enough for you to want to pick them, but not right enough to be the best answer. In general, the wrong answers on the TOEFL Reading sec tion fall into one of the following categories:
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Not mentioned: This category consists of information that is not found in the passage. Often, the answer makes common sense or may be true in the real world. However, on the TOEFL, every correct answer must be found in the passage. Extreme: These answer choices use wording that is too strong or absolute. These choices usually include words such as all, always, impossible, must, never, or none. Correct answers on the TOEFL usually do not contain such strong language. Right answer, wrong question: These choices contain information that is men tioned in the passage; however, the information doesn’t answer the question. Verbatim: Many wrong answers repeat parts of the passage word for word. Unfortunately, the choices use these words in the wrong context or incorrectly. These answers can be especially tempting. Beyond the information: Choices in this category are based on information in the passage, but they go beyond the given information, meaning that they give more information than the passage provides. For example, if the passage states “some species of chimpanzees make crude tools out of branches,” the answer choice may read “many animals can make tools.” This answer goes beyond the information by changing “some species of chimpanzees” to “many animals.”
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answers Also, while you are practicing, identify and note why certain answers are wrong. Make sure to mark each wrong answer with one of the five categories we discussed in POE: Part II.
CRACKING THE READING SECTION: BASIC APPROACH When approaching the Reading section of the TOEFL, follow these steps.
1. 2. 3. 4.
Actively read the passage, looking for the purpose, structure, and main idea. Attack the questions based on question type. Find the answer to the question in the passage. Use POE to eliminate bad answers.
Let’s look at each of these steps in greater detail.
Step 1: Actively Read the Passage One of the biggest mistakes you can make on the TOEFL is to attempt to read and understand every single word of the passage. There are many problems with this approach. One is that you simply do not have enough time to read the entire passage and accurately answer all of the questions. A second problem is that there is far more information in the passage than you will ever need to know to answer the questions. The more of the passage that you read, the more likely you are to become confused or distracted. Finally, remember that you get points for answering questions, not reading passages. You want to spend your time answering questions and earning points, not reading.
Instead of reading the entire passage, use the active reading strategies described in Core Concept: Reading. Don’t spend too much time on this step, and don’t try to understand all the details in the passage. Read the passage, looking for the following major points:
1. 2. 3.
The purpose The structure The main idea
Here’s a passage similar to one you would find on the TOEFL. It should look familiar to you. We used it to introduce you to the look of the test in Chapter 1. Take a few moments to actively read it.
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There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell).
-> Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases. Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases their combined strength. The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle
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hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue-green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat.
Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses.
On the TOEFL, you will see that paragraphs referred to in the questions are marked by a -> this will help you quickly locate the paragraphs. You may see black squares ■ in the passage, and some of the words will be shaded in gray, whereas others will be underlined. Try not to be distracted by these symbols, words, and phrases—there will be questions about them later, but don’t get bogged down by them while you’re reading.
Now that you’ve had a minute to look over this passage, state the main idea. What is the au thor’s purpose, and how is the passage structured?
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For this passage, the main idea is “arthropods have a tough outer shell that protects them and provides them with other advantages.” The structure is fairly typical, with each of the body paragraphs describing some aspect of the shell. The first body paragraph describes the shell itself. The second paragraph tells you the composition of the shell. The third and fourth para graphs tell you the pros and cons of the shell. The last paragraph presents a disadvantage of the shell. Putting this all together, the author’s purpose is “to inform.” If you had trouble coming up with these answers, be sure to review Chapter 2, Core Concept: Reading.
Step 2: Attack the Questions After actively reading the passage, go to the questions. The questions on the TOEFL come in a few different varieties. Most of the questions are multiple choice, as shown below.
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Why is an arthropod vulnerable after molting? a. b. c. d.
It is far from sources of water. It is more visible to predators. Its shell is soft. The loss of energy makes it weak.
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Other questions require you to click on part of the passage. These questions look like the following:
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Look at the four squares [■] in the passage. Where would the following sentence best fit in the passage? Click on the [■] to add the sentence to the passage.
For these questions, you’ll have to go back to the passage and click on one of the squares to answer it. Other questions of this variety may ask you to click on a word or phrase. The final type of question is multiple-multiple-choice questions. These questions require you to choose several correct answers.
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A brief summary of the passage is provided below. Click on the THREE sentences that best complete the summary. Some sentences are not part of the summary because they do not express the main idea. This question is worth 2 points.
These questions are followed by several sentences. Use the mouse to drag the sentences you se lect into the summary box. You can remove one of your choices by clicking on it again.
In general, the multiple-choice questions are the easiest. You should do them on your first pass. The summary questions—the multiple-multiple-choice ones—take the longest, so save them for last. (They usually turn up at the end anyway.) The passage-based questions fall somewhere in between these two.
Question Types The questions on the Reading section of the TOEFL can be grouped into several different categories. Each question requires its own strategy, but remember that for each question, the answer is somewhere in the passage. Also, some questions are much more common than others, so you may not see all of the following types when you take the TOEFL. The question types on the TOEFL are as follows:
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Vocabulary in context: These are some of the most common questions on the TOEFL. You may be asked the meaning of a word or phrase. These questions are some of the easiest, so do them on your first pass. Reference: These questions usually ask you what noun a pronoun connects to, though sometimes they may ask you about a noun, adverb, or adjective. Because these questions also direct you to a certain point in the passage, do these on your first pass. Lead words: Some questions refer to a word highlighted in gray in the passage. Other questions may ask about a specific word or phrase, even if there is nothing highlighted in the passage. Also do these on your first pass. Detail: Often the easiest type of question, detail questions ask about specific facts from the passage. Again, get these questions done on your first pass.
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Paraphrase: Paraphrase questions ask you to find the answer choice that means the same as a bolded sentence in the passage. Definition: This type of question asks you to find the part of the passage that defines a certain word or phrase. Before/after: These questions are rare. They ask you what kind of paragraph would likely precede or follow the passage. Sentence insertion: For this type of question, you’ll see four black squares [■] placed throughout the passage. Your job is to figure out in which of these spots a given new sentence would best fit. EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST: These questions can be some of the most difficult on the test so save them for the second pass. For these, you are looking for the answer that is not supported by the passage. EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST questions also tend to take longer to answer than most multiple-choice questions. Inference: This popular question type can be one of the trickiest types; therefore, you should save these questions for the second pass. Inference questions ask you to find the statement that is implied or suggested by the passage. Remember, the TOEFL uses a narrow interpretation of inference, and correct responses to these questions must be true based on the information provided in the passage. Summary: Typically worth two points, these questions ask you to find main points and ideas from the passage. Because they require some knowledge of the passage, do them on your second pass after you have had a chance to become familiar with the material.
Familiarize yourself with this list. As you’ll see, being able to recognize the question types will aid you in both your approach to finding the answer and your POE strategy.
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Step 3: Find the Answer in the Passage and Use POE As we’ve stated before—and it cannot be emphasized enough—the correct answer to each Reading question is always found in the passage. The trick on the TOEFL is, of course, finding that answer in an efficient manner. Fortunately, each question provides a clue, or hint, as to where we need to look for our answer. Here is our general system for dealing with questions on the TOEFL.
Read and rephrase the question. You’ll notice that many questions on the TOEFL are not written in a straightforward manner. Before you head back to the passage to find the answer, make sure you understand what the question is asking you to find. 2. Go back to the passage and find the answer. The question will direct you to the appropriate part of the passage. Go back to the passage and read enough lines (about 6) to get the context of the text. Essentially, you are looking for a “window” in the passage where the answer will be. Never answer a question from memory alone because you’re more likely to fall for a trap answer. Answer in your own words first. This is the most important step of all. After returning to the passage and reading the appropriate part of it, you should be able to answer the question in your own words. If you can’t, you may be reading the wrong part of the passage or you may need to read more lines. If you are having a hard time doing this in the beginning, don’t worry. Keep practicing it! Use POE. Once you have an idea of the type of answer for which you’re looking, return to the question and use POE. 1.
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PUTTING IT ALL TOGETHER Now, let’s return to our earlier passage and work through the questions, one of each type. We’ll go through the steps and talk about the best way to find the correct response. Then you can try the process on your own with the drills at the end of the chapter.
The Exoskeleton of the Arthropod There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type 5 share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell).
Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod 10 information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from
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potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases. 15 Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases their 20 combined strength.
The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear. Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. As 25 the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. 30 Though strong, the chitin and protein exocuticle itself would provide a poor barrier against moisture loss. Therefore, it must be coated with lipids, which are also secreted by the epidermis. These lipids, mostly fatty acids and waxes, form the third, outermost layer of the shell. They spread over the 35 cuticles to form a waterproof seal even in dry weather. This lipid layer gives many arthropods their distinctive luster. Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. The external shell has other advantages. One 40 is that, because it has far more surface area than the internal skeleton found in vertebrates, it provides more points at which muscles can be attached. This increased number of muscles permits many arthropods to be stronger and more agile for their body size than birds or mammals. The coloration and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial as well. Many species 45 of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline. The hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue-green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat. 50 Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, 55 gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or 60 water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses.
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Remember, before going to the questions, take a moment to identify the main idea, purpose, and general structure. But don’t spend too much time doing this (no more than two minutes)! If you’re having trouble finding the main idea or purpose, go to the questions. Ready? Don't forget to pick up your copy of TOEFL
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Question Type #1: Vocabulary in Context Questions Here’s our first question.
The word occasion in the passage is closest in meaning to
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multiply cause demonstrate limit
First, identify the question type. This is a vocabulary in context question, one of the most common and easy question types on the TOEFL. You can identify them because they ask for the meaning or definition of a word, typically shaded in gray, in the passage. Let’s look at this type in more detail.
Now that we’ve identified what type of question it is, let’s rephrase the question to make sure we know what it’s asking. Generally, when rephrasing, try to rethink the question using the words what or why. For example, this question is basically asking us:
What does the word occasion mean in the passage? You may want to jot down your rephrased version of the question on your scrap paper. Even if you don’t, it is important to make sure you know exactly what it is you’re looking for when you return to the passage.
For a vocabulary in context question, we’ll first go back to the passage and read a few lines be fore and after the word in question.
There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell).
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Next look at the word in question and try to replace it with your own word. Usually, the sen tence itself or the surrounding sentences should give you a clue as to the meaning of the word. In this case, the line says that the “fact should not_____ surprise.” Look at the first sentence, which tells us that there are “more arthropods alive.. .than there are members of any other phy lum.” And after that, the passage states that “given that...are arthropods.” Grammar point! When
The context clues are that there a lot of these arthropods and that we shouldn’t be sur prised. So when answering in your own words, you may think that occasion means to “cause” or “lead to.” Once we’ve come up with our own answer, we can return to the choices and use POE. We need a word that means “lead to” or “cause.” Be sure to ask yourself “Who or what is the sentence talking about? What is it saying?”
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Let’s evaluate our choices.
Does (A) mean “lead to” or “cause”? No. Multiply means to increase the amount of something. Cross it out. Choice (B) is cause, which is exactly what we’re looking for. Keep it. Even though (B) looks good, we should check the other answer choices. On the TOEFL, it’s better to be safe than sorry. Choice (C) doesn’t look like a good fit—demonstrate means “to show” or “present.” And (D) doesn’t work either. Limit means “to confine” or “restrict.” So it looks like (B) is the best answer. Give it another shot with the following question:
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The word excited in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
stimulated attracted captured enthused
This question means “What does the word excited mean in the passage?” Go back to the pas sage, find the word excited, and read a few lines before and after it.
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The coloration and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial as well. Many species of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline. The hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat. Remember, we must always try to answer in our own words first. Look at the sentences before and after and find the context. The sentence says “The hyaline is_______ by ultraviolet radia tion, so these scorpions glow....” The next sentence also mentions the glow of the scorpion. In our own words, we may say that excited means “to make glow.” Now, let’s go back to the answer choices.
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Choice (A) is stimulated. Could that mean “cause to glow”? Perhaps. Let’s leave it for now. How about (B)—attracted). Attracted means “to be drawn to.” Eliminate it. Captured means “to be seized or taken.” So (C) is not what we’re looking for. All we have left is (D). Enthused does mean “to be excited,” but be careful! This is a trap answer. On many vocabulary in context questions, one of the wrong choices will be a dictionary definition of the word in question. Make sure the definition works in context. Remember, the right answer is always based on the passage. In context, it doesn’t make sense to say that “hyaline is enthused by ultraviolet radiation.” Therefore, eliminate (D). And keep (A) as our answer.
POE Strategies for Vocabulary in Context Questions The previous questions may have been easy for you, or they may have been fairly difficult. If they were easy, chances are you were comfortable with the words. If you had a hard time, you probably didn’t know all the words. Even if you don’t know all of the words in a vocabulary in context question, there are still some steps you can take to help increase your chances of getting the question correct. Let’s look at the POE strategies we can use to answer this next question.
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These give the arthropod information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases. A few things may affect your ability to answer this question. First, you may have trouble mak ing sense of the lines in the passage. Second, you may not be confident about each of the words in the answer choices. In either of these cases, your strategy is the same. Pick a word from the answers with which you are familiar. Let’s start with “frequent,” which means “happening often.” If this is the correct answer, there should be a word or phrase in these lines that means something similar to “hap pening often.” However, none of the words in the passage has anything to do with “frequent” or “happening often.” Therefore, we can eliminate (A).
You can repeat this strategy for the other words with which you are confident. As we’ve said before, the right answer is supported by the passage. You should be able to match your answer to a word or phrase from the passage. If you can’t, it’s not the right answer. For this question, the correct answer is (B). The sentence tells us that the “shell protects...or gans....” Therefore, “hazardous” must mean “something to protect against.” Neither (C) nor (D) is close to this meaning.
Vocabulary in Context Questions Summary For vocabulary in context questions, do the following: 1. 2. 3.
Go back to the passage and read a few lines before and after the word in question. Come up with your own word for the shaded word based on the clues in the sentences. Return to the answer choices and eliminate any choices that • are not supported by any words or phrases from the passage; and • are dictionary definitions of the word, but are incorrect in the context of the passage.
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Question Type #2: Reference Questions Now let’s move on to the next type of question.
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The phrase This arrangement in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
the low number of joints on an arthropod the absence of the exocuticle on certain parts of the body the toughness of the exocuticle the composition of the lipid coating
This question looks similar to a vocabulary in context question. The difference, however, is that this question asks us not what the phrase means, but what it refers to. If we rephrase the ques tion, it would look something like this:
What does the phrase This arrangement refer to?
This type of question is called a reference question. Our strategy for solving reference questions is similar to that for vocabulary in context questions. For reference questions, however, we want to focus on the lines before the phrase or word because the reference cannot be after the phrase. Here are the lines we need to work with.
As the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. For a reference question, it is important to understand how authors use phrases in their writing to mean certain things. An author must fully explain a concept before he or she can then refer to that idea with a shorthand such as “this arrangement.” Otherwise, the reader will have no idea what the author is writing about.
Thus, for a reference question, find the noun that appears before the reference. Look at the sen tence before the reference.
There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. The answer to our question should be found in this sentence. What’s the noun in this sentence? The most specific one is points on the body where it does notform. This is probably the one we’re looking for. Let’s return to the answer choices and use POE.
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The phrase This arrangement in the passage refers to
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the low number of joints on an arthropod the absence of the exocuticle on certain parts of the body the toughness of the exocuticle the composition of the lipid coating
Were looking for an answer that is close to points on the body where it does not form. By the way, because were using POE, we are not especially concerned about what the thing is that we are looking for. Were just seeking to locate the item that “this arrangement” is shorthand for. Were also not going to worry about fancy terms such as exocuticle. So, let’s look at the answer choices. Start with (A). This choice mentions the low number ofjoints. Not what we’re look ing for at all. Choice (B) seems to match. It mentions the absence...on certain parts ofthe body. Notice how that answer is very similar to “points on the body where it does notform” Still, check the remaining choices as well. Choice (C) may seem tempting, but notice that the toughness is mentioned not in the sentence before the shaded phrase, but two sentences away. It is very rare for an author to place the referent so far away from the shorthand reference. Therefore, eliminate this choice. Finally we come to (D). Notice that (D) mentions the lipid coating. The lipids don’t show up until after the phrase, so (D) cannot be correct. Therefore, (B) is the best answer.
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Question Type #3: Lead Word Questions Here is the next question type.
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Our first task is to rephrase the question. Remember to try to use “what” or “why.” For this question, our rephrasing may say
Why is the exocuticle strong? We call this a lead word question. A question of this sort has a word or phrase that will lead you to the right answer. For lead words, pick the most specific part of the question. Your lead word should also be something that you will have an easy time spotting in the passage. For this ques tion, our lead word is exocuticle. It’s easy to find in the passage, and it’s the most specific part of the question. Once we find the lead word, we’ll read a few lines before and after it.
Here’s the text on which we need to focus.
With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. When looking for lead words, there are a couple of things to keep in mind. First, the questions are arranged in a rough chronological order. That means the early questions will refer to earlier parts of the passage, whereas later questions refer to later parts. Use the question number to give yourself a rough idea of where to look for the lead word.
Second, when looking for lead words, always look for the first instance of the word. Some words may show up more than once in the passage. Start with the first word. If you are unable to answer the question in your own words, move on to the next mention of the lead word. In this case, it looks like we’re in the right section of the passage. Answer the question in your own words first. According to the passage, the exocuticle is “durable” because “its molecules” are “bonded so tightly.” This appears to be what we need. Let’s look at the question again.
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The layer of the shell called the exocuticle is strong because
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its molecules are closely bonded it is drier than the endocuticle its fibers are parallel it is water-resistant
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Choice (A) seems to match very nicely. Still, we should check the remaining choices. Choice (B) states the reason the exocuticle is strong is because it is drier than the endocuticle. This is not stated in the passage, so it must be wrong. Choice (C) states that the exocuticle’s strength is due to parallel fibers. This is a trap answer. According to the passage, the endocuticle has parallel fibers. If you fell for this choice, you probably tried to answer from memory. Always return to the passage to verify your answer.
The same reasoning applies to (D). According to the passage, it is the lipids that are water-resistant, not the exocuticle.
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Why is the large surface area of the exoskeleton an advantage?
a. b. c. d.
More water can be retained. More detailed coloration and markings are possible. It can accommodate a long period of growth. Many muscles can be attached.
This question is phrased in a straightforward manner, so we don’t need to rephrase it. We do, however, have to pick our lead word. Which word or words from this question do you think would be easiest to spot? You may be tempted to pick exoskeleton. However, this is where our initial active reading of the passage comes in handy. Because the entire passage is about the shell, we may find numerous references to the exoskeleton. So let’s use even more specific lead words—large surface area. Of course, you can probably still get the question correct if you use exoskeleton as your lead word. Note that this is question 7, so we should look toward the end of the passage for our answer.
Did you find it? Here are the lines with which we need to work.
The external shell has other advantages. One is that, because it has far more surface area than the internal skeleton found in vertebrates, it provides more points at which muscles can be attached. This increased number of muscles permits many arthropods to be stronger and more agile for their body size than birds or mammals. From these lines, it appears that the “large surface area...provides more points at which muscles can be attached.” That looks like our answer. Let’s use POE.
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Question Type #4: Detail Questions Now let’s look at a question type that is fairly similar to the lead word questions.
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According to paragraph 2 of the passage, an arthropod’s shell is similar to human hair and fingernails in that
a. b. c. d.
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This question is very similar to a lead word question. However, this question is actually a little easier because the question tells us exactly where to look. We call this a detail question. It asks us to retrieve a fact or detail from a specific part of the passage. Rephrase the question first. How is the arthropod’s shell similar to human hair and fingernails?
We know the answer is somewhere in paragraph 2, so all we have to do is read paragraph 2 until we find the answer to our question. Remember to know what you’re looking for before you start to read; if the lines you’re reading aren’t about “human hair and fingernails,” skim through them. Don’t waste time reading if what you read won’t answer the question! Here are the lines that refer to “human hair and fingernails.”
-> Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. If we answer in our own words, it looks as if the shell is “made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails.” This is the answer we need. Let’s review the choices again. •
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Choice (A) is a trap. If you read carefully, the passage doesn’t say that human hair and fingernails have sensory cells; only the shell does. Choice (B) is not mentioned in this part of the passage at all. Choice (C) matches our answer, so let’s keep it. Finally, (D) is also not mentioned at all in this part of the passage. Choice (C) is the best answer.
POE Strategies for Lead Word and Detail Questions You may have noticed that some of the wrong answers on lead word and detail questions con tain words or phrases found throughout the passage. There are a couple of reasons for this. First, if you are trying to answer the question from memory, you are likely to pick one of these choices because it contains words or phrases you may remember having read. Second, on the TOEFL, it is actually a disadvantage to try to read and understand everything in the passage.
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But many students still try to comprehend everything. This makes them more likely to become confused about what they’ve read and choose one of these trap answers.
Thus, on lead word and detail questions, you should focus on only a small part of the passage, no more than six to eight lines. Try to match words or phrases from the answer choices with the lines that you are studying. Eliminate any choices that •
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contain words or phrases not mentioned in the lines close to the lead word or detail mention words or phrases that show up in the passage, but are beyond the six- to eight-line range
On the TOEFL, the correct answers to lead word and detail questions are generally within four to six lines of the lead word or detail, so if you’re stuck, these are safe guidelines to follow.
Quick Review: Vocabulary in Context, Reference, Lead Word, and Detail Questions These questions tend to be easier than the others. Make sure you find and do all of these ques tions in your first pass. As you may have noticed, there is a pattern. In each case, the question referred us to a specific part of the passage. The answer to the question was found within four to five lines of the part of the passage referred to in the question. Thus, let’s summarize our strategy: 1. 2. 3. 4.
Rephrase the question. Use clues in the question to find the appropriate place in the passage. Read a few lines before and after the lead word or reference. State the answer to the question in your own words.
The wrong answers to these questions also follow a very similar pattern. Make sure to eliminate answers that are
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not mentioned in the passage at all mentioned in the passage, but beyond the specific lines needed to answer the question
Let’s continue our discussion of question types. Here’s our passage again.
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The Exoskeleton of the Arthropod
There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type 5 share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell). Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod
10 information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases. 15 Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases 20 their combined strength.
The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear. Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. As 25 the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. 30 Though strong, the chitin and protein exocuticle itself would provide a poor barrier against moisture loss. Therefore, it must be coated with lipids, which are also secreted by the epidermis. These lipids, mostly fatty acids and waxes, form the third, outermost layer of the shell. They spread over the 35 cuticles to form a waterproof seal even in dry weather. This lipid layer gives many arthropods their distinctive luster. Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. The external shell has other advantages.
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Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, 55 gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or 60 water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses.
Question Type #5: Paraphrase Questions Our next group of questions deals with the passage and its structure. Here’s one example.
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Which of the following choices best expresses the essential meaning of the highlighted sentences in paragraph 7? Incorrect choices will change the meaning or leave out important details. a. b.
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Arthropods are vulnerable to predators only during the period in which their shell is tender and easily penetrated. Predators typically prefer to eat arthropods that are waiting for their new coats to harden. While the arthropod’s shell is hardening, the arthropod cannot rely on its shell to protect it from predators. When the arthropod’s defenses are lowered, it will use many different strategies to avoid predators.
This type of question is a paraphrase question. We usually won’t have to rephrase these ques tions. Instead, we have to worry more about rephrasing the shaded portion of the passage. Let’s take a look at the lines in question.
But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses. When paraphrasing, you need to find the essential information. Thus, trim the fat. Get rid of unnecessary modifiers and descriptive phrases (remember, modifiers and descriptive phrases simply tell you more information about the subject). Look for the subject and the main verb of the sentence or sentences in question. For example, let’s break down the sentences into their most basic parts.
See our section on "Trim the fat!" on page 86.
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But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated.
The subject here is new coat, and the important thing about it is that it’s tender and easily pen etrated. Cut out the phrase but until it hardens, which is a modifier.
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Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding.
The subject of this sentence is arthropod, and the verb is must remain in hiding. Cut the rest.
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Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses.
The important parts here are it (the arthropod) risks being snapped up by a predator.
Now, our job is to find the answer choice that contains these elements and these elements only. Here are the choices again.
a.
b. c.
d.
Arthropods are vulnerable to predators only during the period in which their shell is tender and easily penetrated. Predators typically prefer to eat arthropods that are waiting for their new coats to harden. While the arthropod’s shell is hardening, the arthropod cannot rely on its shell to protect it from predators. When the arthropod’s defenses are lowered, it will use many different strategies to avoid predators.
Let’s consider each choice.
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Start with (A). It does mention arthropods and predators, which is good. How ever, we are missing some information. There is no mention of hiding, one of our key elements. Also, (A) states that arthropods are “vulnerable...only during this period....” That is beyond the information in the passage. Eliminate (A). Choice (B) is problematic because it makes predators the subject. We should have something that talks about arthropods. Eliminate this choice. Now look at (C). It first mentions the weakened shell, which matches with sentence 1. Next, it says the arthropod “cannot rely on its shell.” At first this doesn’t seem to match, but sentence 2 stated that the creature “must remain in hiding”—this is an example of “not relying on its shell.” Finally, the choice men tions the predators from sentence 3. Everything matches, so keep this choice. Choice (D) is close, but it has one big problem.. It mentions “many different strate gies,” whereas the passage mentions only one. We don’t want any choice that adds information, so eliminate (D). That leaves (C) as the best answer.
POE Strategies for Paraphrase Questions If you’re having trouble paraphrasing the sentence in question, the easiest POE strategy is to eliminate any answers that introduce new information. These choices will always be wrong. Another good strategy is to try to identify the subject of the sentence. One of the choices will usually have a different subject. Eliminate this choice.
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Question Type #6: Definition Questions Let’s look at another type of question.
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Click on the highlighted sentence in the passage in which the author gives a definition.
This is a definition question. Once again, we don’t have to rephrase this type of question. Go to the passage and look for the four sentences in boldface. Here they are.
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3.
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These give the arthropod information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. Many species of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline.
We need to paraphrase each one, looking for the sentence that clarifies the meaning of a word or phrase. Unfortunately, these questions are mostly based on your comprehension. If you are comfortable with the words in the sentences, then go ahead and answer the question. If you are having trouble understanding the sentences, skip the question. In Core Concept: Reading, we discussed “trimming the fat”—cutting out the nonessential information from the sentence. In a definition question, the definition will usually turn up in the “fat” part of the sentence. Thus, we need to separate the sentence into its different parts and examine them. For definition questions, follow the procedure below.
1. 2. 3.
Find the subject, verb, and object. Look at the other parts of the sentence. See if the remaining parts define or clarify the subject, verb, or object.
For example, in sentence 1, the subject is These, and the main verb is give. The object is informa tion. So, the sentence basically reads: These give information. Now, examine the remaining parts of the sentence. First, we have the phrase the arthropod— does this define anything from the basic sentence? No. It only clarifies what is receiving the in formation. The next phrase is about its surroundings. This is not a definition; it is a prepositional phrase. The final part is “much as the nerve endings in human skin do.” Does this refer back to the main sentence, defining something from it? No, it does not. Instead, it makes a comparison. Eliminate this choice.
Do the same for the second sentence. The second sentence breaks down as follows: Its compo nent is chitin.
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The first word we cut out was primary. This is an adjective, a modifier. It doesn’t define any thing. The rest of the sentence states “a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood.” Could this define one of the terms from the main sentence? In fact, it does. It provides a definition of chitin. Thus, this is our answer.
POE Strategies for Definition Questions As stated previously, your success on definition questions will be largely based on your comfort level with the sentences. If you’re having a hard time figuring out the meaning of a sentence, keep the following in mind: Definitions frequently are introduced using the words which, that, or means. Look for sentences in which the author uses these words. Trim away prepositional phrases. These are phrases beginning with words such as of, on, and in. A definition will not be a prepositional phrase. Watch out for sentences that merely list or introduce examples. Remember, you need a phrase that tells you what a word or concept means, not an example of the word or concept.
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Question Type #7: Before/After Questions It’s time to look at yet another type of question.
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The paragraph following the passage would most logically continue with a discussion of a.
b. c. d.
different strategies used by predators to capture arthropods non-arthropods that have protective shells the defense mechanisms of other types of animals adaptations arthropods make to survive during molting
Some questions ask about a hypothetical paragraph before or after the passage; thus, we call these before/after questions (note that before questions are very rare on the TOEFL). First, re phrase the question. What would a paragraph after the passage discuss?
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To answer this type of question, we need to concern ourselves with only the last paragraph. Here it is again.
Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses. Use active reading strategies to figure out the basic meaning of the paragraph. The first sen tence tells us that we will discuss “disadvantages” of the shell. The body of the paragraph pro ceeds to give details about the disadvantages but, once again, we don’t need to worry too much about these details. The author ends the paragraph by discussing how the arthropod is at a disadvantage while its defenses are lowered.
The correct answer to a before/after question will be related to the main idea of the paragraph. In our own words, this final paragraph is about a disadvantage of the shell and the arthropod’s vulnerability.
Now use POE on the answer choices.
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Choice (A) discusses the strategies of predators. But the final paragraph—in fact, the entire passage—is about arthropods. Thus, our answer should also be about arthropods. Eliminate this choice. Choice (B) has the same problem; it discusses non-arthropods, but our paragraph is specifically about arthropods. Thus, (B) is wrong. Choice (C) mentions defense mechanisms, but once again it discusses other ani mals, not arthropods. That means (C) is wrong as well. Finally, we’re left with (D). This choice discusses both arthropods and their de fenses when they lack shells (“adaptations ... during molting”). That is exactly what we need. Choice (D) is our answer.
Let’s try another question of this type.
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13. Which of the following would most likely be the topic of the paragraph before this passage?
a. b. c. d.
A brief discussion of the different phyla of animals A scientific examination of human hair and nails A description of various natural polymers A listing of some common arthropods
This question asks about the paragraph before the passage, so we’ll focus on the first paragraph. Look at the first paragraph, and state its general idea.
There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell). Here, the basic idea is that there are more arthropods than any other type of animal and that all arthropods share two common characteristics. Our answer should somehow lead into this discussion. Let’s go through the answer choices and use POE.
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Choice (A) discusses different phyla of animals. This could be our answer because the first paragraph states that arthropods are more numerous than “any other phy lum.” Choice (A) could be a good introduction to the topic. We’ll leave this choice for now. Choice (B) talks about human hair and nails. This doesn’t match very well with arthropods and their characteristics. Plus, you may have noticed that this topic ap pears in the second paragraph. It wouldn’t make sense to place a paragraph about this subject before the first paragraph. Choice (C) is off topic. Our paragraph is about arthropods, not natural polymers. Eliminate this choice. Choice (D) is appealing, but there is one problem with it. The first paragraph al ready provides a listing of some common arthropods. Thus, it would be repetitive to have a paragraph about this topic preceding the passage. Choice (A) is the best answer.
POE Strategies for Before/After Questions The key to these questions is to stay as close as possible to the main idea of the first or last para graph, depending on whether you are doing a before or an after question. Eliminate answer choices that do the following:
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Introduce new information: The right answer will match the topic of the paragraph. Get rid of any choices that bring in information not mentioned in the paragraph. Interrupt the structure: Make sure the topic in the answer choice doesn’t appear elsewhere in the passage. The ideas in the passage should follow a logical order—don’t return to a topic that’s been discussed previously (as in after questions) or will be discussed later (as in before questions). Repeat information: The correct answer will be based on the paragraph, but will not repeat information that has already been mentioned.
Question Type #8: Sentence Insertion Questions Now we’ll look at another structure-based question. Here’s the passage again, but notice the placement of four black squares (■).
The Exoskeleton of the Arthropod
There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type 5 share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell). Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod 10 information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases.
15 Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases their 20 combined strength. The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear.B Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together.■ As 7. Cracking the Reading Section | 227
25 the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle.H With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable.^ There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. 30 Though strong, the chitin and protein exocuticle itself would provide a poor barrier against moisture loss. Therefore, it must be coated with lipids, which are also secreted by the epidermis. These lipids, mostly fatty acids and waxes, form the third, outermost layer of the shell. They spread over the 35 cuticles to form a waterproof seal even in dry weather. This lipid layer gives many arthropods their distinctive luster.
Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. The external shell has other advantages. One 40 is that, because it has far more surface area than the internal skeleton found in vertebrates, it provides more points at which muscles can be attached. This increased number of muscles permits many arthropods to be stronger and more agile for their body size than birds or mammals. The coloration and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial as well. Many species 45 of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline. The hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue-green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat. 50 Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, 55 gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or 60 water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses. The black squares in the fourth paragraph are used for sentence insertion questions. Here’s an example.
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Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence could be added.
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To answer this type of question correctly, we need to look at the sentences before and after each black square. The correct answer will join these two sentences together by mentioning an idea from each sentence. Here are the sentences before and after the first black square.
The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear. ■ Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. Our task is to try to match the sentence in the question with the ideas in these two sentences. The answer choice mentions a “process.” Does this match with anything in these two sentences? It doesn’t appear to do so. Let’s look at the rest of the sentence in the answer. It also states that the “endocuticle is gradually shifted.” Does this match with the details in these two sentences? Although we can match the word endocuticle, neither of the sentences discusses a “shift.” There fore, we can’t place the sentence here. Now, let’s look at the second pair of sentences:
Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. ■ As the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. Now, we’ll try to match our sentence with ideas from this pair of sentences. We need to find something that corresponds to “this process.” The first sentence in the pair refers to “mol ecules...lock together.” This seems like a process. Next, we want to match up the part of the sentence that talks about the endocuticle gradually shifting. The second sentence in the pair says “as the endocuticle is pushed upward....” This matches nicely with the “gradually shifting” part in the question. This looks like a likely place to add the new sentence.
Check the other two sentence pairs. Here’s the third.
As the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. ■ With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. As we’ve already seen, the first sentence in this pair is a good match for the sentence we have to add. However, the problem is the second sentence in the pair. This sentence mentions the durability of the exocuticle, which doesn’t match with anything in the sentence we have to add. That makes this choice incorrect. Finally, here’s the fourth pair.
With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. ■ There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints.
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In this case, it is clear that this pair of sentences does not match at all. The first sentence refers to the exocuticle, whereas the sentence we need to add is about the endocuticle. Furthermore, the second sentence in the pair is about places where there is no shell because flexibility is needed. These ideas are not part of the sentence we have to add. It looks as if the second black square is the best place to add the sentence, so your answer should look like this.
Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. While this process continues, the endocuticle is gradually shifted. As the endocuticle is pushed up ward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. Keep in mind that when you click the black square on the TOEFL, the sentence will appear in the passage. This will make it easier to look for matches.
POE Strategies for Sentence Insertion Questions Much like other questions in the Reading section of the TOEFL, these questions are all about matching information. The best answer is simply the one that is the closest match to the infor mation in the passage. When doing a sentence insertion question, eliminate choices that don’t match or are only half right.
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Doesn’t match: The sentence you add should form a link between two sentences. If the ideas in the paragraph don’t match the ideas in the added sentence, elimi nate that choice. Half-right: Make sure the added sentence matches ideas with both the sentence before and the sentence after it. Wrong answers often are only partial matches.
We’ve looked at several different question types. Let’s pause for a brief review before we continue.
Quick Review: Paraphrase, Definition, Before/After, and Sentence Insertion Questions All of these question types refer you to a specific part of the passage, which is typically high lighted or marked. So there is no difficulty in figuring out where in the passage the answer lies. The difficulty lies in finding the right answer. In general, when answering questions of this type, focus on the following POE guidelines: •
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Doesn’t match: This is one of the easiest ways to eliminate an answer choice. If the information in the choice doesn’t match the passage, it’s wrong. New information: Be very suspicious of answer choices that introduce new infor mation. These choices are usually wrong. Half-right: Read each choice carefully because wrong answers will typically match only half of the information in the passage or answer choice. Make sure all the information corresponds.
Questions of this type can be a little more challenging than the question types we’ve looked at already. Try these questions only after answering the vocabulary in context, reference, lead word, and detail questions.
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Question Type #9: EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST Questions This type of question tends to be one of the most difficult questions in the Reading section. Let’s look at these questions and figure out how to crack them.
Once again, here’s our practice passage for reference.
The Exoskeleton of the Arthropod
There are more arthropods alive on Earth than there are members of any other phylum of animals. Given that not only insects and spiders but also shrimp, crabs, centipedes, and their numerous relatives are arthropods, this fact should not occasion surprise. For all their diversity, arthropods of any type 5 share two defining characteristics: jointed legs (from which the phylum takes its name) and an exoskeleton (the recognizable hard outer shell). Though the shell itself is made of dead tissue like that of human hair and fingernails, it is dotted with sensory cells. These give the arthropod 10 information about its surroundings, much as the nerve endings in human skin do. Also like human skin, the shell protects fragile internal organs from potentially hazardous contact with the environment. It seals in precious moisture that would otherwise evaporate but permits the exchange of gases.
15 Its primary component is chitin, a natural polymer that contains calcium and is very similar in structure to the cellulose in wood. Chitin and proteins are secreted in the epidermis, the living tissue just below the shell, after which they bond to form a thin sheet. Each new sheet is produced so that its chitin fibers are not parallel with those directly above, which increases their 20 combined strength.
The result is the endocuticle, a mesh of molecules that forms the lowest layer of the shell. The endocuticle is not quite tough enough for daily wear and tear. Over time, however, its molecules continue to lock together. As 25 the endocuticle is pushed upward by the formation of new sheets by the epidermis, it becomes the middle shell layer called the exocuticle. With its molecules bonded so tightly, the exocuticle is very durable. There are points on the body where it does not form, since flexibility is needed around joints. This arrangement allows supple movement but provides armor-like protection. OU Though strong, the chitin and protein exocuticle itself would provide a poor barrier against moisture loss. Therefore, it must be coated with lipids, which are also secreted by the epidermis. These lipids, mostly fatty acids and waxes, form the third, outermost layer of the shell. They spread over the 35 cuticles to form a waterproof seal even in dry weather. This lipid layer gives many arthropods their distinctive luster. Combined, the endocuticle, exocuticle, and lipid coating form a shell that provides formidable protection. The external shell has other advantages. One 40 is that, because it has far more surface area than the internal skeleton found in vertebrates, it provides more points at which muscles can be attached. This increased number of muscles permits many arthropods to be stronger and more agile for their body size than birds or mammals. The coloration 7. Cracking the Reading Section | 231
and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial as well. Many species 45 of scorpion, for instance, have cuticles that contain hyaline. The hyaline is excited by ultraviolet radiation, so these scorpions glow blue-green when a black light is flashed on them. Scientists are not sure why scorpions have evolved to fluoresce this way, but the reason may be that their glow attracts insects that they can capture and eat. 50 Adaptive as their shell is, it leaves arthropods with at least one distinct disadvantage: The cuticle cannot expand to accommodate growth. As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt. The existing cuticle separates from newer, more flexible layers being secreted beneath it, 55 gradually splits open, and can be shaken or slipped off. The new chitin and protein will harden and be provided with a fresh lipid coating, but this process can take hours or days after molting occurs. The arthropod must first take in extra air or water to swell its body to greater than its normal size. After the shell has hardened in its expanded form, the arthropod expels the air or 60 water. It then has room for growth. But until it hardens, the new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding. Otherwise, it risks being snapped up by a predator clever enough to take advantage of its lowered defenses. Now, take a look at a new type of question.
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All of the following are mentioned as benefits of the exoskeleton EXCEPT
a. b. c. d.
protection against water loss distinctive coloration and markings ability to take in extra air or water armor-like protection
You’ll notice this question has the word EXCEPT written in capital letters. Yet, test takers still often look for the “right” answer. For EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST questions, your task is to find the answer that is not mentioned. Here’s how:
1. 2. 3. 4.
Rephrase the question, eliminating the EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST part. Use the answer choices like a checklist, returning to the passage to find each one. Mark each answer choice as either TRUE or FALSE based on the passage. Choose the answer that’s different from the other three.
Here’s how it works. First, we’ll rephrase the question, removing the EXCEPT part. Our new question asks
What are the benefits of an exoskeleton?
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Now, we’ll go through each choice, looking for evidence in the passage. Think of each choice as a lead word—scan the passage for the word or phrase, and read a few lines before and after to see if it answers the questions. The first choice is “protection against water loss.” Go back to the passage and try to find the part that talks about “water loss.” This topic appears in paragraph 5. It states that the shell forms a “waterproof seal.” This means that (A) is true. Mark that on your scratch paper. (A) True Next, check (B). Our lead phrase for this choice is “coloration and markings.” Scan through the passage. Where does it mention this topic? Paragraph 6 says that “coloration and markings of the exoskeleton can be beneficial....” So this answer is true as well. Mark it down on your scrap paper. (A) True (B) True The third choice is “ability to take in extra air or water.” Let’s look through the passage for these lead words. Find them? These words show up in the final para graph, but that paragraph is about the disadvantages of the shell. So this choice is false. Note this on your scrap paper. (A) True (B) True (C) False Finally, let’s verify our answer by checking the fourth choice, which is “armor-like protection.” A quick scan of our passage reveals this phrase in the fourth para graph. This statement is true as well. Thus, we’re left with the following: (A) True (B) True (C) False (D) True Now all we do is pick the answer choice that is different: (C). It is very important to check all of the choices when doing EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST questions. Many test takers go through the choices too quickly and end up picking the answer that is in the passage instead of the one that isn't.
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Supported by the passage: Remember, we want the choice that is not supported by the passage.
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Contain information not mentioned: Information not found in the passage makes a good answer for these questions. Use extreme language: Extreme language is usually bad; but for these questions, it’s acceptable.
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EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST questions can take a little more time to answer than other types of detail or lead word questions, so make sure to do them in your second pass.
Question Type #10: Inference Questions Here’s our next question type.
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It can be inferred from the passage that molting
a. b. c. d.
happens regularly during the life of the arthropod always takes days to complete leaves the arthropod without its normal defense causes the arthropod to grow larger
Inference questions ask for a very specific type of answer. An inference is a conclusion reached based on the available evidence. For example, if a friend of yours walks in and has wet hair, you may infer that it is raining outside. That inference may or may not be true. Perhaps your friend just washed his hair or was sprayed with a hose. However, on the TOEFL, the correct inference is the answer that must be true based on the information in the passage. Our approach to these questions remains the same as many other types. First, restate the ques tion.
What does the passage suggest about molting? Next, use a lead word to locate the appropriate part of the passage. For this question, we’ll use the word molting. This word shows up in the final paragraph. As we’ve seen with detail and lead word questions, the correct answer should be within four or five lines of the reference. However, for inference questions, you should not attempt to answer in your own words first; this is be cause you can’t be sure which inference will be the correct response, and the answer you predict may not be close to the answer choice.
Instead, we’ll follow a process similar to the one we used for EXCEPT/NOT/LEAST ques tions. We’ll look at each answer choice and see if it is true based on the lines about molting. Here’s the question again.
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happens monthly during the life of the arthropod always takes days to complete leaves the arthropod without its normal defense causes the arthropod to grow larger
Let s start with the first choice. Go back to the paragraph about molting, and look for any information regarding how regularly it takes place. Remember to read only the lines around our lead word. Because there is no information on the regularity of molting, (A) must be wrong. Eliminate it. Now move on to the next choice. Go back to the passage, and look for evidence that molting “always takes days to complete.” There is some information about time, but make sure you read carefully. The passage states that “this process can take hours or days....” But that doesn’t mean that molting “always” takes days. So, eliminate (B). For the third choice, there is some indication that it is true. If you read toward the end of the paragraph, it states that the “new coat is tender and easily penetrated. Accordingly, the arthropod must remain in hiding.” It took a little searching, but this is the answer we need. Of course, we should still look at the final answer. The fourth choice suggests that molting “causes the arthropod to grow larger.” Is there any evidence for this in the passage? Choice (D) is supported in the passage (“As the animal increases in size, therefore, it must occasionally molt.”), but the passage doesn’t say that molting causes growth. So (C) is the best answer.
POE Strategies for Inference Questions Inference questions require a very careful reading of the passage because the wrong answers can be very attractive. When eliminating answers, you should carefully look for the following: Could be true: Some answers may be true. However, this is not good enough on the TOEFL. You must be able to support the truth of the answer with the passage. Extreme: The wrong answer on inference questions will often use extreme word ing. Watch out for answers that contain the following words:
always
never
impossible
all
none
best
worst
Beyond the information: The wrong answer on an inference question may contain some information found in the passage but make a claim or connection that is not found in the passage.
Inference questions require careful reading of both the passage and the answer choices. The right answer is usually a clever paraphrase of information in the passage. Because these ques tions can be very tricky, you may want to do them during your second pass.
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Question Type #11: Summary Questions The final question type on the TOEFL is the summary question. These questions are typically worth two points and require you to find multiple correct answers. Here’s an example of one.
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Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points.
Animals in the phylum called arthropods have shells or exoskeletons with distinctive characteristics.
Answer Choices
Insects, spiders, shrimp, crabs, The chitin in the exoskeleton is and centipedes are all arthropods. similar in chemical composition to the cellulose in wood.
The shell has three layers that Because the shell is hard, it must protect an arthropod from injury be discarded and replaced as the and water loss. arthropod grows.
The hyaline in a scorpion’s shell The large surface area of the glows under black light because shell makes possible a high num it is excited by ultraviolet radiation. ber of muscles and a variety of adaptive colorations.
For this type of question, you will click and drag answer choices to add them to the summary. Fortunately, these questions always show up at the end of the section, so by the time you attack a summary question, you should have a pretty good idea of the passage’s main points.
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Your main task for this question is to separate details from main ideas. Use your understanding of the structure of a passage to figure out which choice is a detail and which choice is a main point. In general, details will appear in the middle of paragraphs and are often mentioned only once. Main ideas will appear at the beginning or end of paragraphs and show up throughout the passage. Let’s go through each choice and decide if it’s a detail or a main idea.
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Insects, spiders, shrimp, crabs, and centipedes are all arthropods. Is this one of the main ideas of the passage? It’s certainly mentioned in the first paragraph, but what is the majority of the passage about? If you said the exoskele ton, you are correct. Our answers should be about the exoskeleton, so let’s elimi nate this choice.
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The shell has three layers that protect an arthropod from injury and water loss. This choice is more in line with what we need. The passage described the shell, and this answer summarizes the structure of the shell. Let’s add it to our summary.
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The shell has three layers that protect an arthropod from injury and water loss.
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The hyaline in a scorpion’s shell glows under black light because it is excited by ultraviolet radiation. Is this a main idea or a detail? Where does this fact appear in the passage? Notice how it shows up in a paragraph about the benefits of the shell. That means that this fact is likely just an example of a benefit. The passage even uses the phrase “for instance” when discussing this fact. Plus, the entire passage is not about scorpions. Thus, it’s a detail, not a main idea.
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Here’s the next choice.
The chitin in the exoskeleton is similar in chemical composition to the cellulose in wood. Although it does talk about the exoskeleton, this choice provides a very specific detail about the chitin. We're looking for a more general description. Let’s look at the other choices and see if they are better answers.
The next choice reads
Because the shell is hard, it must be discarded and replaced as the arthropod grows. This choice talks about the shell as well. It gives a good summary of the final paragraph of the passage, which talked about the disadvantages of the exoskeleton. Because the entire passage gave information on the benefits and disadvantages of the exoskeleton, we should add this choice to our list. o
The shell has three layers that protect an arthropod from injury and water loss.
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Because the shell is hard, it must be discarded and replaced as the arthropod grows.
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Here’s our final option.
The large surface area of the shell makes possible a high number of muscles and a variety of adaptive colorations. This choice is also part of the main idea. Notice how it differs from the previous choice about the scorpion’s markings. This choice mentions two benefits, not just one. And it doesn’t mention just one type of arthropod. Therefore, it belongs in the summary.
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Here are our final choices.
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The shell has three layers that protect an arthropod from injury and water loss.
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Because the shell is hard, it must be discarded and replaced as the arthropod grows.
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The large surface area of the shell makes possible a high number of muscles and a variety of adaptive colorations.
Notice how this summary matches the summaries we practiced in Core Concept: Reading. We’ve mentioned each of the important points from the topic sentences of the passage.
POE Strategies for Summary Questions For these questions, eliminate answers that don’t show up as key points during your initial reading of the passage. Use the structure of the passage to help eliminate answers. Remove choices that are
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These questions can be very difficult, but if you’ve been practicing the active reading strategies in this book, they should be much easier. Still, save these questions for last.
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Reading Summary Congratulations! You’ve just cracked an entire section of the TOEFL. Before we give you a drill to practice your new skills, let’s review some of the key ideas from this chapter.
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It’s in there: No matter how difficult the question may seem, remember that the answer is some where in the passage.
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Two-pass system: Not all questions are created equal. Do all the questions that you find easier first, and save the killer questions for last. This system is what we call your Personal Order of Difficulty— wherein you get to choose to tackle the questions that feel the easiest to you first and tally those points, then come back around for the more challenging questions.
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Which question types do you feel most confident about?_________________________
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Chapter 8 Reading Practice Drills Here are some practice reading passages. Remember to use the two-pass approach you just learned in the pre vious chapter. At this point, don’t worry about time— just focus on getting the right answers and understand ing the process. After you’ve completed these drills, be sure to read through the explanations of the right and wrong answers in the next chapter.
Reading Practice Drill #1 Impeachment
Under the Constitution, the House of Representatives has the power to impeach a government official, in effect serving as prosecutor. The Senate then holds the impeachment trial, essentially serving as jury and judge, except in the impeachment of a president when the chief justice presides. The president, vice president, and all civil officers of the United States are subject to impeachment; 5 conviction means automatic removal from office. The concept of impeachment originated in England and was adopted by many of the American colonial governments and state constitutions. At the Constitutional Convention, the framers considered several possible models before deciding that the Senate should try impeachments. 10 Since 1789, only 17 federal officers have been impeached by the House, 14 of which were tried by the Senate. Three were dismissed before trial because the individual had left office, 7 ended in acquittal and 7 in conviction. All of those convicted were federal judges. Impeachment is a very serious affair. It is perhaps the most awesome power of Congress, the 15 ultimate weapon it wields against officials of the federal government. The House of Representatives is the prosecutor. The Senate chamber is the courtroom. The Senate is the jury and also the judge, except in the case of a presidential impeachment trial when the chief justice presides. The final penalty is removal from office. There is no appeal. 20 -> So grave is this power of impeachment, and so conscious is the Congress of this solemn power, that impeachment proceedings have been initiated in the House only sixty-two times since 1789. Only seventeen federal officers have been impeached: two presidents, one cabinet officer, one senator and thirteen federal judges. Sixteen cases have reached the Senate. Of these, two were dismissed before trial because the individuals had left office, seven ended in acquittal, and seven in 25 conviction. Each of the seven Senate convictions has involved a federal judge.
The American colonial governments and early state constitutions followed the British pattern of trial before the upper legislative body on charges brought by the lower house. Despite these precedents, a major controversy arose at the Constitutional Convention about whether the Senate should act 30 as the court of impeachment. Opposing that role for the Senate, James Madison and Charles Cotesworth Pinckney asserted that it would make the president too dependent on the legislative branch. They suggested, as alternative trial bodies, the Supreme Court or the chief justices of the state supreme courts. Hamilton and others argued, however, that such bodies would be too small and susceptible to corruption. In the end, after much wrangling, the framers selected the Senate as 35 the trial forum.
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While the framers very clearly envisaged the occasional necessity of initiating impeachment proceedings, they put in place only a very general framework. ■ They left many questions open 50 to differences of opinion and many details to be filled in. ■ Despite the open-endedness, as Peter Charles Hoffer and N.E.H. Hull note in their book Impeachment in America 1635-1805, thanks to the framers: a tool used in Parliament to curb kings and punish placemen was molded into an efficient legislative check upon executive and judicial wrongdoing. ■ The power of the English House of Commons to impeach anyone, for almost any alleged offense, was restrained; the threat of death 55 and forfeiture upon conviction was lifted; and the interference of the Commons and the House of Lords with the regular courts of justice was limited. ■ American impeachment law shifted, at first inadvertently and then deliberately, from the orbit of English precedent to a native republican course. Federal constitutional provisions for impeachment reflected indigenous experience and revolutionary tenets instead of English tradition.
1. The word power in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
motivation desire bearing authority
2. According to paragraph 3, what three roles do the House of Representatives and Senate play in the impeachment process?
a. b. c. d.
Government official, jury, judge Prosecutor, jury, judge President, prosecutor, judge Civil officers, jury, prosecutor
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3. In paragraph 2, the author explains that the idea of impeachment began a. b. c. d.
at the Constitutional Convention in 1789 in England in colonial governments
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4. What can be inferred from paragraph 2 about the decision to impeach a government official?
a. b. c. d.
The decision made in the Senate Impeachment results in removal from office Impeachment occurs often Impeachment rarely occurs
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5. The word wields in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
uses maintains formulates shapes
6. In paragraph 3, the author explains that during the impeachment of a president a. b. c. d.
a chief justice presides the Senate presides the House of Representatives presides Congress presides
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7. According to paragraph 4, how many impeachment proceedings have been initiated since 1789? a. b. c. d.
Seventeen Two Sixty-two Sixteen
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8. The word precedents in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
charges statutes examples claims
9. According to the passage, the impeachment process incorporates a. b. c. d.
the House of Representatives and the Senate the Senate and the President a Chief Justice and the House of Representatives a Chief Justice and the Senate
10. Which of the sentences below best expresses the essential information in the highlighted sentence in the passage? Incorrect choices change the meaning in important ways or leave out essential information. There was also considerable debate at the convention in Philadelphia over the definition of impeachable crimes.
a. b.
c. d.
Philadelphians debated considerably over the definition of impeachable crimes. Formidable debate occurred at the convention in Philadelphia concerning the meaning of impeachable crimes. Impeachable crimes were debated at the convention in Philadelphia. The classification of impeachable crimes was a significant debate at the Philadelphia convention.
11. ALL of the following are mentioned as part of the final definition of impeachment EXCEPT a. b. c. d.
corruption misdemeanors bribery treason
12. The word initiating in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
concluding starting deciding forming
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13. Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence could be added to the passage. Consequently, the American version of impeachment was clearly quite different than the English version upon which it was based.
Where would the sentence best fit?
Click on a square [■] to add the sentence to the passage.
14. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage.
The power of impeachment was initiated during the Constitutional Convention as a means to try government officials who do not act according to the law.
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Answer Choices
Sixty-two trials of impeachment have The impeachment process is initially occurred since 1789. brought forth by the House of Representa tives, and it is tried before the Senate. A chief justice presides over the hearing of If a government official is convicted subse presidential impeachment, and this is the quent to impeachment, he/she is automati only instance in which the Senate is not cally removed from office. the judge.
The power to impeach is taken very seri The definition of impeachable crimes was ously by Congress and very few govern an important component of the Constitu ment officials have been impeached. tional Convention; nevertheless, the lan guage defining remains decidedly vague.
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Reading Practice Drill #2 Fire Tornadoes Fire tornadoes—also known as fire whirls, firenados, or fire twisters—look like tornadoes but are made up of fire. Therefore, they aren’t really tornadoes at all. Tornadoes are formed when just the right weather elements combine: moist, warm air lying close to the ground; an unstable atmosphere; and air fronts that collide and propel moist air vertically into the sky. 5
A fire tornado has two parts: the core, which is actually on fire, and an invisible, rotating air pocket. It can reach temperatures of nearly 2,000°F, which is hot enough to even reignite ashes that have been sucked into the vortex from the ground. While real tornadoes occur as a result of atmospheric conditions high above, fire tornadoes result from hot, dry air rising quickly away from the ground. 10 When hot, strong winds come into contact with an already-burning brushfire, updrafts of hot air catch the fire and surrounding winds and send it whirling into the air. This whirling air forms columns; as more and more hot air is pulled into a column, the column begins to swirl, very much like a real tornado.
15 A fire twister’s spinning column creates a vortex thanks to angular momentum. The law of angular momentum states that when an object is inside a spinning column it will move faster and faster the closer it gets to the center of rotation. The fire tornado picks up flaming embers, combustible gases, burning debris, and ash. When sucked up by the firenado, unburned gases travel up the core until they reach an area where there is enough oxygen to ignite them. This ultimately creates a spinning 20 fire tower that can be hundreds of feet tall.
While fire whirls move pretty slowly, they can cause significant damage. Anything—or anyone! — unfortunate enough to be in a fire whirl’s path will likely either be set ablaze or flung vigorously from its location. But it’s not just the fire that’s dangerous—the winds it generates can create 25 wind speeds of more than 100 mph, which is strong enough to knock down trees. Fire whirls also typically don’t last very long, but when they do they can wreak havoc and leave disaster in their wakes. There have been numerous major firenados in the last 150 years, many of which have proved 30 lethal. In 1871, the great Peshtigo Fire in Northeastern Wisconsin and Upper Michigan resulted from inauspicious conditions: dry weather during the summer, slash-and-burn farming practices, and a vigorous cold front that brought strong winds. Together, these three contributing factors created firenados that turned a few small prairie fires into a furious conflagration. The town of Peshtigo, with hundreds of wooden structures and lumberyards, sat in the middle of a forest of pine and hardwood. 35 When the fire reached the town, it found abundant fuel. In just minutes, 100-mph winds and ambient temperatures of more than 700°F caused what is still recognized as the worst fire disaster in the history of the United States. As best as anyone could tell, nearly 2,000 people lost their lives.
More recently, a fire twister was recorded in January 2003 on Mount Taylor in Canberra, Australia. It 40 had a diameter of almost 1,600 feet and winds of more than 160 mph. In April 2016, a fire tornado nearly claimed the life of a firefighter in Alberta, Canada. His team was fighting a blaze that started as an out-of-control campfire. The firefighter’s teammate yelled at him to watch out. Without thinking, he jumped in the nearby river, saving his own life.
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45 Unfortunately, we still don’t know much about fire twisters. Because they can arise in any part of a fire, there is no way to predict where one might appear. And because they don’t usually last very long, it’s reasonable to consider that even firefighters can’t identify where a fire twister has touched ground. Even with that information, we would still be left with the question of whether the fire caused the vortex or whether the vortex was helped by the fire. Perhaps someday we’ll find out!
1. It can be inferred from paragraph 1 of the passage that fire tornadoes a. b. c. d.
are truly tornadoes form easily look like tornadoes result only from an unstable atmosphere
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2. The word whirling in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
spinning working flying jumping
3. The word it in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
the fire the air pocket the fire tornado the ashes
4. The word reignite in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
remove char quench light again
5. Which of the following is NOT mentioned as a characteristic of a fire tornado? a. b. c. d.
Column Core Air pocket Angular momentum
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6. The word vortex in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
spinning column angular momentum unburned gases center of rotation
7. Which of the following is an example of angular momentum?
a. b. c. d.
A runner running faster the further she runs A tennis player hitting harder earlier in the game An ice skater spinning faster as she pulls her arms in to her body A swimmer swimming faster at a higher altitude
8. The phrase flung vigorously in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
burned quickly moved slowly thrown forcefully tossed gently
9. The author implies that
a. b. c. d.
fire fire fire fire
whirls whirls whirls whirls
don’t move quickly don’t cause damage can’t knock down trees can last for days
10. The phrase wreak havoc in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
start sizeable fires last forever move quickly cause significant damage
11. According to paragraph 5 of the passage, firenados a. b. c. d.
have happened more than once have never been documented first occurred in Peshtigo are always lethal
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12. The word inauspicious in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
lucky fortunate unlucky dangerous
13. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points. A firenado is one example of a natural phenomenon that is as uncommon as it is dangerous.
Answer Choices Firenados require a unique combination of A firefighter escaped a firenado by jumping conditions in order to occur. in a river. Firenados suck up ashes and gases into Scientists don’t know much about firena their core. dos because it is hard to predict where or when they will occur. Firenados can cause significant damage.
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The firenado in Peshtigo was the first fire nado on record.
Reading Practice Drill #3 Periodical Cicadas -> Certain cicadas spend most of their lives about 2 feet underground, feeding on fluids from the roots of trees in forests across the eastern United States. These particular species, called periodical cicadas, are developmentally synchronized, meaning they develop into adults all at the same time. There are seven distinct species of periodical cicadas, four of which have 13-year lifecycles and 5 three of which have 17-year lifecycles. After the respective 13 or 17 years of subterranean lifestyle, the almost-mature cicada nymphs emerge at a given place and time in astounding numbers— as many as 1.5 million cicadas per acre. The nymphs wait for a spring evening when the soil temperature about 8 inches below the surface is above 64°F. For the four 13-year-cycle species, which tend to be further to the south and west of the eastern United States, this may be as early 10 as late April or early May. But for the three 17-year-cycle species, which are generally found more toward the northern end of the eastern United States, this may not happen until late May or early June.
Once they emerge they have only about 4-6 weeks to live. First, they find a new home on plants 15 near their emergence location where they complete their transition into full adult cicadas. Next, they molt a final time and then remain in the leaves, where they are protected from most predators, to wait for their exoskeletons to completely harden. Within two months of their emergence, they have laid their eggs and their lifecycle has been completed. Once the mature cicadas die, there will be no more cicadas of that brood for another 13 or 17 years. 20 Periodical cicadas are divided into groups called broods; these broods are based on the calendar year in which they emerge. In 1898, entomologist C. L. Marlatt identified as many as 30 broods, although not all of them have actually been observed since then. He identified 17 broods with a 17year lifecycle and 13 broods with a 13-year-lifecycle. Brood VI, for example, has a 17-year lifecycle. 25 It is typically found in Eastern Ohio, Western Maryland, Southwestern Pennsylvania, Northwestern Virginia, and West Virginia. Brood Vi’s last emergence was 2017, so it will emerge again in 2034.
Adult periodical cicadas are small, roughly one inch long, with males growing slightly larger than females. Cicadas do not have specific defense mechanisms: While their mouths are designed to 30 pierce plants and suck out the plants’ sap, they don’t bite or sting. Their sole purpose during their adult lives is to reproduce. Male cicadas form “aggregations,” or choruses, and “sing” a mating song that is specific to their species in order to attract females to mate. They don’t create sound with vocal chords, like humans do, though. Instead, they produce sounds with their tymbals, corrugated exoskeletal structures that are specifically used to produce sounds. On the 35 male cicada, the pair of tymbals is located on the sides of the abdomen. The membranes across the “ribs” of the tymbal vibrate quickly, and the cicada’s body functions like a resonance chamber and magnifies the sound. The cicadas can adjust the “volume” of their sound by turning their bodies in different directions. 40 ■ Periodical cicada populations grow to astounding numbers, not only because the only purpose of their adult lives is to reproduce, but also because they tend to escape natural population control by predators. ■ Because they emerge only once every 13 or 17 years, predators cannot rely upon them as a regular part of the food cycle. ■ As a result, when the cicadas do become prey, their predators can seemingly eat their fill without making a significant impact on 45 the cicada population. ■
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Periodical cicadas are fascinating creatures, largely because they don’t play a regular role in their environments’ ecosystems. In fact, they are so fascinating that scientists named their genus Magicicada. Most interesting, though, is how they keep track of time and know when 13 or 17 years 50 have passed. Alas, researchers don’t actually know how they do it, other than knowing that it’s some kind of molecular clock. The insects themselves make for difficult research, since researchers have to wait at least 13 years for a brood to reemerge!
1. The word subterranean in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
lifecycle underground species cicadas
2. The word nymphs in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
immature cicadas different species roots of trees water creatures
3. The word this in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
periodical cicadas astounding numbers southeastern United States ground temperature of 64°F
4. According to paragraph 1, periodical cicadas can be found a. b. c. d.
around the world throughout the western hemisphere across the eastern United States in the southeastern United States
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5. The word they in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
southeastern United States periodical cicadas plants predators
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6. The cicadas are organized into broods according to a. b. c. d.
the year in which they emerge the length of their lifecycles the length of their development cycle Marlatt’s preferences
7. The word magnifies in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
makes louder produces makes worse degrades
8. Click on the sentence (in bold text in the passage and repeated below) in the passage where the author describes how periodical cicadas attract mates.
a. b. c. d.
Their sole purpose during their adult lives is to reproduce. Male cicadas form “aggregations,” or choruses, and “sing” a mating song that is specific to their species in order to attract females to mate. On the male cicada, the pair of tymbals is located on the sides of the abdomen. Periodical cicada populations grow to astounding numbers, not only because the only purpose of their adult lives is to reproduce, but also because they tend to escape natural population control by predators.
9. The word their in the passage refers to
a. b. c. d.
broods cicada populations cicada predators cicada prey
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10. Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence can be added to the passage.
This phenomenon is known as “predator satiation,” a situation in which prey occur at an incredibly high population that the probability of an individual organism being eaten is drastically reduced. Where would the sentence best fit?
Click on a square [■] to add the sentence to the passage. (Here, on this practice test, circle your answer below.) a. b. c. d.
Square 1 Square 2 Square 3 Square 4
11. How do periodical cicadas know when to emerge? a. b. c. d.
They have calendars. They can track the seasons. They have a molecular clock. Scientists don’t have any ideas.
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12. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points. Periodical cicadas are unique creatures because of their unusual lifecycles and their lack of significant predators.
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Answer Choices
Periodical cicadas have a significant maturation process, emerging only when they are almost ready to lay eggs.
Four species have 13-year lifecycles.
Periodical cicadas do not have many Once periodical cicadas emerge, they live natural predators because their adult life only 4 to 6 weeks. span is so short. Periodical cicadas use their tymbals to The soil temperature must be 64°F before make sounds during mating. the periodical cicadas will emerge.
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Reading Practice Drill #4 MANDALA ART
“Mandala” is a Sanskrit word meaning “circle.” While it originated as a spiritual symbol in many Indian religions, the mandala has come to be known generically as a term for any diagram, chart, or geometric pattern that is intended to symbolically or metaphorically represent the cosmos. The typical “circle with a center” pattern represents the foundational structure of life and creation. This 5 pattern is found in many places in our world, including biology, geology, physics, astronomy, and chemistry. For example, even atoms are circular in nature, with evenly balanced protons, neutrons, and electrons. Every cell has a nucleus, which also has a circle at the center. Even the Milky Way galaxy is circular, with our circular solar system within it. One could argue that each of these is a mandala in and of itself. 10 Carl Jung, the founder of analytical psychology, held that “a mandala is the psychological expression of the totality of the self.” He sketched a small circular drawing every morning, and felt that whatever came to life in his mandala corresponded to his inner experience at the time. ■ He believed that he could track his internal transformations by looking at the differences in his drawings. 15 ■ Fundamentally, Jung believed that if humans could harness the power of their subconscious—or, as he called it, the Self—then they could grow toward fulfilling their potential for wholeness, and live fully expressed lives. ■ He found that during periods of significant trial and tribulation many of his clients felt compelled to create mandalas. He found that people felt drawn to drawing or painting mandalas simply because it felt right to do so—it seemed that they instinctively turned to creating a 20 mandala as a way to express their experience.®
Why might humans have this instinct? Research into the fields of psychology and child development may shed some light on the subject. It would seem that circles are part of the basic creation of a personal identity. Studies conducted with babies show that as early as one week old, infants 25 prefer to look at curved lines rather than straight lines. Additional research shows that two-monthold infants can discern shapes that look like faces from scrambled patterns. Psychologically, it is believed that simple, closed forms—like circles—are identified more quickly and recognized as meaningful, known, and familiar. Even the shape of an eye is spherical—simply put, it’s a threedimensional circle—and our field of vision is thus also circular. 30 Circles also appear very early in children’s art. What begins as random scribbling progresses into drawing circles as early as age two. By three or four years old, their drawings become more intricate, and without any input from adults they begin drawing suns, flowers, and people whose arms and legs connect to large circular heads. 35 As adults, when we draw circles—in particular, mandalas—we connect with our inner child—some might say that we connect with our primary sense of self. Researchers believe that mandalas give us a bridge to our home base, allowing us to recreate our sense of who we are. Professionals also believe that mandalas help us center psychologically, and they are still used in 40 psychotherapy practice. Drawing a mandala is an organic process—what’s most important is the process itself, not the final product. It may include flowers, shapes, lines, or totally abstract designs. Many therapists believe, as Jung did, that whatever emerges in a mandala matches whatever may be going on in the artist’s life; further, if the artist allows their unconscious to come out through the mandala, psychologists believe he or she can align their conscious 45 actions and decisions accordingly.
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1. The word it in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
Sanskrit mandala circle symbol
2. Atoms, cells, and the Milky Way are mentioned as examples of a. b. c. d.
circles in nature patterns symbols the cosmos
3. The word held in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
kept in hand occupied believed guarded
4. The phrase trial and tribulation in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
ease difficulty fun happiness
5. Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence can be added to the passage.
Based on this belief and his recognition of his own internal evolution through the use of mandalas, he began to use them as a tool in his psychology practice. Where would the sentence best fit?
Click on a square [■] to add the sentence to the passage. (Here, on this practice test, circle your answer below.) a. b. c. d.
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6. What kinds of shapes are recognized more easily by the human eye? a. b. c. d.
Circles Straight lines Squares Squiggly lines
7. The word their in the passage refers to
a. b. c. d.
Jung Jung’s clients children adults
8. By what age do children begin drawing more detailed and representative pictures?
a. b. c. d.
One week One year Two years Three to four years
9. Click on the sentence (in bold text in the passage and repeated below) in the passage where the author describes how drawing a mandala allows an adult to reestablish a connection with her subconscious.
a.
b.
c. d.
By three or four years old, their drawings become more intricate, and without any input from adults they begin drawing suns, flowers, and people whose arms and legs connect to large circular heads. Researchers believe that mandalas give us a bridge to our home base, allowing us to recreate our sense of who we are. It may include flowers, shapes, lines, or totally abstract designs. Many therapists believe, as Jung did, that whatever emerges in a mandala matches whatever may be going on in the artist’s life; further, if the artist allows their unconscious to come out through the mandala, psychologists believe he or she can align their conscious actions and decisions accordingly.
10. The word they in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
Jung’s clients people in general psychiatric patients mandalas
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11. Which of the following is NOT mentioned in the passage? a. b. c. d.
The origin of the word “mandala” Examples of mandalas in nature Scientists who value mandalas Friends of people who draw mandalas
12. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points. Mandala art has ancient roots and can play a therapeutic role for humans.
Answer Choices The term “mandala” comes from an an Many ancient traditions and religions used cient language and has been passed on for mandalas in their ceremonies. generations.
Children learn to draw circles before they Carl Jung, the founder of analytical psy learn to draw any other shapes. chology, found value in using mandalas with his patients. Circles appear in artwork of peoples around the world.
Our solar system is a mandala.
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Reading Practice Drill #5 The Olympics What we call the Olympics—considered the world’s premier sports competition—are actually inspired by the ancient Olympic games. These ancient games were a series of athletic competitions that took place in Olympia, Greece, sometime between the 8th century b.c.e. and the 4th century c.e. Free-born, Greek-speaking, male representatives from city-states across Greece gathered 5 every four years to take part in various running, throwing, jumping, and chariot-riding competitions. While the competitions always took place in Olympia, athletes from any city-state or kingdom could compete—they simply had to meet the entrance criteria. Originally, the men wore loincloths during competitions. As time went on, they eventually competed in the nude, in part because the Olympics were a time to recognize and celebrate the strength of the human body. Because the men 10 competed totally nude, though, married women were expressly forbidden to watch—under penalty of death!
Initially, the ancient Olympic games took place for only one day, but as events were added the festival ultimately grew to five days. The initial competition was called the “stadion,” which was a 15 fairly short sprint of somewhere in the neighborhood of 200 meters, or the length of one stadium. The second race added sometime later was called the “diaulos,” which was the length of one lap of the stadium, or about 400 meters. A few years after the advent of the diaulos, the “dolichos” was added to the races. It was somewhere between eighteen and twenty-four laps around the stadium, roughly three miles total. 20 Not surprisingly, the games also took on political importance, and were used by city-states to establish their dominance over other city-states. City-states maintained an often tenuous balance with each other: the dichotomy between needing each other for political and military alliances while simultaneously competing for limited geographical resources resulted in a frequently-conflicted 25 political environment. The Games, therefore, created an opportunity for the city-states to “compete” peacefully. In fact, these peaceful competitions led politicians to work together to create alliances, much like they do today.
The games didn’t only involve athletic pursuits, though. Sculptors, poets, and other artists would 30 gather for competitions and showcase their wares to passers-by, hoping to turn them into patrons. Sculptors liked to highlight the natural body, its muscles, and the way it moved. Poets, too, wanted to honor the athletes and so wrote songs in praise of the victors. These songs often lived on for generations. The Games also had religious importance: They are thought to have first been held in honor of Zeus, and his statue at Olympia was long regarded as one of the seven wonders of the 35 ancient world. The sporting events were frequently accompanied by religious sacrifices to Zeus and other gods, too. Just as historians debate when the first Olympic games were held, it is unclear why the ancient Greek Olympic games came to a halt. Some believe that Roman emperor Theodosius I, in an effort 40 to spread Christianity, decreed that all pagan rituals and cults be eliminated. Others believe that his successor, Theodosius II, later demanded the destruction of all Greek temples, leaving the Olympics with nowhere to take place. Sometime in the 17th century, interest in the games sprang up anew in several locations. ■ The 45 first stirring of interest came up in England, and then France about a hundred years later. ■ Within another hundred years, in the early to mid-1800s, renewed interest surfaced in Greece, when 262 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
the Greek War of Independence emancipated the country from Ottoman Rule in 1821. GreekRomanian philanthropist Evangelos Zappas wrote to King Otto of Greece in 1856 and offered to fully underwrite a revival of the games. ■ In fact, the first modern Games that took place under the 50 governance of the International Olympic Committee (IOC) took place in that very same stadium in Greece. ■ During these games, 241 athletes from 14 nations competed in 43 events. Today’s Olympics have come a long way from their humble origins: More than 200 countries send a cumulative 13,000 or more athletes to compete in 400 events spread across 33 different sports.
1. The word premier in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
first leading only chief officer
2. The author states that today’s games were modeled after ancient Olympic games that
a. b. c. d.
started sometime around the 4th century b.c.e. ended sometime in the 8th century c.e. took place in Olympia, Greece were open to men and women of all ages and backgrounds
3. The word they in the first paragraph of the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
male athletes loincloths competitions married women
4. The word expressly in the passage most nearly means a. b. c. d.
quickly explicitly took place in Olympia, Greece emotionally
5. The word ultimately in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
best most respected fundamentally eventually
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6. According to the passage, the ancient Games gave city-states the opportunity to a. b. c. d.
compete peacefully form military alliances create political agreements challenge other city-states for natural resources
7. The word they in the third paragraph of the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
city-states politicians the Games competitions
8. The word patrons in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
athletes artists competitors buyers
9. According to paragraph 5, historians are unsure about a. b. c. d.
where the first ancient Games took place the role the ancient Games played in politics why the ancient Games came to an end who took part in ancient Games
Paragraph 5 is marked with an arrow [->]
10. Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence could be added to the passage. He also paid for the entire restoration of the Panathenaic Stadium so it could be used to host future Games.
Where would the sentence best fit? Click on a square [■] to add the sentence to the passage.
(Here, on this practice test, circle your answer below.) a. b. c. d.
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11. The word successor in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
someone who someone who someone who someone who
came before came after was a contemporary competed
12. The word emancipated in the passage most nearly means a. b. c. d.
freed from subjected to proclaimed aloud began again
13. The word their refers to a. b. c. d.
ancient Games modern Games ancient athletes modern athletes
14. Directions: Select the appropriate phrases from the answer choices and match them to the Games they describe. TWO of the answer choices will not be used. This question is worth 4 points. Answer Choices
Ancient Games
Interest began in London
Had few competitions Women couldn’t watch
Elite sports competition Mandatory drug testing
Modern Games
Held in honor of gods Attended by artists
Inspired by other games
Were paid for by a philanthropist
Take place all over the world
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Reading Practice Drill #6 The Formation of the Rocky Mountains ■> The Rocky Mountains of North America extend 5,000 kilometers from New Mexico all the way up through Canada. Elevations along the range are about 1,500 meters along the lower plains to 4,399 meters at the highest peak, and widths range from 120 to 650 kilometers. The natural beauty, abundant wildlife, and fresh water of the ranges have attracted human inhabitants for the last 5 10,000 to 12,000 years.
The history of the Rocky Mountains begins in the pre-Cambrian era, a half-billion years ago. While this is long before the Rocky Mountains themselves began forming, their hard core rocks— consisting of granites, schists, gneisses, quartzites, and slates—were produced in ancient ranges. 10 Erosion eventually leveled these mountain ranges, and during the Paleozoic and Mesozoic Eras, about 75 to 540 million years ago, the ocean invaded the land and deposited sediments some 20,000 feet deep. They included layers of sandstones, shales, and limestones.
At the close of the Mesozoic Era, during the Cretaceous period about 75 million years ago, the 15 growth of the Rockies began. There was a tremendous squeezing that uplifted the region in a great series of folds, like wrinkles in a carpet. After the arching, erosion carved away at the mountains. ■ Some 10,000 feet of sedimentary rock were washed off the top of the arch, exposing the hard rock core. The erosional resistance of these hard, crystalline rocks led to the formation of the high peaks that still exist today. On the flanks of the core the sedimentary beds sloped outward. ■ Great 20 quantities of sand and clay were spread out on the bordering plains and plateaus. This was only one of the cycles of upheaval and erosion that occurred in the region. ■ Near the end of the Eocene period, about 40 million years ago, the Rockies again rose several thousand feet. Volcanoes erupted, most extensively in the Yellowstone Plateau and the Absaroka 25 Range. As the mountains were formed, streams eroded their sides, and thousands of feet of sediment spread out on plains and plateaus. Just before the Pleistocene period, about one million years ago, the region again uplifted. ■ Streams flowed faster and began to cut canyons, and rivers ate deep gorges through the ranges. The most recent geological event of note was the "Ice Age" during the Pleistocene Epoch, 1 million to 10,000 years ago. The high peaks of the Sangre de 30 Cristo Mountains supported numerous small glaciers and snows accumulated on the sides of the mountains. These glaciers carved a typical collection of alpine landforms, such as cirques, horns, aretes, and cols. Lower down in the glaciated valleys, various kinds of till and stratified sediments accumulated to form Moraines. Most of the glacial deposits and landforms present today date from the last glacial phase, known in the Rocky Mountains as the Pinedale Glaciation or Pinedale Stage. 35 During this stage, over 90% of the Yellowstone National Park was covered in ice. The glaciated terrains formed in this era are among the most picturesque in the high alpine Rockies today, as glaciers formed and moved down the valleys, thereby further eroding the mountains into bold and dramatic forms.
40 There was even a "little ice age" from about 1550 to 1860—a few centuries of glacial advance—that made its mark on the mountains recently. For example, the Agassiz and Jackson glaciers in Glacier National Park reached their most forward positions by around 1860. The incessant sculpturing of the Rockies by rain, wind, and ice continues even today.
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1. The purpose of paragraph 1 is to demonstrate that
a. b. c. d.
the Rocky Mountains have not been fully explored until recently most of the Rocky Mountains are not very high there are many types of mountains in the Rocky Mountains human inhabitants are destroying the natural beauty of the Rocky Mountains
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2. The word They in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
sediments eras years mountain ranges
3. According to the passage, all of the following types of rock would be found at the core of the Rocky Mountains EXCEPT
a. b. c. d.
gneiss cirque slate granite
4. What happened when oceans covered the Rocky Mountain region? a. b. c. d.
The mountains were washed away. Quartzite rocks were formed. Erosion shifted the rocks. Deep sediment covered the land.
5. The phrase only one of implies that the process just described in the passage a. b. c. d.
was completely unique was a single example among many was the most dramatic one was like a wrinkle in the carpet
6. The word ate in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
raised buried erased dug
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7. The upward growth of the Rocky Mountains began to occur for the first time during which period?
a. b. c. d.
Pre-Cambrian Paleozoic Eocene Cretaceous
8. The plains and plateaus that surround the Rocky Mountains were covered with
a. b. c. d.
material washed down from the mountains hard core rocks such as slate densely packed volcanic deposits soil rich in organic matter
9. The passage indicates that some of the most dramatic-looking parts of the Rocky Mountains were formed by a. b. c. d.
volcanic eruptions rivers glaciers the ocean
10. Which of the following best describes the organization of the passage as a whole? a. b. c. d.
A mountain range serves to illustrate a widespread geological process. The history of a geological feature is discussed in chronological order. Two time periods in the history of a mountain range are contrasted. The effects of a number of geological periods on North America are compared.
11. The phrase of note in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
catastrophic distinct important ancient
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12. Look at the four squares [■] that indicate where the following sentence could be added to the passage. But once again, the mountains began to be worn away as soon as they rose.
Where would the sentence best fit?
Click on a square [■] to add the sentence to the passage. (Here, on this practice test, circle your answer below.)
a. b. c. d.
Square 1 Square 2 Square 3 Square 4
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Reading Practice Drill #7 Suburbanization in the United States
The term suburb commonly refers to an urban district on the outskirts of a city that grows more rapidly than its interior. The process of suburbanization began within the second quarter of the nineteenth century. The emergence of the industrial city at that time was spurred largely by developments in transportation. Until then the typical city had been a compact cluster of small 5 buildings. People traveled primarily on foot, and goods were moved by horse and cart. The early factories of the industrial age, built in the 1830's and 1840's, were located along waterways and near railheads at the edges of cities. Housing was needed for the thousands of people drawn by the prospect of employment, so within a short time, the factories were surrounded 10 by mill towns of apartments and row houses that abutted the older, central cities. In response, many cities annexed these suburbs. In 1854, for example, the city of Philadelphia legally took over most of the county around it, and the governments of Chicago and New York followed suit. Indeed, most great cities of the United States grew as they did only by incorporating the suburban communities along their borders. 15 + With the acceleration of industrial growth came crowding and social stresses. When the first commercially successful electric traction line was developed in Boston, it revolutionized urban transportation by alleviating these problems. Transportation had previously been provided by a large network of horse-drawn lines that had many disadvantages. First, caring for the horses was 20 expensive and labor-intensive. Additionally, the large amounts of waste left on the roads were a public health hazard. The benefits of a new form of transportation based not on horsepower but electric power were immediately obvious. Not only were electric streetcars cleaner, cheaper, and more efficient, but they were also much 25 faster than horse-drawn cars, averaging 10-15 miles per hour (compared to 5-6 miles per hour). Moreover, cities were able to offer cheap fares, since each car was capable of holding more people than a horse-drawn car. Finally, businesses were quick to support local lines in their area because of increased business prospects; and local governments were eager to support the development of such lines, because long-term maintenance costs were very low once the initial expenditures had 30 been made. Within a few years every major urban area had an electric streetcar network, which made quick, easy movement between distant points possible for large numbers of people. This new mobility encouraged people to look for housing farther out from the crowded urban core. By the end of the 1950's, the American landscape had been completely transformed. The development 35 of suburban tract houses had brought even more former city-dwellers outward into the suburbs. Like the streets of identical row houses that went up as cities expanded, suburban tract houses tended to be similar in design. This standardization made the houses low in cost. However, unlike city row houses, suburban tract houses were detached, often with sizable yards and on winding streets.
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1. With which factor in suburbanization is the passage primarily concerned? a. b. c. d.
Manufacturing Transportation Job markets Economic problems
2. Areas along the edges of cities have grown in response to a. b. c. d.
the building of factories new goods new building materials city policies
3. The word emergence in the passage is closest in meaning to
a. b. c. d.
spreading history problems formation
4. The word acceleration in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
construction understanding increase transportation
5. Which of the following is NOT mentioned in the passage as a factor in nineteenth-century suburbanization? a. b. c. d.
Cheaper housing Urban crowding The advent of an urban middle class The invention of the electric streetcar
6. The traction line mentioned in paragraph 3 enabled travel by a. b. c. d.
automobile cart horse-drawn trolley electric streetcar
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7. The word mobility in the passage refers to the ability to
a. b. c. d.
travel buy a house find work enjoy life
8. The phrase went up in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
were built were bought increased in size attracted interest
9. The word Most in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
city row houses suburban tract houses sizable yards winding streets
10. The passage implies that before the electric streetcar a. b. c. d.
only a few major urban areas had horse-drawn cars few mill towns were incorporated into cities city transportation was slow and difficult city crowding was not a problem
11. The word spawned in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
signaled renewed restricted begun
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12. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor details in the passage. This question is worth 2 points.
Suburbanization, the phenomenon of rapid growth from the edges of a city outward, has been helped by several factors.
Answer Choices
The introduction of electric rail lines made it easier for people to travel long distances between work and home.
Open land outside urban cores allowed for the development of affordable and attractive tract housing.
Some suburbs were incorporated into the cities they adjoined as they grew.
The automobile has made it possible for people to travel quickly even without relying on public transportation networks.
Some cities are experiencing a movement back toward their centers.
Some suburbs have public facilities that are superior to those in cities.
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Reading Practice Drill #8 Langston Hughes, The Heart of Harlem In a very real sense, Langston Hughes was the poet laureate of Harlem during its famous Renaissance; having come there after living in cities such as Paris, he was able to view Harlem against a backdrop of broad experience. His signal contribution to the Harlem Renaissance was to further the development of a poetic language that recorded the voices he heard around him in all 5 their variety. He was concerned with the Black metropolis—that is, with those elements that unified Black urban communities despite the differences in the specific places they were found. Returning to this theme again and again, he wrote about Harlem more often and more fully than any other poet. As Hughes wrote about himself, “I live in the heart of Harlem.” He said of its people, “I love the color of their language and, being a Harlemite myself, their problems and interests are my problems 10 and interests.” Despite the many places he had lived, Hughes came to be associated almost exclusively with Harlem as his career developed. When Hughes’s first publication, The Weary Blues (1926), appeared, the New Negro Movement was in full swing; Harlem, as the intellectual center of the movement, had become the Mecca 15 of all aspiring young Black writers and artists. In the early 1920s, Harlem was a newly created Manhattan suburb north of Central Park where thousands of African-American families had settled. Settlements there had originally been founded by the Dutch, but a real estate bust there created openings for new residents just as a huge black population was migrating from the South. By 1925 there were around 200,000 African-Americans living in Harlem. Black political organizations and 20 churches opened next door to black theaters and dance halls, which led to a fantastic melting pot of poets, musicians, intellectuals, and entrepreneurs, a development that in turn gave rise to the Harlem Renaissance. This so-called Renaissance not only encouraged and inspired the Black creative artist, but it served also to focus as never before the attention of America upon the Black artist and scholar. As a result of this new interest, Harlem became a gathering place for downtown 25 intellectuals and bohemians—many of them honestly seeking knowledge of Black art and culture. -> For a period of about ten years, the most obvious and sensational aspect of the New Negro Movement for downtown New York was the nightlife of Harlem, and in particular the cabaret scene. In fact, Langston Hughes was first drawn to New York by the massive success of the first all-black 30 musical, Shuffle Along, composed by Eubie Blake and Noble Sissle. One of Hughes’s favorite methods of composition—whether in New York, Washington, DC, or Paris—was to write poetry while sitting in a club listening to jazz or the blues. In Washington in 1925, he wrote, “I tried to write poems like the songs they sang on Seventh Street (these songs) had the pulse beat of the people who keep on going.” The 1925 Renaissance, of course, was not just a cabaret boom, and it would 35 be decidedly unfair to give the impression that it was. But the Harlem cabaret life of the period was definitely an important by-product of the new interest in Afro-American culture created by the movement, and this life strongly influenced the early poetry of Langston Hughes.
Langston Hughes died in 1967 at the end of a prolific career that saw the publication of sixteen 40 books of poems, two novels, three collections of short stories, four volumes of “editorial” and “documentary” fiction, twenty plays, children’s poetry, musicals and operas, three autobiographies, a dozen radio and television scripts, and dozens of magazine articles, in addition to seven anthologies of poetry that he edited.
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1. Which of the sentences below best expresses the essential information in the highlighted sentence in the passage? Incorrect choices change the meaning in important ways or leave out essential information. a. b. c.
d.
Hughes was an important poet of his time, partly because he had a wide array of experiences that helped him better understand Harlem. Hughes lived in many places before he moved to Harlem. Harlem was of particular interest to Hughes because he had lived in many other cities prior to moving there. Hughes was an important poet of his time, partly because he lived in Harlem during the Harlem Renaissance.
2. The word signal in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
streetlight major indication action
3. Why does the author mention that Hughes wrote, “I love the color of their language and, being a Harlemite myself, their problems and interests are my problems and interests”? a. b. c. d.
To To To To
give an example of Hughes’s writing style show that he understood the struggles that African-Americans faced emphasize that he was interested in the Black Metropolis explain why Hughes wrote about Harlem so frequently
4. The word their in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
African-Americans residents of Harlem the places Hughes had lived the poems Hughes had written
5. What can be inferred about the New Negro Movement mentioned in paragraph 2? a. b.
c. d.
It was solely a movement among poets and authors. It was caused by an influx of African-Americans moving to the area from the south. It began before Hughes published his first book. It started in 1926.
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6. The word Mecca in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
a city in Saudi Arabia an ancient city an area of Harlem somewhere that artists wanted to visit
7. The word cabaret in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
a a a a
club that played jazz or the blues kind of wine scene in a movie successful musical
8. Click on the sentence in paragraph 3 that describes the people who congregated downtown.
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9. It can be inferred from the passage that Langston Hughes was first attracted to New York by a. b. c. d.
New York’s cabaret scene a successful musical other African-American families settling there a desire to write poetry at cabarets
10. According to the passage, Langston Hughes
a. b. c. d.
was the most successful African-American author of his time attained massive amounts of wealth from his poetry achieved recognition only after his death wrote several different types of publications
11. The word it in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
Harlem a cabaret room the 1925 Renaissance Seventh Street
12. The word prolific in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
productive argumentative chaotic verbose
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Chapter 9 Reading Practice Answers and Explanations
READING PRACTICE DRILL #1 1.
D This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
Under the Constitution, the House of Representatives has the power to impeach a government official, in effect serving as prosecutor. The Senate then holds the impeachment trial, essentially serving as jury and judge, except in the impeachment of a president when the chief justice presides. Based on what you’ve read, this part of the passage is talking about the House of Representatives and its ability to impeach a government official. The word “authority” would fit well with the ability to
impeach someone. Therefore, (D) is the correct response.
2.
B This is a detail question. The question is asking for what the passage says, in paragraph 3, about the roles of the House of Representatives and the Senate. Use the lead words “House of Representatives” and “Senate” to find the answer in the paragraph.
The House of Representatives is the prosecutor. The Senate chamber is the courtroom. The Senate is the jury and also the judge, except in the case of a presidential impeachment trial when the chief justice presides. The passage clearly states that the House of Representatives and Senate are the prosecutor, jury, and judge. Therefore, the correct answer is (B). Choice (A) is incorrect because a government official is someone who can be impeached, so that choice makes no sense. Similarly, (C) is incorrect because the
president can be impeached. And another similar option, (D), is incorrect because civil officers can be impeached.
3.
C This is a detail question. The correct answer will be based on what the passage says.
The concept of impeachment originated in England and was adopted by many of the American colonial governments and state constitutions. Choice (A) is incorrect because the Constitutional Convention is where the framers considered several
models of impeachment. Choice (B) is incorrect because the passage says, “Since 1789 only 17 federal officers have been impeached by the House, 14 of which were tried by the Senate.” Ulis sentence does not discuss where the impeachment came from, but rather when it has been enacted. Choice (D) is
not correct because the passage says that the colonial government adopted the concept of impeach ment—this concept didn’t begin there. 4.
D This is an inference question. Based on paragraph 2, what does the passage say about the decision to
impeach a government official? Take a look at the sentences in paragraph 2.
Since 1789 only 17 federal officers have been impeached by the House, 14 of which were tried by the Senate. Three were dismissed before trial because the individual had left office, 7 ended in acquittal and 7 in conviction. All of those convicted were federal judges.
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In short, during the last 200 years, only 17 federal officers have been impeached. Choice (D) is the
correct answer—impeachment rarely occurs. Choice (A) is incorrect because the decision made in the
Senate was to try the concept of impeachment. Choice (B) is incorrect because this part of the passage (paragraph 2, as specified by the question) does not discuss the removal from office. Choice (C) is incorrect because the passage states the opposite of this—impeachment does NOT occur often.
5.
A This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the sentence surrounding the word “wields.”
Impeachment is a very serious affair. It is perhaps the most awesome power of Congress, the ultimate weapon it wields against officials of the federal government. The sentence is talking about the awesome power of Congress and it being a weapon against the fed
eral government. The correct response is (A). 6.
A This is a detail question. The question is asking about what happens “during the impeachment pro cess of the president.”
The House of Representatives is the prosecutor. The Senate chamber is the courtroom. The Senate is the jury and also the judge, except in the case of a presidential impeachment trial when the chief justice presides. The passage states, “in the case of a presidential impeachment trial when the chief justice presides,” and the only relevant choice is (A) here. Choices (B) and (C) are incorrect because neither the Sen
ate nor the House of Representatives presides over presidential impeachment. Choice (D) is incorrect because Congress is comprised of the Senate and the House of Representatives, so it’s the same thing
as in (B) and (C). Choice (A) is the best option.
7.
C This is a detail question. Don’t be thrown off by the information in paragraph 2—this question
specifically asks for data from paragraph 4 and the question is about how many times impeachment
proceedings have been initiated—not completed. Don’t fall for the trap answer (A) that seems correct and familiar. The correct answer is (C), sixty-two.
8.
C This is a vocabulary in context question. Take a look at the sentence around the word.
The American colonial governments and early state constitutions followed the British pattern of trial before the upper legislative body on charges brought by the lower house. Despite these precedents, a major controversy arose at the Constitutional Convention about whether the Senate should act as the court of impeachment. This sentence is talking about the pronoun “these,” and it is being used to refer to the British pattern
of trial. The correct response is (C). 9.
A This is a detail question. Because the question does not tell us where to look, use the lead words provided by the question. The lead words for this question are “the impeachment process incorporates.”
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The information for this can be found in the third paragraph. This part of the paragraph states that
both the Senate and the House of Representatives play a role, so (A) is the correct answer. 10.
D This question asks you to paraphrase a sentence from the passage. Look at the sentence and see how you can put it into your own words.
There was also considerable debate at the convention in Philadelphia over the definition of impeachable crimes. This sentence is talking about a debate regarding the definition of impeachable crimes and you need
to find a version that expresses the “essential information.” The best choice is (D). Choice (A) is in
correct because it was not the Philadelphians who debated. Choice (B) is incorrect because “formi dable” means “inspiring fear or respect through being impressively large.” The word formidable is too extreme to replace “considerable.” Choice (C) is incorrect because it does not discuss the size of the
debate.
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A This is an EXCEPT question. Remember to go back to the passage and look for each answer choice.
The correct response is (A) because it is the only one that is NOT mentioned in the passage. Choices (B), (C), and (D) can be found in the passage, so they are wrong. Be careful with EXCEPT questions—they’re tricky!
12.
B This is a vocabulary in context question. Take a look at the sentence that contains the word.
While the framers very clearly envisaged the occasional necessity of initiating impeachment proceedings, they put in place only a very general framework. The sentence is talking about the impeachment process and when it is needed. Therefore, “initiating”
is close in meaning to “starting.” The correct response is (B).
13.
For sentence insertion questions, remember to make sure the ideas in the new sentence match up with the sentences surrounding it. Look at the first squares.
While the framers very clearly envisaged the occasional necessity of initiating impeachment proceedings, they put in place only a very general framework. This sentence doesn’t work because the original sentence starts off with the transitional word Conse quently and then discusses the American version. Therefore, the correct location of this question is
going to be after something that can be compared to the American version.
The second square:
They left many questions open to differences of opinion and many details to be filled in. This sentence won’t work either.
Third box:
Despite the open-endedness, as Peter Charles Hoffer and N.E.H. Hull note in their book Impeachment in America 1635-1805, thanks to the framers: a tool used in Parliament to curb kings and punish placemen was molded into an efficient legislative check upon executive and judicial wrongdoing. 280 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
This sentence continues to discuss the English model of impeachment. The next sentence continues to
discuss the English model of Impeachment. There is no transition between these sentences.
Fourth box:
The power of the English House of Commons to impeach anyone, for almost any alleged offense, was restrained; the threat of death and forfeiture upon conviction was lifted; and the interference of the Commons and the House of Lords with the regular courts of justice was limited. This is the correct response.
14.
This is a summary question. The correct answer is as follows:
The power of impeachment was initiated during the Constitutional Convention as a means to try
government officials who do not act according to the law.
• • •
The power to impeach is taken very seriously by Congress and very few government officials have been impeached. The impeachment process is initially brought forth by the House of Representatives, and it is tried before the Senate. The definition of impeachable crimes was an important component of the Constitutional Convention; nevertheless, the language defining remains decidedly vague.
These are the reasons why the other choices are incorrect:
•
Sixty-two trials of impeachment have occurred since 1789.
This statement is a detail and does not contribute to the main idea of the passage.
•
A chief justice presides over the hearing of presidential impeachment, and this is the only instance in which the Senate is not the judge.
This statement discusses the proceedings, but this is not the main point of the passage.
•
If a government official is convicted subsequent to impeachment, he/she is automatically removed from office.
This is another detail statement.
READING PRACTICE DRILL #2 1.
C This is an inference question. Based on paragraph 1, what does it say about fire tornados?
Fire tornadoes—also known as fire whirls, firenados, or fire twisters—look like tornadoes but are made up of fire. Therefore, they aren’t really tornadoes at all. Tornadoes are formed when just the right weather elements combine: moist, warm air lying close to the ground; an unstable atmosphere; and air fronts that collide and propel moist air vertically into the sky. In the first sentence, it says that fire tornadoes look like tornadoes but are made up of fire, which sup ports (C). Choice (A) is wrong because the passage says they aren’t really tornadoes. Choice (B) can 9. Reading Practice Answers and Explanations | 281
be eliminated because the passage says that fire tornadoes form when “just the right weather elements combine,” meaning that circumstances have to be exactly right or the fire tornadoes won’t form at all.
Choice (D) is incorrect: an unstable atmosphere is one contributing factor, but it is not the only one. 2.
A This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
When hot, strong winds come into contact with an already-burning brushfire, updrafts of hot air catch the fire and surrounding winds and send it________ into the air. This whirling air forms columns; as more and more hot air is pulled into a column, the column swirls, very much like a real tornado. Remember to read a sentence or two after the word in question. In this case, the description of the column as it pulls more hot air inside is the key: the column swirls, supporting (A). 3.
C This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun zr replaces. Look at the passage.
A fire tornado has two parts: the core, which is actually on fire, and an invisible, rotating air pocket. It can reach temperatures of nearly 2,000°F, which is hot enough to even reignite ashes that have burned out and then been sucked into the vortex from the ground. The passage is asking what can reach temperatures of nearly 2,000°Fi That would be the fire tornado, or its core. Now do some POE: (A), (B), and (D) are all mentioned in the passage, but they don’t
match “fire tornado,” so get rid of them. 4.
D This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
It can reach temperatures of nearly 2,000°F, which is hot enough to even________ ashes that have burned out and then been sucked into the vortex from the ground. Remember to read past the word in question: “ashes that have burned out” tells us that they’re no lon
ger burning. “Re” on any word means “again,” and if the ashes have burned out, this word must mean
that the ashes have been lit again. Using POE, (A), (B), and (C) don’t match this meaning, so (D) will earn the point. 5.
D This is a NOT question, which is a variation on an EXCEPT question. Eliminate everything that is
mentioned as a characteristic of a fire tornado and select the answer choice that is not mentioned as a characteristic of a fire tornado. Look at the second paragraph, where the fire tornado is described:
A fire tornado has two parts: the core, which is actually on fire, and an invisible, rotating air pocket. It can reach temperatures of nearly 2,000°F, which is hot enough to even reignite ashes that have burned out and then been sucked into the vortex from the ground. While real tornadoes occur as a result of atmospheric conditions high above, fire tornadoes result from hot, dry air rising quickly away from the ground. When hot, strong winds come into contact with an already-burning brushfire, updrafts of hot air catch the fire and surrounding winds and send it whirling into the air. This whirling air forms columns; as more and more hot air is pulled into a column, the column swirls, very much like a real tornado. Choices (A), (B), and (C) are all mentioned, leaving you with (D).
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A This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
A fire twister’s spinning column creates a________ thanks to angular momentum. The law of angular momentum states that when an object is inside a spinning column it will move faster and faster the closer it gets to the center of rotation. The second sentence in the quote above describes what happens to an object in a spinning column
thanks to the law of angular momentum. The word in question is created by angular momentum, so
the two must be related. Use that to tackle POE. Choice (B) is angular momentum itself, not what it
creates, so eliminate it. Choice (C) is unrelated to these sentences, so get rid of it too. Choice (D) may be appealing, but it goes further than necessary—were just talking about the column that’s been cre
ated, not its center. Get rid of (D) and go with (A)! 7.
C This question asks you to understand what the passage says about angular momentum and then find
an example that matches that description. Look at the passage.
The law of angular momentum states that when an object is inside a spinning column it will move faster and faster the closer it gets to the center of rotation. With that description, go to POE and eliminate answers that don’t describe a spinning motion. Choices (A), (B), and (D) have nothing to do with spinning or rotating, so eliminate them.
8.
C This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
While fire whirls move pretty slowly, they can cause significant damage. Anything—or anyone! —unfortunate enough to be in a fire whirl’s path will likely either be set ablaze or________ from its location. But it’s not just the fire that’s dangerous—the winds it generates can create wind speeds of more than 100 mph, which is strong enough to knock down trees. So the fire whirls move slowly and it’s the winds that are dangerous. Chances are “flung vigorously”
will have something to do with the wind. Try using POE. Choice (A) doesn’t have anything to do with wind, so get rid of it. Choice (B) is tricky: the fire whirl moves slowly, not the objects in its way
so get rid of (B). Choices (C) and (D) both involve throwing something. This may be where a little bit
of common sense is required: if the wind speeds are more than 100 mph, will the resulting throw be
gentle or forceful? Forceful! So eliminate (D) and go with (C). 9.
A This is an inference question, but it doesn’t tell you where to look. Remember that most questions on TOEFL Reading passages are arranged chronologically in order with the passage, so you’re probably
pretty close to the answer for this question by looking at where you found the answer to the previous question. Take a look at that same paragraph.
While fire whirls move pretty slowly, they can cause significant damage. Anything—or anyone!—that is unfortunate enough to be in a fire whirl’s path will likely either be set ablaze or flung vigorously from its location. But it’s not just the fire that’s dangerous— the winds it generates can create wind speeds of more than 100 mph, which is strong enough to knock down trees. Fire whirls also typically don’t last very long, but when they do they can wreak havoc and leave disaster in their wakes.
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Now, look at the answers to see what you can eliminate. Is there anything in the passage that matches
what (A) says? Not in exactly the same words, but does “move pretty slowly” mean the same thing as “don’t move quickly?” Yes! So leave (A) for now. Choices (B), (C), and (D) are exactly the opposite of what this paragraph is saying, so eliminate them.
10.
D This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
But it’s not just the fire that’s dangerous—the winds it generates can create wind speeds of more than 100 mph, which is strong enough to knock down trees. Fire whirls also typically don’t last very long, but when they do they can__________ and leave disaster in their wakes. Anytime you you’re not sure what a word or phrase might mean, you can start by asking yourself if it is positive or negative in meaning. In this case, the “and” tells us that the phrase in question will be along the lines of “leave disaster in their wakes.” That means it’s definitely negative. Use that for POE.
Choices (A) and (D) would be negative, and (B) and (C) are neutral or positive, so eliminate them. Then, compare (A) and (D): which one is more negative? Definitely (D)—starting fires is bad, but in turn they cause significant damage, which is worse.
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A This is an inference question that guides you to paragraph 5.
There have been numerous major firenados in the last 150 years, many of which have proved lethal. In 1871, the great Peshtigo Fire in Northeastern Wisconsin and Upper Michigan resulted from inauspicious conditions: dry weather during the summer, slash-and-burn farming practices, and a vigorous cold front that brought strong winds. Together, these three contributing factors created firenados that turned a few small prairie fires into a furious conflagration. The town of Peshtigo, with hundreds of wooden structures and lumberyards, sat in the middle of a forest of pine and hardwood. When the fire reached the town, it found abundant fuel. In just minutes, 100-mph winds and ambient temperatures of more than 700°F caused what is still recognized as the worst fire disaster in the history of the United States. As best as anyone could tell, nearly 2,000 people lost their lives. Once you’ve reviewed the paragraph, it’s all about POE. Choice (A) is a reasonable match, because
the passage says there have been “numerous major firenados in the last 150 years.” Choice (B) is out because they have been documented—after all, you know they happened long before anyone
who’s alive today was even born. Choice (C) can be eliminated because nothing says that the fire in Peshtigo was the first known occurrence of a firenado. Choice (D) is suspicious because it says “always lethal,” which you can’t prove from the passage. 12.
C This is a vocabulary in context question. Look at the lines from the passage.
There have been numerous major firenados in the last 150 years, many of which have proved lethal. In 1871, the great Peshtigo Fire in Northeastern Wisconsin and Upper Michigan resulted from inauspicious conditions: dry weather during the summer, slash-and-burn farming practices, and a vigorous cold front that brought strong winds. Together, these three contributing factors created firenados that turned a few small prairie fires into a furious conflagration. 284 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
Looking at the sentence after the word in question, you see terms like “vigorous” and “strong” that describe the conditions from which the fire resulted. Together, these tell you that “inauspicious”
means something negative. Try using POE. Choices (A) and (B) are positive, so eliminate them.
Choice (D), “dangerous,” is negative, and while the conditions did clearly prove to be dangerous, they were more (C), “unlucky.”
13.
This is a summary question that requires you to consider the entire passage. On a summary question,
don’t choose answers that give specific details that are mentioned only once in the passage. Instead, choose answers that are broader and are supported throughout the passage. This passage has discussed how firenadoes are created and the damage they can cause. Therefore, the three points that show that
“A firenado is one example of a natural phenomenon that is as uncommon as it is dangerous” are as
follows: •
• •
Firenados require a unique combination of conditions in order to occur. This answer shows that they are uncommon, because they require a “unique combination” of conditions. Firenados can cause significant damage. This answer shows that firenados are dangerous. Scientists don’t know much about firenados because it is hard to predict where or when they will occur. This answer supports the idea that firenados are uncommon.
READING PRACTICE DRILL #3 1.
B This is a vocabulary in context question. Take a look at the lines in the passage.
Certain cicadas spend most of their lives about 2 feet underground, feeding on fluids from the roots of trees in forests across the eastern United States. These particular species, called periodical cicadas, are developmentally synchronized, meaning they develop into adults all at the same time. There are seven distinct species of periodical cicadas, four of which have 13-year lifecycles and three of which have 17-year lifecycles. After the respective 13 or 17 years of a________ lifestyle, the almost-mature cicada nymphs emerge at a given place and time in astounding numbers—as many as 1.5 million cicadas per acre. Based on the information in the first sentence, a good word for the blank might be “underground.” Thanks to POE, only (B) matches! 2.
A This is a vocabulary in context question. Take a look at the lines in the passage.
After the respective 13 or 17 years of a subterranean lifestyle, the almost-mature cicada________ emerge at a given place and time in astounding numbers—as many as 1.5 million cicadas per acre. This one might feel tougher to fill in the blank. So, ask yourself what the surrounding words talk
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some POE: (A) is an almost exact match, so keep it for now. There’s no indication in the passage of a “different species,” so get rid of (B). The cicadas eat fluids from “roots of trees,” which makes (C) sound like a good answer, but it doesn’t match in meaning. And (D) is not mentioned at all, so elimi
nate it.
3.
D This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun this replaces. Look at the passage.
The nymphs wait for a spring evening when the soil temperature about 8 inches below the surface is above 64°F. For the four 13-year-cycle species, which tend to be further to the south and west of the eastern United Sates, this may be as early as late April or early May. But for the three 17-year-cycle species, which are generally found more toward the northern end of the eastern United States, this may not happen until late May or early June. Ask yourself, what may be as early as late April or early May? The timing of temperature being just
right for the nymphs to emerge. Take a look at the answers. Eliminate (A) because, though the entire passage is about cicadas, that’s not what this question is asking about. Choice (B) doesn’t match what we predicted, and neither does (C)—get rid of them. Choice (D), though, has to do with the tempera
ture the nymphs need. There you go! 4.
C This is a detail question, asking what the passage says about where periodical cicadas can be found. Go look in the passage for the lines that discuss this topic.
For the four 13-year-cycle species, which tend to be further to the south and west of the eastern United Sates, this may be as early as late April or early May. But for the three 17-year-cycle species, which are generally found more toward the northern end of the eastern United States, this may not happen until late May or early June. Now tackle some POE: (A), (B), and (D) don’t match the geography mentioned in the passage, so
eliminate them. The correct answer is (C). The cicadas can be found in the eastern United States. 5.
B This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun they replaces. Look at the passage.
Once they emerge they have only about 4-6 weeks to live. First they find a new home on plants near their emergence location where they complete their transition into full adult cicadas. This question requires you to look back into the previous paragraph, because there is no noun earlier
in the same sentence or same paragraph. What was the passage discussing in the preceding para graph? The cicadas that had emerged. Take that to the answers. Choice (A) references where some
of the cicadas emerge, but that’s not what the pronoun is referring to, so get rid of it. Choice (B) is exactly what we’d predicted. Choices (C) and (D) haven’t even been mentioned, so get rid of them.
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A This is a detail question, so go back to the passage and look for the word broods.
Based on the calendar year in which they emerge, periodical cicadas are divided into groups called broods. In 1898, entomologist C. L. Marlatt identified as many as 30 broods, although not all of them have actually been observed since then. Using the first part of the first sentence, compare the answer choices. Choice (A) is an almost identi cal match to the passage, so keep it. Choice (B) doesn’t match—the passage doesn’t discuss the cica
das’ lifecycle as the determining factor of their brood organization. Choices (C) and (D) also don’t
match what the passage says, so eliminate everything except (A). 7.
A This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
The membranes across the “ribs” of the tymbal vibrate quickly, and the cicada’s body functions like a resonance chamber and________ the sound. The cicadas can adjust the “volume” of their sound by turning their bodies in different directions. If you’re not sure what exact word to use, ask yourself what the word relates to. It has something to do with the sound that the cicadas make, and the next sentence says that the cicadas can adjust the “volume” of their sound. So it probably has something to do with adjusting the volume. Take a look at
the answers. Would it make sense to “make louder” the sound, as in (A)? Well, it sounds weird when you say it, but the meaning makes sense, so keep it. Is this blank just talking about producing the
sound, (B)? Maybe, but that’s not as close as (A). Is it likely that the cicadas would do something that makes their sound worse? Probably not, so get rid of (C). And they’re also not likely to degrade their
own sound, so get rid of (D). 8.
B This question asks you to find the sentence in the passage that serves a particular purpose, namely to describe how periodical cicadas attract mates. Go directly to the answers and use POE. Choice (A)
discusses the purpose of cicadas’ adult lives, not their mating habits, so get rid of it. Choice (B) talks
about the males forming choruses to attract mates, so keep it. Choice (C) discusses the males’ tym-
bals, not mating habits, so eliminate it. Choice (D) talks about the cicadas’ populations, not mating habits, so get rid of that too.
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C This is a reference question: it’s asking which noun the pronoun their refers to. Look at the passage.
As a result, when the cicadas do become prey, their predators can seemingly eat their fill without making a significant impact on the cicada population. Ask yourself, who is eating? The predators. Now go take a look at the answers, and eliminate any that don’t match. Eliminate (A), (B), and (D), and you’re left with (C).
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D This is a sentence insertion question. Recall that for this question type, you have to look at the sen tences before and after the black squares to try to match the information in those sentences with the
new sentence. Here’s the sentence we are going to add:
This phenomenon is known as “predator satiation,” a situation in which prey occur at an incredibly high population that the probability of an individual organism being eaten is drastically reduced. The “this” at the beginning of the sentence has to refer to something else before it, so it can’t be inserted
at the beginning of the paragraph—eliminate (A). The first and second sentences don’t describe an event or phenomenon, so there’s nothing for “this” in the inserted sentence to reference in either one.
Eliminate (B) and (C). The last sentence, as the paragraph is currently written, describes predators
being able to eat their fill without impacting cicada populations, which “this” could definitely refer ence. Putting the new sentence at the end of the paragraph, therefore, makes the most sense.
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C This is a detail question, so go back to the passage for information. Look for the part of the passage
that discusses emergence, more or less in the same area where you’ve already been working. Look at what it says:
Most interestingly, though, is how they keep track of time and know when 13 or 17 years have passed. Alas, researchers don’t actually know how they do it, other than knowing that it’s some kind of molecular clock. The insects themselves make for difficult research, since researchers have to wait at least 13 years for a brood to reemerge! With that information, take a look at the answers and see what matches. It’s highly doubtful that
insects have calendars, so eliminate (A). There is no evidence in the passage that the cicadas can track seasons, so eliminate (B). There is proof that scientists believe the cicadas have “some kind of molecu
lar clock,” which supports (C) and invalidates (D). 12.
This summary question requires you to consider the entire passage. On a summary question, don’t choose answers that give specific details that are mentioned only once in the passage. Instead, choose
answers that are broader and are supported throughout the passage. The question asks you to find
three points that support the following idea: Periodical cicadas are unique creatures because of their unusual lifecycles and their lack of significant predators.
The correct answers are as follows: •
Four species have 13-year lifecycles.
This answer supports the idea that these insects have unusual lifecycles.
•
Periodical cicadas do not have many natural predators because their adult lifespan is so short.
This answer supports the idea that these insects have no significant predators. •
Once periodical cicadas emerge, they live only 4 to 6 weeks.
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READING PRACTICE DRILL #4 1.
B This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun it replaces. Look at the passage.
“Mandala” is a Sanskrit word meaning “circle.” While it originated as a spiritual symbol in many Indian religions, the mandala has come to be known generically as a term for any diagram, chart, or geometric pattern that is intended to symbolically or metaphorically represent the cosmos. Just after the comma in the sentence with “it,” you can see that the passage says, “the mandala has
come to be known....” This tells you that the “it” in question is referring to mandala. Use that as your basis for POE, and eliminate (A), (C), and (D). 2.
A This is a detail question, so go back and see what the passage says.
This pattern is found in many places in our world, including biology, geology, physics, astronomy, and chemistry. For example, even atoms are circular in nature, with evenly balanced protons, neutrons, and electrons. Every cell has a nucleus, which also has a circle at the center. Even the Milky Way galaxy is circular, with our circular solar system within it. One could argue that each of these is a mandala in and of itself. The “for example” and the last sentence give us the key: .. .each of these is a mandala in and of itself.
That means the author has listed them as examples of mandalas, or circles in our world. Using POE, (A) is a close match, so keep it. Choice (B) may be appealing, but it’s not as precise as (A), so get rid of
it. There is no mention of symbols or the cosmos in the passage, so eliminate (C) and (D).
3.
C This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
Carl Jung, the founder of analytical psychology,_______ that “a mandala is the psychological expression of the totality of the self.” He sketched a small circular drawing every morning, and felt that whatever came to life in his mandala corresponded to his inner experience at the time. A reasonable word to replace the word in question might be “believed” or “thought.” POE gets rid of
(A), (B), and (D). 4.
B This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
He found that during periods of significant_________ many of his clients felt compelled to create mandalas. He found that people felt drawn to drawing or painting mandalas simply because it felt right to do so—it seemed that they instinctively turned to creating a mandala as a way to express their challenging experiences. The passage indicates that people felt compelled to create mandalas as a way to express their challeng
ing experiences. So, replacing the word in question with “challenging experiences” could work. Now try some POE. Choices (A), (C), and (D) are all positive words that don’t match “challenging experi ences,” so eliminate them. Choice (B) matches exactly. 9. Reading Practice Answers and Explanations | 289
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C This is a sentence insertion question. Recall that for this question type, you have to look at the sen tences before and after the black squares to try to match the information in those sentences with the new sentence. Here’s the sentence we are going to add:
Based on this belief and his recognition of his own internal evolution through the use of mandalas, he began to use them as a tool in his psychology practice. This sentence uses pronouns like “this,” “his,” and “them,” so ask yourself what these might refer back to. “His” likely refers to Carl Jung, and “them” refers to mandalas. Since the sentence describes how
Jung used mandalas in his practice, which isn’t mentioned until after the second square, eliminate (A) and (B). The last sentence describes the results of using mandalas in his practice, so it doesn’t make
sense to put this sentence at the end of the paragraph. Eliminate (D). 6.
A This is a detail question, so go back to the passage, around the area where you looked to find support
for the last question. Here’s what it says.
Why might humans have this instinct? Research into the fields of psychology and child development may shed some light on the subject. It would seem that circles are part of the basic creation of a personal identity. Studies conducted with babies show that as early as one week old, infants prefer to look at curved lines rather than straight lines. Additional research shows that two-month-old infants can discern shapes that look like faces from scrambled patterns. Psychologically, it is believed that simple, closed forms—like circles—are identified more quickly and recognized as meaningful, known, and familiar. Even the shape of an eye is spherical—simply put, it’s a three-dimensional circle—and our field of vision is thus also circular. The second to last sentence says “...closed forms—like circles—are identified more quickly....” As you use POE, eliminate any answers that are not “closed forms,” which includes (B) and (D). Both
circles, (A), and squares, (C), are closed forms, so now use the other part of the sentence that says
“like circles” to eliminate (C). 7.
B This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun their replaces. Look at the passage.
He found that during periods of significant trial and tribulation many of his clients felt compelled to create mandalas. He found that people felt drawn to drawing or painting mandalas simply because it felt right to do so—it seemed that they instinctively turned to creating a mandala as a way to express their challenging experiences. Ask yourself “whose challenging experiences is the author discussing?” It makes sense that the author
is discussing the people who are drawing the mandalas, or his clients. Use POE to get rid of anything that doesn’t match this idea, so get rid of (A), (C), and (D).
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D This is a detail question, so go back to the passage, around the area where you looked to find support for the last question. Here’s what it says.
Circles also appear very early in children’s art. What begins as random scribbling progresses into drawing circles as early as age two. By three or four years old, their drawings become more intricate, and without any input from adults they begin drawing suns, flowers, and people whose arms and legs connect to large circular heads. The passage indicates that the detailed, representative pictures—suns, flowers, and people whose arms
and legs connect to large circular heads—come about when children are three to four years old. This
allows you to eliminate (A), (B), and (C).
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D This question asks you to find a sentence that serves a particular purpose. In this case, it’s asking you
to find a sentence that “describes how drawing a mandala allows an adult to reestablish a connec tion with his or her subconscious.” Go straight to POE and eliminate answers that don’t serve that purpose.
Choice (A) discusses children’s drawing, so eliminate it. Choice (B) discusses researchers’ perspec tives, so get rid of it. Choice (C) doesn’t clearly state what it’s describing, so get rid of it. Choice (D)
discusses therapists’ beliefs that mandalas are representative of internal issues and allow patients to align their conscious and unconscious actions and decisions, which matches the goal set forth by the question.
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D This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun they replaces. Look at the passage.
Professionals also believe that mandalas help us center psychologically, and they are still used in psychotherapy practice. Ask yourself “what is used in psychotherapy practice?” Most likely, the mandalas. POE allows you to eliminate (A), (B), and (C). It’s not likely that people are used in the psychotherapy practice!
11.
D This is a NOT question, so be sure to eliminate answers that are mentioned in the passage.
Choice (A) is mentioned in the beginning of the first paragraph, so get rid of it. Choice (B) is men tioned at the end of the first paragraph, so it can also be eliminated. Choice (C) is discussed in the second and third paragraphs. Choice (D), however, is never mentioned. 12.
This is a summary question that requires you to consider the entire passage. On a summary question,
don’t choose answers that give specific details that are mentioned only once in the passage. Instead, choose answers that are broader and are supported throughout the passage. The question asks you to
find three points that support the following idea:
Mandala art has ancient roots and can play a therapeutic role for humans.
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The correct answers are as follows:
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The term “mandala” comes from an ancient language and has been passed on for
generations. This answer shows that mandala art has ancient roots.
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Many ancient traditions and religions used mandalas in their ceremonies.
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This answer shows that mandala art has ancient roots. Carl Jung, the founder of analytical psychology, found value in using mandalas with his patients.
This answer shows that mandala art can play a therapeutic role for humans.
READING PRACTICE DRILL #5 1.
B This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
What we call the Olympics—considered the world’s________ sports competition —are actually inspired by the ancient Olympic games. These ancient games were a series of athletic competitions that took place in Olympia, Greece, sometime between the 8th century b.c.e. and the 4th century c.e. There isn’t really much in the passage to tell you exactly what word could go here, so try looking at the answers to see if any of them make sense. The passage says that the Olympics we know today
were inspired by games from long ago. This would help to eliminate (A), because they’re not the first games, and also (C), because they’re not the only games to have ever existed. That at least brings you
to a fifty-fifty shot at guessing. Then compare the two remaining choices. Is it more likely that the author would describe the Olympics as the world’s “leading” sports competition, or as the “chief
officer” sports competition? Choice (D) doesn’t make sense, so get rid of it.
2.
C This is a detail question, so go back to the passage, around the area where you looked to find support for the last question. Here’s what it says.
These ancient games were a series of athletic competitions that took place in Olympia, Greece, sometime between the 8th century b.c.e. and the 4th century c.e. Free-born, Greek-speaking, male representatives from city-states across Greece gathered every four years to take part in various running, throwing, jumping, and chariot-riding competitions. While the competitions always took place in Olympia, athletes from any city-state or kingdom could compete—they simply had to meet the entrance criteria. Originally, the men wore loincloths during competitions. As time went on, they eventually competed in the nude, in part because the Olympics were a time to recognize and celebrate the strength of the human body. Because the men competed totally nude, though, married women were expressly forbidden to watch— under penalty of death! That is a lot of information to take in, so go to the answers and POE. The passage says the games
started sometime around the 8th century b.c.e.,
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so
eliminate (A). It also indicates that they ended
sometime around the 4th century c.e.,
so
eliminate (B). There is proof that they took place in Olym
pia, Greece, so leave (C). Eliminate (D) because the passage says the games were open only to men, not to men and women.
3.
A This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun they replaces. Look at the passage.
Originally, the men wore loincloths during competitions. As time went on, they eventually competed in the nude, in part because the Olympics were a time to recognize and celebrate the strength of the human body. Ask yourself, “who eventually competed in the nude?” Well, the competitors are the men. POE allows you to eliminate (B), (C), and (D).
4.
B This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
Because the men competed totally nude, though, married women were______ forbidden to watch —under penalty of death! What word could you put in the blank? Well, the word has to describe the way that married women
were forbidden to watch the men compete nude. They were forbidden “under the penalty of death.” That means it was a major deal for them to not watch. So something like “harshly” or “clearly” might make sense. The women were not “quickly” forbidden—that wouldn’t make sense, so eliminate (A). If you’re not
sure what “explicitly” means, leave (B) in. If it was such a big deal that married women were threat
ened with death for watching men compete, it’s not likely that they were “gradually” forbidden, so eliminate (C). It’s also not likely that they were forbidden “emotionally,” so get rid of (D). All that’s
left is “explicitly,” (B), which is a synonym for “clearly.” 5.
D This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in place of the word in question.
Initially, the ancient Olympic games took place for only one day, but as events were added the festival______ grew to five days. The initial competition was called the “stadion,” which was a fairly short sprint of somewhere in the neighborhood of 200 meters, or the length of one stadium. The second race added sometime later was called the “diaulos,” which was the length of one lap of the stadium, or about 400 meters. A few years after the advent of the diaulos, the “dolichos” was added to the races. It was somewhere between eighteen and twenty-four laps around the stadium, roughly three miles total. The paragraph begins by describing the Olympic games “initially,” and the “but” shifts the direction of the sentence. So, you might put something like “final” or “later” into the blank. With those defini tions, POE allows you to eliminate (A), (B), and (C) because they do not match your prediction.
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6.
A This is a detail question, so go back to the passage, around the area where you looked to find support
for the last question. Here’s what it says.
The Games, therefore, created an opportunity for the city-states to “compete” peacefully. In fact, these peaceful competitions led politicians to work together to create alliances, much like they do today. The passage clearly states that the Games “created an opportunity for the city-states to compete’ peacefully.” This is an exact match to (A), so eliminate the other three.
7.
B This is a reference question: it’s asking what noun the pronoun they replaces. Look at the passage.
The Games, therefore, created an opportunity for the city-states to “compete” peacefully. In fact, these peaceful competitions led politicians to work together to create alliances, much like they do today. Ask yourself, “who creates alliances today?” Politicians. This is an exact match to (B), so eliminate the other three.
8.
D This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in place of the word in question.
The games didn’t only involve athletic pursuits, though. Sculptors, poets, and other artists would gather for competitions and showcase their wares to passers-by, hoping to sell them art and turn them into_______ . What word could go in the blank? The passage indicates that the artists wanted to sell their wares to passers-by, hoping to turn them into________ . You could put “buyers” or “purchasers” in the blank. This directly matches (D), and it doesn’t match (A), (B), or (C).
9.
C This is a detail question, so go back to the passage, around the area where you looked to find support
for the last question. Here’s what it says.
Just as historians debate when the first Olympic games were held, it is unclear why the ancient Greek Olympic games came to a halt. So, historians are unclear about when the games began, and why they ended. Walk through POE. There is no question about where the first ancient Games took place, so eliminate (A). The passage
also states that “the games also took on political importance, and were used by city-states to establish their dominance over other city-states,” so eliminate (B). Historians are also clear that it was only men
who took part in the ancient Games, so eliminate (D). That leaves (C), which is directly supported by
the passage. 10.
C This is a sentence insertion question. Recall that for this question type, you have to look at the sen tences before and after the black squares to try to match the information in those sentences with the new sentence. Here’s the sentence that may be inserted:
He also paid for the entire restoration of the Panathenaic Stadium so it could be used to host future Games.
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Ask yourself who might have paid for this? The only people mentioned in the paragraph are Evange-
los Zappas and King Otto. It would make sense that Evangelos Zappas might want to pay, because
he offered to underwrite, or pay for, a revival of the games. So it would then make sense to put this sentence somewhere close to this information. Eliminate (A) and (B)—they are too early in the para graph. The question then is whether to put this sentence before or after the sentence about the first
modern Games. Since he was paying for a revival, including the restoration of the stadium, it would make sense to put the new sentence in before the discussion of the modern Games taking place in the stadium. Eliminate (D)—it is too late in the paragraph.
11.
B This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
Some believe that Roman emperor Theodosius I, in an effort to spread Christianity, decreed that all pagan rituals and cults be eliminated. Others believe that his ______ , Theodosius II, later demanded the destruction of all Greek temples, leaving the Olympics with nowhere to take place. The sentence indicates that Theodosius II came “later,”’ after Theodosius I. This gives insight that
the word in the blank has something to do with “coming later” or “coming after.” Take a look at the
answers. Choice (A) can be eliminated because it’s the exact opposite, but (B) matches, so leave it. A “contemporary,” as in (C), is someone who lived in the same time, which doesn’t match, so eliminate
that answer. While the passage discusses competitors, that meaning doesn’t fit here, so eliminate (D). 12. A This is a vocabulary in context question, so look at the passage and think of a word you could put in
place of the word in question.
Within another hundred years, in the early to mid-1800s, renewed interest also surfaced in Greece, when the Greek War of Independence_________ the country from Ottoman Rule in 1821. Ask yourself, “what result would come from a War of Independence?” “Independence” or “freedom” would be perfect words for the blank. Choice (A) is a very close match, so leave it. Choices (B), (C),
and (D), though, have nothing to do with independence or freedom, so eliminate all of them. 13.
B This question asks you to identify what “their” is referring to. In this case, “their” means (B) the mod ern games, which have come a long way from their humble origins.
14.
This question asks you to match statements with the appropriate category. This type of question may not be worth your time on test day—it’s going to take a LOT of time and energy. While it is worth 4 points, you may find that going to another passage, if you have one left to do, will give you the op
portunity to get more points in the same amount of time you’d invest on this question.
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To answer this question, you have to go back to many places in the passage to find proof for the answers. You may recall where to go based on where you looked for preceding questions. Here are the answers: Ancient Games
Modern Games
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Had few competitions
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Interest began in London
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Women couldn’t watch
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Elite sports competition
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Held in honor of gods
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Inspired by other games
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Attended by artists
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Were paid for by a philanthropist
READING PRACTICE DRILL #6 1.
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READING PRACTICE DRILL #7 1.
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12.
The introduction of electric rail lines made it easier for people to travel long distances between work and home. Open land outside urban cores allowed for the development of affordable and attractive tract housing. The automobile has made it possible for people to travel quickly even without relying on public transportation networks.
READING PRACTICE DRILL #8 1.
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But the Harlem cabaret life of the period was definitely an important by-product of the new interest in Afro-American culture created by the movement, and this life strongly influenced the early poetry of
Langston Hughes. 9.
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12. A
Chapter 10 Cracking the Listening Section
The Listening section of the TOEFL consists of the following tasks:
Four to six academic lectures, at least two of which contain classroom dialogue • Each lecture is three to five minutes long. • A lecture may involve one speaker or multiple speakers. • Each lecture is followed by six questions. Two to three conversations involving two or more speakers • Each conversation is three to four minutes long. • A conversation has 12-25 exchanges. • Each conversation is followed by five questions. You will have 60-90 minutes to complete the entire Listening section.
The Listening section measures your ability to follow and understand lectures and conversa tions that are typical of an American educational setting. You will hear each lecture or conver sation only once, but you are allowed to take notes while you are listening.
As we mentioned in the early part of this book, the Listening scores are subdivided into three sections: High (22-30). Students who score in the “High” range are able to understand a wide variety of conversation and lecture topics in both formal and informal settings. They are able to iden tify the most important concepts in a conversation or lecture, and understand how speakers use figurative language.
Medium (15-21). Students who score in the “Medium” range are able to understand most lectures and everyday conversations, but can find complex grammatical structures or colloqui alisms occasionally confusing. These students can generally identify important points, but can become confused if contradictory ideas are presented. Low (0-14). Scores in the “Low” range indicate basic ability to understand conversations and lectures, but will find abstract/complex topics and conversations with complex vocabulary or grammatical structures more difficult. These students are able to identify clearly stated main ideas, but may have difficulty connecting the dots on less obvious points.
At the beginning of the Listening section, you’ll be instructed to put on your headset. An ex ample of the screen is shown on the next page.
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You’ll also receive instructions on how to adjust the volume of the headset. Make sure the vol ume is at a comfortable level before the section begins.
LISTENING SECTION DIRECTIONS You should be aware of a few special aspects of the Listening section before you take the TOEFL. First, unlike the Reading section, you are not allowed to skip questions and return to them later. You must answer each question before you can proceed to the next one. Second, some of the questions in the Listening section are heard, not read. These questions are indicated by a special headset icon, similar to what you’ve seen in this book.
It is important to be prepared for these audio questions. In this book, we use the headset icon to indicate when you should listen to the accompanying CD. On the actual test, you will only hear this material; it will not appear on your screen.
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CRACKING THE LISTENING SECTION: BASIC PRINCIPLES One of the most common mistakes students make in the Listening section is to try to do too much. Some students try to take notes on every detail offered, and they end up not hearing important information. Other students try to understand every single word in the lecture, and they panic when they miss a word or phrase. Neither of these approaches is very helpful on the test.
Instead, you must do your best to think of the lectures and conversations as being similar to the reading passages on which we’ve worked. Each lecture or conversation will have a purpose, a main idea, and supporting details. Your goal for the Listening section will be to find these items in each selection. Because there are only five or six questions per listening task, there is no need to memorize or comprehend every single detail.
The Listening section requires you to do the following: 1.
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3. 4.
Find the main idea or purpose. Each lecture or conversation will have a main idea or purpose. Find and note this theme, which is usually stated at the beginning of the discussion or talk. Focus on the structure. Pay attention to how the main idea develops. Look for examples, comparisons, and cause-and-effect relationships. Listen for tone and attitude. Try to figure out if the speakers are positive, negative, or neutral toward the topic. Pay attention to transitions. Make sure you are listening for transition words and phrases. These help you follow the logic of the lecture or conversation.
We’ll look at all of these points in more detail in a moment, but there are two other important things to keep in mind when you approach the Listening section.
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Don’t memorize. As we said earlier, there is far too much information to try to memorize or retain. So, don’t even bother trying. Keep in mind that the TOEFL is testing you on your ability to follow a logical flow of ideas, not on your ability to memorize information. Just relax and try to focus on the big issues, not the minor ones.
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Don’t take too many notes. One easy way to get sidetracked on the Listening section is to write down too many notes. Writing requires your concentration, and if you’re concentrating on writing, you’re probably not concentrating on listening. Focus on listening; in fact, if you are not comfortable taking notes, don’t take any at all.
Basic Principle #1: Find the Main Idea or Purpose We’ve spent a lot of time practicing this step with reading passages. Now we will apply our understanding of the main idea or purpose to a listening task. Fortunately, the patterns in the Listening section are very similar to the patterns in the Reading section. Lectures are designed around a main idea, whereas conversations are centered on a purpose.
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In lectures, the speaker will typically introduce the main idea at the very beginning of the talk. Listen for phrases similar to the following:
• • • •
“Okay, today I want to talk about....” “What were going to talk about today is....” “Today, we're going to look at....” “Tonight, I wanted to look at....”
The professor will then follow with the topic of discussion. If you’re taking notes, you should write the topic down. Once you have the main topic, you can expect the lecturer to provide a purpose, explanation, or more information.
In a conversation, the beginning sentences will reveal the speaker’s purpose. Listen for the pur pose to appear after an initial greeting, as in the following examples: • • • •
“Hi, what can I do for you?” “Hello, how can I help you?” “What can I do for you today?” “Is there something I can do for you?”
After this initial question, the other speaker will state his or her purpose. Usually this involves asking for some sort of help or assistance. If you are taking notes, you should write down what the purpose of the conversation is.
Basic Principle #2: Focus on the Structure After finding the main idea or purpose, focus on the structure of the talk. Lectures and conver sations each have standard structures. Listen for them as you take the TOEFL.
Types of Lecture Structures Most lectures will have one of the following basic structures.
Lecture Structure #1: Compare/Contrast
This type of lecture involves finding similari ties and differences between two or more things. Listen for the speaker to introduce this frame work by using one of the following phrases:
• • •
“several theories” “possible explanations” “many different views”
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After the framework is introduced, the speaker will list each item to be discussed and mention its characteristics. Listen for words that indicate compare/contrast, such as the following: • • • • • •
“in contrast” “on the other hand” “similarly” “however” “additionally” “also”
Lecture Structure #2: Cause-and-Effect Relationships Some lectures attempt to ex plain why a certain situation occurs. Listen for the speaker to introduce this type of framework with the following phrases: • • • •
“Why would this happen?” “What is the reason for this?” “How could this happen?” “What leads to this?”
If it seems that the speaker is describing a cause-and-effect situation, listen for the cause. A speaker will often use the following phrases to introduce the cause: • • • • • •
“x causes y” “x results in y” “x produces y” “x leads to jz” “x brings about jz” “x is responsible for jz”
After identifying the cause, look for the speaker to detail the effects with a phrase similar to the following: • • • • • •
“j is caused by x” “j results from x” “y is due to x” “z can be blamed on x” “y is attributable to x” “y happens because of x”
Lecture Structure #3: Abstract Category/Specific Examples Another common lec ture structure involves moving from an abstract category to a specific example. A lecture may also sometimes begin with specific examples and end with a more general interpretation of the examples. A speaker may introduce an abstract concept with one of the following phrases: • • • • • 304 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
“one approach...” “one theory...” “the idea is...” “the concept...” “the basic premise is...”
Next, the speaker will move to the examples, typically using the following phrases:
• • • • •
“for example...” “one instance of this is...” “consider...” “we see this in/with...” “this is illustrated by/with...”
Even if you have difficulty understanding the abstract idea, you can usually figure it out by paying close attention to the examples used.
Lecture Structure #4: Sequences
A lecture may present a series of steps or stages. Listen for the lecturer to mention the following clues: cc
»
process “development” « __ » stages “transition” The steps or parts will typically be introduced with clear transitions, such as
• • • • •
“first...second...third...” “next...” “then...” “initially...” “finally...”
Types of Conversation Structures Conversations on the TOEFL also fall into some predictable patterns. Try to identify the pat tern when listening to the people speak.
Conversation Structure #1: Problem/Solution This is a typical conversation type on the TOEFL. One student has a problem, and another student offers advice or a possible solution. Listen for the first student to introduce the problem by mentioning one of the following: • • • •
“problem” “issue” “difficulty” “trouble”
After describing the problem, the other person will offer some sort of advice or solution. Listen for the following phrases: • • • •
“why don’t you...” “if I were you, I’d...” “maybe you should...” “have you tried/thought of...”
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For this structure, it is important to listen for what the problem is and what steps or solutions the speaker may take to solve it.
Conversation Structure #2: Service Encounter
Another common conversation on the TOEFL is the service encounter. In this encounter, a student will discuss a problem with a pro fessional—usually a professor, a librarian, or an office worker. The problem will be introduced in the same way as in the previous conversation type, but the response may differ. The service professional will usually explain exactly what the student needs to do to solve the problem. The solution may involve several parts. If so, listen for the following words to indicate the steps the student must take:
• • • • •
“requirement” “application” “form” “recommendation” “prohibited”
Conversation Structure #3: Significant Event Some conversations on the TOEFL re volve around a significant event. This could be a meeting, an announcement, or a social event. Usually, the first speaker will introduce the event with one of the following phrases: • • • •
“have you heard about...” “did you see...” “let you know about...” “program/event/opportunity/chance ”
After noting the event, listen to any details about it. Also note what the speaker’s plans are con cerning the event. Listen for the following key words: • • • •
“participate” “plans” “open to” tree or busy
Basic Principle #3: Listen for Tone and Attitude Although you are unlikely to be asked a tone question in the Listening section, an understand ing of the speaker’s tone or attitude is helpful on many types of questions. Speakers on the TOEFL often use phrases or words that can have more than one interpretation. However, if you are aware of the speaker’s tone, you are less likely to misinterpret the phrase.
For example, lecturers on the TOEFL often say something like the following:
“...and after the war, the country experienced a prolonged period of economic growth, right?” Even though the speaker appears to be asking a question, he or she is actually just emphasizing his or her point. Being aware of the tone will help you interpret statements such as this one.
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The tone of most lectures is fairly straightforward. Because the speaker is teaching a class, the tone will usually be similar to one of the following types:
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Objective: The speaker is simply listing facts or providing information. The speaker is an authority on his or her subject and so will not be unsure or uncertain about the topic. This type of tone can appear in any of the four common lecture types. Subjective: In some cases, the speaker will be presenting a position or making an argument. The speaker will try to convince the listeners about a certain view. This type of tone is more likely to appear in compare/contrast and cause-and-effect lectures. Inquisitive: There are also classroom discussions on the TOEFL. During a discus sion, the professor leads the class through a number of questions, so the tone is inquisitive. The professor considers and responds to the students’ questions as the lecture progresses. Abstract category/specific example lectures typically involve discussion, although other lecture types may as well.
Conversations tend to have slightly more personal tones. You can expect the tone to be similar to one of the following types:
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Excited: This tone is typical of the significant event conversation. The speaker is interested in the event and may be trying to influence others about it. Disappointed/upset: In this case, the speaker is not happy about the situation. He or she may express dissatisfaction with things or events. This usually occurs during the problem/solution encounter, although it can appear in other conversations too. Uncertain or confused: Sometimes the speaker is uncertain or confused, especially in service encounters. The speaker will be unsure of what action to take or how to proceed.
Of course, you don’t have to spend valuable time during your test trying to figure out the exact tone. However, having a basic idea of the tone—as well as of the purpose of the lecture or con versation—will aid you when you are eliminating answers.
Basic Principle #4: Pay Attention to Transitions From your work on the Reading section of the TOEFL, you should have a pretty good under standing of the common transitions used in writing. These transitions show up in lectures and conversations as well, and it is good to note them. However, two other types of transitions to be especially alert for are reversals and negations.
Reversal Transitions Often, speakers on the TOEFL will reverse the direction or logic of the conversation or lecture. If you’re not listening carefully, you may misunderstand the speaker. For example, look at the following lines:
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In this situation, the speaker abruptly changes the topic. These reversals happen occasionally dur ing lectures and somewhat more frequently during conversations. Here are some phrases to listen for.
“you know what?” “we’ll come back to that in a moment” “actually, let’s” “instead” “better yet” “I don’t want to get into that now”
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Negation Transitions Also, speakers will sometimes use a positive word to indicate a negation. Look for phrases like the following, where the negation words are italicized:
“I don’t have to explain that, right!” “You guys are okay with this, correct!” “We don’t need to go into that now, okay! In each case, the speaker uses a positive word to express a negative statement. When used in this way, the positive words indicate that the speaker assumes the listener knows what the speaker is talking about and no further discussion or explanation is needed.
Reversals and negations can be tricky, but if you’re on the lookout for them, they’ll be easier to handle.
CRACKING THE LISTENING SECTION: BASIC APPROACH Now we’re ready to crack the Listening section. Here are the steps.
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Actively listen to the selection, noting the main idea or purpose, structure, and tone. Attack the question. There’s no skipping in the Listening section, so you’ll have to do each question as it appears. Use POE aggressively, using your understanding of the main idea, previous questions, and any notes you’ve taken to help you.
Let’s try the steps on a practice passage. Use your CD or online audio files to follow along.
Step 1: Actively Listen to the Selection If you intend to take notes, take a moment to organize your scrap paper. Remember, you don’t want to try to write down everything. Instead, as we’ve discussed, focus on the main topic, structure, and tone. Listen carefully for these parts and be sure to write them down.
Keep in mind the basic principles you have learned throughout this book. You should expect to hear the main idea or purpose at the very beginning of the speech and the majority of the details and supporting examples throughout the rest. A lecture or conversation usually will have a conclusion as well. Screens similar to the ones that follow will introduce each passage.
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When you are ready, play Track 3 on the accompanying CD or audio files online. After you are finished listening to the lecture and questions that follow, try to an swer the questions below. If you are having difficulty answering the questions, re play the selection. A transcript of the lecture is also included on the next two pages for your reference. (But don’t cheat and read along as you listen to the track!) What is the main idea of the lecture?
What is the structure of the lecture?
What is the lecturer’s tone?
Let’s look at a transcript of the lecture and find the important points.
Narrator: Listen to a biology professor give a talk on an environmental issue. Professor: There’s been a lot of talk over the last few decades about greenhouse gases—those gases in the atmosphere that trap radiation from the Sun so that after it passes into the atmosphere it doesn’t pass out. People are increasingly conscious of the environmental effects of their daily activities, which is a good thing. But all the publicity can be confusing too. I think writing for the general public about science is a real service, but ... well, it’s not nice to say, but ... l wish some of these people would verify things with real scientists more often. They’d save themselves some embarrassment. With that in mind, I’d like to clear up some things about that hot topic: carbon dioxide. Carbon dioxide is a greenhouse gas; it absorbs energy from the Sun. In that respect, it’s like water vapor and methane, two other naturally occurring greenhouse gases. You all know that carbon dioxide is produced when we burn fossil fuels—coal, petroleum products, natural gas—and that those fuels run a lot of the machines and manufacturing processes that drive modern life. Those are the sources that get all the public attention, but, of course, we produce carbon dioxide as a waste product too. It’s one of the by-products of respiration. We breathe in air, use up some of the oxygen, and breathe out air that contains carbon dioxide. So do other animals. Because carbon dioxide is part 310 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
of the natural life cycle, nature has a way of dealing with it. How does nature control the amount of carbon dioxide floating around in the atmosphere? Male Student: I thought the ocean soaked it up.
Professor: Yes, that’s one way. Carbon dioxide is very soluble in water. Soluble...uh, I don’t have to explain that one to you because the root’s related to the word dissolve, right? So carbon dioxide is pulled readily out of the air and into the water. Now, the oceans also release some of their carbon dioxide, but on balance, they absorb more; so that means that, if we produce artificially more than would naturally be emitted through life processes, the ocean could, as Jason put it, soak it up. Unfortunately, if we’re looking for a solution to carbon dioxide pollution, the ocean isn’t it, and that’s because the ocean absorbs gases from the atmosphere very, very slowly. If we suddenly increased the amount of carbon dioxide we produced, current models suggest that it would take 1,000 years for it to mix into seawater. And even then, there would still be a small amount left. So over the short and medium term, we can’t rely on the ocean to take up the slack for us. Okay, so that’s one way nature deals with carbon dioxide. What’s the other? Female Student: Plants, isn’t it? I mean, plants breathe carbon dioxide the way we breathe air.
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and use more of it—in other words, the amount of carbon dioxide used up by plants can increase quickly in response to the environment. Some people have suggested that we can use that natural phenomenon to help deal with increased levels of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Narrator: What is the discussion mainly about? What is the problem with relying on the oceans to solve the problem of excess amounts of carbon dioxide? Why does the professor mention that carbon dioxide is a by-product of respiration? What did the professor call areas where carbon dioxide is absorbed in large quantities? What did the professor mean by this? As stated earlier, expect the main idea to show up early in the lecture. The very first sentence of the lecture gives us the topic.
“There’s been a lot of talk over the last few decades about greenhouse gases—those gases in the atmosphere that trap radiation from the Sun so that after it passes into the atmosphere it doesn’t pass out.” A little later on, the professor specifies exactly what aspect of greenhouse gases the lecture will discuss.
“With that in mind, I’d like to clear up some things about that hot topic: carbon dioxide.” From these lines, we have the basic purpose of the lecture. Hopefully, you are now on the look out for the things the professor wants to clear up. The professor continues to talk about two major areas. The first is in the following lines:
Professor: How does nature control the amount of carbon dioxide floating around in the atmosphere? Male Student: I thought the ocean soaked it up.
Professor: Yes, that’s one way. This is the first important detail in the lecture. You may have noticed that the professor also mentioned the following:
“Unfortunately, if we’re looking for a solution to carbon dioxide pollution, the ocean isn’t it, and that’s because the ocean absorbs gases from the atmosphere very, very slowly.” These lines have a good tone indicator (“unfortunately”) and a good transition (“and that’s be cause”). You should also note that the professor repeats the fact about the ocean not being suit able for absorbing carbon dioxide in the next four lines as well, so you have a few opportunities to pick up this important point.
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The next major detail occurs here.
Professor: Okay, so that’s one way nature deals with carbon dioxide. What’s the other? Female Student: Plants, isn’t it? I mean, plants breathe carbon dioxide the way we breathe air. The professor continues with the following, which you may have noted:
However - this is the interesting part - unlike the ocean, green plants soak up carbon dioxide to use it - to make the energy they need to live and grow. Once again, the lecturer uses strong transitions, such as “however,” and tone words, such as “interesting part,” to alert you to important details. If you were able to pick up on these parts of the lecture, chances are you’ll be in pretty good shape for the Listening section. As we’ve mentioned before, you’re not expected to memorize or comprehend every detail of the lecture.
Here are some possible responses to the earlier questions. • • •
What is the main idea of the lecture? Oceans and plants arg nature’s way of controlling carbon dioxide. What is the structure of the lecture? It’s mostly compare anti contract. Two methods are looked at. What is the lecturer’s tone! Mostly neutral, with occasional positive (“here’s the interesting part”) and negative (“unfortunately”) digressions.
You’ll find that a basic understanding of these major points will help you to answer most of the questions following the lecture or conversation. The important thing is not to become stressed or worried that you didn’t understand every single part of the talk.
Step 2: Attack the Questions The questions in the Listening section are very similar to the questions in the Read ing section. Of course, the major differences are that you will hear the lecture or conversation only once and that you will not be able to skip questions and come back to them later. The following types of questions appear most often in the Listening section:
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Main idea questions: The first question of the set will typically be a main idea question. Considering the work you’ve done up to this point, the main idea ques tion shouldn’t be too difficult for you to answer. However, we’ll go over some POE strategies just in case. Detail questions: The majority of the questions following the lectures or conversa tions will ask about facts from the selections. The details will not be about minor points, but rather about major points.
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Purpose questions: Some questions will ask you why the speaker mentioned a particular detail or fact. For these questions, it is helpful to think about the overall structure of the selection. Definition questions: Often, during a lecture (definitions rarely, if ever, show up in conversations), the lecturer will define a particular term for his or her students. Pay attention if you hear the speaker signal a definition with one of the following expressions: • “A caucus is a secret party meeting.” • “A caucus is defined as a secret party meeting.” • “A caucus is the word used for a secret party meeting.” Sometimes the speaker will reverse the order of the term and the definition. • “A secret party meeting is known as a caucus. ” • “A secret party meeting is called a caucus.” • “A secret party meeting is referred to as a caucus” Finally the definition may be placed in the middle of a larger phrase. • “A caucus—a secret party meeting—is usually held in emergencies.” • “A caucus, that is, a secret party meeting, is usually held in emergencies.” • “A caucus, or a secret party meeting, is usually held in emergencies.” Inference or suggestion questions: The TOEFL will often test your ability to “read between the lines” (or more precisely, “listen between the lines”). There will often be questions asking what the speaker is suggesting or what he or she really means by a particular phrase. A person will often suggest something by using one of the following phrases: • “Why not come back later?” • “How about coming back later?” • “What about coming back later?” • “Why don’t you come back later?” • “If I were you, I’d come back later.” • “You should come back later.” • “You could always come back later.” • “Maybe you could come back later.” • “It may not be a bad idea to come back later.” Each of these constructions is a way of expressing the same basic idea that some one may return later. Multiple-multiple-choice questions: Some questions in the Listening section require you to select more than one example. Many times, these questions ask you to list the main details or points made in the lecture.
Step 3: Use POE Aggressively Because you are unable to listen to the lecture or conversation more than once, you’ll have to focus on using good POE strategies when answering the questions. If you’ve missed a key point of the lecture or conversation, you can still increase your chances of getting a question correct by eliminating answers that aren’t likely to be correct. Before we go through the question types and the POE strategies, you may want to listen to Track 3 on the accompanying CD or online one more time. We’ll identify the question types and apply test-taking techniques to work through the questions that follow.
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Main Idea Questions Question 1 is a typical main idea question on the TOEFL.
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A new solution for carbon dioxide pollution Types of plants used to absorb excess carbon dioxide How nature controls the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere Two ways carbon dioxide is absorbed by the ocean
As we saw earlier in our active listening section, the speaker began by talking about carbon dioxide and mentioned two major ways that carbon dioxide is absorbed by nature—by oceans and by plants. Thus, (C) is the best answer. Here’s why the other answer choices are incorrect.
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For main idea questions, wrong answer choices may be too specific. For example, (B) talks only about plants. Even if you weren’t sure exactly what the lecture was about, you may have noticed that plants did not appear until the end of the lec ture. Any details that you hear mentioned only toward the end of the lecture will never be the main idea. Of course, some answers will contain information that is not mentioned at all. Choice (A) states that the lecture was about a “solution” for pollution. But no solu tion was offered. Even if you feel that you missed something important during the lecture, be aggressive. The lecture mentioned two key points: the ocean and plants. Choice (A) states there is “one solution.” The great thing about a multiple-choice test is that there are usually a few ways to look at wrong answers. Questions on the TOEFL will also typically contain a trap answer, which uses words or phrases from the lecture or conversation in a deceptive manner. Choice (D) is a good example of a trap answer. The first part of the choice talks about “two ways.” This matches up with the two key examples used in the lecture. Next, the choice talks about “carbon dioxide,” which obviously is part of the lecture also. Finally, the choice contains “the ocean,” a match with one of the examples in the lecture. Unfortunately, the lecture is about two ways nature absorbs carbon diox ide, not two ways the ocean absorbs it. The lesson here is that if you are uncertain of the right answer, and if one of the choices seems too good to be true, it’s a trap. 10. Cracking the Listening Section | 315
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Still, be careful to use this advice only when you’re stuck; otherwise, you’ll drive yourself crazy over-analyzing the answer choices. One other wrong answer type that may appear on a main idea question is a choice that is too broad. This is the opposite of an overly specific answer choice. For ex ample, suppose there had been the following answer choice: (E) The effect of environmental issues on everyday life This answer is too general. The lecture does have an environmental theme, but the correct answer has to reflect more of the details of the talk, not just the basic idea.
POE Strategies for Main Idea Questions
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Answers that are too specific-. Remember that the main idea should be something that ties into the entire lecture. If the answer choice focuses on a detail that you remember hearing only once, it is too specific. Similarly, an answer choice that focuses on something that is mentioned only toward the end of the lecture will not be correct. Answers that are too broad: If the answer choice deals with a topic or theme men tioned early in the lecture but doesn’t address the details of the talk, it is too broad and therefore incorrect. Answers that are not mentioned: The TOEFL is not a memorization test. If you don’t recall hearing anything about the focus of a particular answer choice, then that choice is most likely incorrect. The selections on the TOEFL are centered on a topic and continually refer back to it; thus, it is unlikely that you somehow missed the main idea. Answers that are traps: Use this only as a last resort. If you are really stuck on a question, avoid answers that seem too good to be true.
Once you’ve answered the main idea question, keep the answer you’ve selected in mind. It can help you on some of the other questions.
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Detail Questions As you know from the Reading section, detail questions ask you about specific facts from the discussion. Fortunately, the wrong answers to detail questions in the Listening section tend to be a little more obviously wrong. Question 2 is a typical detail question.
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What is the problem with relying on the oceans to solve the problem of excess amounts of carbon dioxide?
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Most sources of carbon dioxide are far from the ocean. Seawater takes in carbon dioxide very slowly. The oceans have already absorbed their limit of carbon dioxide. The number of marine plants is decreasing.
The answer to this question was one of the key points in the lecture. Recall that the professor alerted us to an important point by saying the following:
“Unfortunately, if we’re looking for a solution to carbon dioxide pollution, the ocean isn’t it, and that’s because the ocean absorbs gases from the atmosphere very, very slowly.” We noted this because of the speaker’s use of the important tone indicator word unfortunately. Thus, the correct answer is (B). If you are having trouble identifying the incorrect answer, you may still be able to eliminate some answers. Extreme answers, for example, are usually incorrect. You’ve seen these answers in the Reading section, and they appear in the Listening section as well. Choice (C) is a good example of an extreme choice. It makes a pretty absolute statement: that oceans have “absorbed their limit” of carbon dioxide. Many extreme answers use words such as the following:
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Another way of eliminating answers on detail questions is to cross off choices that are contrary to the main idea. For example, in this lecture, if you were able to figure out that the speaker gave oceans and plants as the two main examples, you should eliminate (D) because that focuses on marine plants, which was a separate example in the lecture.
If you keep your eyes out for these two common types of wrong answers, you will have a 50 percent chance of getting the question right; those odds aren’t so bad!
POE Strategies for Detail Questions When you are stumped on a detail question, don’t give up. Look for the following types of answers and eliminate them: •
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Extreme answers: Compare the answers. Eliminate any with extreme wording and go with the safe answer. Correct answers on the TOEFL often use fairly bland language. Answers that are contrary to the main idea*. Even if you are uncertain of a specific detail from the selection, you may be able to use your understanding of the main idea to eliminate choices.
Detail questions may also have trap answers. Unfortunately, these answers are harder to identify than those on main idea questions. But again, if all else fails, try not to pick answers that seem too obvious or easy.
Purpose Questions It is important to try to pay attention to the structure of the selection as you listen. If you grasp the structure, it will make purpose questions, like the following one, easier.
3. Why does the professor mention that carbon dioxide is a by-product of respiration? a.
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To emphasize the importance of carbon dioxide to life on Earth To explain the need for more scientific writings about the environment To provide some background information for a discussion of carbon dioxide To give an example of the dangers of environmental pollution
Before trying to answer this question, think about the structure of the lecture. We saw earlier that the professor looks at two key examples (oceans and plants) and compares and contrasts them. Although the lectures on the TOEFL may have some minor digressions, most of the information should in some way relate to the big picture. That means you can safely eliminate
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answers that seem to introduce new ideas. For example, (B) should be eliminated. The lecture is not about scientific writings (although they are mentioned once, they never appear again). Similarly, (D) can be eliminated as well: the lecture doesn’t focus on environmental pollution or its dangers.
That leaves (A) and (C). Once again, think about the big picture and look for the answer con taining information that is contrary to the main idea. Choice (A) talks about “life on Earth.” But half of the lecture is about the ocean, which is not alive, so eliminate (A). That leaves us with (C) as the correct answer.
POE Strategies for Purpose Questions Keep the main idea in mind as you attack purpose questions. Get rid of answers that contain the following: • •
New ideas: The purpose of examples and details is to support the main idea. An swer choices that contain new information not related to the main idea are wrong. Information contrary to the main idea: You should also eliminate any answers that seem to go against the main idea of the lecture.
Definition Questions Definition questions require you to recall a very specific part of the lecture. Thus, they can be very difficult. Question 4 is an example of one.
4. What did the professor call areas where carbon dioxide is absorbed in large
quantities? a. b. c. d.
Sinks Greenhouses Algae Wastes
Unfortunately, if you didn’t catch this part of the lecture, POE won’t help you much. You can use your knowledge of the words and common sense to eliminate choices, but if you’re unsure of the words, you’ll have to take a blind guess.
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The professor defined the word at this point in the lecture:
“Such an area—including forests of large, old-growth trees, and also the ocean—where carbon dioxide is absorbed in large quantities, is called a carbon sink. The carbon dioxide gas is sucked in kind of the way water is sucked down the drain in your sink after you wash the dishes.” Therefore, the correct answer is (A).
POE Strategies for Definition Questions
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Use your vocabulary: If you happen to know one or more of the words in the answer choices, see if any of the words will work. It is unlikely that the correct definition for a question on the TOEFL will be radically different from the stan dard definition of the word.
Inference/Suggestion Questions For inference and suggestion questions, you will often hear a portion of the speech replayed before you answer the questions. When a portion of the lecture is going to be repeated, you will always see a screen similar to the one below.
Listen again to part of the discussion. Then answer the question.
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On the actual test, the excerpt from the selection will not appear on the screen; you will only hear it.
5. What did the professor mean by this?
I think writing for the general public about science is a real service, but...well, it’s not nice to say, but...I wish some of these people would verify things with real scientists more often. They’d save themselves some embarrassment.
[The text above will not be shown on the screen. You will hear the audio only.] a.
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He is frequently asked to write articles about science. Some popular writing about science is inaccurate. Students should not be embarrassed at their lack of knowledge. More writers are becoming interested in the topic of pollution.
For these types of questions, we have to figure out what the speaker is really saying. The phrase in question contains a suggestion.
“I wish some of these people would verify things with real scientists more often.” Thus, the speaker is indicating that she thinks the writers need to verify their work. The next part of the selection clarifies this suggestion further.
“They’d save themselves some embarrassment.” Let’s start eliminating some answers.
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Choice (A) is on the wrong topic. The speaker is stating his wish for other people’s writing, not making a suggestion to himself; that wouldn’t make sense. Eliminate it. Choice (C) has the same problem. The professor is talking about writers, not students.
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Choice (D) has the wrong tone. Even if you’re not exactly sure what the speaker is trying to say, you may be able to identify the selection as positive or negative. In this case, the selection is somewhat negative (“They’d save themselves some embar rassment”), but (D) is fairly positive. So eliminate it. We’re left with (B) as the correct answer. Let’s try it again, this time with an inference question.
6. Listen again to part of the discussion. Then
answer the question.
Soluble...uh, I don’t have to explain that one to you, because the root’s related to the word dissolve, right?
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He is not sure about the origin of the word. He has previously explained the meaning of the word. The students should understand the meaning of the term. He is using the term in an unusual way.
This selection contains a good example of the negations we mentioned earlier when discussing transitions. As used in this context, the word right means that the speaker assumes the students understand the topic without needing any further explanation. We also have some POE op tions on this question. •
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Choice (A) is on the wrong topic. The professor is addressing the students, not him self. Eliminate this choice. Choice (D) has the wrong tone. The professor is indicating that he doesn’t “have to explain” the term, so it doesn’t make sense for him to use the term in an unusual way and not explain it. That leaves (B) and (C). Choice (B) is tempting, but we have no way of knowing whether it’s true; remember that on the TOEFL, we should be able to support our inferences. Therefore, (C) is the best answer.
POE Strategies for Inference or Suggestion Questions
The three most important POE strategies for these questions are to pay attention to the following types of answers:
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Wrong topic: Stick to the topic. Think about the main idea, and eliminate an swers that don’t relate to it. Also, eliminate answers that don’t make sense based on your understanding of the selection. Wrong tone: Even if you’re unsure of what the speaker is saying, you may be able to figure out the tone. Decide if the speaker views the subject as positive or nega tive, and eliminate answers that don’t work. Extreme: Inference and suggestion questions often have extreme answer choices as well. If you see one, eliminate it.
Multiple-Multiple-Choice Questions These questions ask you to select more than one answer. You must rely on your knowledge of the main idea and the structure of the selection to answer them correctly. Question 7 is an example of this type.
7. How are plants different from the oceans in the way they absorb carbon dioxide?
Click on 2 answers.
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Plants never release carbon dioxide back into the atmosphere. The rate of absorption by plants can increase rapidly. Plants immediately use what they absorb. Plants do not convert carbon dioxide into other chemicals.
As you can see, it’s important while you’re listening to try to understand the structure of the lecture. This lecture involved a comparison and contrast between two ways in which carbon di oxide is absorbed by nature. You may remember that the professor hinted that some important information was about to come when he made the following statement:
“However—this is the interesting part—unlike the ocean, green plants soak up carbon dioxide to use it—to make the energy they need to live and grow." Thus, we know that plants use the carbon dioxide they absorb. Now, let’s use POE. You may have noticed that both (A) and (C) contain extreme language: the words “never” and “immedi ately.” Thus, in this instance as well as with other questions on the TOEFL, they’re wrong. So, even if you didn’t remember the exact differences mentioned in the talk, you can still get the question right. 10. Cracking the Listening Section | 323
POE Strategies for Multiple-Multiple-Choice Questions Multiple-multiple-choice ques tions are typically either detail questions or main idea questions, so use the same POE strategies provided earlier in this chapter.
FINAL TIPS FOR THE LISTENING SECTION
Tip 1: Know the Test, and You're Halfway There! Because the New Generation TOEFL iBT Test is given on such a grand scale, just like any standardized test, appropriations have been made so that every official ETS iBT test you take essentially looks the same. This includes everything from the instructions on the screen to test day procedures. And, since ETS has done their utmost to make sure there are no major changes made to the test to throw you off or trip you up, knowing the test will only help YOU save precious moments on the test. Remember, “Knowing is half the battle.”
Tip 2: Scratch Paper—Use it WISELY As you probably already know, scratch paper is provided to you on all sections of the New Gen eration TOEFL iBT Test. While this fact can help you keep things in order on the Reading section and help you brainstorm on the Writing section, scratch paper should be your staple weapon of choice on the Listening and Speaking sections. “Why,” you ask?
The answer is simple. On the Reading section, the reading passages are always there as a veri table safety net for you to fall back on and check your answers with as you go along. Be cause you have only ONE chance to listen to the conversations and lectures in the Listening and Speaking sections, your notes must be thorough enough that you catch as many details as possible. (This does NOT mean, however, that you have to write down the conversations and lectures verbatim, because NO ONE on Earth writes that fast!) These excellent notes will be yours to look at for as long as you need to during the test (The notes are collected and destroyed at the end of every test.) Remember, if you think it’s important, WRITE IT DOWN!
Tip 3: Know Your Vocabulary! The English language is vast, and while the exact number of words in the English language is a hotly debated topic, it never hurts to know more vocabulary words. Because the topics covered on the TOEFL iBT do not range out of a certain scope of academic topics, knowing the jargon used in those fields will benefit you greatly. Since seeing a word in context is the fastest way to improve your working vocabulary—a vocabulary that you can readily use—read as much as you can and watch your vocabulary soar to new heights! Check out Chapter 6 for a helpful vocabulary list with terms, definitions, pronunciation, and more.
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Tip 4: Do What You Can To Prepare Tip 3 told you to read as much as you can as a way to improve your working vocabulary. How ever, doing this alone will not improve your English ability. You also need to hear how the words are spoken. In English, as in other languages, HOW something is said is just as impor tant as WHAT is said. Thus, intonation plays a role in how what you say gets received. You should not only listen to English, but REPEAT what you hear, as well. If imitation is the best form of flattery, then why not imitate NATIVE speakers of English?
NOTE TAKING
The Ten Commandments of Note Taking 1.
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Don’t write everything you hear. When listening, be alert and attentive. Pay atten tion to the main points. Concentrate on the meat of the material, not the fat. USE KEY WORDS! Notes should NEVER be in full sentences. Take accurate notes. Paraphrase what the speaker says using your own words, but do not change the meaning. If you are going to quote directly, quote correctly. Think BEFORE you start writing. Write down only things that are important. Do not take notes just to take notes. Have a uniform system of abbreviations or shortcuts that make sense to you. Use an outline with indentations to show importance. Leave space for additional notes. BE CONCISE! Keep your notes short and to the point. Don’t worry if you miss a point. Don’t keep notes on oddly shaped pieces of paper. You don’t want to take notes on a napkin and accidentally throw your notes away! Shortly after finishing your notes, go back and fill in spots you missed and spell out words you wrote only parts of the first time. Review your notes regularly.
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THE FIVE R'S OF NOTE TAKING
Record
During the lecture, write down as many meaningful facts as possible. Write legibly.
Reduce
Don’t try to write everything. Listen to part of the lecture and paraphrase what the speaker has said. Summarizing clarifies meaning, strengthens rela tionships between ideas, and strengthens memory.
Recite
Cover the details of your notes and attempt to summarize what you have just heard using only the keywords. This will help you internalize the material faster.
Reflect
The best students will look back on their notes and categorize them in their mind. Putting things into categories, outlines, or other structures will help when trying to access the information at a later date.
Review
If you spend ten minutes a day reviewing your notes, you will spend less time cramming for tests. You will feel more relaxed going into a test and score bet ter as well!
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6 HABITS OF BAD LISTENERS
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Thinking the Subject Matter is Boring Everyone has subjects they don’t like. Most people have a favorite subject in school. Have you noticed that you pay more attention in the classes you like?
All you have to do is remember one tiny word and you’ll be okay: USE. Good listen ers will try to find SOMETHING practical in what the speaker is saying so the listener may use it later on.
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Criticizing the Speaker Have you also noticed that school subjects and whether or not you like them also affects what you think about the teacher? Many students feel the teachers of the classes they like are prettier or more handsome, smile more, and are nicer! This is WRONG!
Since you will not be tested on HOW the speaker speaks, whether he or she speaks with an accent, or speaking speed, DO NOT CRITICIZE these things!
Even though the speaker’s style might be annoying, good listeners soon become oblivious to the speaker’s mannerisms and pay attention to the speaker’s content. Good listeners know that WHAT the speaker is saying is ten times more impor tant than HOW he or she says it.
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Pay Attention Too many times, we let little things about a speaker bother us. Sometimes it can be as simple as how a certain word is said, or the speaker’s accent. Either way, if we pay attention to these kinds of things and not to what the speaker is saying, we will miss the important points the speaker is trying to make. Sometimes, the problem is that what the speaker is saying comes in conflict with our own opinions and because that bothers us, we tune the speaker out because we don’t like hearing about things we don’t agree with. This can be especially dangerous, because whether or not we agree with what is being said, we should be paying attention. After all, it could be on the test!
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Organization We mentioned earlier that organization while taking notes is very important. While your personal organization is very important, understanding the speaker’s organization is equally, if not more, important. If you know what the speaker’s main purpose is and you are able to figure out the organization (sometimes this is given in the opening statements of the speaker’s lecture), you will be better able to anticipate what the speaker is going to say. Expecting someone to say something is one of the tactics of successful active listeners.
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Main Ideas vs. Details The more things you listen to, as well as the more often you are required to take notes, the better you will get at each of these practices. You must be able to dis tinguish between main ideas and minor details quickly. The quicker you are able to do this well, the better organized your notes will be. This will allow you to find information easier when the time comes to access your notes.
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Take Notes While You Listen While you are listening, make sure you are writing things down, not getting lost in the speaker’s lecture. Sometimes what the speaker is saying can be overwhelm ing, but just as Rome wasn’t built in a day, you won’t get better at note taking unless you practice a lot. The more often you take notes while you listen to some thing, the more information you will retain.
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Listening Summary Good job! You are halfway through your TOEFL preparation. Here are some important points to remember that will help you crack the Listening section.
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Don’t memorize; understand! The most common mistake on the Listening section is to try to do too much. Look for the big picture: main idea, structure, and tone. Don’t get lost in the details.
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Taking notes is optional: If taking notes interferes with your ability to comprehend what you’re listening to, then don’t do it. Take notes only if you are able to write and maintain your focus on the selection.
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If you do choose to take notes, remember the Five R’s of note taking: record, reduce, recite, reflect, review.
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Know what bad answers look like: Make sure you’re familiar with the kinds of bad answers that appear most frequently on the TOEFL.
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Stay aggressive! If you don’t catch an important detail, don’t panic. Stay aggressive and eliminate answers based on your knowledge of the main idea, structure, tone, and previous questions.
Now that we’ve worked with the passages and lectures on the TOEFL, it’s time to create some passages and speeches of our own. Let’s practice the Listening section with some drills, and then move on to the Speaking and Writing sections.
Chapter 11 Listening Practice Drills You’re now ready to crack the Listening section. Re member to use the strategies and guidelines you learned in the previous chapter. Pay special attention to POE (Process of Elimination). If you’re stuck, get rid of as many bad answers as you can. After you’ve finished, check your answers and look over the expla nations provided in the next chapter. Good luck!
Listening Practice Drill #1: A Conversation On the TOEFL you will see screens similar to the ones shown below and on the pages that follow. Listen to Track 4 on
the CD or in your Student Tools. Then answer the following questions.
Student Services Conversation
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1. What are the speakers mainly discussing?
a. b. c. d.
An increase in student services fees Helping Kamah figure out why she’s feeling down Majoring in psychology The difference between professionals and amateurs
2. Why does Julia encourage Kamah to go to the student counseling center? a. b. c. d.
She feels it was a helpful resource for her. It’s off-campus, so no one will know she’s going. She won’t need a referral to go. She will be judged by the professionals.
3. What is Kamah's initial reaction to going to the student counseling center? a. b. c. d.
She She She She
is afraid of being judged. doesn’t think it will help. has already gone and found it unhelpful. didn’t know it was an option.
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Listen again to part of the discussion. Then answer the question.
4. Listen again to part of the conversation. Then answer the question. K: Yeah, I guess. But I bet it costs a lot. I just don’t have much to spend these days. J: Actually, it’s one of the resources we pay for with our student services fees every semester. I mean, there’s a limit as to how often you can go in a semester, but at least you can get some kind of help at no extra cost.
What does Julia imply about the student counseling center? a. b. c. d.
She no longer needs the support of the center. She thinks Kamah will be fine without going. It will not cost Kamah anything to start getting help. It is an underused resource on campus.
5. What does Kamah say are her primary symptoms?
Click on 2 answers. a. b. c. d.
She feels down a lot. She has thought about transferring schools. She has not been sleeping well. She is losing weight.
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Listening Practice Drill #2: A Conversation Listen to Track 5 on the CD or in your Student Tools. Then answer the following questions.
1. Why does the professor want to talk with the student?
a. b. c. d.
She She She She
has exciting news to share. wants to offer him an internship. is concerned about his grades. wants to recognize him for his achievements.
2. What explanation does the student offer in response to the professor’s concern? a. b. c. d.
He has been spending too much time with friends. He was up late playing video games. He doesn’t care about his grades. He has been working more than usual.
3. What does the professor offer as the first step in a plan to help the student?
a. b. c. d.
Attend a different section of the class Read anything he missed already Attend office hours Write an extra paper
4. What else does the student commit to in order to ensure he passes the class? a. b. c. d.
Doing extra credit projects outside of class Reading any material he missed Reading extra material Conducting additional online research on the topics covered
5. Listen again to part of the conversation. “Plus, if you’re not in class, I’m afraid you won’t learn the material well enough to get a good enough grade on the final to pass the class.”
What does the professor imply? a. b. c. d.
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Listening Practice Drill #3: A Lecture Listen to Track 6 on the CD or in your Student Tools. Then answer the following questions.
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1. What is the lecture mainly about? a. b. c. d.
How composers express their political beliefs in their music Why composers write their music in particular styles How two composers incorporated nationalistic themes in their music Why Louis Armstrong was a popular musician
2. According to the professor, which of the following did composers include in their music to represent their national identities? a. b. c. d.
Folk songs Non-European ideals Mazurkas African music
3. Why does the professor believe that African Americans were interested in purchasing recordings of slave spirituals? a. b. c. d.
They expressed African Americans’ desires to be recognized as equals. They represented music similar to that of African Americans’ ancestors. They represented music with which former slaves and their early descendants could identify. They identified feelings that were common across all African Americans.
4. Listen again to part of the lecture.
“So, what do I mean by saying that the nationalism in jazz is split along ethnic lines? Well, check this out: jazz originally came out of spiritual songs slaves would sing.” What did the professor mean by this?
“Check this out.” a. b. c. d.
He’s going to answer his own question. He needs to confirm some facts. He is going to check out some jazz from the library. He is going to write a check.
5. Why did the professor think it was interesting that Louis Armstrong was popular among both White Americans and African Americans?
Click on 2 answers. a. b. c. d.
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6. Why does the professor believe that Chopin incorporated folk rhythms in his music? a. b. c. d.
He wanted to help the Polish people maintain a sense of identity. He disliked the folk rhythms. He wanted to create modern dance music. He wanted to honor the Mazovia region of Poland.
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Listening Practice Drill #4: A Lecture Listen to Track 7 on the CD or in your Student Tools. Then answer the following questions.
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1. What is the lecture mainly about? a. b. c. d.
How to lose weight Why people struggle to lose weight Why America’s obesity problem is worse than that in other countries The impact that fast food has had on Americans’ health
2. Which of the following is true, according to the professor? a. b. c. d.
It’s easy to lose weight. Walking to work is better than driving. Portion sizes have shrunk in the last 50 years. There can be more than one factor that contributes to weight gain.
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3. Listen again to part of the lecture.
“One consideration is that for some folks, the system that sends signals back and forth between organs such as the stomach and the brain is out of whack. So what can happen is that when the stomach sends a signal to the brain to stop taking in food, the brain doesn’t recognize it and so the person just keeps eating.” What did the professor mean by this?
“Out of whack”
a. b. c. d.
The system The system The system The system
may be unemployed. may be overused. may not function properly. may cause overeating.
4. What does the professor suggest as a viable weight loss solution?
a. b. c. d.
Dieting Exercise Protein shakes Using a scale
5. Which one of the following factors is a possible contributor to the obesity epidemic? a. b. c. d.
Stress Massage Salt intake Increased movement
6. What does the professor believe contribute to the likelihood to overeat? Click on 2 answers. a. b. c. d.
Watching television Reward system Nausea Broken feedback system
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Listening Practice Drill #5: A Lecture Listen to Track 8 on the CD or in your Student Tools. Then answer the following questions.
1. According to the professor, why was trade with nonessential goods difficult?
a. b. c. d.
Poor societies cannot devote resources to making nonessential goods. Nonessential goods are often large and heavy to carry. Different societies have different systems of value. The decorations used by early societies were too simple to be valuable.
2. Why did people begin relying on gold and gold specialists? Click on 3 answers. a. b. c. d.
Gold was difficult to transport. Travelers were in danger from thieves. Only specialists could determine its value. Gold doesn’t spoil.
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3. How did gold specialists indicate the value of the gold they received?
a. b. c. d.
They They They They
recorded where it had been mined. recorded its purity and density. lent out only the highest-quality gold. issued receipts in different colors.
4. Listen again to part of the lecture. Then answer the question. Male Student So if you were storing 500 ounces of gold of whatever percent purity, you’d give the receipt back, and get your 500 ounces of gold back? They kept it for you in your own little drawer or something? Male Professor. Whoops! I guess I did make it sound that way—thanks for catching that!
What did the professor mean by this?
“Whoops! I guess I did make it sound that way—thanks for catching that!” a. b. c. d.
He was not sure what the student said. His statement was misleading. He wanted to emphasize a different point. The man’s interpretation is correct.
5. Why did the professor say the receipts issued by gold shops were the first ancestors of money? a. b. c. d.
All gold shops used the same standard format. They were written on small slips of paper. They represented the value of something else. They were used in societies where bartering was still practiced.
6. What is an ingot?
a. b. c. d.
A piece of gold A gold specialist’s shop
A receipt A cultural object
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Chapter 12 Listening Practice Answers and Explanations
LISTENING PRACTICE DRILL #1: A CONVERSATION Here is the transcript for Drill #1. Read through it and pay attention to the structure and purpose of the talk.
J: Hi Kamah, how ya doing? K: Oh, hi, Julia. Um, I guess I’m okay.
J: Oh? What’s going on? Is everything alright? K: Yeah, I guess. It’s just...I don’t know. I’m having a hard time caring about much these days. I just feel down, but I don’t know why. I haven’t been sleeping well, and I just feel kind of down. J: Have you thought about going to the student counseling center? They’re incredibly helpful. Last year I was having a hard time with some family stuff that came up, and it was really nice to be able to talk to someone to help sort out what was going on in my head.
K: No, I don’t like sharing my problems. I don’t want people to think I can’t handle life, or something.
J: Yeah, I understand. But the cool thing about the folks there is that they’re professionals—they’re not the people you’re going to see walking around campus. And they know that we ALL have stuff going on, and sometimes just need some help to figure it out and get through it.
K: Yeah, I guess. But I bet it costs a lot. I just don’t have much to spend these days. J: Actually, it’s one of the resources we pay for with our student services fees every semester. I mean, there’s a limit as to how often you can go in a semester, but at least you can get some kind of help at no extra cost.
K: Hmm... I just feel like I’m lost and that no one will be able to help me. Do you really feel like it helped you?
J: I felt exactly the same way, and yes, I do believe that they were able to help. You’ll never know if they can if you don’t at least give it a shot. K: I suppose you’re right. Okay, I’ll at least go check them out. I guess it can’t really hurt.
This conversation falls into the students discussing a problem category, a very typical pattern on the TOEFL. Our first goal with a conversation is to identify the purpose of the interaction. Like the main idea, the purpose appears early in the conversation. In this case, the following lines reveal the purpose:
K: Oh, hi, Julia. Um, I guess I’m okay.
J: Oh? What’s going on? Everything alright? K: Yeah, I guess. It’s just...I don’t know. I’m having a hard time caring about much these days. I just feel down, but I don’t know why. I haven’t been sleeping well, and I just feel kind of blah.
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Once you identify a problem, your next goal is to try to listen for the solutions offered. In many cases, one lis tener will offer a solution, only to have the other speaker reject it. The listener will then advise another possible solution. In this case, the listener offers the following advice:
J: Have you thought about going to the student counseling center? They’re incredibly helpful. Last year I was having a really hard time with some family stuff that came up, and it was really nice to be able to talk to someone to help sort out what was going on in my head. After the speaker says she doesn’t like to share her problems because she doesn’t want to be judged, the listener responds by showing the speaker won’t be judged:
J: Yeah, I understand. But the cool thing about the folks there is that they’re professionals—they’re not the kids you’re going to see walking around campus. And they know that we ALL have stuff going on, and sometimes just need some help to figure it out and get through it. The speaker then proposes another reason not to go to the counseling center:
K: Yeah, I guess. But I bet it costs a lot. I just don’t have much to go around these days. The listener again challenges this objection:
J: Actually, it’s one of the resources we pay for with our student services fees every semester. I mean, there’s a limit as to how often you can go in a semester, but at least you can get some kind of help at no extra cost. It is also very important to pay attention to tone when listening to conversations. Does the speaker accept the solutions or reject them? Was the problem solved by the end of the conversation or will it still be an issue? Paying attention to the tone will help you with POE.
Look at some of Kamah’s responses. What is her tone?
K: No, I don’t like sharing my problems. I don’t want people to think I can’t handle life, or something. K: Yeah, I guess. But I bet it costs a lot. I just don’t have much to go around these days. K: I suppose you’re right. Okay, I’ll at least go check them ouf. I guess it can’t really hurt. It seems like she’s initially against the idea, but eventually comes around to being willing to consider the solution of going to the counseling center.
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Now, let’s take a look at the questions. 1. B This questions asks about the overall purpose of the selection. As we’ve discussed, the two are talking
about helping Kamah find a resource to help deal with feeling down. Eliminate (A) because although fees are mentioned, this is not the primary point of the selection. Choice (B) is the correct answer, because it focuses on Kamah’s emotional state. Choice (C) is out because the speakers are not talking
about what either student should major in. Choice (D) is never mentioned. 2. A This is a detail question. When Julia first suggests that Kamah should go to the counseling center, she
says she had gone, herself, and found it helpful, which directly relates to (A).
3. A This is another detail question. Kamah’s initial response to Julia’s suggestion was as follows:
K: No, I don’t like sharing my problems. I don’t want people to think I can’t handle life, or something. When she says she doesn’t want people to think she can’t handle life, that’s another way of saying she doesn’t want to be judged by others, which matches (A). 4. C This questions asks us the purpose of something one speaker says.
K: Yeah, I guess. But I bet it costs a lot. I just don’t have much to go around these days. J: Actually, it’s one of the resources we pay for with our student services fees every semester. I mean, there’s a limit as to how often you can go in a semester, but at least you can get some kind of help at no extra cost. In this part of the conversation, Julia is telling Kamah that the cost of the counseling center is already included in their student fees, so she won’t have any additional out-of-pocket expenses, which is exactly
what (C) says. 5. A, C This questions asks for two details out of the passage. Within the first two statements Kamah makes,
she says the following:
K: Yeah, I guess. It’s just...I don’t know. I’m having a hard time caring about much these days. I just feel down, but I don’t know why. I haven’t been sleeping well, and I just feel kind of blah. This statement corresponds to (A) and (C).
LISTENING PRACTICE DRILL #2: A CONVERSATION Here is a transcript of the conversation played for these questions. Make sure to read through the transcript below to familiarize yourself with the types of structures you will see on the TOEFL.
M: Um, excuse me, Professor? You wanted to speak with me? P: Yes, Matthew. Please, come in and have a seat.
M: Thank you. I got the note in my mailbox. Is everything okay?
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P: Well, Matthew, I wanted to talk with you about your grade in my class.
M: Oh? P: I’m concerned. I haven’t seen you in class much lately, and you know that participation is a significant portion of your final grade. Plus, if you’re not in class, I’m afraid you won’t learn the material well enough to get a good enough grade on the final to pass the class.
M: Yes, ma’am, I understand. It’s just...I’ve had to pick up more shifts at work because my dad lost his job and I’m trying to help pay the bills. P: That’s a tough position to be in. Let me ask, are evenings easier for you to attend class? If so, you can come to my Thursday evening class section for the rest of the semester. But I need you to commit to being there every week through the end of the term.
M: Oh, yes, that would work much better for me! I can absolutely be there for all of the remaining classes. Thank you so much! P: Well, I also need to know that you’ll learn the material that you’ve missed in the last few classes. Can you make my Friday afternoon office hours? I’m willing to meet with you to review the material if you’re willing to catch up on the reading you’ve missed. M: Yes, I can definitely make the Friday afternoon office hours. If we can start next week, I promise I’ll get all of the reading done from the classes I missed.
P: Very well, then. I’ll see you in class this Thursday evening and next, and then I’ll see you in office hours next Friday, with all of the reading under your belt. Once again, our first challenge during a conversation on the TOEFL is to identify the purpose. The purpose should appear within the first two to four exchanges between the speakers. In this conversation, the purpose is stated in the following lines:
P: Well, Matthew, I wanted to talk with you about your grade in my class. M: Oh? P: I’m concerned. I haven’t seen you in class much lately, and you know that participation is a significant portion of your final grade. Plus, if you’re not in class, I’m afraid you won’t learn the material well enough to get a good enough grade on the final to pass the class. This conversation is about what we’d call a “service encounter.” Matthew has been summoned to his professor’s office to discuss his grade in her class. After identifying a conversation as a service encounter, listen for any prob lems the student may have encountered and any actions the professional recommends to the student. The first problem occurs at the following point in the conversation:
P: I’m concerned. I haven’t seen you in class much lately, and you know that participation is a significant portion of your final grade. Plus, if you’re not in class, I’m afraid you won’t learn the material well enough to get a good enough grade on the final to pass the class.
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The student gives an explanation for his absences:
M: Yes, ma’am, I understand. It’s just...I’ve had to pick up more shifts at work because my dad lost his job and I’m trying to help pay the bills. The professor then offers two solutions:
P: That’s a tough position to be in. Let me ask, are evenings easier for you to attend class? If so, you can come to my Thursday evening class section for the rest of the semester. But I need you to commit to being there every week through the end of the term.
M: Oh, yes, that would work much better for me! I can absolutely be there for all of the remaining classes. Thank you so much! P: Well, I also need to know that you’ll learn the material that you’ve missed in the last few classes. Can you make my Friday afternoon office hours? I’m willing to meet with you to review the material if you’re willing to catch up on the reading you’ve missed. Now let’s take a look at the questions.
1. C The professor clearly states that her concern is about the student’s grades, especially since he has missed
several classes. This most closely matches (C).
2. D In response to the professor’s concern, the student replies that he’s working more to help pay the bills since his dad lost his job. This matches up nicely with (D). 3. A The tricky part of this question is that the professor offered two possible solutions and the question is
asking for the first of those two. At the very least, make sure to eliminate anything that wasn’t men
tioned at all, like (D). Then, think about which one was the bigger step, the more important step, or the one that would logically come first. In this case, the first step she offered was to allow the student
to sit in on a different section of the class that meets in the evenings instead of during the day. This most closely matches (A).
4. B The second part of the solution the professor offered was office hours on Fridays, but she included the expectation that the student would do all of the necessary reading before coming to office hours. So, the part that the student explicitly committed to was catching up on all of his reading, or (B).
5. D Remember that inference questions are supported by the content of the conversation just as much as detail questions are. When the professor says “I’m afraid you won’t learn the material well enough to
get a good enough grade on the final to pass the class,” she’s implying that if it’s not good enough to
pass then he will fail. This matches (D).
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LISTENING PRACTICE DRILL #3: A LECTURE Read the following transcript of the first lecture. Ask yourself how the lecture compares with reading selections with which you’ve worked.
One of the most interesting aspects of history is the exploration of how artists expressed their political opinions in their art, particularly when people didn’t feel they could speak their minds without recrimination. Among those expressions were music composers who incorporated ideas and motifs of a nationalistic style into their compositions. These themes, such as folk songs, can be associated with particular countries or regions of countries and are therefore part of a country’s identity. Frederic Chopin was one of the earliest composers to incorporate nationalistic ideas into his music, which was written primarily for solo piano. Born in Poland in 1810, Chopin grew up in a country that found itself controlled politically by Russia, Austria, and Prussia. As a result, he felt compelled to incorporate many elements of traditional Polish music in his compositions, in essence in an effort to maintain the Polish identity despite non-Polish rule. A particularly remarkable example of his use of folk music elements is in his mazurkas, of which he wrote at least 69 for piano. These are a variation of their original structure, which was a folk dance from Poland’s Mazovia region. These folk dances were traditionally played on bagpipe and fiddle. Chopin “borrowed” the same rhythmic structures employed in the folk dances and used those as the basis for his mazurkas. The end results are not really intended as music for dancing and are definitely more technically sophisticated, but the underlying rhythms and melodies are clearly identifiable. Closer to home, we also see obvious nationalistic tendencies in 20th century jazz music. Interestingly, though, these tendencies are split along ethnic lines: the White American influence and the African American influence. Particularly intriguing is the fact that this divide came about in a country that for so long has prided itself on welcoming people of all backgrounds, going so far as to call itself a “melting pot.”
So, what do I mean by saying that the nationalism in jazz is split along ethnic lines? Well, check this out: jazz originally came out of spiritual songs slaves would sing. In the 1920s, what was really the heart of the Jazz Age, so to speak, these spirituals were recorded and marketed directly as “race music,” and were directly marketed toward members of the African Americans. So, this begs the question: why would an art form that was reminiscent of slavery be marketed toward African Americans decades after the abolition of slavery? I think it’s because that’s part of the “national” identity that former slaves and their first couple generations of descendants could identify as their own.
Interestingly, Louis Armstrong, himself an African American, was a popular jazz artist among both African Americans and White Americans—but his form of jazz totally ignored any musical elements of the slave spiritual! He crossed the “divide,” so to speak! As jazz evolved, it continued to establish and support the desires of the African American community, especially 12. Listening Practice Answers and Explanations
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during a time when segregation was still common and racism widespread. At the pinnacle of the free jazz movement, for example, ideals such as selfsufficiency and a non-European “ideal” underscored the efforts of many independent recording facilities, not just those of the musicians themselves. Just as with a reading passage, a lecture will state its main purpose first. However, since the lectures are spoken, you will probably hear a brief introduction or greeting before the main idea is introduced. Here’s an example.
One of the most interesting aspects of history is the exploration of how artists expressed their political opinions in their art, particularly when people didn’t feel they could speak their minds without recrimination. Among those expressions were music composers who incorporated ideas and motifs of a nationalistic style into their compositions. The first part of the excerpt is a brief introduction (“One of the most interesting.. .recrimination”), after which the professor states the main purpose—“Among those expressions were music composers who incorporated ideas and motifs of a nationalistic style into their compositions.” Based on this statement, the lecture is most likely going to fit into the Abstract Category/Specific Examples category of lectures. That means we have to look for specific examples of composers incorporating nationalistic ideas into their compositions. Here’s the first.
Frederic Chopin was one of the earliest composers to incorporate nationalistic ideas into his music, which was written primarily for solo piano. As you listen to the rest of the lecture, listen for the other example given:
Closer to home, we also see obvious nationalistic tendencies in 20th century jazz music. With this understanding of the two examples, let’s look at the questions. 1. C Knowing that this passage fits into the Abstract Category/Specific example structure helps significantly on the main idea questions: use Process of Elimination to get rid of answers that don’t address the
entire passage. Choice (A) is too broad—this lecture didn’t discuss ALL composers; (B) brings in the question of why composers use nationalistic themes, which is not what was discussed; and (D) is too narrow—while the professor discussed Louis Armstrong, that’s not the main point of the lecture.
2. A Be careful to categorize details that are mentioned to the best of your ability. In this case, the question is asking about a general characteristic that composers included in their works, which would have been
mentioned earlier in the lecture, like (A). Choice (B) was mentioned closer to the end of the lecture, when discussing jazz music. Choice (C) was a type of composition that Chopin wrote, and (D) was never mentioned in the lecture.
3. C Think about the common theme of this passage: ethnic/national identity. Even if you don’t remember exactly what the professor said, choose the answer that comes closest to the overall ideas expressed. In
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4. A As with any colloquial expression, pay attention to the way the ideas are connected: the first sentence
presents a question, and the second one includes an answer to that question. Find the answer that comes closest to describing that relationship, like (A). 5. A, C Hopefully this is in your recent memory, because Louis Armstrong was the last major topic discussed. Use Process of Elimination as effectively as you can, and you should at least be able to get rid of (D).
Bringing in a bit of common sense, you could likely get rid of (B): yes, he was an accomplished musi cian, but that doesn’t necessarily address why he appealed to both White American and African Ameri
can audiences. This would leave you with (A) and (C). 6. A Once again, keep the main idea of the lecture in mind: ethnic/national identity. Eliminate answers that
aren’t in line with that idea. This will lead you directly to (A), since it’s the only that deals with identity.
LISTENING PRACTICE DRILL #4: A LECTURE Here is a transcript of the second lecture. Try to use the active reading strategies you learned to identify the key parts.
Obesity. Pretty much everyone recognizes it’s a serious problem. Recent statistics indicate that nearly 78 million adults and 13 million children in the United States alone deal with the physical and emotional effects of obesity every day. It would seem like the solution is easy, wouldn’t it? Eat less and move more. Or in other words, consume fewer calories and increase the number of calories burned through physical activity. And yet, more than 90 million Americans continue to battle the bulge. What makes it so difficult to lose weight? Experts believe there are a number of contributing factors.
One consideration is that for some folks, the system that sends signals back and forth between organs such as the stomach and the brain is out of whack. So what can happen is that when the stomach sends a signal to the brain to stop taking in food, the brain doesn’t recognize it and so the person just keeps eating. And as if that alone wasn’t bad enough, at the end of a meal the “reward system” can come in to play. How so? Well, think about the last time you were at a restaurant and you were convinced that you were absolutely stuffed, and then the waitress brought over the dessert tray. Those desserts looked pretty tempting, didn’t they? Turns out that’s because of your “reward system.” It can make you want to eat whether you’re hungry or not when you see or smell appetizing food. No wonder reducing the number of calories consumed can be so challenging!
So, we’re eating too much. But, experts also believe we’re eating too much of the wrong foods, too. Most folks eat more than they should of red meat, unhealthy fats, refined grains, and processed food—never mind fast food options! What that ends up meaning is that we’re eating fewer healthy foods, like fruits and vegetables, whole grains and nuts. Without these foods in our diets, we’re not getting all of the nutrition our body needs. Some experts believe this causes us to eat even more of those same unhealthy foods in a desperate attempt to get all of the nutrients it craves. 12. Listening Practice Answers and Explanations | 353
Experts also believe that societal factors may contribute to difficulty losing weight. Think back to that last dinner at a restaurant again. Think about the size of your meal. Would you be surprised to learn that in the last 50 years restaurant portions have quadrupled in size?! And we haven’t even talked about the increase in the size of beverages. Serving sizes of beverages have actually increased by a factor of 6 in the same time frame! But wait, there’s more! It’s not all about calories in —it’s also about calories out. Today’s Americans move a whole lot less than those of 50 years ago did. Our jobs require us to sit behind desks more. We spend more of our ‘down time’ behind a screen of some variety—surfing the web or streaming a show on a laptop or tablet, watching TV, or playing games on a phone. We meet friends for coffee instead of going for a hike. We commute to work and school in cars, rather than on bicycles or by using our own two feet.
And then there’s also speculation that our lifestyles, themselves, are contributing to our weight gain. Our stress levels are higher than ever before, so we’re not sleeping, which knocks more than just our eating systems off course. We’re tired, so we reach for sugary, caffeinated drinks. Then we race through our fast food lunches because we have to get back to our desks. We have to spend extra time at our desks doing our work because we’re not as productive as we’d like to be. And we’re not as productive as we’d like to be because we’re tired...and so it begins all over again. So what’s the solution? Well, experts disagree there, too. From my experience, it starts with small changes that can help knock you out of your rut. Something as simple as committing to walking 15 minutes a day at lunchtime or drinking a full glass of water for every glass of soda you drink can be the starting point. For some folks, that’s all it takes. For others, there’s more involved to ultimately regain a healthy weight. But one thing’s for sure: there’s no single formula that works for everyone. Just as with a reading passage, a lecture will state its main purpose first. However, since the lectures are spoken, you will probably hear a brief introduction or greeting before the main idea is introduced. Here’s an example:
Obesity. Pretty much everyone recognizes it’s a serious problem. Recent statistics indicate that nearly 78 million adults and 13 million children in the United States alone deal with the physical and emotional effects of obesity every day. It would seem like the solution is easy, wouldn’t it? Eat less and move more. Or in other words, consume fewer calories and increase the number of calories burned through physical activity. And yet, more than 90 million Americans continue to battle the bulge. What makes it so difficult to lose weight? Experts believe there are a number of contributing factors. The first part of the excerpt is a brief introduction (“Obesity... battle the bulge.”), after which the professor states the main purpose—“What makes it so difficult to lose weight? Experts believe there are a number of contribut ing factors.”
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Based on this statement, the lecture is most likely going to fit into the cause-and-effect category of lectures. That means we have to look for the causes of obesity mentioned in the lecture. Here’s the first.
One consideration is that for some folks, the system that sends signals back and forth between organs such as the stomach and the brain is out of whack. Other potential causes are also mentioned:
But, experts also believe we’re eating too much of the wrong foods, too.
Experts also believe that societal factors may contribute to difficulty losing weight.
But wait, there’s more! It’s not all about calories in—it’s also about calories out. Today’s Americans move a whole lot less than those of 50 years ago did. And then there’s also speculation that our lifestyles, themselves, are contributing to our weight gain. So those are the main points the professor is making. Now let’s take a look at the questions. 1. B While there is a bit of commentary toward the end about potential solutions to the issue of obesity, the passage as a whole is primarily dedicated to discussing the factors that contribute to obesity, or why people have a hard time losing weight. This matches (B).
2. D It’s certainly challenging to remember all the details about every point the professor made, so use your
understanding of the structure of the passage and a bit of common sense to at least eliminate answers that you’re fairly certain don’t match the professor’s thinking. Choice (A) is certainly not in line with
what the professor believes—after all, we just said in the previous question that the passage is about the
difficulty of losing weight, not the ease of doing so! Choice (B) might be a “maybe” at first glance, so if you’re not sure, leave it for now. Choice (C) is definitely out—the professor was clear that portion sizes have increased, not decreased, in the last half century. Choice (D), though, is pretty close to what the
entire passage was about: multiple causes that affect weight gain. If you still have (B) in, it’s easily elimi
nated because (D) is much more in line with the content of the passage. 3. C A common question topic on the TOEFL Listening section is the use of colloquial phrases, like this one. Use the context of the passage to determine the intended meaning of phrases like these.
One consideration is that for some folks, the system that sends signals back and forth between organs such as the stomach and the brain is out of whack. So what can happen is that when the stomach sends a signal to the brain to stop taking in food, the brain doesn’t recognize it and so the person just keeps eating. The professor is describing a system that isn’t working correctly, which matches (C).
4. B When the professor discusses a problem, be sure to pay attention to possible solutions. The only one
mentioned by the professor is exercise, (B). If you don’t recall the details, eliminate anything you don’t remember hearing about and guess! 5. A When a lecture is about cause and effect, definitely remember to at least note the primary causes and
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do with weight gain, and (D) is commonly accepted as a way to decrease weight gain. That means you
should at least be able to eliminate two answers and then guess between (A) and (C). 6. B, D On multiple answer questions, remember that Process of Elimination is key to choosing the right
answers. While (A) might make sense as a contributing factor, it was never mentioned by the professor.
Choice (C) is also not likely to be a cause of overeating. That leaves you with the two causes the profes sor did identify, (B) and (D).
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Read the transcript of the lecture, noting the main idea, structure, and tone How do the students’ questions relate to the main idea?
Male Professor: Since yesterday’s brief introduction on the origin of banking confused some of you, today I would like to review it a little bit. Banking the way we know it today is a convenience. The money used in banking represents a certain amount of value, but the money itself isn’t valuable; it’s just paper. To see how we got here...suppose we think about a society far, far back in history—what would it have used before the paper money we have today?
Female Student: Didn’t they trade with the goods themselves? MP: Sure. The system of exchanging one good for another of equal value is called bartering. Bartering was common in early societies, first with essential goods, then with nonessential goods. By nonessential, I mean, for example, art or cultural objects. You might trade a curtain that had been dyed in a decorative pattern for some wheat. The curtain’s decorative value isn’t essential to survival the way the food value of the grain is. That’s the first step toward a money economy: recognizing trade-worthy value in something that isn’t essential to survival.
Of course, you may see a hitch. Different cultures don’t value the same decorations, so something could be worth a lot to one tribe and nothing to another. With food, that’s not a problem—everyone has to eat—but with nonessential items, you’re going to use something with cross-cultural value. Can anyone think of anything that would work?
Male Student: How about gold? It’s durable...easy to shape...and it’s beautiful. Is that why cultures started using it as money? MP: Well, you can’t refer to the earliest trade with gold as a money economy, but yes. Gold is a perfect example. As societies grew more stable and trade flourished, gold, usually molded into small ingots, gradually replaced the system of bartering. There were problems with gold, though. FS: Yeah, I was going to say, gold is heavy, isn’t it? How did people carry enough of it around to buy things? And wasn’t it dangerous—like, you’d get robbed if people knew you had money with you?
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That combination of characteristics gave people an idea. They started leaving their gold ingots with gold specialists for safekeeping. The specialists stored the gold for a small fee, and they gave their customers receipts, the way you’d get today. So you’d get something that said that, you know, you were the owner of such-and-such an amount of gold stored at this particular shop. The quality of gold from different mines varies, so the purity and density of your gold ingots—you know, how heavy they were for their size—determined their value and would also be recorded.
Then, when you wanted to use it, you just went back, gave the shopkeeper the receipt, and he gave you your gold. MS: So if you were storing 500 ounces of gold of whatever percent purity, you’d give the receipt back, and get your 500 ounces of gold back? They kept it for you in your own little drawer or something? MP: Whoops! I guess I did make it sound that way—thanks for catching that! No, you’d get 500 ounces of gold of the same purity back. They would have equal value, but would not necessarily be the exact same pile of ingots that you originally gave to the shopkeeper. FS: The shopkeeper would use the gold or lend it out while you were storing it?
MP: Sure, and you can see how that’s another of the beginnings of banking as we know it. You wouldn’t get back your very own pile of gold; you’d get back a pile of equal value. It was the value itself that was important. MS: So how did it become like money? I mean, we’re still talking about big, heavy stacks of things, and — MP: Well, that’s the last point. Eventually, people figured out that they could use their receipts from storing gold to trade with one another. If they wanted to buy something, instead of running to the gold shop, withdrawing gold, and bringing it to another shop to pay for food or clay pots or whatever, they just gave the food merchant a receipt for the appropriate amount of gold. The merchant could then cash it in for gold, and the trade would be complete. And that’s the last major step: The receipts became the first real ancestor of the money we use today because they stood for value actually attached to goods somewhere else. Some of the academic lectures will include questions from the students and other forms of discussion. While this may appear to make the lectures more confusing, the student questions actually help you to follow the lecture and figure out the main idea.
First, let’s figure out what the main topic is. As always, the professor mentions it at the very beginning of the lecture.
MP: Banking the way we know it today is a convenience. The money used in banking represents a certain amount of value, but the money itself isn’t valuable; it’s just paper. To see how we got here...suppose we think about a society far, far back in history—what would it have used before the paper money we have today?
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Now that we know the lecture will be about the beginnings of banking, we should look for a sequence of ideas. The first student question introduces a key point.
FS: Didn’t they trade with the goods themselves? As we said earlier, the students’ comments and questions provide an easy way to follow the development of the lecture. Now the professor will explain the important idea below.
MP: Sure. The system of exchanging one good for another of equal value is called bartering. Bartering was common in early societies, first with essential goods, then with nonessential goods....Of course, you may see a hitch. Different cultures don’t value the same decorations, so something could be worth a lot to one tribe and nothing to another. A student now asks a question, which again helps us understand the progression of ideas in the lecture.
MS: How about gold? It’s durable...easy to shape...and it’s beautiful. Is that why cultures started using it as money? MP: Well, you can’t refer to the earliest trade with gold as a money economy, but yes. Gold is a perfect example. As societies grew more stable and trade flourished, gold, usually molded into small ingots, gradually replaced the system of bartering. There were problems with gold, though. This exchange brings us to another key part of the lecture. The professor details the problems.
MP: Definitely. Hauling all your gold around was a real risk in early societies, when there were bandits roaming around and no police to help you. And as you say, gold is heavy and unwieldy. One advantage it has, though, is that, unlike livestock or food, it doesn’t go bad, so you don’t have to use it up immediately. The lecture then continues with a longer explanation of how the problems with gold led to a new idea. But even if you missed some of that discussion, notice how the next student comment helps you figure out the key point.
MS: So if you were storing 500 ounces of gold of whatever percent purity, you’d give the receipt back, and get your 500 ounces of gold back? They kept it for you in your own little drawer or something? This comment gives us some clue as to what the professor was talking about before—the ability to store gold. Now the professor continues with the sequence.
MP: Sure, and you can see how that’s another of the beginnings of banking as we know it. MS: So how did it become like money? I mean, we’re still talking about big, heavy stacks of things, and—
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Now let’s take care of the questions.
1. C This question was answered when the professor talked about bartering and the point was introduced with the use of a direction marker: “of course....” The answer choices in this question are very good
candidates for POE. The first choice is extreme. It says that societies “cannot” devote resources. This is
an absolute statement and should be eliminated. Choice (D) is another type of extreme answer, one that shows up every once in a while. The problem with this answer is that it can be seen as somewhat offen
sive. It judges the decorations as “too simple.” The TOEFL will never have a correct answer that makes a negative value judgment. The characteristics in (B) refer to gold. 2. A, B, D Get rid of (C), which is extreme because it states that “only” specialists could determine the value
of gold. 3. B
Once again, (C) is extreme, so eliminate it. Choice (D) never appears in the lecture, so eliminate it as well. Choice (A) is certainly tempting, but the lecture said that “the quality of gold from different
mines varies, so the purity and density of your gold ingots—you know, how heavy they were for their size—determined their value and would also be recorded.” Thus, (B) is best.
4. B
Here’s a transcription of the excerpt to which you’re asked to listen for this question.
MS: So if you were storing 500 ounces of gold of whatever percent purity, you’d give the receipt back, and get your 500 ounces of gold back? They kept it for you in your own little drawer or something? MP: Whoops! I guess I did make it sound that way—thanks for catching that! The professor’s use of the word whoops indicates a mistake of some sort. Eliminate (A) and (D) because
the line in question is about the professor (“I guess I did make it sound that way...”), not the student. And no point is introduced in this line, so (C) is incorrect.
5. C The professor mentions the answer to this question at the end of the lecture. Alternatively, use POE.
Choice (A) is extreme; it says “all” gold shops used the same format. Choice (D) refers to bartering, which was mentioned in the beginning of the sequence as something that came before money. Elimi
nate it. Choice (B) is not mentioned.
6. A This is a definition question. These can be tough because if you miss the definition during the lecture it’s hard to use POE. If you recalled that the word ingot appeared during the discussion of gold, you may be able to eliminate (C) and (D) because they don’t refer to gold. The professor gives a sufficient
clue as to the definition of the term here.
MP: The quality of gold from different mines varies, so the purity and density of your gold ingots—you know, how heavy they were for their size—determined their value and would also be recorded.
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Chapter 13 Cracking the Speaking Section
Of all the sections on the TOEFL, the Speaking section often causes the most anxiety in test takers. Of course, were going to talk about some ways to help you crack this section, but first let's look at what you can expect in the Speaking section.
Two Independent Tasks: One question asks for your personal preference and one asks you to choose between two options. For each task, you’ll have • 15 seconds preparation time • 45 seconds speaking time Two Reading, Listening, and Speaking Integrated Tasks: You will read a passage, listen to a conversation or lecture, and respond. For each task, you’ll have • 45 seconds reading time • 60- to 90-second conversation/lecture • 30 seconds preparation time • 60 seconds speaking time Two Listening and Speaking Integrated Tasks: You will listen to a conver sation or lecture and respond. For each task, you’ll have • 1- to 2-minute conversation/lecture • 20 seconds preparation time • 60 seconds speaking time The entire Speaking section will take about 20 minutes.
As you can see, one of the challenges of the Speaking section is the way in which the questions require you to apply a variety of different skills—reading, listening, and, of course, speaking. The six Speaking responses you’ll have to provide will each be graded on a scale from 0 to 5. As we mentioned in the early part of this book, the Speaking scores are subdivided into four sec tions:
Good (3.5-4.0). A score in the “Good” range tells schools that you can speak comfortably about personal experiences and about content you’ve read and listened to. Your speech is fairly fluid, pronunciation is clear, and vocabulary is used appropriately. Fair (2.5-3.0). A ‘ ‘Fair” score tells schools that you can generally speak about personal experi ences and about content you’ve read and listened to. However, you may have some challenges when it comes to pronunciation and intonation, which makes it more challenging for a listener to understand what you’re trying to say. You also may have some difficulty with grammatical structures and vocabulary. Limited (1.5-2.0). A “Limited” score indicates to schools that you can handle basic conver sations in English, but may have difficulty with grammatical structures. You can offer broad responses, but may lack the vocabulary to present well-developed responses to questions.
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SPEAKING SECTION DIRECTIONS The Speaking section has a fairly unique format, so it is helpful to familiarize yourself with the directions before you take the test. That way, you’ll feel prepared and more comfortable when you actually take the TOEFL. The Speaking section begins with a microphone test. At the beginning of the section, you’ll be asked to answer a sample question. This question does not affect your TOEFL score, so don’t worry about it. Your response is used simply to adjust the microphone volume, which will be done automatically at the conclusion of your response. The microphone test screen will look similar to the one shown below.
Begin speaking after the beep. Continue speaking until a message appears. “Describe the house in which you live”
As you speak, the computer will adjust the volume of the microphone. When a message appears on the screen that tells you to stop speaking, the adjustment has finished.
After the adjustment is finished, the directions appear. The first two questions will ask you to respond to familiar topics—you will first be asked to state your personal preference and then to choose between two options. For each task you will have 15 seconds to organize your thoughts and then 45 seconds to respond. The next two questions will give you 45 seconds to read a short text after which the text is re moved from the screen and the audio will begin immediately. You will listen to a talk on the same topic as the reading and combine information from both the talk and the reading in your spoken response.
The final two questions ask you to listen to a conversation or lecture that lasts between 1 and 2 minutes and then respond to it. After you hear the lecture you will have 20 seconds to prepare your response and then 60 seconds to speak.
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Remember, it is much
more important to speak clearly than
You can take notes during all readings, conversations, and lectures, if you find that doing so is helpful. However, the directions for each question will not appear on the screen; you’ll be able to listen to them only once, so be sure to listen carefully.
quickly. You have only a
short time. You will not lose points for hav
ing an accent, but the graders must be able to easily understand what you are saying in
your answer.
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HOW THE SPEAKING SECTION IS SCORED Each of your spoken responses will be evaluated on a scale of 0-4 by 3-6 different graders. The average of all six scores is then converted to the 0-30 scaled score. The graders consider three major areas when judging the quality of your response—let’s look at each in detail. Delivery: On the TOEFL, delivery refers to both the flow and clarity of your speech. A higher-scoring response will be well-paced and free of long pauses and unnecessary interjections. Although the speech may contain minor pronunciation errors or problems with intonation, these errors do not detract from understanding the speech. Language use: The scorers are looking for effective use of grammar and vocabu lary. Complexity of sentence structure will also be considered. A higher-scoring response generally contains a variety of sentence structures, a range of vocabulary, and few grammatical errors. Once again, a top response doesn’t have to be perfect, but the errors shouldn’t affect the listener’s ability to understand the speech. Topic development: This includes how well your response addresses the task as well as the development of your ideas. Thus, the graders are judging you not only on how you speak, but also on what you say. This is an important point because test takers who are comfortable speaking in English may not achieve a top score if they do not structure their responses appropriately.
CRACKING THE SPEAKING SECTION:
BASIC PRINCIPLES The Speaking section of the TOEFL can be very intimidating, but it doesn’t have to be. The first important point about the Speaking section is that although there are six different ques tions, the types of responses you will give are all fairly similar. Basically, your goal is to use the skills you’ve learned throughout the Reading and Listening sections, and use them together with standard templates for responses on the Speaking section. If you are comfortable with the work we’ve done in the Reading and Listening sections, then your primary focus will be on learning the templates for each Speaking task. Another important point to consider is the score range of the programs to which you’re applying. The top score on the Speaking section is 30 (although there are only six questions and the top score on each is a 4, the TOEFL converts your 0-24 points to a 0-30 scaled score); however, many programs are looking for scores far lower than 30. So before you devote too much time to worrying about this section, check the requirements of the schools in which you’re interested.
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Finally, realize that you do not have to sound like a native speaker to score well. It is perfectly acceptable to speak with an accent and make some mistakes in grammar and word use. What ultimately matters is how understandable your speech is.
Thus, cracking the Speaking section requires you to be aware of the following: 1.
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How you sound. When speaking, you must try to avoid unnecessary pauses and try to speak at an even pace. Your command of English grammar and vocabulary. A top-scoring response uses a variety of words and contains some complex sentence structures. What you say. Good responses have a clear flow of ideas and use appropriate tran sitions to link topics.
Let’s examine each of these requirements in more detail.
Basic Principle #1: How You Sound As mentioned earlier, this does NOT mean you have to sound like a native speaker. It means that you should speak confidently and clearly. The two biggest mistakes you can make are •
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pausing often and breaking up the flow of your speech with unnecessary words such as um and uh delivering your speech in a mechanical “robot” voice, as if you were reading the response from a page
The best way to avoid the first challenge is to use the speaking templates you’ll learn in this chapter. These are basic patterns that you can use to organize your response. If you master these templates, you’ll know exactly what you need to say for each task, which should help you avoid too many pauses in your speech.
As for the second issue, the best way to avoid a mechanical delivery is to practice. Once you familiarize yourself with the templates, practice using them with a variety of different topics. The more you practice using the templates, the more natural your speech will sound. It’s also a good idea to remind yourself to smile when you respond, because it makes your response more pleasant to listen to, which is certainly not going to hurt your score! Practice smiling when you speak on the phone or to your friends, and see how they react!
Basic Principle #2: Your Command of English Grammar and Vocabulary This book is not intended to be a comprehensive grammar handbook; however, we will give you some basic grammatical structures to follow, and you should make sure to memorize the Grammar Review at the end of Chapter 5. (Check out Hie Princeton Review’s Grammar Smart if you need more work with grammar.) Similarly, although working on your vocabulary is a worthwhile goal, we’re going to focus on only some of the words that will be useful to you on the TOEFL. The Princeton Review also publishes TOEFL Power Vocab for additional vocabu lary practice. 13. Cracking the Speaking Section
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Improving and Varying Sentence Structure Let's start with some common sentence structures. Here is the most basic type of sentence. Ichiro hit the ball.
This sentence has a simple pattern: subject (Ichiro), verb (hit), object (the ball). Although many of your constructions will follow this simple pattern, you’ll have to vary your sentence struc ture somewhat to achieve a higher score on the TOEFL. For example, here’s another way we can express the same idea. The ball was hit by Ichiro.
This sentence moves the words around and creates a different emphasis. By using “the ball” as the subject, we give it more emphasis. Furthermore, by moving “Ichiro” to the object of the sen tence, we de-emphasize him. If we add some more information to the sentence, we can use the following construction: After hitting the ball, Ichiro ran to first base.
This sentence structure allows us to express two different actions, “hitting the ball” and “ran.” And as you’ve seen, we can use transitions to make our sentences even more complex. Although Ichiro hit the ball, he was unable to reach first base safely. Ichiro hit the ball, but he was unable to reach first base safely. Ichiro hit the ball and reached first base safely.
All of these are types of sentences that you can use to increase your TOEFL Speaking score. Let’s practice some of them. Practice Using Complex Sentence Structures Rewrite each of the following sentences by first switching the subject and the object. Next, add in the new information by using one of the complex structures discussed earlier. Don’t forget to use transitions.
Here’s an example: Maria bought a picture frame. Rewrite: A picture frame was bought by Maria. Now add in this new information: “She needed it for her house.” Combine and rewrite: Needing a picture frame for her house, Maria bought one. Also: A pic ture frame was bought by Maria because she needed it for her house.
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Now try it. 1.
Steve attended class. Rewrite: Add new information: “Steve did not do his homework.” Combine and rewrite:
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Ellen chose the black shirt. Rewrite: Add new information: “Ellen prefers the color black.” Combine and rewrite:
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The professor gave two reasons for the behavior. Rewrite: Add new information: “The professor described the behavior first.” Combine and rewrite:
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The class required both a midterm and final exam. Rewrite: Add new information: “A student cannot pass the class without passing the mid term and final exam.” Combine and rewrite:
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The firm hired Ivan. Rewrite: Add new information: “Ivan was the most qualified candidate.” Combine and rewrite:
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Soccer is Andrew’s favorite sport. Rewrite: Add new information: “Andrew started playing soccer when he was very young.” Combine and rewrite:
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Jaime asked a question. Rewrite: Add new information: “Jaime needed directions to the student center.” Combine and rewrite:
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Guillermo read the book. Rewrite: Add new information: “Guillermo wrote a paper on the book.” Combine and rewrite:
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Heather forgot her book. Rewrite: Add new information: “She needed it for class.” Combine and rewrite:
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Dennis plays the guitar. Rewrite: Add new information: “Dennis is learning to play the piano ” Combine and rewrite:
Answers to Practice Using Complex Sentence Structures Here are the rewritten ver sions of the sentence and some suggested ways of combining the sentences with the new infor mation provided.
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Steve attended class. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
The class was attended by Steve.
“Steve did not do his homework.” Although he did not do his homework, Steve attended the class. Despite not doing his homework, Steve attended the class. Steve attended the class even though he did not do his homework.
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Ellen chose the black shirt. Rewrite: The black shirt was chosen by Ellen. Add new information: “Ellen prefers black.” Preferring black, Ellen chose that shirt, Possible responses: because she preferred black, Ellen chose that shirt. Ellen chose that shirt because she prefers black.
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The professor gave two reasons for the behavior. Rewrite: Two reasons for the behavior were given by the pro fessor. Add new information: “The professor described the behavior first.” After describing the behavior first, the professor Possible responses: gave two reasons for it. The professor first described the behavior and gave two reasons for it. The professor gave two reasons for the behavior after first describing it.
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The class required both a midterm and final exam. Rewrite: A midterm and final exam were both required by the class. Add new information: “A student cannot pass the class without passing the midterm and final exam.”
Possible responses:
Because the class requires both a midterm and final exam, a student cannot pass the class with out passing both exams. Requiring a midterm and final exam, the class can not be passed unless a student passes the exams. The class requires a midterm and final exam, and a student cannot pass the class unless he or she passes both exams.
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The firm hired Ivan. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
Ivan was hired by the firm. “Ivan was the most qualified candidate.” Being the most qualified candidate, Ivan was hired by the firm. Because he was the most qualified candidate, Ivan was hired by the firm. The firm hired Ivan because he was the most quali fied candidate.
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Soccer is Andrew’s favorite sport. Rewrite: Andrew’s favorite sport is soccer. Add new information: “Andrew started playing soccer when he was very young.” Andrew’s favorite sport is soccer because he Possible responses: started playing it when he was very young. Because he started playing it when he was very young. Andrew’s favorite sport is soccer.
Having played since he was very young. Andrew’s favorite sport is soccer.
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Jaime asked a question. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
A question was asked by Jaime. “Jaime needed directions to the student center.” Needing directions to the student center, Jaime asked a question.
Jaime asked a question because she needed directions to the student center. Because she needed directions to the student center. Jaime asked a question.
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Guillermo read the book. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
The book was read by Guillermo. “Guillermo wrote a paper on the book.” Guillermo read the book and also wrote a paper on it.
Guillermo read the book because he had to write a paper on it. The book was read by Guillermo so that he oould write a paper on it.
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Heather forgot her book. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
The book was forgotten by Heather.
“She needed it for class.” Although she needed it for class, Heather forgot her book. Heather forgot her book although she needed it for class. Heather forgot her book even though she needed it for class.
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Dennis plays the guitar. Rewrite: Add new information: Possible responses:
The guitar was played by Dennis. “Dennis is learning to play the piano.” Dennis plays the guitar and is also learning to play the piano. Dennis is learning to play the piano, although he can play the guitar already. Although he plays the guitar, Dennis is learning to play the piano.
The important lesson to learn from this exercise is to see that there are many ways of expressing the same idea. You’ll need to use a variety of sentence structures to score well on the TOEFL. You can practice this exercise on your own also. Take sentences from a book, magazine, or newspaper article and practice rewriting them in a variety of different ways.
Improving and Building Your Vocabulary The Speaking section asks to you do the following tasks: Describe Summarize Contrast
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Descriptions Some tasks ask you to describe a problem, an opinion, or a personal prefer ence. If you are describing details, you can use the following phrases: • • • • • • • •
one aspect of... one characteristic of... one quality of... one issue (for describing a problem)... one feature... one attribute... one element... one thing...
For example, you may be asked to do the following on the TOEFL:
Describe a friend of yours, and explain why you consider this person a friend. Use details and examples to support your view. For this task, we are asked to describe our friend. Our response may look like the sample below (note the descriptions are in boldface type). One of my best friends is Joel. He is my friend for many reasons. One characteristic of Joel’s that I really admire is his honesty. He always tells the truth to me. Another quality of Joel’s that I like is his optimistic attitude. Joel always has a positive word for everyone. Joel’s sense of humor is a final aspect of his personality that I admire. He is always able to make me laugh. For these reasons, I consider Joel a great friend.
As you can see, each word above can be used when describing a specific detail. Now it’s your turn to answer the question above, using as many of the descriptive phrases as possible.
Summaries Another common task on the TOEFL Speaking section involves summarizing a reading or lecture. When summarizing, try using some of the following phrases:
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Here’s an example of a reading passage that you will be asked to summarize.
Read the following passage and then summarize the points made by the author.
New research in the field of neuroscience is leading some researchers to change their beliefs about how the brain forms. An early view of the brain held that intelligence was primarily determined by genes. Now, however, a new study casts doubt on that view. Researchers have discovered that the neurons in the brain develop in the early stages of infancy. The more stimulation these neurons receive, the more connections the neurons make with other neurons. Cognitive scientists believe that intelligence is partly based on the number of connections between neurons in the brain. Now, summarize the important parts of the passage. One response might look like this (again, with the summarizing terms shown in boldface): According to the reading, come scientists have to change their views about the brain. The reading states that the early view of the brain is wrong. One reason given, according to the reading, is that there is a new study. The reading claims that the new study shows that brain development occurs during childhood. It also argues that the amount of stimulation a child receives leads to a higher intelligence.
Now try your own summary of this same paragraph. In addition, practice by using parts of some of the other reading passages in this book.
Contrasts The final type of speaking task asks you to contrast ideas. Here are some helpful phrases to use when contrasting ideas.
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in contrast to... one difference between... unlike... one distinction between... dissimilarly... one disagreement between... one inconsistency between... one point at issue is... one point of disagreement is...
Let’s look at a task that requires us to contrast two things.
Read the following passage: For more than three hundred years, the world understood physics as a predictable system. Isaac Newton’s three laws of motion allowed physicists to predict the motion of not just falling apples and thrown balls, but comets, planets, and stars as well The amazing degree of accuracy of these predictions had convinced scientists that the universe obeyed precise laws, a belief that in many ways was reassuring because it was comforting to think of the universe as an orderly, predictable place.
Now read the following lecture on the same topic: What would you guys think if I told you I could walk right through that wall over there? You probably wouldn’t believe me. As you all know from, uh, basic physics, two solid objects cannot occupy the same space. But the truth is that...is that neither I nor the wall am really solid. That’s right...I am mostly made up of empty space. I know it’s weird, but think about it. I’m made of atoms, and atoms are mostly empty space. And it was in the early um, early twentieth century when the discovery was made that atoms can pass through other objects. If you shoot a number of atoms...I think it was Niels Bohr who did this experiment...at a sheet of metal, some of them will pass right through it. And although the probability is extremely unlikely...because I have so many atoms in my body...if I walked into that wall an infinite number of times, at some point I would pass right through it. So our world isn’t as nice and predictable as we may believe. Explain how the lecture casts doubt on or otherwise relates to the reading. This asks us to contrast the information presented in both selections. (To “cast doubt” means “to cause something to be doubted.”) Here’s a sample response, with the contrasting terms shown in boldface. One difference between the two is the predictable nature of physics. The reading states that the universe is predictable. In contrasttothis idea, the professor says the world isn’t always predictable. Unlike the reading, the lecture gives some information on how atoms can be unpredictable. This is inconsistent with the reading, which talks about larger ob jects, such as planets. However, the biggest point at issue between the two is whether or not we can predict events in the universe.
Can you find other contrasting ideas in the lecture? Use the contrasting phrases listed above in your response. You can also practice on your own. A good place to look for contrasting ideas is in the editorial pages of your local newspaper. Find two articles or opinions on the same topic and try to contrast them.
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Basic Principle #3: What You Say One key to scoring well on the Speaking section is to make sure the ideas about which you are talking are clearly connected to one another. You should use transitions to relate the parts of your speech together. Here are some of the common transition words you will need to use on the TOEFL.
Words that indicate a sequence or progression First
Second
Third
Next
After
Then
Previously
Before
Following
Finally
Lastly
Words that indicate a connection between ideas Because
Therefore
Thus
And
Furthermore
Additionally
So
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Words that indicate a contradiction between ideas However
Despite
Yet
In contrast to
On the other hand
Although
Now practice using these transitions in the exercise that follows.
PRACTICE: USING TRANSITIONS Read the following sentences aloud, connecting them with the appropriate transition word or words.
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Jane would like to go home during the holiday break,_____________ she doesn’t have enough money. Sasha intends to major in mathematics_____________ it is her favorite subject. First, you must mix the two chemicals together._____________ , wait for the reac tion to occur.
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One of the main reasons Jose took the job was the salary;_____________ , the location was a factor. _____________ Ming had never met Anna before, they acted like old friends. The professor is known for his harsh grading scale;_____________ , students say that he is one of the best teachers at the school. The class requires students to write a 20-page research paper.____________ , the students have to complete a group project. Marco had_____________ believed that he wanted to go to business school, but now he plans to attend law school. It is very difficult to do well in this class without doing the required reading. _____________ , I recommend keeping up with the assignments. Neela was sure that she had failed the exam,_____________ she received a passing
ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS FOR PRACTICE: USING TRANSITIONS Here are the appropriate transitions. 1.
Jane would like to go home during the holiday break, but she doesn’t have enough money.
This sentence contrasts two ideas. You also could have used although.
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Sasha intends to major in mathematics because it is her favorite subject.
Here, we need to connect the two ideas. The first part is explained by the second part of the sentence.
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First, you must mix the two chemicals together. Then wait for the reaction to occur.
There is a progression of ideas in this sentence. You also may have used next or second.
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One of the main reasons Jose took the job was the salary; additionally, the loca tion was a factor.
We need to connect both of the reasons together. Other possible responses include furthermore and also.
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The professor is known for his harsh grading scale; however, students say that he is one of the best teachers at the school.
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Another contrasting set of ideas. The first part says something negative, whereas the second part expresses something positive.
The class requires students to write a 20-page research paper. Furthermore, the students have to complete a group project.
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Both of the requirements need to be connected. You could have used also or additionally as well. Marco had previously believed that he wanted to go to business school, but now he plans to attend law school.
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This sentence shows a progression of ideas.
It is very difficult to do well in this class without doing the required reading. Therefore, I recommend keeping up with the assignments.
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The first part and the second part are connected to each other. You could have also used thus.
10. Neela was sure that she had failed the exam, yet she received a passing grade. These two ideas contrast with one another. You also could have used but.
You can practice this drill on your own. Try making statements that require using each of the transitions presented on the previous page.
CRACKING THE SPEAKING SECTION: BASIC APPROACH Now that we’ve gone over the basic principles, we’re ready to think about strategic ways to ap proach the Speaking section. To do so, complete the following:
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Learn the appropriate template for each task, and use it for your response. Use the appropriate vocabulary for each task. Remember to use words that describe, contrast, and summarize, as well as words that show prefer ences. Transitions are also important to help the grader follow your train of thought. Listen to and practice speaking English as often as possible. There’s no bet ter way to improve your speaking ability than to actually practice speaking.
Let’s spend some more time on the first step because it is one of the keys to doing well on this section.
Step 1: Learn the Appropriate Templates Remember the three qualities that the graders are listening for? How you sound, your use of language, and what you say. The best way to attack all three aspects on a regular basis is to have a structured plan of attack for each task. The following tem plates provide exactly that—a strategic plan for each individual assignment. Memo rize them! Then all you have to do on test day is adapt them a little bit to respond to the actual questions you are asked.
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Template #1: Personal Preference Question The first speaking task on the TOEFL typically asks you to describe something that you would prefer to do, see, or experience. These tasks may also ask you to talk about something impor tant to you. Regardless of the exact question, these tasks require you to pick the thing, person, or event you are going to discuss. You’ll have 15 seconds to organize your thoughts and then 45 seconds to respond. Here’s the template: State your preference Reason #1 Detail for Reason #1 Reason #2 Detail for Reason #2
And here’s a typical example:
Describe a place you would like to visit, and explain why you chose this location. Use details and examples to support your position.
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One possible response might be as follows: State personal preference
I would like to visit Italy.
Reason #1
I would choose to visit Italy because it has a lot of history.
Specific detail for reason #1
For example, Italy has many interesting Roman ruins. It would be interesting to see these historic sites.
Reason #2
Another reason I would like to visit Italy is for the culture.
Specific detail for reason #2
Italy has been home to many great artists and the museums there contain some of the most famous works of art.
Reason #3
Finally, I would like to visit Italy to sample the food.
Specific detail for reason #3
I love Italian food and would really like the chance to try some authentic Italian cooking.
The boldfaced words are examples of transitions and other phrases you can use in your speech. Depending on how quickly you speak, you may be able to provide only two reasons in the time given. That’s acceptable. And although this response may appear simple, it is much harder when you are under pressure.
Before you go on, go back and read the sample response out loud. There’s no better way to im prove your speaking than to actually speak! Now, practice using the template for the following prompt. Remember to use the descriptive words you’ve learned. Time yourself: give yourself 15 seconds to prepare and 45 seconds to respond.
Describe your favorite hobby, and explain why you enjoy it. Use details and examples to support your point.
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State personal preference
Reason #1
Specific detail for reason #1
Reason #2
Specific detail for reason #2
Reason #3
Specific detail for reason #3
Practice using this template on your own. Think of your favorite food, color, article of cloth ing, activity, and so on, and try to provide reasons and details as to why they are your favorites. Don’t forget to use transitions.
Template #2: Choose an Option Question The second type of task on the TOEFL presents you with two options. You’ll have to decide which one you believe is better and support your decision. Here’s the template: State better option Reason #1 Detail for Reason #1 Reason #2 Detail for Reason #2 Look familiar? It should! It’s almost exactly the same as Template #1! The only difference is that in the second task, you will need to choose between two options that are presented to you.
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Here’s a sample prompt:
Some universities give financial aid in the form of grants, which don’t have to be paid back, whereas others provide financial assistance in the form of loans, which must be paid back. Which option do you think is better and why? Support your decision with reasons and examples. The following would have been an acceptable response:
State better option
I think it is better to offer student loans.
Reason #1
I prefer loans because they make the student respon sible.
Specific detail for reason #1
A student who has to pay back a loan becomes per sonally responsible for his or her education.
Reason #2
Furthermore, loans are safer for the school.
Specific detail for reason #2
Grants require the school to give away large amounts of money, and there is no guarantee that the school will get the money back.
Reason #3
Lastly, a student with a loan is probably more likely to stay in school.
Specific detail for reason #3
If the student doesn’t complete the degree, it will be harder to pay back the money.
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Did you remember to read the sample response aloud? If not, go for it!
Now, practice this template. Remember to use the descriptive words that you’ve learned. As before, keep track of your time: you’ll have 15 seconds to prepare and 45 seconds to respond.
Some people believe that universities should require students to take classes on ethics, whereas others believe a school should focus only on academic issues. Which do you think is better? Support your decision with reasons and examples.
State better option
Reason #1
Specific detail for reason #1
Reason #2
Specific detail for reason #2
Reason #3
Specific detail for reason #3
INTEGRATED TASKS—READING, LISTENING, SPEAKING
Template #3: Summarize an Opinion Question The third task requires you to read a brief passage and listen to a conversation about it. Then you’ll have to summarize the opinion or position given in the conversation.
Reading: You’ll have 45 seconds to read the passage, which will usually discuss some sort of campus life issue. Most likely, you won’t need to take notes while you read the passage. Listening: The conversation will start automatically, so be ready to listen! During the 60-90 seconds you’re listening, pay attention to the speaker’s opinion or attitude about the reading, and pay close attention to the reasons the speaker gives for his or her position. Write them down if you can. 13. Cracking the Speaking Section
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Here’s the template you should keep in mind as you read and listen: State the requested opinion Reason #1 for opinion Detail for Reason #1 Reason #2 for opinion Detail for Reason #2
Once again, the template looks similar, focusing not only on the answer to the question (in this case, the speaker’s opinion), but also on the reasons behind the answer. Here’s an example.
Read the following announcement from the university president: Due to recent budget constraints, the university has decided to close the computer labs during weekends and reduce their operating hours during the week from 8:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. to 9:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. These changes are necessary in order to compensate for an unexpected budget shortfall. Without these cutbacks, the school would be forced to reduce service in other important areas, such as the library and the cafeteria.
Play Track 9 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools). Transcripts of all the audio tracks in this chapter begin on page 393.
The woman offers her opinion of the announcement. State what her opinion is and what reasons she gives for having that view. You’ll have 30 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
Here’s the template for our response.
State opinion
The woman believes that the decision to reduce the hours of the computer lab is a bad idea.
Reason #1
Her first reason for claiming this is that she needs a computer for her class work.
Detail for reason #1
The woman states that she doesn’t have a computer and that some of her classes require her to use one.
Reason #2
Also, the woman claims it will be harder to complete all of her work.
Detail for reason #2
According to the woman, the best time to do work is on the weekends. Now she fears that the labs will be too full during the week.
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Did you practice reading the response aloud?
As you can see, all you have to do is basically repeat the reasons given by the speaker. You won’t be required to do anything else. Now, it’s your turn to try the template with the following ex ample. You’ll have 45 seconds to read the passage.
Read the following announcement from the president of a university: Effective immediately, the university is instituting a new policy on off-campus visitors. Any guests are now required to register with campus security and obtain a guest pass which must be worn at all times. This new policy is necessary in order to keep all the students safe and to increase campus safety’s knowledge of who is on campus. Play Track 10 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
The man gives his opinion on the announcement. State the man’s opinion and provide the reasons he gives for holding it. Give yourself 30 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
State requested opinion
Reason #1
Detail for reason #1
Reason #2
Detail for reason #2
Template #4: Summarize/Contrast Question The fourth task will begin with a reading passage and then be followed by an academic lecture that will either agree or disagree with the reading. Your job is to show how the lecture relates to or contrasts with the reading. Both the lecture and the reading will present some characteris tics of a given topic.
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Reading: Once again, you’ll have 45 seconds to read the passage. While you read, take brief notes about the characteristics mentioned—typically there will be three to five characteristics to track.
Listening: The lecture will start automatically, so be ready to listen! You will be able to tell with in the first couple sentences whether the lecture agrees or disagrees with the reading passage. While you listen to the lecture, listen for the characteristics mentioned and jot them down if you can. Think about how the characteristics in the lecture agree or disagree with the informa tion in the reading.
Here’s the template you should keep in mind as you read and listen: Main Response Characteristic #1 from reading Detail #1 from lecture Characteristic #2 from reading Detail #2 from lecture Characteristic #3 from reading Detail #3 from lecture
Since this task asks you to compare or contrast the reading with the lecture, you should think about how you take your notes. Your most efficient approach will likely be to create two col umns, one for your notes about the reading and one for your notes about the listening. Then, as you take notes on the characteristics, you can line them up to be better able to compare them. Try it out with the sample below, and compare your notes to our suggestions that appear below. Here’s a sample. You’ll have 45 seconds to read a passage like this.
Read the following passage about captive breeding: Both environmentalists and animal rights activists consider captive breeding a solution to the threat of extinction of certain endangered species. In captive breeding, endangered animals are caught and bred, and the offspring is then released back into the wild. Unfortunately, the results of this program have been mixed. In many cases, the animals that are released back into the wild are unable to survive. The time spent in human captivity makes it more difficult for them to acquire food and to fit in with other members of their species. Play Track 11 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
The professor describes the results of a captive breeding experiment. Explain how the results of the experiment relate to the reading on the topic.
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Here’s what your notes might look like:
Reading Captive breeding breed in captivity, set babies free Mixed results Many released animals can’t survive
Listening Problems re: reintroduce animal into wild “Working out” 1st time—Lynx died Taught them to hunt Kept together so they can get along
Notice that we can easily see that the reading says there are “mixed results,” but just to the right of that we noted that there’s been a situation in which reintroducing animals into the wild is “working out.” This can be helpful in crafting your response to the prompt. Once the lecture is finished, you’ll have 30 seconds to prepare and then 60 seconds to speak. Here’s a possible response to the prompt:
Main response
The experiment with the lynx shows that captive breeding can be successful.
Characteristic #1 from reading
One problem with captive breeding, according to the reading, is that animals do not always survive when reintroduced into the wild.
Detail #1 from lecture
But the scientists seemed to be having good luck reintroducing the lynx into the wild.
Characteristic #2 from reading
The reading states that a major problem is that the animals don’t know how to hunt.
Detail #2 from lecture
However, for the experiment, biologists first taught the animals how to hunt before releasing them.
Characteristic #3 from reading
Another problem in the reading is that the animals don’t know how to interact with other members of the species.
Detail #3 from lecture
Scientists were able to get around this, however, by keeping the lynx together in a group.
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Did you read this one aloud? If not, go back and do so—it’s great practice! For this type of question, it’s acceptable if you run out of time before you list all of the charac teristics. Your goal while speaking is to be as clear as possible, so don’t rush through the details because it may make you harder to understand.
Try this template with the following example. You have 30 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
Read the following passage about methane:
Methane is a colorless, odorless gas that occurs naturally as a result of the decomposition of plant and animal matters. Methane is a hydrocarbon like coal and oil, and it’s all that remains of long-dead plants, dinosaurs, and other prehistoric animals. Although methane can be produced by volcanic activity, scientists usually connect the presence of methane with the presence of biological life. Many microorganisms excrete methane as a waste product, and scientists often infer the presence of these creatures by measuring the amount of methane in the air. Play Track 12 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
The professor presents some facts about Mars. Explain how these facts may indicate life. You have 30 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
Main response Characteristic #1 from reading Detail #1 from lecture
Characteristic #2 from reading Detail #2 from lecture
Characteristic #3 from reading Detail #3 from lecture
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INTEGRATED TASKS—LISTENING AND SPEAKING
Template #5: Summarize/Preference Question The fifth task asks you to listen to a 1-to 2-minute conversation, usually about a problem. Then you’ll have 20 seconds to organize your thoughts and 60 seconds to summarize the problem and any solutions offered and state your preferred solution. Listening'. Pay attention to the problem and the solutions offered. Keep this template in mind as you listen: State the problem. State the solutions offered. State your preferred solution. Reason #1 Detail for reason #1 Reason #2 Detail for reason #2
Here’s an example.
Play Track 13 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
The students discuss two possible solutions to the problem. Describe the problem and state which of the two solutions you prefer and why. The most important component of your response is the list of solutions to the problem—this shows that you were able to understand what was said. As far as your preferred solution, there is no right or wrong answer, so all you have to do is pick whichever solution is easier for you to talk about.
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Here’s a sample response, with the summarizing and preference terms shown in boldface.
State the problem
The man’s problem is that he has two projects due at the same time.
State the solutions
His friend offers two possible solutions. He can ask for an extension, or he can drop the class.
State your preference
I think asking for an extension is a better solution.
Reason #1
An extension is better because dropping the class is too drastic.
Detail for reason #1
It seems silly to drop the entire class just because of one conflict.
Reason #2
1 also think an extension is better because the profes sor will probably give the student one.
Detail for reason #2
The friend told of a similar situation, and she was able to get an extension.
Did you read the sample response out loud for practice?
Now practice using the template on the following example.
Play Track 14 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
The students discuss two possible solutions to the problem. Describe the problem and state which of the two solutions you prefer and why. You have 20 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
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State the problem
State the solutions
State your preference
Reason #1
Detail for reason #1
Reason #2
Detail for reason #2
Template #6: Summarize Question The final task asks you to listen to a 1- to 2-minute lecture and show how the speaker’s points support his or her main idea.
Listening: While listening to the lecture, focus on identifying the main idea. Don’t worry about identifying every detail—you need only enough details so that you can talk for a minute.
Keep this template in mind as you listen: State the main idea State Reason #1 Detail for reason #1 Link between reason #1 and main idea State Reason #2 Detail for reason #2 Link between reason #2 and main idea Notice that this template is a little bit different: you have to do more than just list the reasons and details. You also have to take the final step to explain how the reasons support the main idea. When you respond, make sure you state the main idea right away. If you focus too much on the details, you’ll lose points.
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Here’s an example.
Play Track 15 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
Using points and examples from the talk, explain how the Internet has contributed to censorship. You have 20 seconds to organize your thoughts and 60 seconds to respond.
Here is a sample response.
State main idea
The professor argues that the Internet actually pro motes censorship, rather than fights it.
Reason #1
The first reason given by the professor is that the Internet has so much information on it.
Detail for reason #1
The Internet contains information from a wide variety of sources, including the government and companies.
Link between reason #1 and main idea
This censors information because the huge amount of information means that some views will never be heard.
Reason #2
Furthermore, the Internet makes it harder to find information.
Detail for reason #2
For example, the professor states that search engines show only the most popular websites.
Link between reason #2 and main idea
This contributes to censorship by leading users to a very small number of websites and hiding the other sites from them.
Now practice using the template on the following example. Play Track 16 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools).
Using points and examples from the talk, explain how the participants and items in a ritual represent other things. You have 20 seconds to prepare and 60 seconds to respond.
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State main idea
Reason #1
Detail for reason #1
Link between reason #1 and main idea Reason #2
Detail for reason #2
Link between reason #2 and main idea
Step 2: Learn the Appropriate Vocabulary Throughout this lesson, certain words and phrases have appeared in bold. These words and phrases are particularly important on the Speaking section of the TOEFL. Go through this chapter and any other passages in the book and study the types of vocabulary words used. For the Speaking section, you should use three major categories of words. They are as follows:
Words that indicate preference. This category includes words such as favorite, best, most, better, superior, and favorable. These are types of words that are help ful when explaining your opinion or preference. You’ll also use these words on one of your Writing tasks. This category would also include the opposites of the above words, such as worse, less, inferior, worst, and least. Try to find other examples of preference words in this book.
Preferred Best Better Most More Superior Preferable Preferably Like Approve Favored
Not Preferred Worst Worse Least Less Inferior Not preferable Not preferably Dislike Reject Not favored
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Words that describe, summarize, and contrast. These words are useful when you are describing someone else’s speech or conversation. These are the words that were discussed in the “Basic Principles” section at the beginning of this chapter. Make sure to review them frequently. Transition words. Be certain to familiarize yourself with the words in this cate gory. Pay particular attention to the direction of your response so you can identify which transition you need. See pages 374-376 for a refresher.
Step 3: Listen and Practice Spoken English This book has shown you how to construct responses, but you’ll have to continue practic ing by speaking aloud. One of the best ways to increase your speaking ability is to listen to spoken English as often as possible. If you don’t live in an English-speaking country, you can still hear English spoken in movies or on the Internet. But you need to do more than just listen—you need to actually practice speaking aloud. Here are some suggestions for practicing your speaking on your own:
Stand in front of a mirror and speak to your reflection. Use the microphone on your computer or on your phone to record yourself speaking. Then listen to the recording and see what you can identify that can be improved. Or, ask a friend or teacher who is a native English speaker to listen to it and give you some feedback. Read newspaper or magazine stories out loud. Find videos online and then listen to and repeat short excerpts. Find textbooks that have questions at the end of each chapter and answer the questions out loud. Do a search for “Toastmaster Table Topics” and practice answering some of the questions you’ll find there. Here are some ideas for practicing speaking with a friend: • Ask your friend a question and give her 15 seconds to think of a response and then 45 seconds to speak. Then have her do the same for you. • Find a newsworthy story online or in the paper and ask your friend his opinion on the situation. Then have him do the same. • Look for scenes from plays that require only two speakers and practice saying the lines out loud together. • Go to a movie and then discuss it afterward. Include the characters, the plot, the scenery, your favorite part, the best-looking actor, and more in your conversation!
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APPENDIX: TRANSCRIPTS TO AUDIO TRACKS Listen to these audio tracks without reading the transcripts. Then go back and read them aloud for the practice! Track 9
Now listen to two students discuss the announcement. Woman: Did you hear the announcement? They’re cutting back the computer lab hours! Man: Yeah, but it’s better that they cut down there than at the library or the cafeteria.
W: Maybe for you, but I don’t have a computer. I use the computer lab a lot. Plus, I need to have access to a computer for my economics class. M: Well, they’ll still be open during the week. W: I know. But I get most of my work done during the weekend. The labs are usually empty then. They’ll probably be filled with students now. It’s going to make it really hard for me to get all my class work done. M: Hmm. I didn’t really think of that. Track 10
Now listen to the following conversation about the announcement:
Man: I think the university’s new policy is great. Woman: Really? I think it’s going to be annoying. I have some friends visiting, and they’re going to have to spend all this time registering. And what if they lose their passes?
M: True. But that’s a minor inconvenience. It’s worth it if the campus is safer. Remember that vandalism that took place at the library was done by someone from off-campus. W: I still think the school is overreacting. One bad thing happens, and they go and change the policy.
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M: No, there have been other incidents. A couple months ago, there were some things stolen from one of the dorms. And the students reported seeing a suspicious figure.
W: I guess you’re right. Track 11
Now listen to a professor give a talk about the same topic.
Okay, so we’ve been talking about some problems faced by biologists when they try to reintroduce species into the wild. As we’ve urn...ah, talked about, sometimes the animals aren’t ready or able to go...to fit into their native habitats. But there have been some new strategies used which seem to be, uh, working out. For example, biologists recently reintroduced four lynx—you guys know what a lynx is, right?—into the wild. The first time they tried it, the cats died of starvation—they didn’t know how or where to hunt. This time, they kept the animals longer and let them mature. They also forced the animals to hunt for food instead of giving them the food directly. And finally, they kept the lynx together in a big pen so they know how to get along with other members of their species. Track 12
Now listen to a professor give a talk about the same topic. So, there’s been some interesting news for those of you who dream of life on other planets. It turns out that Mars has a pretty high concentration of methane in its atmosphere. Now, usually when we think of life, we associate it with oxygen, right? But that’s because we’re kind of prejudiced. A whole host of creatures need no oxygen whatsoever. The reason that this is important is that it looks like Mars has very little geologic activity. Methane can be produced without life, but as far as we know, there are no active volcanoes on Mars. Plus, here’s another interesting point—methane only lasts about 300 years in the atmosphere. So that means the methane we’re seeing now is fairly new...and it’s being replenished somehow.
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Track 13
Listen to a conversation between two students. Man: It looks like I’ve got a big problem on my hands.
Woman: Yeah? What’s wrong?
M: I think I overbooked myself this semester. I took five classes, and two of them are really demanding. I have two really big projects due, and I don’t think I can do both of them. W: Oh no. It really sounds like you’ve got a lot of stuff on your plate. Have you talked to your professors yet? M: No. I don’t see how that would help.
W: Well, you could ask for an extension. Last semester, I asked Professor Miller for an extension on my psychology project. She was really nice about it and gave me two more weeks to finish it. M: Hmm...I could do that. But I can’t take extensions forever. The fact is that I still have a lot of work to do for these classes.
W: I guess. But it could help you open up your schedule for now so you’re not so stressed out, you know?
M: Right.
W: Of course, there is one other option—but it’s kind of drastic. You could drop one of the classes and take it next semester. It’s still early enough to do it.
M: That could work, but I really didn’t want to think about it. But I may have to. Track 14
Listen to a conversation between two students.
Woman: Did you hear about the school’s new parking policy? It’s going to be a problem.
Man: No. I don’t drive. So what’s the deal with it? W: Well, they changed the rules so that freshmen have to park all the way down near the athletic center. That’s so far away!
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M: Why did they do that?
W: I don’t know. I think because the seniors have complained that there’s not enough parking on the main campus. All I know is that it’s going to be a big inconvenience for me.
M: Is there anywhere else you can park? I mean, the athletic center is pretty far. Maybe you can park off campus. W: I don’t know. I think I’d be afraid that something would happen to my car. I don’t use it all the time, so it would be unattended for a lot of time. M: I guess I didn’t think of that. I have an idea.... Maybe you could find a garage for the car. It probably wouldn’t cost any more than you pay now for a parking tag.
W: Maybe. But I’d have to find a garage close enough to campus that I could walk to. Track 15
Listen to a lecture given in a sociology class.
Now oftentimes, when we think of the Internet, we think of it as the ultimate expression of free speech. There is no regulation of content on the Internet. People and organizations can put anything they want on the Web. Also, the Internet allows access to a huge amount of information. You can find almost anything you want there, but social scientists have argued that the Internet is actually responsible for a new type of censorship. In most cases, censorship involves a suppression of ideas. But the Internet censors material in a different way. According to these sociologists, the censorship found on the Internet is subtle, but just as bad as any form of censorship. Basically, the Internet censors viewpoints by having too much information. That’s right. Because the Internet contains information from companies, organizations, individuals, and even the government, any one viewpoint or idea can easily be buried under the tide, meaning that no one is exposed to it. Another way the Internet increases censorship is that because it is so vast, information becomes harder to find. Popular search engines direct users to the most popular websites and very seldom do people take the time to look at any more than the first two or three sites listed. Thus, these search engines are practicing an electronic form of censorship—unpopular ideas are hidden and inaccessible to the average user.
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Listen to a talk given in an anthropology class.
All cultures partake in certain rituals and ceremonies. Although these rituals and ceremonies may sometimes seem hard to decipher, the essence of these actions is representation—the motions and the items used in the ceremony or ritual stand in for, or symbolize, something else. Usually, the members of the ritual are trying to control or affect something that lies outside their power, such as the weather or the gods, so they must use symbols to stand in for it.
For example, the Dieri people of central Australia use a very symbolic rainmaking ceremony. First, the rainmakers are bled. Their blood drips into a hole in the ground, which represents rain dropping from the sky. Next, the rainmakers take two rounded stones, which stand for clouds, and carry them some distance away. They then place the stones high up in a tree, which symbolizes the height of the clouds in the sky. Or, for another example, there is the fairly common ceremony in which a victim is chosen to symbolize all the sins and wrongdoings of a culture. The victim is then cleansed, either through a ritual bath or through death, in order to wash away the sins of the people. In fact, this is where the term “scapegoat” comes from, because one culture used a goat as its ceremonial symbol.
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Speaking Summary All right, only one more section to crack before you’re ready to take the TOEFL! First, let’s review what you should do on the Speaking tasks.
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Know what the graders want. Remember that graders are looking for the following: delivery, lan guage use, and topic development. All three are important to your score. Even if you speak perfect English, if you don’t answer the question correctly, your score will suffer.
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Don’t try to be perfect. You don’t need to speak English as if you were a native speaker. The graders are concerned only with how easy it is to understand what you say. It’s acceptable to have errors in your speech.
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Speak smoothly and confidently, even if you make mistakes.
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Summarize/preference: State the problem and the possible solutions, say which you prefer, and then give reasons and details why you think that one is better. Summarize a passage or lecture: Listen carefully and state the main idea of the lecture. Restate the points of the lecture in your own words and explain the reasons and details given in the lecture.
Practice, practice, practice. There is no substitute for practice. Keep working on your speaking ability. Have an English-speaking friend listen to you as you speak, if possible.
Practice your speaking skills with the drills in the next chapter, and then we’ll tackle cracking the Writing sec tion. Almost done!
Chapter 14 Speaking Practice Drills Now were ready to practice the Speaking section. If possible, record or ask a friend to record your responses so you can review them later. Remember to use the templates we covered in the previous chapter.
Throughout the Speaking section on the actual test, you will be instructed to listen carefully with a screen that looks like the one below.
Questions will be introduced by a screen that looks like the one shown here.
You will also see photographs of relevant scenes with each question. Some examples are in cluded here with the question templates.
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Personal Preference Question (Template #1) Listen to Track 17 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools). After the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the CD. Here’s the question.
If you had an entire month to do whatever you would like to do, what would it be? Include details and examples to support your selection.
o Choose an Option Question (Template #2) Listen to Track 18 on the accompanying CD (or in your Student Tools). After the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the CD. Here’s the question.
Some people believe that same-sex schools are more effective, whereas other people believe that schools with both boys and girls are better. Which approach do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your response.
Preparation time: 15 seconds Response time: 45 seconds
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Summarize An Opinion Question (Template #3) For the summarize an opinion questions on the actual test, you will see a series of screens similar to the ones that follow and hear a prompt to read a passage in 45 seconds. For our purposes here, you will need to stop the audio to read the pas sage and either time yourself or ask a friend to time you. After 45 seconds, resume the audio and listen to the conversa tion. After the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the audio at that point.
Now listen to Track 19 on the accompanying CD or in your Student Tools (a transcript is also provided below).
Narrator: The University of Hartsdale has responded to budget constraints by eliminating some academic departments from its College of Liberal Arts. The campus newspaper printed the following report about the announcement of the department cuts. You have 45 seconds to read the report. Begin reading now. [Stop the CD for 45 seconds.]
The university has announced that, effective at the beginning of the fall semester, three departments will be eliminated from the College of Liberal Arts: Ecology, Folklore Studies, and Textile Sciences. Arrangements have been made to ensure that currently enrolled majors will receive their degrees as planned, but no new major applications have been approved for the affected departments during this past academic year. A statement by the dean of the College of Liberal Arts expressed confidence that the money thus saved would be put to good use elsewhere in the university. [Restart the audio.] 404 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
Narrator: Now listen to two students as they discuss the announcement. Woman: Did you see about those three departments being cut next year? It’s a shame. Man: Maybe. But you know, there were only two or three professors in each of those programs, and none of them are being let go. They’re just being moved to bigger departments—you know, like, the folklore professors are going to be in anthropology. They’ll still do the same research and teach the same classes.
W: They haven’t let any professors go? I thought this was supposed to save money. M: Well, it will. Each department has to have an administrative office, with a secretary and a budget manager. Those things add up. Moving the professors to bigger departments means a big savings on operations. W: But it still means students have fewer options for majors.
M: You could say that, I guess. On the other hand, each of those departments only had, like, one major per year to begin with. They just weren’t very popular. I really don’t think we’re going to be losing any important scholarship just because those things aren’t full departments anymore. Narrator: The man explains his opinion of the announcement made by the College of Liberal Arts. State his opinion, and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.
Now get ready to answer the question.
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The man explains his opinion of the announcement made by the College of Liberal Arts. State his opinion, and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.
Summarize/Contrast Question (Template #4) Now, let’s look at a contrast question. On the actual test, you will see a series of screens similar to the ones that follow and hear a prompt that will ask you to read a passage in 45 seconds. For our purposes here, you will need to stop the audio to read the passage and either time yourself or ask a friend to time you. After 45 seconds, resume the audio for the listening passage. After the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the CD. Listen to Track 20 on the accompanying CD or in your Student Tools (a transcript is also provided on the next page).
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Narrator: Now read the passage about surgery to replace heart valves. You have 45 seconds to read the passage. Begin reading now. [Stop the audio for 45 seconds.]
Heart Valve Replacement Valves in the heart regulate the flow of blood, like gates or the locks of a canal. When a valve malfunctions and needs to be replaced, several factors need to be considered. The biggest is the age of the patient. Younger patients require valves that will last for many years; they also tend to be healthy enough to withstand courses of supplementary treatment that are hard on the body. Older patients, on the other hand, are often too weak for such supplementary treatments and can make do with replacement valves that are less durable. [Restart the audio.]
Narrator: Now listen to part of a lecture on this topic given in a biology class.
Professor: People with defective heart valves need them replaced, and what’s often used is the heart valve from a pig. It’s called a “porcine valve” because of that. A pig’s valve is very similar to a person’s, and because pig valves are natural and tend to be accepted by the body, patients who receive them require little treatment after surgery...relatively, for transplant patients, I mean. Now, there are problems. For example, pig valves tend to last around ten years—not very long.
Actually, now that I’m on that topic, I might mention that porcine valves are not the only option. Alternative valves have been developed that are entirely artificial. They’re made of plastic and metal. These valves can last for decades, certainly a lot longer than pig valves. But the human body recognizes that plastic and metal are artificial. So what happens is that blood sticks to them, and blood clots form around them. These clots are dangerous because they can block the flow of blood. For that reason, patients who receive artificial valves spend the rest of their lives taking drugs that prevent blood from clotting. The drugs can be tough for the body to handle, but they’re worth it for the sake of having a functioning heart valve.
Narrator: The professor discussed the characteristics of two kinds of heart valves. Explain how their characteristics are related to their suitability for younger and older transplant patients.
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Now get ready to answer the question.
The professor discussed the characteristics of two kinds of heart valves. Explain how their characteristics are related to their suitability for younger and older transplant patients.
Preparation time: 30 seconds Response time: 60 seconds
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Summarize/Preference Question (Template #5) For summarize/preference questions on the actual test, you will see a series of screens similar to the ones that follow and hear a prompt to listen to a conversation. For our purposes, after the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the audio at that point. Now listen to Track 21 on the accompanying CD or in your Student Tools (a transcript is also provided below).
Narrator: Now listen to a conversation between two students. Woman: How’s that paper coming along, Chris? Man: Coming along? You’re joking, right?
W: Stuck, huh?
M: Yeah. The problem is, I can’t get started. I mean, I have all the information I want to use— that’s the frustrating thing. For once, I started my research early rather than leaving it to the last minute. W: Uhhhh.... Have you considered just sitting at the computer and making yourself type? Sometimes that helps if you have writer’s block.
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M: I don’t know.
W: Okay, well, the other thing is, what about making an outline? M: An outline?
W: Sure. Your research is done, right? So take your notecards and organize them on paper first. See, like, here’s the main point I want to make in this paragraph, and here are the three details I want to use to support it. M: I see.
W: And if you do that for each section of your paper, you have the structure all mapped out, and when you’re writing, you just need to connect the pieces. It can be a lot easier to deal with.
Narrator: The speakers discuss two possible solutions for the man’s problem. Describe the problem. Then state which of the two solutions you prefer and explain why.
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The speakers discuss two possible solutions for the man’s problem. Describe the problem. Then state which of the two solutions you prefer and explain why.
Preparation time: 20 seconds
Response time: 60 seconds
Summarize Question (Template #6) Now let’s look at a summarize question. On the actual test, you will see a series of screens similar to the ones that follow and hear a prompt that will ask you to listen to a lecture. For our purposes, after the narrator reads the question, the track is finished, so you should pause the audio at that point.
Now listen to Track 22 on the accompanying CD or in your Student Tools (a transcript is also provided below).
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Narrator: Now listen to part of a talk in an archaeology class. Professor: Most gems weren’t formed by life processes, so they’re very durable. If you’re one of the lucky few archaeologists who discovers an ancient crown inlaid with, say, rubies, you’ll probably have to worry more about damage to the metal than to the stones themselves. But, some gemstones are organic. They’re more fragile and can present special problems if you’ve dug them up and need to preserve them.
One example is amber, which formed millions of years ago from tree sap. The tree sap breaks down on exposure to air, but if the tree died and was buried in an airtight space before decaying, the sap could harden into amber. That’s where amber gets its liquid clarity and smoothness. Uh, now, once it’s hardened, you don’t need to worry about oxygen breaking it down. What you do need to worry about is...well, think of it as being like hardened wax. If it comes too near to heat, it might melt or deform. Also, contact with oils or strong acids can injure the surface and make it cloudy. The basic thing to remember is, avoid sudden temperature changes and any contact with cleaning solutions and other such chemicals. Another organic gem is coral. Coral is sort of the skeleton of creatures from the ocean floor, made of calcium carbonate, often with carotene mixed in. That’s what makes it pinkish and orangish. You don’t have to worry about melting coral, but you do have to worry about scratching it. Calcium carbonate is naturally rather powdery, so it chips easily. Also, it’s very porous, so it absorbs liquids quickly. You need to make sure that you never soak coral in water or pour chemicals over it. Narrator: Using points and examples from the talk, explain how archaeologists must take the origins of amber and coral into consideration when caring for them.
Now get ready to answer the question.
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Using points and examples from the talk, explain how archaeologists must take the origins of amber and coral into consideration when caring for them.
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Chapter 15 Speaking Practice Answers and Explanations
In this chapter, you’ll find transcripts of the questions in the previous chapter and sample responses. Use these to help you pinpoint areas for improvement in your speaking. Your answers will vary from the samples, but make sure you stick to the templates and fulfill the tasks.
PERSONAL PREFERENCE QUESTION (TEMPLATE #1) Narrator: If you had an entire month to do whatever you would like to do, what would it be? Include details and examples to support your selection.
Preparation time: 15 seconds Response time: 45 seconds
Sample Response Remember, as always, this is just one example of a good answer. Your response does not have to be exactly like this. It’s a good idea to practice saying our answers anyway, just to give you experience answering one question different ways.
State personal preference
If 1 had that much time, 1 would like to travel around the world.
Reason #1
1 would choose this because 1 am curious about other places in the world.
Specific detail for reason #1
So far, 1 have visited four different countries, but there are many more 1 would like to visit.
Reason #2
Another reason 1 would like to travel around the world is so 1 can meet many interesting people.
Specific detail for reason #2
1 enjoy meeting new people and 1 am especially interested in meeting people from different cultures.
Reason #3
A final reason 1 would like to travel is because 1 plan to study international business.
Specific detail for reason #3
1 think that traveling around the world would help me in the field of international business.
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CHOOSE AN OPTION QUESTION (TEMPLATE #2) Narrator: Some people believe that same-sex schools are more effective, whereas other people believe that schools with both boys and girls are better. Which approach do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your response.
Preparation time: 15 seconds
Response time: 45 seconds
Sample Response State option
1 believe that schools should have both male and female students in order to be effective.
Reason #1
The first reason 1 believe this is that a mixed school is a better example of the real world.
Specific detail for reason #1
Most jobs that a student gets will involve both men and women, so a mixed school will prepare the student for that.
Reason #2
Secondly, going to a same-sex school may cause some difficulties for students.
Specific detail for reason #2
For example, students at a same-sex school may not know how to get along well with the opposite sex.
Reason #3
Finally, 1 think that being exposed to a variety of opinions is Important to education.
Specific detail for reason #3
A mixed school exposes students to more opinions, which is very important.
SUMMARIZE AN OPINION QUESTION (TEMPLATE #3) Narrator: The University of Hartsdale has responded to budget constraints by eliminating some academic departments from its College of Liberal Arts. The campus newspaper printed the following report about the announcement of the department cuts. You have 45 seconds to read the report. Begin reading now. The university has announced that, effective at the beginning of the fall semester, three departments will be eliminated from the College of Liberal Arts: Ecology, Folklore Studies, and Textile Sciences. Arrangements have been made to ensure that currently enrolled majors will receive their degrees as planned, but no new major applications have been approved for the affected departments during this past academic year. A statement by the dean of the College of Liberal Arts expressed confidence that the money thus saved would be put to good use elsewhere in the university. 15. Speaking Practice Answers and Explanations | 417
Narrator: Now listen to two students as they discuss the announcement.
Woman: Did you see about those three departments being cut next year? It’s a shame. Man: Maybe. But you know, there were only two or three professors in each of those programs, and none of them is being let go. They’re just being moved to bigger departments—you know, like, the folklore professors are going to be in anthropology. They’ll still do the same research and teach the same classes.
W: They haven’t let any professors go? I thought this was supposed to save money.
M: Well, it will. Each department has to have an administrative office, with a secretary and a budget manager. Those things add up. Moving the professors to bigger departments means a big savings on operations. W: But it still means students have fewer options for majors.
M: You could say that, I guess. On the other hand, each of those departments only had, like, one major per year to begin with. They just weren’t very popular. I really don’t think we’re going to be losing any important scholarship just because those things aren’t full departments anymore. Narrator: The man explains his opinion of the announcement made by the College of Liberal Arts. State his opinion, and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. Preparation time: 30 seconds
Response time: 60 seconds
Sample Response State opinion
The man believes that the decision to cut the departments is a good one.
Reason #1
The man contends that no professors will lose their jobs when the departments are eliminated.
Details for reason #1
According to the student, the professors will simply join other departments.
Reason #2
Furthermore, the student states that there were not many majors in those departments.
Detail for reason #2
There was only one major per year in the eliminated departments.
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SUMMARIZE/CONTRAST QUESTION (TEMPLATE #4) Narrator: Now read the passage about surgery to replace heart valves. You have 45 seconds to read the passage. Begin reading now. Heart Valve Replacement
Valves in the heart regulate the flow of blood, like gates or the locks of a canal. When a valve malfunctions and needs to be replaced, several factors need to be considered. The biggest is the age of the patient. Younger patients require valves that will last for many years; they also tend to be healthy enough to withstand courses of supplementary treatment that are hard on the body. Older patients, on the other hand, are often too weak for such supplementary treatments and can make do with replacement valves that are less durable.
Narrator: Now listen to part of a lecture on this topic given in a biology class.
Professor: People with defective heart valves need them replaced, and what’s often used is the heart valve from a pig. It’s called a “porcine valve” because of that. A pig’s valve is very similar to a person’s, and because pig valves are natural and tend to be accepted by the body, patients who receive them require little treatment after surgery...relatively, for transplant patients, I mean. Now, there are problems. For example, pig valves tend to last around ten years—not very long.
Actually, now that I’m on that topic, I might mention that porcine valves are not the only option. Alternative valves have been developed that are entirely artificial. They’re made of plastic and metal. These valves can last for decades—certainly a lot longer than pig valves. But the human body recognizes that plastic and metal are artificial. So what happens is that blood sticks to them, and blood clots form around them. These clots are dangerous because they can block the flow of blood. For that reason, patients who receive artificial valves spend the rest of their lives taking drugs that prevent blood from clotting. The drugs can be tough for the body to handle, but they’re worth it for the sake of having a functioning heart valve. Narrator: The professor discussed the characteristics of two kinds of heart valves. Explain how their characteristics are related to their suitability for younger and older transplant patients.
Preparation time: 30 seconds
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Sample Response Main response
The professor discussed two types of valves. One is from a pig; the other is made of plastic and metal.
Characteristic #1 from reading
One aspect of heart valves that is very important is how long they last.
Detail #1 from lecture
Pig valves can be used, but they last for only ten years. This makes them unsuitable for younger patients.
Characteristic #2 from reading
Another characteristic that is important is the need for additional treatments.
Detail #2 from lecture
Plastic and metal valves require special drugs that stop the blood from clotting.
Characteristic #3 from reading
According to the reading, old patients and young patients have differ ent needs. Old patients should avoid extra treatments, whereas young patients need a valve that lasts for a long time.
Detail #3 from lecture
Thus, pig valves may be suited to older patients, and plastic or metal valves for younger patients.
SUMMARIZE/PREFERENCE QUESTION (TEMPLATE #5) Narrator: Now listen to a conversation between two students.
Woman: How’s that paper coming along, Chris? Man: Coming along? You’re joking, right?
W: Stuck, huh?
M: Yeah. The problem is, I can’t get started. I mean, I have all the information I want to use—that’s the frustrating thing. For once, I started my research early rather than leaving it to the last minute. W: Uhhhh.... Have you considered just sitting at the computer and making yourself type? Sometimes that helps if you have writer’s block.
M: Just typing whatever comes to mind? W: Uh-huh. You can’t force inspiration, but if you just let yourself relax and let your thoughts flow and type them out, you’ll eventually get into the rhythm, and you’ll start writing good stuff for your paper. M: I don’t know.
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M: An outline? I/V: Sure. Your research is done, right? So take your notecards and organize them on paper first. See, like, here’s the main point I want to make in this paragraph, and here are the three details I want to use to support it.
M: I see.
W: And if you do that for each section of your paper, you have the structure all mapped out, and when you’re writing, you just need to connect the pieces. It can be a lot easier to deal with.
Narrator: The speakers discuss two possible solutions for the man’s problem. Describe the problem. Then state which of the two solutions you prefer and explain why. Preparation time: 20 seconds
Response time: 60 seconds
Sample Response State the problem
The problem is that the man is unable to write his paper.
State the solutions
His friend proposes two different solutions. The first is just to try to write whatever comes into his head. The second is to make an outline.
State your preference
1 think that writing an outline is a better solution.
Reason #1
An outline is the best way of organizing your thoughts.
Detail for reason #1
Because the student already has done the research, all he needs to do is figure out how to put all the information together.
Reason #2
Additionally, making an outline is more productive than just writing what ever you think of.
Detail for reason #2
The student could waste a lot of time writing stuff that isn’t good, but working on an outline will directly contribute to the paper.
SUMMARIZE QUESTION (TEMPLATE #6) Narrator: Now listen to part of a talk in an archaeology class.
Professor: Most gems weren’t formed by life processes, so they’re very durable. If you’re one of the lucky few archaeologists who discovers an ancient crown inlaid with, say, rubies, you’ll probably have to worry more about damage to the metal than to the stones themselves. But, some gemstones are organic. They’re more fragile and can present special problems if you’ve dug them up and need to preserve them. 15. Speaking Practice Answers and Explanations | 421
One example is amber, which formed millions of years ago from tree sap. The tree sap breaks down on exposure to air, but if the tree died and was buried in an airtight space before decaying, the sap could harden into amber. That’s where amber gets its liquid clarity and smoothness. Now, once it’s hardened, you don’t need to worry about oxygen breaking it down. What you do need to worry about is... well, think of it as being like hardened wax. If it comes too near to heat, it might melt or deform. Also, contact with oils or strong acids can injure the surface and make it cloudy. The basic thing to remember is, avoid sudden temperature changes and any contact with cleaning solutions and other such chemicals. Another organic gem is coral. Coral is sort of the skeleton of creatures from the ocean floor, made of calcium carbonate, often with carotene mixed in—that’s what makes it pinkish and orangish. You don’t have to worry about melting coral, but you do have to worry about scratching it. Calcium carbonate is naturally rather powdery, so it chips easily. Also, it’s very porous, so it absorbs liquids quickly. You need to make sure that you never soak coral in water or pour chemicals over it. Narrator: Using points and examples from the talk, explain how archaeologists must take the origins of amber and coral into consideration when caring for them. Preparation time: 20 seconds
Response time: 60 seconds
Sample Response State main idea
According to the professor, both amber and coral can be harmed by certain
processes.
Reason #1
Amber is made from hardened tree sap.
Detail for reason #1
Decause of this fact, amber can be damaged by heat, oils, and acids.
Link between reason #1 and main idea
Thus, archaeologists have to be careful not to expose amber to high tempera tures, which can affect the shape of the amber. Also, some liquids will make
the amber cloudy.
Reason #2
Coral is made up of the skeletons of ocean creatures.
Detail for reason #2
Decause it is brittle, it can be scratched or chipped. Additionally, it can
absorb liquid.
Link between reason #2 and main idea
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Archaeologists therefore must be careful not to soak coral or handle it roughly.
Chapter 16 Cracking the Writing Section
This section of the TOEFL measures your ability to communicate in an academic environment. This is supposed to check to see whether you can write a college-level paper in English. There are only two writing tasks, and they require many of the same skills you need in order to ace the Reading, Listening, and Speaking sections. On the Writing section, you’ll be asked to do the following:
Task 1: Integrated Writing—Read, Listen, Write • Read a passage on an academic subject, listen to a lecture on the same topic, and write an essay that discusses the relationship between the two. You’ll have three minutes to read and 20 minutes to respond. Task 2: Independent Task • Write an essay that states, explains, and supports your position on an issue. You’ll have 30 minutes to write this essay. You will have 50 minutes to complete both tasks.
Each of the two Writing responses you’ll have to provide will be graded on a scale from 0 to 5. As we mentioned in the early part of this book, the Writing scores are subdivided into three sections: Good (4.0-5.0). A “Good” score indicates that you can organize your thoughts well and pres ent them cogently in written form. Any difficulties that exist may be in the form of occasional incorrect grammar or phrases that are unidiomatic.
Fair (2.5-3.5). A “Fair” score indicates that you were able to respond to the tasks appropriately, but may have been unclear in some of the points you tried to make. Additional grammatical errors may contribute to the perception that your essays aren’t as strong as they could be.
Limited (1.0-2.0). A score in the “Limited” range indicates that either you didn’t understand the prompt or other source, and have significant areas of improvement in vocabulary and grammar.
WRITING SECTION DIRECTIONS It is important to know that your first writing task will require both a reading and listening part, so you’ll need to leave your headset on. Your essays must be typed, so you should have some familiarity with the keyboard before you take the TOEFL. The word processor used for the TOEFL is very simple: it has only cut, copy, and paste functions.
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Task 1: Integrated Task—Read, Listen, Write The first task begins with 3 minutes to read a 230- to 300-word passage about an academic topic. After the 3 minutes expire, the passage disappears from the screen and a 2-minute lecture on the same topic begins automatically. When the lecture is finished, the reading passage will reappear and you’ll have 20 minutes to write an essay on the relationship between the reading and the lec ture. Your response must not include personal opinions.
Task 2: Independent Task The second task is much simpler. You will have 30 minutes to write a response to a prompt. There is no reading or lecture, and you are asked to provide your personal views on a subject.
HOW THE WRITING SECTION IS SCORED Your TOEFL essays are graded on a 0-5 scale by 2-4 different graders. The average score on both essays is converted to the 0—30 scale. A top-scoring essay on the TOEFL accomplishes the following:
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addresses the topic and the task is well organized and uses appropriate examples displays unity, progress, and coherence demonstrates consistent facility in the use of language
It is worth noting that only one of the four criteria focuses on your use of language. The rest are concerned with how well you complete the task and how organized your writing is. So keep in mind that overall structure and content are more important than perfect grammar.
Your goal in the Writing section is to make the grader’s job as easy as possible by writing a fo cused, organized essay. If you present your thoughts in a clear, focused way, you’ll make it easy for the grader to give you a score of 4 or 5.
CRACKING THE WRITING SECTION: BASIC PRINCIPLES There are a few things to keep in mind when writing your essays for the TOEFL. As with the Speaking section, the graders are not expecting perfection. They realize that you are essentially writing the first draft of an essay. Given the limited amount of time provided, they expect you to make a few grammatical mistakes and misspell a few words. Furthermore, in many ways the graders are looking more at how you write, not what you write. The structure and organization of your essay is just as important as the content of your essay.
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When writing your essay, be aware of the following important points: 1. 2. 3.
Make sure you answer the question appropriately. Make sure your essay is long enough. Make sure your essay is clearly organized.
Paying attention to these three basic points will put you on the right track. Let’s explore them in further detail.
Basic Principle #1: Make Sure You Answer the Question Appropriately One of the first things the graders will evaluate is whether you answered the question in the prompt. Well-written essays that don’t address the task will lose points. Therefore, it is impor tant that you know about the two different tasks you will be asked to do.
Task 1: Integrated Task—Read, Listen, Write The first task asks you to summarize and relate the points presented in a lecture to those given in a reading. Therefore, your essay should contain only facts from the material. All you need to do is report the main points mentioned and show how they relate to each other. You should not give your opinion on any of the topics. The first task should be written entirely in the third person—that is, using words such as he, she, the professor, the student, and so on. You should never use I or me in the first essay.
Task 2: Independent Task The second task requires you to state your opinion. This task requires you to argue what option or choice you believe to be better. Therefore, the essay should be written in the first person—it’s acceptable to use I and me for the second essay.
Basic Principle #2: Make Sure Your Essay Is Long Enough On the TOEFL, quantity makes a difference. To a grader, a longer essay is a better essay. Why? Because a longer essay shows the grader that you are comfortable writing and are able to pro duce a sustained, focused piece. When writing, you must make sure your essay falls within the TOEFL’s suggested guidelines for length.
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Task 1: Integrated Task—Read, Listen, Write •
For the first task, the TOEFL states that an “effective” response is between 150 and 225 words. For more reading and
Task 2: Independent Task •
writing practice, check out TOEFL Reading & Writing
A minimum of 300 words is required for the second task.
Although these word counts may seem intimidating, they’re not as bad as you may think. For example, the section that you are now reading is more than 100 words. In fact, a 200-word essay basically consists of an introduction, one or two body paragraphs, and a conclusion—about the same length as half of this page. That’s it.
Workout.
A 300-word essay is approximately two-thirds of this page. You’ll find that when you use the essay templates in this chapter, you shouldn’t have any problem writing 300 words. Nonethe less, count the words of your practice essays to make sure they are long enough.
Basic Principle #3: Make Sure Your Essay Is Clearly Organized Organized essays are easy to read. Essays that are easy to read are easy to understand. TOEFL graders like both of those qualities. Your written responses on the TOEFL should contain the following:
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An introduction, containing your thesis statement Body paragraphs, containing examples and details that support your thesis A conclusion, containing a final restatement of your thesis Appropriate transitions, linking your paragraphs and ideas together
Now would be a good time to return to Core Concept: Writing (Chapter 5), especially if you haven’t read through it yet. That section provides all the necessary information on how to orga nize your essay and use transitions.
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CRACKING THE WRITING SECTION: BASIC APPROACH You will achieve a good score on the TOEFL Writing section if you do the following:
Essay Tip: There are only a few commonly
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Know what you’re going to write before you write. Master the writing templates in this chapter so you are confident on test day. Organize your essay first. Don’t just start writing; spend a few minutes outlining your essay. It will make writing it much easier. Consider your audience. TOEFL graders are trained to look for certain things in an essay. Make sure your essay contains these key elements. Use your time wisely. You have only 20 or 30 minutes to write. Make efficient use of your time.
k____________ ______________J Let’s look at each of these steps.
Step 1: Know What You're Going to Write The biggest danger in trying to write under timed conditions is writer’s block—-that is, you have absolutely no idea what to write. While you struggle with how to put your thoughts on paper, valuable time slips away. Fortunately, there is an easy solution to this problem: know exactly what you need to write before you sit down at the testing center. We’re going to look at templates for each of the writing tasks. Use these templates and familiar ize yourself with their basic structures. That way, all you’ll have to do is adjust the template to the specific topic.
Task 1: Integrated Task—Read, Listen, Write Template #1: Casting Doubt on a Lecture For the first essay, you will usually be asked to perform the following task:
Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they cast doubt on the reading.
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The template for this task is as follows: Paragraph #1: Introduction
Topic Sentence
In the lecture, the (professor/teacher/instructor) made several points about (topic).
State main idea of lecture
The (professor/teacher/instructor) argues that (main idea of lecture).
Transition/main idea of reading
However, the author of the passage contends that (main idea of reading).
Thesis statement
The professor’s lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of points that are contrary to (main idea of reading).
Paragraph #2: Body Paragraph
Transition/point #1 from lecture
The first point that the (professor/teacher/instructor) uses to cast doubt on the reading is (point #1 from lecture).
Detail for point #1 from lecture According to the (professor/teacher/instructor), (detail for point #1 from lecture).
Opposing point from reading
(Point #1) differs from the reading in that the reading states (point #1 of the reading).
Explanation of relationship between reading and lecture
The point made by the (professor/teacher/instructor) casts doubt on the reading because (how lecture is different from reading).
Paragraph #3: Body Paragraph
Transition/point #2 from lecture
Another point that the (professor/teacher/instructor) uses to cast doubt on the reading is (point #2 from lecture).
Detail for point #2 from lecture The (professor/teacher/instructor) claims that (detail for point #2 from lecture).
Opposing point from reading
However, the reading states (point #2 from reading).
Explanation of relationship between reading and lecture
This point is contradicted by (point #2 from lecture).
Paragraph #4: Conclusion
Topic Sentence
In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrast with the reading.
Summary
(Points #1 and #2 from the lecture) demonstrate that (main idea of the reading) is in doubt.
The words in bold are suggestions; you don’t have to use them exactly. You may also find that you have time to write a third body paragraph. If so, repeat the formula from the first two body paragraphs. However, your writing should still follow the general pattern established in the outline. In the next chapter, you’ll have the opportunity to see the template in action on a sample question.
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Template #2: Showing Support for a Reading Passage While it’s more likely that you’ll see the previous prompt in the Integrated Writing assessment, you may see a different question:
Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they support the reading. This task is simply the opposite of the first: instead of attacking it, we need to support it. Thus the template is fairly similar. Paragraph #1: Introduction
Topic Sentence
In the lecture, the (professor/teacher/instructor) made several points about (topic).
State main idea of lecture
The (professor/teacher/instructor) argues that (main idea of lecture).
Transition/main idea of reading The points made by the (professor/teacher/instructor) support (main idea of reading passage). Thesis statement
In fact, the examples used by the (professor/teacher/in structor) support (main idea of reading)
Paragraph #2: Body Paragraph
Transition/point #1 from lecture
The first point that the (professor/teacher/instructor) uses to support the reading is (point #1 from lecture).
Detail for point #1 from lecture According to the (professor/teacher/instructor), (detail for point #1 from lecture). Supporting point from reading
(Point #1) supports the reading, which holds that (point #1 of the reading).
Explanation of relationship between reading and lecture
The point made by the (professor/teacher/instructor) sup ports the reading because (why lecture agrees with the reading).
Paragraph #3: Body Paragraph
Transition/point #2 from lecture
Furthermore, the (professor/teacher/instructor) bolsters the reading by stating that (point #2 from lecture).
Detail for point #2 from lecture The (point #2 from lecture) claims that (detail for point #2 from lecture).
Supporting point from reading
This point agrees with the reading, which contends that (point #2 from reading).
Explanation of relationship between reading and lecture
The (point #2 from lecture) shows the truth of the read ing because (how point #2 agrees with the reading).
Paragraph #4: Conclusion
Topic Sentence
In conclusion, the points made in the lecture support the reading.
Summary
(Points #1 and #2 from the lecture) demonstrate that (main idea of the reading) is valid.
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Task 2: Independent Task Template #3: Using Specific Details and Examples to Support Your Opinion The second task on the TOEFL simply asks for your opinion on a matter. The prompt will look something like the example shown below.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? (statement)
Use specific details and examples to support your answer. For the second task, we’ll use the following template: Paragraph 1: Introduction
Topic Sentence/Paraphrase Prompt
The issue at hand is (choice offered by the prompt).
Interpret the prompt
This issue is (important/difficult/troubling) because (what is important/difficult/troubling about the prompt).
Tie reason #1 back to thesis
I believe (state your choice) is the better option because... (reasons you believe your option is preferable).
Paragraph 2: Body Paragraph
Transition/first reason
(Your choice of options) is preferable because... (reason #1).
Detail for reason
(details about reason #1)
Tie reason #1 back to thesis
I believe (state your choice) is the better option because... (reasons you believe your option is preferable).
Paragraph 3: Body Paragraph
Transition/second reason
Additionally, (your choice of options) is better because... (reason #2).
Detail for reason #2
(details about reason #2)
Tie reason #2 back to thesis
I believe (state your choice) is the better option because... (reasons you believe your option is preferable).
Paragraph 4: Body Paragraph
Transition/third reason
Based on (details about reason #3) is the right choice because... (reason #3).
Detail for reason #3
(details about reason #3)
Tie reason #3 back to thesis
Finally, I think (state your choice) is the right choice because...(reasons you believe your option is preferable).
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
Transition/restate thesis
Ultimately, I feel that (your choice) is the correct one.
Final Statement
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In summary, familiarize yourself with these templates. If you know exactly what your essay is supposed to look like, you’ll have a much easier time writing.
Step 2: Organize Your Essay In the first step, we looked at how your essay should be structured. Now we need to talk about what your essay will contain. Before you start writing, spend about five minutes brainstorming examples and points for your essay. Failing to do so may lead you to write an essay that lacks focus and coherence.
Task 1: Integrated Task—Read, Listen, Write For the first task, you’ll be presented with a short reading passage. While reading, take notes on the main idea and some of the major facts presented. Your notes do not have to be very de tailed—you’ll be able to refer back to the passage while you are writing. However, it is impor tant to know the general idea of the reading so that you can relate it back to the lecture.
During the lecture, try to note the major points presented by the professor. There will usually be three to five points, but you won’t need all of them: two or three points will be sufficient for the task. You will not be able to hear the lecture again, so it is important to remember some of the points. Try to organize your notes in the following way: Reading: Main idea:___________________________________________ Example/reason:___________________________________________ Example/reason:___________________________________________ Example/reason:___________________________________________
Remember, if it’s too difficult to read and take notes, then do not attempt to do so. The reading passage will be available for reference while you write. For the lecture, the main idea is gener ally opposite that of the reading, so don’t worry about noting that. The examples offered in the lecture are the parts you have to concentrate on. During the lecture, try to organize your notes as follows.
Lecture:
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For the second task, it is very important that you come up with good reasons for your view point. You need to tell the reader why you believe your opinion is better. Here’s a good way to organize your thoughts.
Issue:
Your opinion:___________________________________________ Why?___________________________________________ Reason #1:_________ _________________________________ Detail #1:___________________________________________ Reason #2:__________________________________________ _ Detail #2:___________________________________________ Reason #3:___________________________________________ Detail #3:___________________________________________
A Sample Response: A Well-Organized Essay Let’s look at a sample response for the second writing task. Here’s the prompt.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The purpose of education should be to teach skills, not values.
Support your position with details and examples. Before you start writing, take time to organize. First, write down the issue.
Issue: Should schools teach only skills and not values?
Putting the statement into your own words or rephrasing it as a question is a helpful way to ap proach the prompt. Now, figure out which side of the issue you agree with. Your opinion: Disagree—I believe schools should teach values as well as skills.
After figuring out your opinion, ask yourself why you have that opinion. This information will be useful for your introduction. Why? Because students need to know how to act in the world.
Once you ask yourself why you have your opinion, you then need to list some specific examples. Reason #1: Students may not get educated about values at home.
Detail #1: Some parents don’t teach values to their children. Thus, schools should teach them.
Reason #2: Education is more than just skills.
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Reason #3: It is easier to teach values when students are younger.
Detail #3: Education plays an important role In a young person's life, so schools are a good place to teach values.
Your Turn: Practice Writing a Well-Organized Essay Now it’s your turn to organize your thoughts on the prompt that follows.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students should be required to take regular standardized tests to prove that they are learning. Support your position with details and examples. Issue:________________________________________________________________ Your opinion:___________________________________________ Why?___________________________________________ Reason #1:___________________________________________ Detail #1:___________________________________________ Reason #2:___________________________________________ Detail #2:___________________________________________ Reason #3:___________________________________________ Detail #3:___________________________________________ Now try it again, and time yourself. See if you can brainstorm some examples within five or six minutes.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to teach is by example.
Support your position with details and examples. Issue:________________________________________________________________ Your opinion:___________________________________________ Why?___________________________________________ Reason #1:___________________________________________ Detail #1:___________________________________________ Reason #2:___________________________________________ Detail #2:___________________________________________ Reason #3:___________________________________________ Detail #3:___________________________________________
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Step 3: Consider Your Audience TOEFL graders are trained to look for certain features in your writing. By ensuring that your essay contains these features, you’ll improve your score. Make sure your essay contains the following: 1. 2.
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An introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. More details on these can be found in Core Concept: Writing. Specific examples. Your essay must use specific examples. The more detail you use, the better your essay will be. Transitions. One of the things TOEFL graders look for in an essay is “unity and coherence.” That means that all the ideas must flow easily. They should be linked together with appropriate transitions.
Similarly, there are some elements to avoid in your writing. Make sure you avoid the following:
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Repeating phrases from the reading or prompt word for word. Always put the examples and reasons into your own words. Although repeating a word or two is acceptable, you should never copy long phrases directly from the text on screen. TOEFL graders will penalize you for this. Writing your essay as one long paragraph. Make sure you divide your essay into separate paragraphs. Do not just write a single block of text. Including material not relevant to the task. Your essay must remain on topic. Do not include any reasons or examples that do not connect or relate to the task.
By keeping these points in mind, you’ll ensure that your essay is well received by the TOEFL
Step 4: Use Your Time Wisely If you had unlimited time, you would surely be able to achieve a top score on the Writing section. Unfortunately, your time on the TOEFL is extremely limited. Thus, you must make sure to use your time wisely. The following tables provide a good guide for how to spend your time.
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To stick to these guidelines, you’ll have to know exactly what your essay is going to look like. Use the templates from Step 1 to focus as you read.
Now you’re ready to try some practice writing drills.
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Writing Summary Congratulations! You now know how to crack all parts of the TOEFL. But before you move on, keep the fol lowing points in mind for cracking the Writing section:
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Answer the question! Even if you write well, you won’t receive a top score unless you address the task. Make sure you know what each task requires.
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Make the graders’ jobs easy. You know what the TOEFL graders are looking for, so make them happy by giving them a structured essay that uses detailed examples and good transitions.
Let’s practice some writing with the drills in the next chapter. Then, if you feel ready, go on to Part IV and take the full-length practice TOEFL exam. If not, review the lessons in the previous chapters until you are confident you know how to crack the test.
Chapter 17 Writing Practice Drills You’re now ready to crack the Writing section. Try the following practice prompts. After you’ve finished, read through the sample essays in the next chapter to get an idea of what TOEFL graders are looking for in the essay responses.
Writing Practice Drill #1 The first type of writing question will provide you with the following directions:
You will have 3 minutes to read the following passage. You may take notes during your reading. After the 3 minutes are up, you will hear a lecture on the topic. You may take notes during the lecture as well.
After the lecture ends, you will have 20 minutes to write your response. An effective response is generally 150-225 words long. You may use your notes to help you answer, and you may refer to the reading passage. Your essay will be graded on the quality of your writing and on the completeness of the content. Now let’s look at a writing question. On the actual test, you will hear a prompt that will ask you to read a passage i 3 minutes. For our purposes here, you will need to stop the audio to read the passage and either time yourself or ask friend to time you. After 3 minutes, resume the audio for the listening passage.
Begin playing Track 23 on the CD or in your Student Tools.
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Narrator: Now read the passage about the first grain-based food. You have 3 minutes to read the passage. Begin reading now. [Stop the audio for 3 minutes while you read the passage on the next page.]
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Scant physical evidence remains of the first human domestication of grain. Still, there is enough to conclude that ancient peoples, motivated by the nutritional value of bread or cakes made of wild wheat, looked for controlled ways to grow it to provide a consistent food supply. Three related discoveries are likely to have led to the introduction of bread as the first grain-based food.
The first discovery was that wheat could be prepared for use by grinding. People probably began consuming wheat by chewing it raw. Because wheat is very hard, they gradually discovered that it was less trouble to eat if crushed to paste between two stones. The result would have been the ancestor of the drier, more powdery wheat flour we use today.
From there, it was a short step to the next breakthrough—baking the simplest bread, which requires no technology but fire. Loaves of wheat paste, when baked into bread, could be stored for long periods, certainly longer than raw seeds. This kept the food value of wheat available for an extended period after it had been harvested. Finally, ancient peoples found that if the paste was allowed to sit in the open, yeast spores from the air settled on it and began fermenting the wheat. This natural process of fermentation caused bubbles to form in the wheat paste, suggesting that it would be lighter in texture and even easier to eat when baked.
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N: Now listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about. N: Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the contents of the reading. You may refer to the passage as you write.
For the Writing Drills, make sure you have a word processing document open on your computer and practice typing your response, as you will on test day.
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Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be graded on the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150-225 words. Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the contents of the reading. You may refer to the passage as you write. Scant physical evidence remains of the first human domestication of grain. Still, there is enough to conclude that ancient peoples, motivated by the nutritional value of bread or cakes made of wild wheat, looked for controlled ways to grow it to provide a consistent food supply. Three related discoveries are likely to have led to the introduction of bread as the first grain-based food.
The first discovery was that wheat could be prepared for use by grinding. People probably began consuming wheat by chewing it raw. Because wheat is very hard, they gradually discovered that it was less trouble to eat if crushed to paste between two stones—the result would have been the ancestor of the drier, more powdery wheat flour we use today. From there, it was a short step to the next breakthrough: baking the simplest bread, which requires no technology but fire. Loaves of wheat paste, when baked into bread, could be stored for long periods, certainly longer than raw seeds. This kept the food value of wheat available for an extended period after it had been harvested. Finally, ancient peoples found that if the paste was allowed to sit in the open, yeast spores from the air settled on it and began fermenting the wheat. This natural process of fermentation caused bubbles to form in the wheat paste, suggesting that it would be lighter in texture and even easier to eat when baked.
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Writing Practice Drill #2 The second type of writing question asks you to write a response to a question in 30 minutes. It will look some thing like the following:
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Writing Practice Drill #3 This drill again asks you to write a response to a question in 30 minutes.
Directions: For this essay, you will have 30 minutes to write a response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your position on an issue. An effective essay is usually 300 words in length. Your response will be graded on the quality of your writing, the organization of your ideas, and the accuracy of the language you use.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to study math and science than grammar and literature. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
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Writing Practice Drill #4 This is another opportunity for you to write a response to a question in 30 minutes.
Directions: For this essay, you will have 30 minutes to write a response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your position on an issue. An effective essay is usually 300 words in length. Your response will be graded on the quality of your writing, the organization of your ideas, and the accuracy of the language you use.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Success is defined by the amount of money someone earns.
Use examples and reasons to support your position.
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Writing Practice Drill #5 Here’s another chance to write a response to a question in 30 minutes.
Directions: For this essay, you will have 30 minutes to write a response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your position on an issue. An effective essay is usually 300 words in length. Your response will be graded on the quality of your writing, the organization of your ideas, and the accuracy of the language you use.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Email, text messages, and social media are improving our ability to communicate effectively. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
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Chapter 18 Writing Practice Answers and Explanations
Read through the following sample responses to the drills you completed in the previous chapter and compare your essays with them. If possible, have a friend who is a native speaker or highly proficient in English look over your essays.
As always, your writing does not have to match ours exactly. Just check to see if your essay accomplishes the im portant points highlighted in the high-scoring essays.
WRITING PRACTICE DRILL #1 Take a look at the first task.
Narrator: Now read the passage about the first grain-based food. You have 3 minutes to read the passage. Begin reading now. Scant physical evidence remains of the first human domestication of grain. Still, there is enough to conclude that ancient peoples, motivated by the nutritional value of bread or cakes made of wild wheat, looked for controlled ways to grow it to provide a consistent food supply. Three related discoveries are likely to have led to the introduction of bread as the first grain-based food.
The first discovery was that wheat could be prepared for use by grinding. People probably began consuming wheat by chewing it raw. Because wheat is very hard, they gradually discovered that it was less trouble to eat if crushed to paste between two stones—the result would have been the ancestor of the drier, more powdery wheat flour we use today.
From there, it was a short step to the next breakthrough: baking the simplest bread, which requires no technology but fire. Loaves of wheat paste, when baked into bread, could be stored for long periods, certainly longer than raw seeds. This kept the food value of wheat available for an extended period after it had been harvested. Finally, ancient peoples found that if the paste was allowed to sit in the open, yeast spores from the air settled on it and began fermenting the wheat. This natural process of fermentation caused bubbles to form in the wheat paste that suggested it would be lighter in texture and even easier to eat when baked. Narrator: Now listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.
Professor: Conventional wisdom says that a very primitive kind of bread was the first grain food that human societies ate. But, you know, for the last few decades, there’s been an alternative hypothesis that quite a few anthropologists are starting to give a closer look. That hypothesis says that it was, in fact, beer—not bread—that was the first grain food. Sound strange? Consider a couple of things. For one thing, you don’t have to grind wheat to make it easier to eat. If you keep it in a moist environment, it naturally starts sprouting, with a new baby plant splitting the hard seed case in half. Sprouted wheat is sweeter, softer, and actually more nutritious than whole wheat seeds—and it would have developed without human 450 | Cracking the TOEFL iBT
effort. In order to discover the usefulness of ground wheat, someone had to get the bright idea of crushing it. To discover the usefulness of sprouted wheat, people just had to do nothing and let it sit. Which do you think happened first?
Another thing: What turns grain into beer is fermentation, and wheat begins to ferment almost as soon as it’s stored—from water and yeasts in the air. After the wheat sprouted, it would have started to ferment. The process would have been obvious because of the bubbles and foam that formed. People could have experimented by tasting it and discovering the first beer. And even if you assume that people were already grinding wheat to paste, think about it. The paste ferments and bubbles. Is it likely that early peoples would have thought to fire it before eating? We’re used to cooking our food, but in prehistoric times, the idea that you would take fire to food to improve it for eating was not obvious.
N: Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the contents of the reading. You may refer to the passage as you write. Let’s look at some notes you may have jotted down.
Reading: Main Idea: Example/reason: Example/reason: Example/reason: Lecture: Point #1: Detail #1: Point #2: Detail #2: Point #3: Detail #3:
Bread was the first drain-based food. Wheat is hard to eat, and people probably ground it into a paste. The wheat paste could be baked with fire. Wheat ferments naturally, which makes it easier to eat when baked. Wheat doesn’t need to be ground. Sprouted wheat is easy to eat and tastes better than normal wheat. Fermenting happens very quickly. People tasting the foam from fermenting may have created the first beer. It’s unlikely that people would think to bake wheat. Early people did not cook things.
With that information, let’s construct our essay. The following sections offer a variety of responses, scored from high to low. All spelling and grammatical errors are intentional—to demonstrate the factors behind an assigned score. As you read the response, think of what numerical value the grader might have assigned, and check to see how your assessment matches up to the actual score. As you know, the scale is from 0-5.
A Higher-Scoring Response The following is an example of a higher-scoring response: In the lecture, the profesor makes several points about the first wheat product. The profesor argues that beer was the first wheat product. This is different from the reading, which states that bread came first. However, the teacher cast doubt on the reading with several points.
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First of all, the teacher says that wheat doesn't have to be ground. It is easy for people to eat wheat when it sprouts. This is not what the reading states, it says that early people ground wheat into a paste be cause it is hard to eat. The lecture casts doubt on this by showing another way to eat wheat.
Also, the talk says that fermenting happens very fast. This fermenting leads to a foam, which people prob ably tasted as the first beer. In the reading, it is argued that fermenting made people think to bake the bread. The professor doubts this point by stating it is unlikely. Finally, the profesor argues that people would not think to bake the wheat. The point is made that early people do not cook things. These points made by the teacher cast doubt on the reading. It seems like beer not bread was the first wheat food.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 5 • • •
This essay received the highest possible score of 5 because it does many things well.
First, it is extremely well organized. It has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. It is also easy to follow because the essay uses appropriate transitions to link ideas. Also, the essay has a good length: 199 words. More important, the author mentions several specific examples from the talk and shows how they are different from the points in the reading. That level of detail is necessary for a top score on the TOEFL.
This essay is by no means perfect. The writer misspelled “professor” throughout the essay and makes a number of errors with subject-verb agreement (for example, “the teacher cast doubt” instead of “casts doubt”). The impor tant thing is that those errors do not detract from the overall message of the essay.
A Lower-Scoring Response Following is an example of a lower-scoring response to the first practice drill. In early cultures there were different ways of using wheat. Some cultures use wheat for making bread and some ohers used it to make beer. It is said by the instructor though that it is the beer that was made first. Another thing is that fermenting of the wheat created beer, not bread. The professor said that the people would not bake the foam but instead they would drink it like beer. The lecture shows that early peoples rarely used fire to make things. They didn’t think to make the bread form the wheat that they had ground. That is to say that it seems like beer was more likely to be make by people than was bread.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 2 • •
This weaker response scored much lower because the essay has numerous problems.
The first problem is that the ideas in the essay are not clearly expressed. The writing style makes it difficult to understand exactly what the author is trying to demonstrate. Also, the ideas are not linked together, making the essay difficult to follow.
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The first two sentences indicate that the writer did not grasp the main point of the reading and the lecture. Plus, the first sentence of the third paragraph is not mentioned in either the reading or the lecture. The response is also rather short, only 118 words long. On the positive side, the response does include some points from the lecture, even if they are slightly unclear.
WRITING PRACTICE DRILL #2 Now lets look at the second task from the previous chapter.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should limit the amount of time that children are allowed to use electronic devices, like phones, tablets, and computers.
Use examples and reasons to support your position. Here are some sample notes for this topic.
Issue: Should parents limit the amount oftime their children use electronic devices? Your opinion: Agree—parents should limit children's screen time. Why? Decause devices aren't safe and they prevent children from learning how to communicate.
Reason #1: Studies show a lot of electronics are harmful. Detail #1: Children ignore things around them when they focus on the device. Reason #2: Children don’t learn howto interact. Detail #2: If children always play on an iPad, they don’t learn to interact with people Reason #3: Detail #3:
around them. Devices can cause health problems. Some people believe that WiFi and cellular signals can increase the chance of cancer.
Now let’s put it together in our essay.
A Higher-Scoring Response The following is a higher-scoring essay. The question being asked is if parents should limit the amount of time their children spend using devices. This is a very important question because it has to do with children’s health and futures. In my opinion, I believe that parents should limit the time their children spend on devices because there are health risks and it is possible for the children not to be able to communicate well.
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The first reason I believe that parents should limit their children’s use of electronic devices is because studies have shown that using devices a lot can be not healthy. For example, when children get focused on looking at the screen, they don’t pay attention to the scene around them. They don’t see other people walk ing nearby or they don’t see cars coming. There are stories in the news every day about children who are in accidents because they pay attention to the phone instead. Moreover, it can be that children do not learn to interact with each other when they spend so much time looking at electronic devices. If they spend all their time looking at devices, they don’t have opportunity to talk to other children or other adults. So they don’t learn to be polite or to say pleasantries. Yesterday when I was walking into a store a girl was on her device the whole time and almost walked in to me. She did not see how close she came to me, and therefore she also did not apologize for almost walking in to me. Lastly, I believe that the signal from wireless devices like WiFi and cellular signals can help cause cancer. Some studies show that there is relationship, and if I was a parent I wouldn’t want to take any chances. In conclusion, I believe parents should limit the amount of time their children spend looking at electronic devices. There are too many bad possibilities from using them too much.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 5
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This response received the highest possible score for the following reasons:
The writer keeps the essay focused on the topic. Everything relates to the thesis. The essay is just the right length. There are clear transitions, and the essay is easy to follow. The writer does a nice job of tying the conclusion back to the introduction by repeating the line about limiting children’s use of devices.
Again, the essay is not perfect. There are several grammatical and other errors, but nothing big enough to detract from the overall meaning. It’s good enough to get a top score on the TOEFL.
A Lower-Scoring Response Now take a look at a lower-scoring response. Some people say is better to limit childrens’ use of devices. I don’t really know. I think sometimes is good, sometimes is bad. I do think sometimes devices is bad, but sometimes is necesary. For example, when par ents is at dinner and childrens are noisy, giving them device to use can keep quiet, and so then parents can enjoy diner and not be rude to people around. But sometimes parents use device too much and can be bad for childrens. For example, when childrens use device all time when not in school, childrens don’t learn to talk to other chil drens and they don’t pay atention to area around. They can get in accidents by walking into people because they can’t see them when they are looking at devices, and they don’t learn to say nice things to other chil dren because they do not interact with each others.
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Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 2
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This essay received a much lower score than the previous response for the following reasons:
One of the most glaring problems with this essay is that it does not satisfy the task. The assignment asks you to state whether you agree or disagree, so make sure you pick a side. Don’t try to defend both sides of the issue. Furthermore, this essay is not very well planned out. It is clear that the author didn’t think before writing. There are not enough examples. The author tries to write a conclusion, but still does not address the essay task. There are too many grammatical errors.
Although this is not the worst possible essay, it is not going to receive a good score.
WRITING PRACTICE DRILL #3 Here are sample responses to Drill #3 from the previous chapter.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to study math and science than grammar and literature. Use examples and reasons to support your position. Here are some sample notes for the topic.
Issue: Should studentsfocus more on math and science or on grammar and literature? Your opinion: Disagree—students need to study both. Why? Decause vou need a basic understanding of both to be successful. Reason #1: If vou don’t understand basics of science and math, you can’t under-
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stand the world around vou. If vou can't count money, people can steal from you easier. If vou don't understand howto conduct an experiment, vou won't know if people are Ivina to vou. Scientific method is the basis of any experiment. If someone claims something is caused something else, if vou don't know about scientific method vou won’t know if they're Ivina. If vou can't spell or write well, vou won't succeed in business. You need communication skills to aet a job.
Let’s see how we can put this information into an essay.
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A Higher-Scoring Response Here’s an example of a higher-scoring response. I believe it is just as important to study grammar and literature as it is to study maths and science. This is because you need to understand basics of all areas in order succeed in life. First, math is basis of our economy. If you don’t understand basics of maths people can steal from you easier. For example, if you can’t count change, you won’t know if a cashier gave you right amount when you buy a soda at a gas station. Also, you need to understand maths to know if you were charged the right amount at restaurant or store.
Second, science gives the basics of understanding any study. Scientific method says you can only change one thing at time when you conduct a study. So, if someone says that something caused an effect, you can ask if something else might have caused it. If two things changed, maybe something else caused the effect, instead. If you don’t know that only one thing can change, you won’t know to ask. Third, bosses wants to hire people who can write correctly. To do this, must know grammar and how to spell. If your resume has lots of wrong words and grammar mistakes, you will not even get an interview.
In conclusion, it is important to study grammar and literature, not just maths and science.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 4
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This response scored a solid grade of 4. There are several good things in this essay.
The essay stays on topic. The essay is well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. The writer uses obvious transitions. There are three good examples provided for the topic and the writer gives some details for each of them.
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The essay is too short, using only 218 words. The conclusion is very simple. There are too many grammatical errors (typos, misspellings, incidents where verb doesn’t agree with noun).
Overall, however, this is a good response for the TOEFL. It is a good example to show that you don’t need to write like a native English speaker or have perfect spelling or grammar in order to get a strong score.
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method to understand experiments. People can say smething caused something else, but can be lying. If you do not under stand sientific method you will not know to question. Also, need to write good to get a job. Boss only wants to hire people who can write. Therefore, must stury all area in school.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score*. 1 This essay received only a 1, the lowest score possible for an essay that is written in English. Here are some reasons why.
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Although the essay does address the task, there is no organization. The essay contains only one paragraph. The examples are not explained in sufficient detail. The essay is too short.
The writer needs to better organize this essay and develop the examples more to gain a higher score.
WRITING PRACTICE DRILL #4 The following are sample responses to Drill #4 from the previous chapter.
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Success is defined by the amount of money someone earns.
Use examples and reasons to support your position. Here are some sample notes for the topic.
Issue: Does money define success? Your opinion: Disagree. Money is not the only way to define success. Why? Other ways to be successful Reason #1: Other ways to be successful: help other people Detail #1: Malala Yousafzai Reason #2: Other ways to be successful: change your community Detail #2: My friends father volunteered a lot and did many things to support veterans. Reason #3: Other ways to be successful: earn a degree Detail #3: First-generation college graduate. Let’s see how we can put this information into an essay.
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A Higher-Scoring Response Here’s an example of a higher-scoring response. Unfortunately, in todays society, many people believe that how much you earn tells how successful you are. How do people tell? They look at the clothes you wear, the cars you drive, and more. But I believe money is only one way of being successful. There are many other ways to achieve success. One way you can be success is by helping other people. Like Malala Yousafzai. As a younger girl in Pakistan, she was shot in the face for defying authority and going to school. After her recovery, she went on to fight for the rights of other girls to go to school and became a humanitarian. I think she is very successful.
Another way you can be successful is by changing your community. My friend’s father is a veteran and so wanted to help other veterans. He was very active in his community and did a lot of things to help make life better for other veterans. By his actions he encouraged other people to also help veterans, and people began to care more about taking care of veterans as a result.
A third way to be successful without money is to earn university degree. For example, I was first person in my family to earn a degree in the United States. My parents moved here when I was very small hoping to offer me and my brother a better life. They sacrificed much things in order to give us opportunity. I really appreciate all the things they did to make it possible for us to go to university.
As you can see, earning a lot of money is not the only way to earn success.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 4
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This is a higher-scoring essay. Here’s why.
The essay is focused and clearly addresses the question task, right from the first paragraph. The essay is well organized, with a straightforward introduction, body paragraphs with clear transi tions, and a distinct conclusion. Each example is supported by relevant examples, but more details could have been included. The essay has 283 words, which is an appropriate length for a response earning a 4.
A Lower-Scoring Response Here is a lower-scoring essay. As you read it, think about how the essay could be improved. Success is defined by the amount of money someone earns. This is not true idea. Money is root of evil. Money make peoples steal so can have nice thing. Money make peoples lie so they get benefit. Money make peoples do bad, like sell drugs.
Success not defined by amount of money someone earn.
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Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 2 Although this essay is organized into paragraphs and manages to address the topic, it has several sig nificant problems.
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The essay is too short; it barely has 50 words! The response does not have enough content to show true organization. The writer should include more examples and details to lengthen the essay.
Despite these problems, the graders will give credit for the attempt at organization of the essay and the fact that it does answer the question in the prompt.
WRITING PRACTICE DRILL #5 The following are sample responses to Drill #5 from the previous chapter.
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Email, text messages, and social media are improving our ability to communicate effectively. Use examples and reasons to support your position. Here are some sample notes for the topic.
Issue: Are email, text messages, Your opinion: Why? Reason #1: Detail #1:
Reason #2: Detail #2: Reason #3: Detail #3:
and social media improving our ability to communicate effectively? Yes. These are making it easier to communicate. Faster. shorter, more friendly Text is fast, efficient, doesn't interrupt the other person like a phone call. 1 text with mv husband regularly Instead of calling - it doesn't take as long to call, wait for him to answer, and wait for him to respond. 1 iust wait for his response. Text is easy to send information that does not need a response. Massage appointment Easy to stay in touch with friends Facebook makes it easy to share pictures of friends and family.
Let’s see how we can put this information into an essay.
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A Higher-Scoring Response Here’s an example of a higher-scoring response. Some people say technologies like social media, texting, and email make people communicate worse, be cause communicating in person is better. I see what they say, but I think these technologies like these help people communicate better. There is definitely benefits to communicating in person; especially with impor tant topics, but in person not always necessary.
For example, texting makes many communications very easy. My husband and I use text or use Facebook messenger all the time. We send short notes Just to say hello or to share a little bit of news. Not all news requires a phone call, and I do not always have the flexibility to make a phone call. But I can send a quick text very easily without anyone around me knowing.
Text or instant messenger is also very convenient for when a message does not need an immediate re sponse. Something like a reminder for a doctor appointment is perfect to send by text, just to make sure client does not forget. The client does not need to respond to the text, but is a good reminder for the client. It is a good customer service. Also, social media like Facebook is really nice to keep in touch with friends or family who live far away. Some times it is hard to plan to call or Skype with my family because they are twelev hours different from where we are. Most times they are sleeping when we are awake. So being able to look at pictures on Facebook or send short messages makes it easier to communicate with them.
In conclusion, while I agree that in person communication is sometimes better, it does not mean that tech nologies make us communicate worse. Sometimes, technologies make us communicate better.
Score and Analysis of This Response Score: 5
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This is a top-scoring essay. Here’s why.
The essay stays on topic; everything in it is relevant to the topic and the thesis. The essay’s organization is very good. Each body paragraph flows well by introducing a reason, pro viding details, and providing a summary. The essay is detailed and of a good length. There are very few grammatical and spelling mistakes.
This qualifies as a great essay on the TOEFL.
A Lower-Scoring Response Here is a lower-scoring essay. As you read it, think about how the essay could be improved. Technology is improving many aspects of our world, from cars to communication.
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without even looking at the phone. It also lets you play music from your phone through the car’s stereo sys tem. We’ve come a long way since the early cars were made.
Technology also helps around the house. People now have Roomba vacuums that vacumm the house on their own. A new technology today is Alexa, which can let you play music or order things online just by talking to the device and saying, “Alexa, do something.” We also have Bluetooth headphones that let you watch TV without distrubing the people around you.
Technology also helps you keep in contact with family better. You can text them or use Skype or Facetime to talk to them and see them at the same time.
Overall, technology has improved our world a lot.
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The essay does not respond to the prompt. The essay is too short.
This essay demonstrates that it doesn’t matter how strong your command of the English language is—if you do not respond to the prompt, you will not get a strong score. For example, this essay talks about advancements in technology, but not the way that technology affects communication, which is what the prompt asked for. It is much more important to answer the question, even if your writing is not as strong.
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Now that you’ve completed your TOEFL preparation, it’s time to try a full-length TOEFL practice exam. Use the test in the next chapter to practice the techniques and approaches you’ve worked on throughout the book and to familiarize yourself with the types of questions you’ll see on test day. Make sure to time yourself as accurately as possible while taking the test.
EVALUATING YOUR PERFORMANCE Because of the nature of the TOEFL iBT exam, it is difficult to obtain a scaled score that pre cisely matches the one you’ll receive after taking your actual exam. However, it is still possible to evaluate your performance and get an idea of how you’ll do on the real thing. Also, remember that on the actual test, you’ll be doing the whole thing on the computer. Try to practice doing as much of the test as possible on the computer, even if you just type up your essays on the writing portion.
Reading and Listening Sections For these two sections, go through each question and analyze your performance. Keep track of questions that you answered correctly and see if you can categorize them as follows (jot down the abbreviations in parentheses next to the question numbers).
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Correct (C): These are questions that you fully understood. You had no problem answering them and spent very little time on them. Correct, guessed (CG): These are questions you answered correctly, but you guessed the correct answer. For these questions, make sure you try to figure out why the answer is correct. Also, look at the other choices. What made you elimi nate them? Incorrect, mistake (I): This means that you answered the question incorrectly, but you see your mistake. This type of situation is very common. Often, it results from not using the techniques described in this book or from going too quickly on the test and not reading carefully enough. Minimize the number of questions that fall into this category, and you’ll do well on the TOEFL. Incorrect, don’t understand (I?): This is for the questions that you answered incor rectly and you’re not sure why. It could be a comprehension problem. Or maybe you misunderstood what the question was asking. For these questions, look back at the choices. Were there any obviously wrong answers? Did you fall for a trap answer? What could you have done differently?
Speaking and Writing Sections If at all possible, try to record your spoken responses. Listen to them, and see how closely they match the templates we’ve provided. If possible, play the responses for an English speaker and ask that person to evaluate your response. Do the same for your written responses. Compare what you’ve written with the samples pro vided in this book. Do you have a clear introduction? Does your response include transition words? Do you use examples appropriately?
WHAT NOW? After you’ve finished our practice test and your self-evaluation, you should take the full-length practice test available from ETS (www.ets.org). This will give you an opportunity to receive a scored result. Don’t forget to refer back to the section on “The Week Before the Test” on page 23 of the Intro duction of this book for more tips on your final preparation.
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THE READING SECTION For this section, you will read three passages and answer questions about their content. You will have 60 minutes to answer all the questions. You may begin.
The Veneration of Trees
In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree 5 spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods 10 that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments 15 of the natural forces that governed their lives.
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On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very 40 seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it both apologies 45 and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees 50 as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage. 55 A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it chooses to dwell 60 there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction 65 may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among 70 them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to think about 75 phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. 80
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That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes 85 of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 90 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace 95 special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward 100 symbolic and abstract thinking.
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travel to distant places the religions of older tribes dangerous forces of nature the common culture of humanity
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On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apblogies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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enter locate survive consider
The Veneration of Trees
In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States 5 to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them 10 as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives. On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage. A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate.
That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives. On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate.
That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking. 55
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4. The word severely in the passage is closest in meaning to
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occasionally harshly repeatedly secretly
The Veneration of Trees
In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States 5 to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as 10 embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives. On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage. A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after all, is 45 more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to think about phenomena 50 that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives.
On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate.
That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking. 55
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On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after all, is 45 more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to think about phenomena 50 that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives.
On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage. A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate.
That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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the forest was actually much less dangerous than people thought it to be people stopped fearing the forest at the second stage of tree worship some aspects of the forest can be imagined but not seen many travelers were seriously hurt in the forest
The Veneration of Trees In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States 5 to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as 10 embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives.
On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after all, is 45 more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to think about phenomena 50 that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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9. The author implies that the most complex phase of tree worship involves
a. b. c. d.
the belief that all trees are sacred distinguishing between male and female tree spirits different ceremonies for different seasons the use of trees as symbols
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In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives.
On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate.
That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking. 55
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explain provide avoid refuse
The Veneration of Trees
In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States 5 to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as 10 embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives. On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body 15 can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what 20 is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
25 Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after all, is 45 more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to think about phenomena 50 that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each 55 other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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The Veneration of Trees
In The Golden Bough, his classic catalog of mythologies, Sir James George Frazer extensively documents the significance of trees in world religion. His chapters on tree spirits roam from Northern Europe to the Eastern Seaboard of what is now the United States to the islands of the Pacific. Despite the lack of contact among these regions, the veneration of trees united them. The woods that covered large areas of Europe and North America, in particular, were difficult to penetrate and dangerous to cross. It was not a great mental leap for people to see the trees that populated them as embodiments of the natural forces that governed their lives.
the ability of trees to bear fruit the three stages in the life cycle of a tree trees that required little rain and sun the raising of trees by women
On the basis of Frazer’s classification, one can derive three loose stages of tree worship. In the first, a society sees the tree as the physical body of the spirit that inhabits it, much as the human body can be seen as housing the mind. It is known that both the Celtic and the Germanic tribes that inhabited ancient Northern Europe regarded certain trees as sacred, setting them apart by species (as the Druids worshipped oaks) or by location (the way certain natural groves were regarded as natural temples or sacred spaces in what is now Germany). Early on, each of these trees was regarded as an animate being with both spirit and body. It had a distinct identity, like an individual person. This suggests that it was believed to have the same impulses and reactions as the people who venerated it.
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Accordingly, ancient peoples had elaborate taboos designed to avoid causing offense to trees. These taboos were taken very seriously. In some places, one could be punished severely for injuring the bark of a tree or stealing its fruit. Before a tree was felled for human use, woodcutters in many world cultures would offer it 30 both apologies and thanks for the resources it was about to provide them. This was necessary to avoid insulting the tree and inviting bad fortune. It was also the case, however, that injuries were said to cause suffering to trees as they did to people. In some societies, it was claimed that trees cry out in pain when struck or cut into. A 35 tree’s spirit and body are considered inseparable in this first stage.
A society makes a leap in sophistication and reaches Frazer’s second stage when it begins to regard them as separate. That is, the spirit exists independently of the physical tree, even if it 40 chooses to dwell there most of the time. The same spirit may thus take up residence in any tree of a forest; it is not killed when an individual tree is cut down. It is not bound to a single tree but rather stands for a group. The distinction may seem small, but it is a significant first step toward symbolic thinking. A forest, after 45 all, is more than the sum of its parts. It encompasses not only its trees but also the animals and brush that flourish among them. The dangers of the forest are hidden; a traveler may or may not encounter them on a given journey. To think about a tree spirit identified with the forest as a whole, therefore, people had to 50 think about phenomena that were removed from them in time and space—ideas rather than things. Such a tree spirit represented the potential and abstract rather than the concrete and immediate. -> That transition is completed in the third stage. Liberated from each other, trees and their spirits can begin to be seen as symbols and embodiments of other natural processes of significance to primitive life: the power of weather and seasons to produce good or bad harvests, the mysteries of childbirth and disease. At that point, the veneration of trees reaches its stage of greatest complexity. 60 Societies in both Eastern Europe and the South Pacific presented ceremonial offerings to trees in the hopes that they would furnish rain and sunshine. Women who hoped to bear children might be instructed to embrace special trees thought to give fertility. The appearance of these beliefs, in which the fruitfulness of trees 65 suggests the fruitfulness of harvests and family-building, indicates that a society has made its first steps toward symbolic and abstract thinking.
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12. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points.
Three basic levels of tree worship can be observed in The Golden Bough.
Answer Choices It was forbidden to cut down certain trees because they would be seriously offended by an injury.
Ancient Germans believed certain groves were sacred and used them as temples, but Druids venerated the oak tree in particular.
Certain peoples came to believe that tree spirits were independent of individual trees and instead represented a whole forest.
Some societies believed each tree had an individual spirit, the way a human being has a distinct mind.
More is known about the ceremonies A basis for abstract thinking was of Europe than about the ceremonies achieved when tree spirits were of North America and the South believed to control natural forces Pacific. such as crops and human fertility.
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid rain.” Also, they often focus on the 5 impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally10 occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 15 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and it can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury 20 pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the 25 source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away. Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and quickly enter 30 aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water), Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a 35 highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the 40 longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes.
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The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have 45 absorbed high amounts of mercury.
Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the 50 last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 55 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. 60 If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury 65 by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 70 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans 75 eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain 80 from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is 85 exactly what we eat: the fillet.
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The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term 90 impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration 95 in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 100 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all 105 enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. 110 Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one 115 of many steps to ameliorate the impact of such pollution.
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improved created used reduced
Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury. Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
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If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
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Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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14. According to paragraph 2, what accounts for 70% of toxic mercury pollution?
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Air currents Vaporization Coal-fired power plants A silvery-white liquid
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 -> At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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15. In paragraph 3, what does the author say about the role of phytoplankton in the spread of mercury throughout the food chain? a. b.
c.
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It transforms mercury to methyl mercury. It provides the link between the methyl mercury in sediments and fish. It reduces the impact of methyl mercury on the coastal ecosystem. It concentrates the mercury making it less toxic.
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, ; 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl | mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury. Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
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If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts j 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution. *
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16. The word concentrated in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
clustered thought separated reduced
Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away. Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact, of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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17. Which of the following can be inferred from paragraph 4 about the U.S. Clean Air Act?
a. b.
c.
d.
It was aimed to increase air pollution. It existed prior to the effects of pollution on the environment were known. It was part of the reason industries reduced harmful emissions into the air. It has been unsuccessful in slowing air pollution.
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 -> Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment 35 methods, the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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18. All of the following are mentioned in the passage as reasons why mercury levels in the environment have been in slow decline since the 1970s EXCEPT a. b.
c. d.
the Clean Air Act reduction in sulfateproducing bacteria better sewage treatment changes in industrial practice
Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they. focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, I they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals ; and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously , a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ ' Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution. ?
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19. According to paragraph 6, coastal areas are the locations for most a. b. c. d.
tuna methylation mercury pollution sources ecosystems
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury. Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
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If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. -> Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet.
The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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20. The word its in the passage refers to a. b. c. d.
long-term impact methyl mercury food chain digestion
Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior. If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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21. Which of the following is mentioned in paragraph 7 as one of the long term impacts of methyl mercury pollution? a. b.
c. d.
Increase in sulfate-reducing bacteria in sediment Reduction in the number of fish in coastal areas Danger to the reproductive cycle of birds Concentrated mercury in lobsters
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements. 10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury. Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
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If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists 60 have studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution. ?
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22. According to paragraph 8, the interconnectivity of the Earth's ecosystems is also a.
b.
c. d.
the reason the ecosystems are so susceptible to pollution the cause of mercury pollution the reason methyl mercury is such a harmful substance the cure for pollution from coal-fired power plants
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away. Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 -> One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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23. The word ameliorate in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
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If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb safely. This 45 methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife.
Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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24. Look at the four squares ■ that indicate where the following sentence can be added to the passage. Thus, the harmful effects of methyl mercury are passed from adult to young and will impact the health of the species for years to come.
Where would the sentence best fit? Click on a square ■ to add the sentence to the passage.
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Mercury Pollution When most people think or talk about dangers to our environment, they focus on general terms like “pollution,” “smog,” and “acid-rain.” Also, they often focus on the impact of supposedly man-made chemicals and compounds. But to truly understand the risks to our environment, 5 it’s helpful to focus on the danger of specific chemicals, which are often otherwise naturally-occurring elements that have been spread harmfully by man. One of the largest threats to our environment is mercury: Hg on the periodic table of elements.
10 At room temperature, mercury, a metal, exists as a silvery-white liquid. However, it vaporizes readily when heat is applied, and can stay suspended in the air for more than a year. The largest sources of mercury pollution in the United States are coal-fired power plants. Emissions from these plants account for 70 percent of the mercury 15 that enters our oceans, lakes, and streams. Air currents carry these particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away. Mercury particles released into the air fall into these waterways and 20 quickly enter aquatic food chains. First, mercury attaches to sediments (fragments of organic and inorganic material that settle to the bottom of the body of water). Second, bacteria change the mercury into methyl mercury, a highly toxic substance. Third, phytoplankton feed on the organic matter in sediments and absorb the methyl mercury. Fourth, fish 25 then eat the mercury-contaminated phytoplankton; the larger the fish and the longer it lives, the more concentrated the methyl mercury in its system becomes. The mercury can then move higher up the food chain when humans eat fish that have absorbed high amounts of mercury.
30 Studies indicate that mercury levels in U.S. waterways have increased anywhere from 100 to 400 percent over the course of the last century, and no river, lake, or ocean seems immune. It is important to note that, thanks to the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts by industry to curb unnecessary discharges as well as better sewage treatment methods, 35 the levels have been in slow decline since the 1970s. However, this minor decline is relatively miniscule in comparison to the major increase in the years prior.
If you’ve ever experienced that “rotten egg” smell during low tide 40 at a coastal area, you’ve seen (or smelled) methylation in action. Methylation is the conversion of mercury in sediments to methyl mercury by sulfate-reducing bacteria. While this methylation is a natural process, the industrial discharge of mercury has greatly accelerated the process beyond what the ecosystem is able to absorb 45 safely. This methylation not only impacts aquatic species, but also harms humans and other land-based wildlife. Most of the fish and shellfish that humans eat live solely in coastal areas or frequent coastal areas and feed on the fish that live there. 50 At the same time, most methylation takes place in coastal areas. Therefore, methyl mercury moves up the food chain from plankton to lobster, bluefish, winter flounder, tuna, and many other species eaten extensively by man. The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle of the fish. This muscle is exactly what we eat: 55 the fillet. The short-term impact of digestion of toxic methyl mercury is obviously a concern. ■ More troubling, however, is its long-term impact on species up and down the food chain. ■ In Wisconsin, scientists have 60 studied the decline of chick production in loons (aquatic birds). ■ They have made a positive link to mercury concentration in eggs which exceeds the concentration found to be toxic in laboratory studies. ■ Through that example, the lasting impact of methyl mercury far from the source of the pollution can be seen. 65 One of the great wonders of the Earth is the interconnectivity of all the world’s ecosystems. This interconnectivity gives us the range and diversity of wildlife that we all enjoy and it also allowed life on the planet to endure through cataclysmic events, such as asteroid impacts 70 and the ice ages. However, it is this very interconnectivity that makes our ecosystems so vulnerable. Mercury pollution is unfortunately one of many examples of an environmental impact far removed from the source of the pollution; understanding the process by which the pollution spreads up the food chain is one of many steps to ameliorate 75 the impact of such pollution.
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25. Directions: An introductory sentence for a brief summary of the passage is provided below. Complete the summary by selecting the THREE answer choices that express the most important ideas in the passage. Some sentences do not belong in the summary because they express ideas that are not presented in the passage or are minor ideas in the passage. This question is worth 2 points.
Mercury pollution is one example of a type of pollution that has short-term and long-term effects far from the source of the pollution.
Answer Choices
Air currents carry Mercury particles far from the source and are capable of polluting bodies of water thousands of miles away.
Mercury pollution is increasing in the United States despite the U.S. Clean Air Act and efforts of industry.
Mercury is transformed into the toxic methyl mercury and moves up the food chain to cause harm for organisms at every level all the way up to humans.
The methyl mercury binds to the protein in fish, residing in the muscle.
Sulfate-reducing bacteria cause the “rotten egg” smell that exists at coastal areas during low tide.
The harmful effects of methyl mercury are passed from adult to young and will impact the health of many species for years to come.
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Until the beginning of the twentieth century, the nervous system was thought to control all communication within the body and the resulting integration of behavior. Scientists had determined that nerves ran, essentially, on electrical impulses. These impulses were thought to be the engine for thought, emotion, movement, and internal processes such as digestion. However, experiments by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling on the chemical secretin, which is produced in the small intestine when food enters the stomach, eventually challenged that view. From the small intestine, secretin travels through the bloodstream to the pancreas. There, it stimulates the release of digestive chemicals. In this fashion, the intestinal cells that produce secretin ultimately regulate the production of different chemicals in a different organ, the pancreas.
Such a coordination of processes had been thought to require control by the 25 nervous system; Bayliss and Starling showed that it could occur through chemicals alone. This discovery spurred Starling to coin the term hormone to refer to secretin, taking it from the Greek 30 word hormon, meaning “to excite” or “to set in motion.” A hormone is a chemical produced by one tissue to make things happen elsewhere. 35 As more hormones were discovered, they were categorized, primarily according to the process by which they operated on the body. Some glands (which make up the endocrine system) secrete hormones 40 directly into the bloodstream. Such glands include the thyroid and the pituitary. The exocrine system consists of organs and 19. TOEFL iBT Practice Test | 499
glands that produce substances that are used outside the bloodstream, primarily 45 for digestion. The pancreas is one such organ, although it secretes some chemicals into the blood and thus is also part of the endocrine system. 50 Much has been learned about hormones since their discovery. Some play such key roles in regulating bodily processes or behavior that their absence would cause immediate death. The most abundant 55 hormones have effects that are less obviously urgent but can be more farreaching and difficult to track: They modify moods and affect human behavior, even some behavior we normally think of as 60 voluntary. Hormonal systems are very intricate. Even minute amounts of the right chemicals can suppress appetite, calm aggression, and change the attitude of a parent toward a child. Certain hormones 65 accelerate the development of the body, regulating growth and form; others may even define an individual’s personality characteristics. The quantities and proportions of hormones produced change 70 with age, so scientists have given a great deal of study to shifts in the endocrine system over time in the hopes of alleviating ailments associated with aging.
75 In fact, some hormone therapies are already very common. ■ A combination of estrogen and progesterone has been prescribed for decades to women who want to reduce mood swings, sudden changes in body 80 temperature, and other discomforts caused by lower natural levels of those hormones as they enter middle age. ■ Known as hormone replacement therapy (HRT), the treatment was also believed to prevent 85 weakening of the bones. ■ At least one study has linked HRT with a heightened risk 500 I Cracking the TOEFL iBT
of heart disease and certain types of cancer. HRT may also increase the likelihood that blood clots—dangerous because they 90 could travel through the bloodstream and block major blood vessels—will form. Some proponents of HRT have tempered their enthusiasm in the face of this new evidence, recommending it only to patients whose 95 symptoms interfere with their abilities to live normal lives. ■
Human growth hormone may also be given to patients who are secreting abnormally 100 low amounts on their own. Because of the complicated effects the growth hormone has on the body, such treatments are generally restricted to children who would be pathologically small in stature without it. 105 Growth hormone affects not just physical size but also the digestion of food and the aging process. Researchers and family physicians tend to agree that it is foolhardy to dispense it in cases in which the risks are 110 not clearly outweighed by the benefits.
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26. The word engine in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
desire origin science chemical
Hormones in the Body Until the beginning of the twentieth century, the nervous system was thought to control all communication within the body and the resulting integration of behavior. Scientists had determined that nerves ran, essentially, on electrical impulses. These impulses were 5 thought to be the engine for thought, emotion, movement, and internal processes such as digestion. However, experiments by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling on the chemical secretin, which is produced in the small intestine when food enters the stomach, eventually challenged that view. From the small intestine, secretin 10 travels through the bloodstream to the pancreas. There, it stimulates the release of digestive chemicals. In this fashion, the intestinal cells that produce secretin ultimately regulate the production of different chemicals in a different organ, the pancreas.
Such a coordination of processes had been thought to require control by the nervous system; Bayliss and Starling showed that it could occur through chemicals alone. This discovery spurred Starling to coin the term hormone to refer to secretin, taking it from the Greek word hormon, meaning “to excite” or “to set in motion.” A hormone is 20 a chemical produced by one tissue to make things happen elsewhere.
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As more hormones were discovered, they were categorized, primarily according to the process by which they operated on the body. Some glands (which make up the endocrine system) secrete hormones 25 directly into the bloodstream. Such glands include the thyroid and the pituitary. The exocrine system consists of organs and glands that produce substances that are used outside the bloodstream, primarily for digestion. The pancreas is one such organ, although it secretes some chemicals into the blood and thus is also part of the endocrine 30 system.
Much has been learned about hormones since their discovery. Some play such key roles in regulating bodily processes or behavior that their absence would cause immediate death. The most abundant 35 hormones have effects that are less obviously urgent but can be more far-reaching and difficult to track: They modify moods and affect human behavior, even some behavior we normally think of as voluntary. Hormonal systems are very intricate. Even minute amounts of the right chemicals can suppress appetite, calm aggression, and 40 change the attitude of a parent toward a child. Certain hormones accelerate the development of the body, regulating growth and form; others may even define an individual’s personality characteristics. The quantities and proportions of hormones produced change with age, so scientists have given a great deal of study to shifts 45 in the endocrine system over time in the hopes of alleviating ailments associated with aging.
In fact, some hormone therapies are already very common. ■ A combination of estrogen and progesterone has been prescribed 50 for decades to women who want to reduce mood swings, sudden changes in body temperature, and other discomforts caused by lower natural levels of those hormones as they enter middle age. ■ Known as hormone replacement therapy (HRT), the treatment was also believed to prevent weakening of the bones. ■ 55 At least one study has linked HRT with a heightened risk of heart disease and certain types of cancer. HRT may also increase the likelihood that blood clots—dangerous because they could travel through the bloodstream and block major blood vessels— will form. Some proponents of HRT have tempered their enthusiasm 60 in the face of this new evidence, recommending it only to patients whose symptoms interfere with their abilities to live normal lives. ■
Human growth hormone may also be given to patients who are secreting abnormally low amounts on their own. Because of the 65 complicated effects the growth hormone has on the body, such treatments are generally restricted to children who would be pathologically small in stature without it. Growth hormone affects not just physical size but also the digestion of food and the aging process. Researchers and family physicians tend to agree that it is 70 foolhardy to dispense it in cases in which the risks are not clearly outweighed by the benefits.
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27. The word it in the passage refers to
a. b. c. d.
secretin small intestine bloodstream pancreas
Hormones in the Body
Until the beginning of the twentieth century, the nervous system was thought to control all communication within the body and the resulting integration of behavior. Scientists had determined that nerves ran, essentially, on electrical impulses. These impulses were 5 thought to be the engine for thought, emotion, movement, and internal processes such as digestion. However, experiments by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling on the chemical secretin, which is produced in the small intestine when food enters the stomach, eventually challenged that view. From the small intestine, secretin 10 travels through the bloodstream to the pancreas. There, it stimulates the release of digestive chemicals. In this fashion, the intestinal cells that produce secretin ultimately regulate the production of different chemicals in a different organ, the pancreas.
15 Such a coordination of processes had been thought to require control by the nervous system; Bayliss and Starling showed that it could occur through chemicals alone. This discovery spurred Starling to coin the term hormone to refer to secretin, taking it from the Greek word hormon, meaning “to excite” or “to set in motion.” A hormone is 20 a chemical produced by one tissue to make things happen elsewhere. As more hormones were discovered, they were categorized, primarily according to the process by which they operated on the body. Some glands (which make up the endocrine system) secrete hormones 25 directly into the bloodstream. Such glands include the thyroid and the pituitary. The exocrine system consists of organs and glands that produce substances that are used outside the bloodstream, primarily for digestion. The pancreas is one such organ, although it secretes some chemicals into the blood and thus is also part of the 30 endocrine system. Much has been learned about hormones since their discovery. Some play such key roles in regulating bodily processes or behavior that their absence would cause immediate death. The most abundant 35 hormones have effects that are less obviously urgent but can be more far-reaching and difficult to track: They modify moods and affect human behavior, even some behavior we normally think of as voluntary. Hormonal systems are very intricate. Even minute amounts of the right chemicals can suppress appetite, calm aggression, and 40 change the attitude of a parent toward a child. Certain hormones accelerate the development of the body, regulating growth and form; others may even define an individual’s personality characteristics. The quantities and proportions of hormones produced change with age, so scientists have given a great deal of study to shifts 45 in the endocrine system over time in the hopes of alleviating ailments associated with aging. In fact, some hormone therapies are already very common. ■ A combination of estrogen and progesterone has been prescribed 50 for decades to women who want to reduce mood swings, sudden changes in body temperature, and other discomforts caused by lower natural levels of those hormones as they enter middle age. ■ Known as hormone replacement therapy (HRT), the treatment was also believed to prevent weakening of the bones. ■ 55 At least one study has linked HRT with a heightened risk of heart disease and certain types of cancer. HRT may also increase the likelihood that blood clots—dangerous because they could travel through the bloodstream and block major blood vessels— will form. Some proponents of HRT have tempered their enthusiasm 60 in the face of this new evidence, recommending it only to patients whose symptoms interfere with their abilities to live normal lives. ■
Human growth hormone may also be given to patients who are secreting abnormally low amounts on their own. Because of the 65 complicated effects the growth hormone has on the body, such treatments are generally restricted to children who would be pathologically small in stature without it. Growth hormone affects not just physical size but also the digestion of food and the aging process. Researchers and family physicians tend to agree that it is 70 foolhardy to dispense it in cases in which the risks are not clearly outweighed by the benefits.
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28. The word spurred in the passage is closest in meaning to a. b. c. d.
remembered surprised invented motivated
Hormones in the Body
Until the beginning of the twentieth century, the nervous system was thought to control all communication within the body and the resulting integration of behavior. Scientists had determined that nerves ran, essentially, on electrical impulses. These impulses were 5 thought to be the engine for thought, emotion, movement, and internal processes such as digestion. However, experiments by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling on the chemical secretin, which is produced in the small intestine when food enters the stomach, eventually challenged that view. From the small intestine, secretin 10 travels through the bloodstream to the pancreas. There, it stimulates the release of digestive chemicals. In this fashion, the intestinal cells that produce secretin ultimately regulate the production of different chemicals in a different organ, the pancreas. 15 Such a coordination of processes had been thought to require control by the nervous system; Bayliss and Starling showed that it could occur through chemicals alone. This discovery spurred Starling to coin the term hormone to refer to secreti